读后续写动作链A Mother‘s Surprise公开课课件PPT

读后续写A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE1. to predict what would happen next according to the plot development and the analysis of the plot ;2. to enrich the outline of the continuous story and resolution part of the passage; 3. to polish your sentences about action description.By the end of this period, you will be ableto express the ideas properly and vividly.Learning objectivesDifficult Points1读后续写“三步走”1. 阅读（3-5mins） 2. 构思（3-5mins） 3. 行文（10-15mins）负正The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. ……Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.conflict续写：Paragraph 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.在父亲的帮助下，早餐顺利做好了！母亲非常惊喜！How to continue a story?①段首句决定故事走向②找到可呼应的细节❓2读后续写评分标准内容构思语言表达Paragraph 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.……The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. ……But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. ……Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para1父亲要发火父亲了解情况后，没有发火父亲和他们一起做早餐父亲的帮助下，早餐顺利做好了！他们非常开心Para2母亲非常惊喜！②找到可呼应的细节Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. ……原文细节3But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Para1父亲要发火父亲了解情况后，没有发火父亲和他们一起做早餐父亲的帮助下，早餐顺利做好了！他们非常开心Para2双胞胎祝母亲节日快乐母亲非常惊喜！母亲注意到了Jeff的手母亲万分感动！②找到可呼应的细节动作描写动作描写动作描写动作描写He knelt down, patted them on their shoulders and said,“Time is on our side. Let’s do it together.”Having prepared everything, they began to make the breakfast together.with the help of their father, the breakfast was ready, giving off a pleasant scent.Para1父亲了解情况后，没有发火(蹲下来，拍着肩膀，说……）父亲和他们一起做早餐（准备好一切，做早餐）父亲的帮助下，早餐顺利做好了(父亲帮助，早餐做好了，散发香味）③行文遣词造句:动作描写sb did…，did…and did…(动作链条:A,B and C）Having done…, sb did …（动作链：A and B)非谓语+ 谓语+doing(表伴随)① 拿出肉 瞄准狼 扔出去He pulled out the meat, aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to the animal.②拦下车 上车 告诉司机目的地____________________________________________________________③ 抱住儿子 走向前 蹲下来 一把抱住！___________________________________________________________动作链条 A, B, C and DShe walked forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.She stopped a taxi, got into it and told the driver her destination.①排了三个小时的队伍，他被告知票卖完了。Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.② 手机已经充好了电，他被告知不允许带手机进俱乐部。____________________________________________________________动作链条having done…，sb did…Having his phone charged, he was told that it wasn’t allowed in the club.①他站在路边，仰望天空，感受着这份珍贵的宁静。Standing beside the road, he looked up to the sky, feeling the precious peace in his heart.② 被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了手，小声说“我来”。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③ 傍晚来临，Lucy 坐在桌前，思考如何打发时间。___________________________________________________________动作面： 非谓语+谓语+doingEncouraged by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “ I want to have a try.”With the evening approaching, Lucy sat beside the desk, wondering how to kill the time.Having received the gift, she was so happy that she was at a loss what to do.Having noticed Jeff’s hand, she understood the whole thing at once, feeling a sense of warmth flooding into her heart.She Looked at the gift, took a deep breath and uttered softly“ You’ve grown up, honey!”Para2母亲非常惊喜！(收到礼物，高兴地不知所措）母亲注意到了Jeff的手（注意到Jeff的手，母亲明白了一切，温暖涌上心头）母亲万分感动！（看了看早餐，深吸一口气，说到“宝贝长大了！”）③动作描写小练笔sb did…，did…and did…(动作链条:A,B and C）Having done…, sb did …（动作链：A and B)非谓语+ 谓语+doing(表伴随)Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Judging from his expression,It was evident that he was about to explode after seeing the mess. But to their relief, having learned their plan, he knelt down, patted them on their shoulders and said.“Time is on our side. Let's do it together.” Without the slightest hesitation, they started their battle once again. Before long, with the help of their father, the breakfast was ready, giving off pleasant smell. Tired though they were, their hearts were filled with nothing else but joy and pride.Paragraph2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up“Happy Mother's Day!"They uttered the words at the same time. To their mother’s surprise, she had never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.The scent of the food filled the bedroom, which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world. But then, the mother's throat tightened when she noticed Jeff's hand. She understood the whole thing at once and felt a strong sense of warmth running over in her heart. She fondly gathered the twins into her arms.“Thank you,my honey. Thank you,"the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.A MoMOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE1.How to enrich the outline of the passage?2.What have I learnt in this lesson? Summary