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Unit 2 The Universal Language单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）（读后续写）肖像描写1.语块必记 1.a handsome/striking figure  仪表堂堂2.have a good figure  (人)形体很好3.a man of average build  中等身材的人4.a well-built man  身材魁梧的人5.a graceful / skinny / slim / well-developed figure   优美的身段瘦削的身材/苗条的身材/发育良好的身材2.佳句背诵 1.He's tall and handsome but with a pair of thick glasses.他高大且英俊，但是戴着一副厚眼镜。2.She is of medium height and has a young and fresh look.她中等身材，洋溢着青春、清新的气息。3.It was an arresting face,pointed of chin, square of jaw那是一张很迷人的面容，尖下巴，方下颚。4.His sunburnt face and arms and his slim,strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers , for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.他那晒黑的脸、手臂和瘦长结实的身体，就像过去50年里他为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。3.精美语段I watch him as he makes his way toward the stage. Medium height, stocky build,ashy blond hair that falls n waves over his forehead. The shock of the moment is registered on his face, and you can see his struggle to remain emotionless, but his blue eyes show the alarm I've seen so often in prey. Yet he climbs steadily onto the stage and takes his place.我看着他走上舞台。中等身材、健壮结实、浅黄色的头发垂在前额。这一刻带给他的震惊仍写在脸上，看得出他在竭尽全力保持镇静，但他蓝色的眼睛里还是透着惊恐不安，我在捕猎时经常看到这种神情。他仍然强装镇静，走上舞台，站在自己的位置上。   性格描写1.语块必记 1.a good-natured person  脾气好的人2.be of a determined character  性格果断3.a man of fine personality  性格良好的人4.an easy person to deal with  容易相处的人5.a cold-blooded/outspoken man  冷酷无情/说话直率的人2.佳句背诵 1. He was short in the figure,yet determined in the character他虽身材不高，但是性格坚强。2.Such was Albert Einstein,a simple man with great achievements这就是阿尔伯特 · 爱因斯坦，一位有着巨大成就的平凡的人。3. He is outgoing in the character and a man with a real sense of commitment to almost everything.他性格外向，且又是一个几乎对一切有着奉献精神的人。4. He was indeed a continuing searcher after practical solutions to improve the quality of everybody's life.他确实是一个不断寻找切实可行的解决方案来提高每个人的生活质量的人。5.He was a master of nonverbal humour. And he is loved and remembered as a great actor who could inspire people with great confidence.他是非言语幽默的大师。他是一位受人爱戴，让人铭记的，能极大激励人们自信的伟大的演员。3.精美语段When I felt strong enough to get dressed and go downstairs, Diana and Mary looked after me very kindly,and made me feel welcome in their pleasant home. Their brother,however,seemed stern and cold. He was between twenty-eight and thirty,fair-haired and extremely handsome. Diana and Mary were curious about my past,but sensitive enough to avoid asking questions which would hurt me.St John,on the other hand, made determined efforts to discover who I was, but I,just as firmly, refused to explain more than necessary.我有力气穿好衣服下楼时，戴安娜和玛丽和善地照顾着我，让我觉得在这个和睦的家中是受欢迎的。但她们的哥哥却似乎严肃而冷漠。他大约28到30岁，金发，非常英俊。戴安娜和玛丽对我的过去感到好奇，但却敏感地不提及可能伤害我的问题。另一方面，圣约翰却坚持不懈地想要搞清我究竟是谁，而我也坚决地拒绝做出没必要的解释。   日常活动1.语块必记 1.address a meeting  在会上发表演讲2.a frequent occurrence  常常发生的事3.go through ups and downs  经受起起落落4. remain fresh in one's memory  让某人记忆犹新5.recall the sweet moment of one's high school life  回忆高中生活的美好时刻2.佳句背诵 1.Not having exercised for a long time, he ran slowly in the sports meeting.由于很长时间没有锻炼了，他在运动会上跑得很慢。2. Hearing my words,he patted me on the shoulder as if to say thanks to me.听到我的话，他拍了拍我的肩膀，好像在对我说谢谢。3. I was watching TV,absorbed in the story,when suddenly I heard a cry for help.我正在看电视，全然被故事情节吸引了，突然听到有人呼救。4. The moment I found my book missing,I searched everywhere for it,but in vain.一发现我的书丢了，我就找遍了所有的地方，但都是白费力气 。5.Before my best friend went abroad,he sent me a book as a gift , which always reminded me of him.我最好的朋友在出国之前，送给我一本书作为礼物，这本书总是让我想起他。3.精美语段All of us stood there staring at the wonderful machine before us.None of us knew what to think of it.We all respected and admired the scientist,but this was something too impossible to believe. I looked over at Filby,who knew the scientist better than any of us,and was surprised to  see him smiling. He turned to me and started to shake his head, saying softly,"What if he really has done it? What if this is all for real? Think about it!"我们都站在那里，凝视着面前那台奇妙的机器。我们谁也不知道该怎么想它。我们都尊敬和钦佩这位科学家，但这是难以置信的。看了看比我们任何人都更了解这位科学家的费尔比，我惊讶地看到他微笑着。他转向我，开始摇摇头，柔和地说：“如果他真的这么做了怎么办？如果这 一切都是真的呢？想想看！"1.