初中英语人教版（2024）八年级下册 Unit 5 Nature's Temper 单元写作专项精练（原卷版）

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Unit 5 Nature's Temper【单元话题】2025年5月12日是第17个全国防灾减灾日，结合你所经历的一次自然灾害，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你印象深刻的事以及你的感受。提示：①以时间为线索，描述从清晨到晚上的具体经历；②运用“while+过去进行时”，“when+一般过去时”等结构，衔接事件发展；③融入环境描写和个人感受。要求：以第一人称叙事，结合过去进行时，生动展现一天中因天气或灾害引发的系列事件。短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；意思连贯，字迹工整。词数80-100词。参考词汇：unexpectedly 出乎意料地；struggle 挣扎；instantly 立即；rising 上涨的；flood 洪水；importance 重要性；prepared 有准备的；shake 摇晃；fear 恐惧__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【审题指导】动笔之前，我们先来理清这篇作文的写作要点：1. 人称：本文是讲述自己亲身经历的一次自然灾害，因此必须用第一人称“I”（我）来叙述。用“I”讲述自己的所见、所闻、所感，让读者有身临其境之感。 2. 时态：描述事件发生的背景和经过——用一般过去时和过去进行时。过去进行时（was/were doing）用于描述背景动作或正在发生的事情。一般过去时（did）用于描述突然发生的事件或先后动作。结尾谈感悟——可用一般现在时。3. 时间线索：按照时间顺序叙述，如：that morning → while I was... → when I... → then → finally4. 写作小技巧：运用环境描写烘托氛围（如dark clouds, heavy rain, loud thunder）运用感官描写增强画面感（如I heard..., I saw..., I felt...）运用心理描写表达感受（如I was so scared, My heart pounded）正确运用while和when连接动作【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 【遣词造句】1. 时光飞逝，但我依然清晰记得那个可怕的下午。 Time flies, but I still clearly remember ______.2. 那天早上，当我正在睡觉时，外面突然下起了暴雨。 That morning, while I ______, it suddenly ______ outside.3. 当我跑到外面时，我看到水已经淹没了街道。 When I ______, I saw that water ______ the streets.4. 这次经历教会了我自然的力量和做好准备的重要性。 This experience taught me ______.【参考答案】：1. that terrible afternoon2. was sleeping; began to rain heavily3. ran outside; had flooded4. the power of nature and the importance of being prepared【参考范文】A Day I Will Never ForgetTime flies, but I still clearly remember that terrible afternoon. It was a day when a heavy rainstorm hit my hometown.That morning, while I was sleeping, it suddenly began to rain heavily outside. The wind was so strong that trees shook back and forth. When I woke up, I saw water rising quickly in the street. My mother shouted, "We must move to higher ground!" We grabbed some important things and ran upstairs. While we were waiting on the second floor, the water kept rising. I was so scared that I held my mother's hand tightly. We could hear people calling for help everywhere.This experience taught me the power of nature and the importance of being prepared. Now I understand that we should always stay calm and help each other in times of danger.【范文赏析】这篇范文按照时间线索叙述清晰，情感真挚，值得同学们学习：1. 开头简洁："Time flies, but I still clearly remember that terrible afternoon."直接点题，引出难忘的经历。2. 时间线索明确：That morning → While I was sleeping → When I woke up → While we were waiting按照时间顺序推进，条理清晰。3. 时态运用准确： 过去进行时：was sleeping, were waiting（背景动作）一般过去时：began, shouted, grabbed, ran（突然发生的动作）过去完成时：had risen（过去的过去）4. 环境描写生动："The wind was so strong that trees shook back and forth.""water rising quickly in the street"用具体描写让读者感受到暴风雨的猛烈。5. 心理描写真实："I was so scared that I held my mother's hand tightly."表达恐惧之情，真实感人。6. 细节描写丰富："We grabbed some important things and ran upstairs.""We could hear people calling for help everywhere."通过具体动作和声音，让故事更加生动。7. 结尾升华主题："the power of nature and the importance of being prepared""stay calm and help each other in times of danger"从个人经历上升到人生感悟，点明主题。8. 词汇亮点：hit袭击shake back and forth来回摇晃rise quickly快速上涨 move to higher ground转移到高地grab抓起call for help呼救in times of danger在危险时刻 【同主题练习题目】 练习一题目： A Heavy Rainstorm I Experienced提示：暴雨是什么时候发生的？当时你正在做什么？ 你看到了什么？听到了什么？你当时的感受是什么？要求： 词数80-100词，注意运用过去进行时和一般过去时。 练习二题目： When the Earthquake Came提示：地震发生时你在哪里？在做什么？ 你看到了什么？听到了什么？你和家人是怎么做的？这次经历让你明白了什么？要求： 词数80-100词，注意运用while和when连接动作。 练习三题目： A Snowstorm That Stopped Our City提示：暴风雪是什么时候发生的？它给城市带来了什么影响？你和家人是怎么度过的？这次经历给你什么感受？要求： 词数80-100词，注意描写环境和感受。 练习四题目： Learning from a Flood提示：洪水发生时你在哪里？你看到了什么可怕的景象？你和家人做了什么？这次经历教会了你什么？要求： 词数80-100词，注意结尾要写出感悟。BeginningTime flies, but I still clearly remember ______.It was a day when ______.Body That morning, while I ______, the ground suddenly ______.Everything around me ______. I heard people ______.When I ______, I saw ______. My heart ______.We ______ and waited for ______.EndingThis experience taught me ______.Now I understand that ______.