译林版高中英语选择性必修第二册Unit1表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇关于网络新闻媒体的文章
本单元的写作项目是写一篇关于网络新闻媒体的文章,针对网络新闻媒体发表自己的观点、看法。发表议论就是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张,作者对某一问题持有一种看法,为了使读者同意自己的看法,提出若干理由,试图说服他人。发表议论时,我们要注意三个要素:论点、论据、论证。
[基本框架]
1.内容安排
(1)确定论点。论点通常在文章的第一段提出。议论文每段最好有一个主题句。
(2)摆事实,讲道理,对论点进行论证。注意论证的严密性、逻辑性、层次性。
(3)归纳总结,升华论点。
2.语言特点
(1)要注意语言的严密性,力争做到无懈可击;
(2)描绘性的语言要生动、准确、令人信服;
(3)要注意语言的逻辑性,关注上下文的照应,防止“自相矛盾”现象的出现。
[常用词块]
1.with the popularity of the Internet 随着网络的普及
2.distract one's attention 分散某人的注意力
3.have a negative effect 有负面影响
4.electronic books 电子读物
5.text message 手机短信
6.current affairs 时事
7.advertising signs 广告牌
8.arouse wide public concern/draw wide public attention 引起广泛的公众关注
9.arrange an interview 安排采访
10.cover an event 报道事件
[常用语句]
1.Microblog can provide a platform to show our talent and release our pressure,thus making it more and more popular with high school students.
微博能给我们提供一个展示我们的天赋、释放压力的平台,因此使它越来越受中学生的欢迎。
2.However,no matter how attractive the Internet is,we shouldn't spend too much time on it.
然而,不管互联网有多吸引人,我们都不应该花太多时间在它上面。
3.It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.
毫无疑问,现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适。
4.It is obvious that iPad is of great help to our study,especially to our English listening.
显而易见,iPad对我们的学习有很大的帮助,尤其是对我们的英语听力。
5.No matter where you go,what you see and when you look,you will easily find there are many ads around you,such as: toy ads on TV,food ads on computers,etc.
无论你走到哪里,你看到了什么,你什么时候看,你会很容易发现有很多的广告在你的周围,如:电视上的玩具广告,电脑上的食品广告等。
6.It is announced in the mass media that the factory will take on more experienced workers.
大众媒体宣布这家工厂将雇用更多有经验的工人。
7.After the professor opposed to carrying out the project made a comment on the report,the media focused on it.
反对实施这项工程的教授发表了对报告的意见后,就引起了媒体的关注。
随着因特网的发展,网络新闻媒体得到迅速发展。学生们可以通过网络了解新闻,也可以和自己的朋友聊天,交流思想。但有的同学在网络上花了太多的时间。请你就以上现象进行分析,并发表自己的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
With the development of the Internet,online news media is fast. People can read news reports and communicate with friends or relatives free.We are convenient to learn about news on online news media. However,it also has disadvantages.First,some information on online is not true and people may be cheated.Second,some people spend too much time on it,which greatly influence their daily life. In my opinion,online news media is convenient but we should use it properly. | 点评: 1.文中出现了词汇方面的错误,如communicate with friends or relatives free 中的free应该用副词形式修饰谓语; 2.时态和句式方面的错误,...is develop fast 应为...is developing fast;We are convenient to learn...主语不能是we,应该是It is convenient for us to learn...; 3.which greatly influence their daily life这一从句的谓语动词influence应用第三人称单数。 |
[升格作文]
With the development of the Internet,online news media is developing rapidly.People can easily go through news reports and communicate with their friends or relatives freely.
The increasing popularity of online news media makes it convenient for us to learn about current affairs.Of course it can also cause negative influence.This is because many news media companies tend to broadcast some news in order to attract audience's attention.This can easily lead to false reports,for instance,a report on a crime without actual investigation.
Some students have spent too much time on the Internet,eating up almost all their spare time,even their study time.I do think what we should do is to use the Internet properly and reasonably.
假如你是李华,学校论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇介绍微信(WeChat)利弊的文章,刊登在论坛上。要点如下:
1.微信的益处;
2.微信的弊端;
3.你的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
More and more people are beginning to use WeChat and some have even become addicted to it.However,WeChat has both advantages and disadvantages.
WeChat really shortens the distance between people.No matter where we are we can easily get in touch with our friends.Besides,we can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets.However,it also has disadvantages.First,some information offered on WeChat is false and it may result in people being cheated.Second,some people spend too much time on WeChat,greatly influencing their normal life.
As far as I am concerned,WeChat is convenient but we should use it properly.