（2024届江苏省新高考基地学校第五次大联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was confident at the audition (试演) for the school play and felt pleased to get a role. It just felt good to be in the play, even if I had only four or five lines. I worked hard at perfecting those lines. I repeated them over and over again. I put in the emphases and intonations (语调) that my drama teacher had suggested and, because I was on stage much longer than for just four or five lines, I had many actions to rehearse (排练) and perform. “Do them in front of a mirror,” my drama teacher had advised me. “Watch how you look; practice and rehearse as often as you can.” I did just that. I worked and worked at it. It was fun and exciting rehearsing.Then finally the big night came. Suddenly, things felt different. The theater was full of people. As I dressed, I could hear the chatting and noises of the audience. I looked around at the other more experienced actors and saw that their previous confidence seemed to have disappeared. Had they got their makeup right? Was the costume done up correctly? What if they forgot their lines? The more people talked about their anxiety, the more nervous everyone became. The worries spread from person to another—like a baton (接力棒) being passed in a relay race—until the whole of the backstage area seemed to be full of tension and worry.I was on stage early, at first performing my non-spoken role in the background with several other guys around the same age. When, suddenly, I heard my cue (出场提示), the lights were bright in my eyes, I couldn’t see the audience but knew there were hundreds of people out there all watching me. The words that had flowed so easily when I stood in front of a mirror didn’t want to come, and when they did I found myself hurrying into them. I tried to slow down my thoughts and my words.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But I suddenly realized I had missed a sentence.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I bowed to the audience excitedly and went back to my drama teacher.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】     But I suddenly realized I had missed a sentence. My heart raced as I scrambled to remember it. Despite my best efforts, the words eluded me, leaving me flustered on stage. However, with the support of my fellow actors, I managed to carry on. As the scene progressed, I gradually regained my composure, focusing on my lines and movements. When the moment came to take my bow, a wave of relief washed over me. I bowed to the audience excitedly, grateful for their applause.I bowed to the audience excitedly and went back to my drama teacher. With a mixture of exhilaration and nervous energy, I recounted the experience to her. She offered words of encouragement and praised my resilience under pressure. Reflecting on the night’s events, I realized that even amidst the chaos and uncertainty, I had persevered and delivered a memorable performance. With newfound confidence, I eagerly awaited the next opportunity to step into the spotlight.【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了主人公在学校话剧试演中获得角色后的经历。他在排练过程中努力练习台词和动作，通过在镜子前排练来提高表演水平。然而，在正式演出的大晚上面临了前所未有的压力和焦虑，尽管台词曾经轻松流畅，但现在却遭遇了困难的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“但我突然意识到我漏掉了一个句子。”可知，第一段可描写“我努力回忆那句话并感到惊慌失措，在其他演员的支持下，我逐渐恢复镇静并完成表演，观众为我鼓掌声，我表示感谢”的相关细节。②由第二段首句内容“我兴奋地向观众鞠了一躬，然后回到我的戏剧老师那里。”可知，第二段可描写“ 演出结束后，我向老师汇报那段紧张的经历。她称赞我在压力下的韧性，我意识到坚持能够带来信心并急切地盼望下一次表演”的相关细节。2.续写线索：努力回忆台词——惊慌失措——坚持下去——恢复镇静——观众鼓掌——回到老师那里——老师鼓励和称赞我——感悟——期盼下一次表演3.词汇激活行为类①继续：carry on/go ahead②集中注意力于：focus on /concentrate on情绪类①放松：relief/relaxation②感激的：grateful/appreciative③渴望地：eagerly/desperately【点睛】[高分句型1] As the scene progressed, I gradually regained my composure, focusing on my lines and movements.(使用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语focusing on作状语)[高分句型2] I bowed to the audience excitedly, grateful for their applause. (使用了形容词短语grateful for作状语)1.（江西省红色十校2023-2024学年高三下学期2月联考）Many years ago, when I was working as a psychologist at a children’s institution in England, an adolescent boy showed up in the waiting room．I went out there where he was walking up and down restlessly．I showed him into my office and pointed to the chair on the other side of my desk．“Please sit down,” I said．David wore a black rain coat that was buttoned all the way up to his neck．His face was pale, and he stared at his feet while crossing his hands nervously．He had lost his father as a baby, and had lived together with his mother and grandfather since．But the year before David turned 13, his grandfather died and his mother was killed in a car accident. Now he was 14．I looked at David．How could I help him? There are human tragedies that psychology doesn’t have the answer to, and which no words can describe．Sometimes the best thing one can do is to listen openly and sympathetically．The first two times we met, David didn’t say a word．He sat in the chair and only looked up to look at the children’s drawings on the wall behind me．As he was about to leave after the second visit, I put my hand on his shoulder, but he didn’t look at me either．“Come back next week, if you like,” I said, I hesitated a bit．Then I said, “I know it hurts.”He came, and I suggested we play a game of chess．He nodded．After that we played chess every Wednesday afternoon- in complete silence and without making any eye con-tact．It seemed as if he enjoyed my company．