英语九年级上册（2024）3a-3c一等奖课件ppt

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Tday's Learning Gals
Analyze Billy's diary: extract Challenge/Gal/Methd/Cnclusin
Identify language features: 1st persn, past tense, bject clauses, cnnectrs
Write a diary entry (80-100 wrds) abut yur memry challenge
Give cnstructive peer feedback n cntent, language & frmat
Cntents 目录
Warm-up & Lead-in
Mdel Analysis
Writing Planning
Independent Writing
Peer Review
Shwcase & Summary
Have yu ever vercme a memry challenge?
What was the hardest thing yu ever had t memrize?
Hw did yu feel befre and after?
What methd helped yu succeed?
Example: "I used t frget English vcabulary easily.Then I tried wrd family trees and it really helped!"
Mdel Analysis(范文分析)
Billy's Diary - What frmat des a diary have?
Friday, 20 Nvember
In the past, I always felt stressed when I had t give a speech. I used t spend lts f time trying t memrize my speech, but I still frgt sme parts. Last week, I decided t find ut what the right way is t memrize a speech. I lked nline and asked friends, and I fund many useful methds.I learnt hw t create a speech utline. Instead f trying t remember every wrd f my speech, I remembered the key wrds first. Then I frmed images f these key wrds in my mind, and linked them in rder.Anther methd is t divide the speech int shrt sectins. I practised the first sectin until I culd fully recall it. Then I mved n t the next. This helped me t find ut which parts f the speech I needed t wrk n the mst.Finally, a friend tld me that I shuld have cnfidence in myself. Nbdy knws my speech except me. If I d frget sme wrds, I shuldn't panic. Just remember the key wrds and cntinue!I fllwed all these great methds and my speech tday was a great success!
Frmat: Date + Weather+ First persn + Past tense
Fur Elements f Billy's Diary
In the past, I always felt stressed when I had t give a speech.I used t spend lts f time trying t memrize my speech, but I still frgt sme parts.
T find ut the right way t memrize a speech.
Methds(1/2/3)
1. Create a speech utline - remember key wrds first - frm images f these key wrds - link them in rder2. Divide int shrt sectins - practise first sectin fully - then mve t the next3. Have cnfidence in yurself - nbdy knws speech except me - remember key wrds & cntinue
I fllwed all these great methds and my speech tday was a great success!
Language Features f the Diary
"I always felt..." "I used t..."
Persnal & authentic vice
felt, used t, decided, fund,learnt, helped, fllwed
Cmpleted experience
Object Clauses
find ut what the right way iswhich parts I needed t wrk n
Unit grammar in actin!
First / Then / Anther methd / Finally
Lgical flw & structure
Cnnectrs that Organize Yur Writing
Tip: Use at least 3 cnnectrs in yur diary t make it flw smthly!Challenge: Can yu use 'First... Then... Anther... Finally' in rder?
Object Clauses in Billy's Diary
Last week, I decided t find ut what the right way is t memrize a speech.
I fund ut which parts I needed t wrk n.
Finally, a friend tld me that I shuld have cnfidence in myself.
Yur Turn - Try these patterns:I realized that ... / I discvered that ... / I fund ut hw t learnt that ... / I understd that ... / I tld myself that : Use at least 1 bject clause in yur diary!
Writing Planning(写作规划)
3b Planning
What is YOUR biggest memry challenge?
Rememberingnew vcabulary
I keep frgettingnew English wrdsafter learning them.
Memrizingpems/texts
Lng passages ares hard t memrizefr recitatin.
Rememberingfrmulas/facts
Math frmulas andhistry dates alwaysslip my mind.
Recallingnames/details
I frget peple'snames right aftermeeting them.
Discuss with yur partner: What memry challenge d YOU face?Share yur challenge and brainstrm pssible slutins tgether!
Yur Writing Outline (Fill This In!)
Three Glden Writing Tips frm 3b
Divide yur gal int smaller nes if it is difficult.
Break big challenges int manageable steps!
List three methds t imprve yur memry.
Mre methds = richer writing = better diary!
There is n ne-size-fits-all methd.Practise t find ut what wrks best fr yu.
Yur diary is YOUR stry - be authentic!
Writing Bank
Writing Bank - Useful Expressins
Challenge & Gal
I used t ... (struggle with / frget / feel)In the past, I always felt stressed/frustrated when I decided t find ut hw t wanted t learn / imprve ...
Methds & Cnclusin
First, I learnt/tried t , I ... / Anther methd was discvered that ... (bject clause!)Finally, I ... / As a result, was a great success! I felt ...
Unit Vcabulary t Use:
bst, pay attentin, review, cnslidate, keep in mind, g thrugh, run ut, wrd familyBnus pints fr using these wrds naturally in yur diary!
Independent Writing(独立写作)
Yur Missin: Write a Diary Entry!
