译林版高中英语选择性必修第一册UNIT4表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开介绍诗人及其作品
本单元的写作任务是介绍诗人及其作品，属于说明文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
1．开头(the beginning)——引出你最喜欢的诗人
2．主体(the body)——简要介绍该诗人及其作品
3．结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1．give us a chance to do sth.给我们做某事的机会
2．provide us with a platform to do sth.给我们提供做某事的平台
3．bring Chinese poetry back to our modern life把中国诗歌带回现代生活
4．have/gain a better understanding of the unique culture更好地了解独特的文化
5．appreciate ancient poets' wisdom and creativity欣赏古代诗人的智慧和创造力
6．protect/inherit our splendid traditional culture保护/继承我们灿烂的传统文化
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．It's a pleasure to share with you my favorite poets and poems.
很高兴能够和你们分享我最喜欢的诗人和诗歌。
2．Li Bai，a poet of Tang Dynasty，is my favorite poet.His works have left a deep impression on us.
唐代诗人李白是我最喜欢的诗人。他的作品给我们留下了深刻的印象。
★正文佳句
1．His gentle words and harmonious rhythms make his poems sound very pleasing to our ears.
他文雅的语言和和谐的节奏使他的诗听起来很悦耳。
2．This poem reflects the social situation at that time，so that we have a better understanding of the history of that period.
这首诗反映了当时的社会现状，让我们更好的了解了那个时期的历史。
★余味结尾
1．That's why I always like this poet and his works very much.
这就是我为什么一直非常喜欢这位诗人和他的作品的原因。
2．Don't you like such a humorous poet who brings pleasure to our life?
这样一位幽默诙谐，给我们的生活带来愉悦的诗人，难道你不喜欢吗？
假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇发言稿，简要介绍著名诗人徐志摩。
要点提示：1.生于1897，卒于1931；
2．他文雅的语言和和谐的节奏使他的诗听起来很悦耳；
3．《再别康桥》里面的名句“轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来”让我们年轻人一直诵读。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：《再别康桥》Farewell to Cambridge
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[学生习作]
Dear boys and girls，
I am glad to introduce my favorite poet and his works to you.My favorite poet is Xu Zhimo，who lived from 1897 to 1931.He is one of the most famous modern poets in China.It is pleasing to hear his gentle words and harmonious rhythms of his poem.The most famous sentence “Very quietly I take my leave，As quietly as I came here.” in his work Farewell to Cambridge is recite by young people.
Readers are influenced by his poems today.
That's all.Thank you.
点评：
1．能够根据要求完成写作，要求全面，语言表达流畅，衔接自然；
2．句式结构有待提升；
3．词汇可以再加斟酌。
[升格作文]
Dear boys and girls，
I am glad to share my favorite poet and his works to you.My favorite poet is Xu Zhimo，who lived from 1897 to 1931.He is considered as one of the most famous modern poets in China.His gentle words and harmonious rhythms make his poems sound very pleasing to our ears.Farewell to Cambridge is the best example of his works，the most famous sentence of which is “ Very quietly I take my leave，As quietly as I came here.” The sentence has been recited by many young people.
His poems still have a great influence on readers today.
That's all.Thank you.
假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，简要介绍著名诗人Percy Shelley。
要点提示：1.他出生于1792，卒于1822。英国重要的浪漫主义诗人；
2．从他的诗歌中我们可以感受到他对人类的热爱和对自由的渴望；
3．《西风颂》体现了他积极的人生态度。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：《西风颂》Ode to the West Wind
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【参考范文】
I am glad to share my favorite poet and his works with you.My favorite poet is Percy Shelley，who was born in 1792 and died in 1822.He is regarded as one of the major English romantic poets.
From his poems we can feel that Shelley loves mankind deeply and is eager for freedom.The most famous poem is Ode to the West Wind，which shows his positive attitude towards life.Shelley's poems still have a deep influence on readers today.
That is why he is deeply loved by many people.