But why did he never look at me?Some months later, I sat starring at David’s head, while he bent over the chessboard．I thought about how little we know about therapy(治疗)—about the mysterious process associated with healing．Suddenly, he looked up at me．“It’s your turn,” he said．注意：1．续写的词数应为150左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After that day, David started talking．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally, he needn’t come to me for therapy．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After that day, David started talking. He responded to me more and more times. Several months later, he even took the initiative to talk to me. He would ask me questions and want to know more about me. He started to learn and experience new things. He got friends in school and even joined a bicycle club. He tried to open himself and embrace the outside world. The number of times he comes for psychological treatment is decreasing.Finally, he needn’t come to me for therapy. He has really started to live his own life. I can receive his letters and phone calls from time to time. He will share his recent situation with me, whether good or bad, more or less. From him, I’ve learned that there are lots of pains trapping many people, but time makes it possible to overcome what seems to be an awful pain. And it is David that just show me how one — without any words — can reach out to another person. All it takes is a hug, a shoulder to cry on, a friendly touch, a sympathetic nature, and an ear that listens.【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。作者在英国一家儿童机构担任心理医生时遇到了一名叫大卫的男孩，他刚刚十四岁，在十三岁时就已经失去了所有至亲，这让他陷入深深的痛苦中，作者一开始用无言的陪伴和理解让大卫慢慢地敞开了心扉，最终让大卫得到了治愈，拥有了自己的生活。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“那天之后，大卫开始说话了。”可知，第一段可描写大卫开始越来越多地跟人交流，融入了外部的世界。②由第二段首句内容“最后，他不需要来找我治疗了。”可知，第二段可描写大卫在治愈后和作者继续联络，这件事也让作者感悟到许多。2.续写线索：开始交谈——融入——次数减少——治愈——继续联络——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①.回应：respond to/answer/reply to②.与某人交谈：talk to/talk with/communicate with③.克服：overcome/surmount情绪类①.可怕的：awful/terrible/dreadful②.友好的：friendly/kind【点睛】[高分句型1] The number of times he comes for psychological treatment is decreasing. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)[高分句型2] And it is David that just show me how one — without any words — can reach out to another person. (运用了it强调句)2.（2024届湖北省八市4月高考调研模拟）I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre for the audition (试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks.It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point? Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do.I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:The next day I went to the eleventh audition.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. I was taken aback by her unexpected gesture of appreciation. Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” The unexpected support from a stranger was like a beacon of light in the midst of my doubts and disappointments. I felt a surge of confidence and determination washing over me. With renewed spirit, I made up my mind to go all out for the audition the next day.The next day I went to the eleventh audition. As I walked into the theatre, I felt a newfound sense of purpose and self-assurance. The director greeted me with a warm smile, and this time, as I sang my heart out, I could feel the magic in the air. When I finished, there was a moment of silence before the room erupted into applause. The director’s eyes were shining with excitement as he said, “You’ve got the part! Welcome to the show!” It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself.【导语】本文人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公一直梦想能够参演像《音乐之声》或《妈妈咪呀》这样的著名音乐剧，为此接受了歌唱和舞蹈课程。然而，她在过去几周的十次试演中都遭遇失败。回到公寓后，她开始怀疑是否值得参加第十一次试演。在孤独的公寓里，她放声唱歌，想让自己振作起来，意外听到了来自陌生人的掌声的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“她向我伸出双臂，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写老人对主人公的歌声的赞美，主人公感到很意外，但陌生人的支持给了主人公力量，主人公下定决心全力以赴参加第二天的试镜。②由第二段首句内容“第二天我去参加了第十一次试演。”可知，第二段可描写主人公带着自信去试镜，得到了导演的欢迎，观众爆发出了阵阵掌声，导演让主人公出演主人公梦寐以求的角色，主人公意识到要实现梦想需要勇敢和信心。2.续写线索：陌生人的赞美——主人公充满信心——决定参加第十一次试演——取得成功——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①闪烁：sparkle/glitter②大声叫：shout/cry③停止：stop/cease情绪类①赞赏：appreciation/admiration②兴奋地：with excitement/excitedly【点睛】[高分句型1] Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” (使用了as引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself. (使用了强调句型、省略that引导的宾语从句和省略that引导的定语从句)3.