译林版高中英语选择性必修第二册Unit2表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇有关体育精神的文章
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于体育精神的文章。此文在体裁上属于说明文，应该对运动员所具备的精神加以说明，也可以穿插一些记叙和议论。写这类文章时，要注意说明的语言和顺序。
[基本框架]
首先，对人物进行简要的介绍，比如生平、职业等。
其次，挑选出人物一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写，要尽可能地详细，因为这影响到人们对他的整体评价。
最后，对人物进行客观的评价，包括对其人格、贡献以及成就的评价。
[常用词块]
1．serve the people heart and soul 全心全意为人民服务
2．share sorrow as well as happiness with sb.与某人同甘共苦
3．lead a happy life 过着幸福的生活
4．be enthusiastic about... 对……有热情
5．be qualified for 适合；胜任
6．think highly of 对……高度评价
7．have a gift/talent for对……有天赋
8．be strict with对……严格要求
9．make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献
10．devote oneself to 致力于；献身于
11．make a difference有影响；有重要作用
12．set a world record创世界纪录
13．overcome the pressure克服压力
14．set a good example for为……树立榜样
[常用语句]
1．He became the first Chinese to win an Olympic hurdle race title.
2．He overcame the pressure as well as the pain of his injury.
3．During her career life，she obtained 132 championships，including 4 Olympic championships.
4．When he was still a boy，he showed great interest in sport.
5．He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
6．Her story tells us that we should value what we have，and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
7．He became famous for his newly theory.
8．The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
9．We regard him as our model.
10．He is not only gifted but also diligent.
11．Not only is he interested in sport，but also he has a gift for music.
12．He set us a good example，so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.
请根据下列表格内容，写一篇关于姚明的文章，谈谈从他身上所体现的体育精神。词数80左右。
基本 情况 | 生日 | 出生地 | 身高 |
1980.9.12 | 上海 | 2.26米 | |
运动 生涯 | 1997 | 进入上海队 | |
1998 | 进入国家队 | ||
2000 | 入选亚洲全明星队Asian AllStar basketball team | ||
2002 | CBA总冠军成员；成为NBA选秀状元(Number One Overall in the NBA draft)，并被选入到Houston Rockets | ||
现状 | 姚明退役后，为中国职业篮球的发展继续贡献力量。同时他也积极参与各种公益慈善事业。 | ||
[学生习作]
Yao Ming is 2.26 meter tall.He is a good basketball player in China or even in the world. Yao Ming joined the Shanghai Basketball Club in 1997 and then became a member of China's nation team.Later he went to the USA，played there for several years and got good achievement. After Yao Ming retired from NBA，he is now working hardly to make contributions to the development of China's basketball.He set a good example for us.I will learn from him. | 点评： 1．文中出现了一些词汇方面的错误，如：meter和achievement应该用复数形式；nation应用形容词形式。 2．句式单调，多为简单句。 3．习作谈及的体育精神较少，可以说有些跑题。 |
[升格作文]
Yao Ming，who is 2.26 meters tall，is a great basketball player in China or even in the world.
Yao Ming first played in Shanghai and then the national team.After being selected as a member of Asian AllStar basketball team，he became Number One Overall in the NBA draft，which helped him join Houston Rockets.During these years，he worked hard and won a lot of honors.After retiring he tries to make contributions to the development of China occupation basketball.At the same time，he takes part in all kinds of charity activities.
Yao Ming is not only a player，but also a symbol，spirit and culture.He is a symbol to promote basketball all over the world.His noble professional ethics and professionalism will be carried forward forever.
请根据下列对平亚丽的介绍，写一篇关于她的文章及你自己的观点。词数80左右。
姓名 | 平亚丽 |
1961年 | 出生在北京，先天失明 |
12岁 | 对体育感兴趣，训练刻苦 |
1984年 | 在第七届残奥会上获得跳远金牌，是我国残奥会第一块金牌获得者。 |
1988－1997年 | 在工厂工作；下岗 |
2001年 | 在自己的家里办起了按摩诊所，服务热情，受到欢迎 |
2008年 | 当选为北京残奥会火炬手 |
参考词汇：残奥会Paralympic Games；按摩诊所massage clinic；火炬手torch carrier；跳远long jump
【参考范文】
Ping Yali，a torch carrier in the 2008 Paralympic Games，was born blind in 1961 in Beijing.
At 12，she showed a great interest in sports.She practised very hard and was very strict with herself.In 1984，she competed in the 7th Paralympic Games and won a gold medal in the long jump competition，which was China's first gold medal in the Paralympics.After she lost her job，she set up a massage clinic in her own house.Because of her good service，the clinic soon became popular.
I admire her for her great determination and optimistic attitude towards life.She is my hero and I will always remember her as my role model.