Task: Write a diary entry t start tracking yur prgress.Requirements: 80-100 wrds | Diary frmat (date + weather) | Fur elements 1st persn + Past tense | At least 3 cnnectrs | At least 1 bject clauseReward yurself fr each small step frward. Yu are sure t get better!
8 minutes f quiet writing time
Reminder:Use yur utline frm S13 | Check the Writing Bank | Include unit vcabulary
Self-Check Befre Peer Review (2 minutes)
Date and weather included?
Friday, 20 Nvember Sunny
All 4 elements present?(Challenge/Gal/Methd/Cnclusin)
Check yur utline!
Past tense used cnsistently?(N accidental present tense?)
felt, used t, decided, learnt
At least 1 bject clause?
I fund ut that/what/hw ...
At least 3 cnnectrs used?
First, Then, Anther, Finally
Peer Review(同伴互评)
Three Dimensins f Peer Review
Are all 4 elements(Challenge/Gal/Methd/Cnclusin) included?Are methds specificand realistic?
Past tense crrect?Object clause used?Vcabulary rich?Cnnectrs present?Sentence variety?
Date + weather?Paragraph structure?Diary styleapprpriate?
Rule: Give at least 1 specific suggestin, nt just 'Gd jb!'Use: 'I suggest...' / 'Yu culd imprve...' / 'Try adding...'
Peer Review Language Templates
I like hw yu ... / Yur methd f ... is creative!Yu did a great jb describing ...
I suggest yu add ... / Yu culd imprve ...Try using past tense in this sentence: ...
Culd yu explain mre abut What happened after yu tried this methd?
This shuld be past tense: 'felt' nt 'feel'.Cnsider adding a cnnectr here: 'Then, I ...'
Teacher Dem: Let's Review Tgether
Mnday, 15 Nvember Cludy
I always frget new English wrds.I want t find ut hw t remember them.First I try wrd family. Then I use flashcard. I als review befre bed.Nw I remember wrds much better!
Frmat: Date + weather present. Gd!Challenge: Clear. But past tense?'always frget' -> 'always frgt'?
Methds: Gd variety (wrd family,flashcard, review)! Add cnnectrs:'First, I tried...' 'Then, I used...'
Object clause: 'find ut hw t...'Gd! Cnclusin: Psitive ending.Culd add mre feeling: 'I felt prud!'
Overall: Gd structure! Fcus npast tense cnsistency & mre details.
Nw Revise Yur Diary (3 minutes)
Read yur partner's feedback carefully
Identify the tp 2 things t imprve
Make revisins directly n yur diary
Add any missing elements r language
"Writing is rewriting." -- The best writers revise their wrk many times!
Shwcase & Summary(展示总结)
Diary Shwcase - Best Diaries!
Mst Tuching
The diary that mvedus the mst withauthentic emtins
Mst Creative
The diary with themst riginal methdsand expressins
Best Language
The diary with therichest vcabularyand grammar
Vte fr yur favrite diary in each categry!2-3 vlunteers read their diaries alud t the class.
Key Pints: Writing a Memry Diary
Date + Weather (Friday, 20 Nvember Sunny)
Challenge -> Gal -> Methd 1/2/3 -> Cnclusin
1st persn (I) + Past tense (felt, used t, decided, learnt)
Object clauses (I fund ut that/what/hw ...)
Cnnectrs (First, Then, Anther, Finally)
Remember: A gd diary tells YOUR stry with clear structure and rich language!
Unit 4 Writing: Diary Entry
BIG Questin: Hw can we have a gd memry?
Diary Frmat
Date + Weather(Friday, 20 Nvember)Challenge -> GalMethd 1 / 2 / 3-> Cnclusin
1st persn (I)Past tense:felt, used t, decided,learnt, helped, fllwedObject clause:find ut what/hw/that
First, ...Then, ...Anther methd ...Finally, ...Peer Review:Cntent / Language/ Frmat
Gd memry starts with gd writing! | Diary = remembering yur grwth!
Written & Oral Hmewrk
Written Hmewrk
Revise yur diary: ensure all 4 elements,crrect frmat, n grammar errrs.Cpy neatly int yur ntebk.
B (Advanced)
Expand yur diary t 100+ wrds.Add details and emtins.Include at least 1 bject clause.
C (Creative)
Write a SECOND diary entry:Recrd yur experience usingmemry methds frm this unit.
Oral Hmewrk
1. Read yur diary alud t a family member and ask fr feedback.2. Recrd a 60-secnd 'My Memry Challenge' audi diary in English.
"The faintest ink is mre pwerful thanthe strngest memry."-- Chinese Prverb: Gd memry is n match fr a bad pen.Writing yur diary helps yu remember yur grwth!
Think abut it:What was the mst useful writing tip tday?Hw can diary writing help yu becme a better learner?