（2024届吉林省长春市东北师范大学附属中学高三下第五次模拟）Ten miles away stood a house with shiny red walls, a green garden and an apple tree. A young girl’s face would be seen reflecting from one of the large glassy windows. Her name is Maggie. Her eyes were sparkling and on her face there was a smile which could light a million candles. She seemed to be longing for a chance to play like a young child, but she had no strength in her legs because she and her family met with an accident, in which she lost both her legs.But her spirit was strong. She would be inspired by seeing birds fly. The flying eagle would make her want to fly. She was lonely. She longed for a true friend who would talk to her and teach her to fly or at least tell her stories about soaring into the blue sky.One evening, Maggie slowly rolled her wheelchair to the giant window and looked out to the many houses that lay across the road. Suddenly she heard someone singing and then could see an old man in a pilot suit singing in glory. The beautiful sound and the melody made the little girl happy. Suddenly he stopped and gazed up toward her. “What are you staring at?” he said angrily. “You think I’m a circus clown? (马戏团小丑)” “No, Sir. I was just listening to you. You sing very well,” she said. “I don’t need your praises. I don’t need anyone!” he shouted. He started to walk to his house and shut the door. Tears rolled down from her apple-red cheeks as the man shouted at her. She was lonely.Next morning, Maggie pushed her wheelchair across the garden to the stone road as little children played hide-and-seek around her. Suddenly out of nowhere a loading truck came rumbling across toward her. Terrified, she tried to move away from its path but the wheels of her chair were stuck. “Oh my,” she thought as the truck came in her direction fast, with the driver unaware of the obstruction in front of him. She screamed loudly but in a split second she was pulled out of her wheelchair by someone and fell on the ground. She closed her eyes and shivered as the truck passed her whistling. As she opened her eyes, she could see a man standing beside her.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。She gazed up to him and immediately recognized him as the man she saw singing last night.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Maggie got to know his name was Ken and that he was a retired pilot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】She gazed up to him and immediately recognized him as the man she saw singing last night." Thank you for saving me," she said in gratitude," and I ' m sorry if I bothered you last night with my listening." The man looked at her, a softness in his eyes." I didn’t mean to be so harsh." he said, his voice filled with remorse. The softness opened Maggie’s heart. She poured out her story of the accident, her longing for a friend, and her obsession with flying. Ken listened intently, his heart going out to the young girl." And I don’t seem to be the only one who loves flying." said the girl, eyeing the man’s uniform.Maggie got to know his name was Ken and that he was a retired pilot. As the sun began to set, Maggie learned so much about Ken that she realized that she had found a true friend in Ken. For the first time in a long time, she felt genuine happiness. The next day, Ken came back to visit Maggie with a small gift, a book about flying. Maggie’s face lit up as she flipped through the pages, imagining herself soaring through the clouds. Many afternoons saw them in the garden, laughing and enjoying each other’s company. Their friendship grew stronger with each passing day.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个名叫麦琪的年轻女孩，因为一次事故失去了双腿。尽管身体受到限制，麦琪的精神依然坚强。她渴望找到一个真正的朋友，能和她交谈、教她飞翔，或者至少给她讲述关于蓝天的故事。一天，麦琪在窗前听到一个老人唱歌，她很开心地欣赏着。但老人却生气地责备她，并走回自己的房子。麦琪感到非常孤独。第二天，当一辆货车朝她驶来时，她被一个人拉出轮椅并躺在地上，幸免于难。她睁开眼睛看到的人正是昨晚唱歌的那个男人。他们互相交流，麦琪向他倾诉了她的故事。她发现这个男人名叫肯，是一位退休飞行员。他们成为了真正的朋友，每天在花园里笑着相处。他们的友谊与日俱增。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“她抬头望着他，立刻认出他就是昨晚唱歌的那个人。”可知，第一段可描写麦琪表达感谢以及向肯讲述她的故事。②由第二段首句内容“麦琪知道他的名字叫肯，是一名退休飞行员。”可知，第二段可描写麦琪了解肯的很多事情以及他们成为了好朋友。。2.续写线索：麦琪抬头望着他并且认出他——麦琪表达感谢——麦琪讲述自己的故事——了解肯的事情——他们成为好朋友——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①打扰：bothered/ disturbed②.渴望：long for / yearn for③.意识到：realized /be aware of情绪类①.感谢：thank/showing her appreciation/show her gratitude/be grateful②.专心地：intently / attentively【点睛】[高分句型1]. And I don’t seem to be the only one who loves flying.（运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]. Maggie’s face lit up as she flipped through the pages, imagining herself soaring through the clouds.（运用现在分词imagining作状语）三年考情（2022-2024）命题趋势2024 新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）       浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题）2023   新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣）2022 新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）      浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务）浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务）新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。