高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 2 Making a difference学案设计

这是一份高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 2 Making a difference学案设计，共5页。

短文写作
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，校园英语报开设了“ Writing a Bigraphy ”专栏，邀请同学们撰写一位用行动“Making a Difference”（带来改变）的人物小传。请你根据以下要点完成写作，内容包括：
人物身份及核心事迹；
其行为带来的影响与你的感悟。
注意：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯。




审题谋篇
STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架
明确体裁话题→人物传记、主题Making a Difference，聚焦一位做出贡献的人物及其影响。
确定时态人称→一般过去时（叙述事迹）、一般现在时（表达感悟）；第三人称（写人物）、第一人称（写感悟）。
构思文章框架→三段式：首段：介绍人物身份，点明其核心贡献 中段：简要叙述关键事迹，体现“带来改变” 尾段：说明影响，抒发个人感悟与敬意。 接下来细化主要内容→人物事迹的选取（这个是本篇文章的重难点） 在这里给出例子：社区志愿者、环保倡导者、校园公益发起人等等 将事迹的核心行动和成果表述清楚即可组成文章中段主要部分。
STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达
我的邻居王叔叔是一位普通的退休教师，但他用行动改变了我们的社区。
My neighbr Uncle Wang is an rdinary retired teacher, but he has made a difference t ur cmmunity with his actins.
好句积累
关于本句的可替换句子
Thugh my neighbr Uncle Wang is a cmmn retired teacher, his deeds have transfrmed ur neighbrhd.
Uncle Wang, my neighbr, is just an rdinary retired teacher, yet he has brught great changes t ur cmmunity.
两年前，他发现社区的小花园杂乱不堪，便主动承担起打理的责任。
Tw years ag, he fund the small garden in the cmmunity in a mess and tk the initiative t take respnsibility fr taking care f it.
好句积累
关于“主动承担”的表达
Tw years ag, seeing the small garden in the cmmunity was neglected, he vlunteered t lk after it.
Tw years ag, he nticed the messy small garden in the cmmunity and tk it upn himself t tidy it up.
他不仅自己动手清理垃圾、种植花草，还号召居民们一起参与。
He nt nly cleaned up the garbage and planted flwers and grass by himself, but als called n residents t take part in it tgether.
渐渐地，荒芜的花园变成了大家休闲娱乐的绿色空间。
Gradually, the deserted garden turned int a green space fr everyne t relax and have fun.
练习（仿写句子）
渐渐地，冷清的校园图书馆变成了同学们热爱的阅读天地。 ___________________________________________________________
渐渐地，脏乱的小区道路变成了居民们舒心的散步小径。 ___________________________________________________________
他的行动不仅美化了环境，还拉近了邻里之间的距离。
His actins nt nly beautified the envirnment, but als narrwed the distance between neighbrs.
现在，越来越多的居民开始主动参与社区公益活动。
Nw, mre and mre residents have begun t take the initiative t participate in cmmunity public welfare activities.
他用自己的坚持证明，平凡的人也能做出不平凡的改变。
He has prved with his persistence that rdinary peple can als make extrardinary changes.
第6句与第7句可改编为非限制性定语从句，变为 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 从他身上，我明白了“改变”不需要惊天动地的壮举。
Frm him, I have learned that "making a difference" desn't require earth-shaking feats.
只要我们心怀责任，从小事做起，就能让世界变得更美好。
As lng as we have a sense f respnsibility and start with small things, we can make the wrld a better place.
我将以他为榜样，用行动传递温暖，贡献自己的力量。
I will take him as an example, pass n warmth with my actins and cntribute my wn strength.
STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句，成篇。
One pssible versin
My neighbr Uncle Wang is an rdinary retired teacher, but he has made a difference t ur cmmunity.
Tw years ag, he fund the small garden was in a mess and decided t take care f it. He cleaned up the garbage and planted flwers by himself, and als called n residents t jin in. Gradually, the deserted garden became a beautiful green space.
His actins have inspired many peple, and nw mre residents take part in cmmunity activities. Uncle Wang prves that rdinary peple can make great changes. I've learned that starting with small things matters mst. I will fllw his example and try t make the wrld better.
参考例句
Gradually, the quiet schl library turned int a belved reading place fr students.
Gradually, the dirty and messy cmmunity rads turned int a cmfrtable walking path fr residents.
Nw, mre and mre residents have begun t take the initiative t participate in cmmunity public welfare activities, which prves that rdinary peple can als make extrardinary changes with persistence.