

英语选择性必修 第三册Unit 5 Poems达标测试
展开妙笔生花——读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
The event that stands ut in Tm’s memry happened ne mrning when Tm was nly ten years ld. He was at hme with his elder sister Jane. Tm was ding his hmewrk when he heard raised vices. At first he thught nthing f it since custmers in the mtrcycle shp directly belw their flat ften became lud,but he sn realized this time it was different.
“Quick! Quick! Remve the mtrcycles frm the shp,” smene shuted. Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tm pened the frnt dr f their flat t investigate,a thick clud f smke greeted him. The mtrcycle shp had caught fire and peple were running and crying.
Jane,wh had been playing the vilin in her rm,hurried t the living rm. They rushed ut f the dr and alng the crridr (走廊) thrugh the smke. They were heading twards the stairway at the far end f the crridr when Jane suddenly stpped in her track. She turned arund and headed back the way they came. Tm had n idea what she was ding,but he fllwed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s wh lived next dr t them,wh they called Makcik. Jane began banging n Makcik’s dr,but gt n answer. As the smke thickened arund them,Tm culd see many f their neighbrs—sme still in their pajamas (睡衣)—running fr safety. The thught f fear crssed his mind.
“She wuld have run fr safety like everyne else!” Tm cried. Hwever,Jane refused t give up. “I knw Makcik’s still inside.”She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily rutine and was certain she wuld still be sleeping. She punded against the dr. “G dwnstairs. G nw! G!”
Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. __________________________________________
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Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help. ______________________________
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步骤一:品读语篇——抓住要点很关键
前文概要
审语篇类型:记叙文
审时态:一般过去时
审前文大意以及要点
wh:Tm,Jane
when:ne mrning when Tm was nly ten years ld
where:at hme
what:a fire brke ut
第一段:汤姆和姐姐在家,突然听到有人大喊。
第二段:摩托车店着火了,人们都在迅速逃跑。
第三段:他们冲出门外,简突然停下来往回走。
第四段:简去敲住在他们隔壁的70多岁的老人家的门。
第五段:汤姆打算放弃敲门,但是简坚持继续猛烈敲门。
步骤二:戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句,高度融合原文,合理想象情节
①第一段所给首句:Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. 文章主要讲述突发火灾汤姆和姐姐在家,打算跑出去,但是姐姐忽然想到隔壁的老人,去敲门帮助她。这时候汤姆注意到了火焰在往上蹿,这一段续写汤姆害怕的动作、心理,姐姐的具体表现。
②第二段所给首句:Luckily,sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help. 第二段续写部分应着重叙述邻居们过来帮忙后,汤姆和姐姐不再感到无助,与邻居们一起救出老人的过程。
步骤三:斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇,生动描述情节
话题激活词汇
情感:fear,anxiety
动作:hld,cugh,run,shield,tell,carry,cme t neself
句式翻译
1. 他吓得站在那里一动不动。(s)
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2. 他明白形势的严重性,紧紧握住简的手。(and连接并列谓语)
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3. 他们两个都咳嗽,眼睛刺痛。(过去进行时)
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4. 时间似乎静止不动,尽管他们在那里可能只有两三分钟。(thugh引导让步状语从句)
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5. 汤姆恳求简尽快逃命。( pssible)
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6. 简尽力捂住鼻子挡住呛人的烟,摇摇头。(and连接并列谓语)
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7. 汤姆突然哭了起来,而她不停地敲门。(while)
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8. 一种力量感立刻取代了简心中逐渐增长的恐惧和焦虑。(replace)
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9. 她告诉他们Makcik女士一定还在房间里。(must)
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10. 他们用尽全力把门推开。(with all their might)
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11. 果然,Makcik躺在床上,不省人事。(形容词作状语)
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12. 她被抬下楼,然后立即被送往医院。(被动语态)
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13. 在医院她终于苏醒过来。(cme t neself)
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14. 邻里的人都松了一口气,简和汤姆非常高兴。(并列句)
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步骤四:创造性表达——润色注重细节,句式再造升级
1. 把句1改为过去分词短语作状语结构
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2. 把句6改为现在分词短语作伴随状语结构
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3. 把句12和句13合并为含有定语从句的复合句
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步骤五:高分在即——连句成篇,认真誊写并仔细检查
Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. __________________________________________
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Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help. ______________________________
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课时把关练
Part IV Writing
参考答案
步骤三
1. He was frzen with fear,s he std rted t the spt.
2. He cmprehended the gravity f the situatin and held Jane’s hand tightly.
3.Bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging.
4.Time seemed t stand still,thugh they were prbably there fr nly tw r three minutes.
5.Tm begged Jane t run fr safety as quickly as pssible.
6. Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke and shk her head.
7.Tm burst ut crying while she kept punding against the dr.
8.A sense f strength immediately replaced the munting fear and anxiety in Jane’s mind.
9.She tld them Ms. Makcik must be still in the rm.
10.They frced the dr pen with all their might.
11.Sure enugh,Makcik was lying in bed,uncnscius.
12.She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital at nce.
13.She finally came t herself in the hspital.
14. Peple in the neighbrhd felt relieved and Jane and Tm were very happy.
步骤四
1. Frzen with fear,he std rted t the spt.
2.Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke,shaking her head.
3.She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital where she finally came t herself.
步骤五
Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. Frzen with fear,he std rted t the spt. He cmprehended the gravity f the situatin and held Jane’s hand tightly. Bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed t stand still,thugh they were prbably there fr nly tw r three minutes. Tm begged Jane t run fr safety as quickly as pssible. Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke,shaking her head. Tm burst ut crying while she kept punding against the dr.
Luckily,sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help. A sense f strength immediately replaced the munting fear and anxiety in Jane’s mind. She tld them Ms. Makcik must be still in the rm. They frced the dr pen with all their might. Sure enugh,Makcik was lying in bed,uncnscius. She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital where she finally came t herself. Peple in the neighbrhd felt relieved and Jane and Tm were very happy.
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