高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 5 What an adventure!学案设计

Section Ⅳ　Writing——描写探险或旅行经历

Step Ⅰ　文本研读

Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解

1．Skim the passage and you'll find that the adventure is usually described on the basis of ________________________．

2．The passage is about the author's experiences during __________________________________．

Ⅱ.文本剖析：特色表达

Undersea adventure

Place (地点)：One - day 1.________ to the Farne Islands

Time (时间)：2.________ every day from 1 June to 31 July

Activity (活动): Two 3.________： wreck diving and scenic diving

Accommodation (膳宿): lunch

Instructor (指导)：12 4.________ and 6 dive 5.________ per tour

Ⅲ.熟记下列短语

①set sail 启航

②appeal to sb. 对某人有吸引力

③to make a long story short 长话短说

④a spirit of exploration 探索精神

Step Ⅱ　Writing about a diving experience

[文体介绍]

描述个人经历属于记叙文，介绍自己的一次或有趣或有意义或留下深刻印象的经历。此类文章应围绕五个w (who, when, where, what, why)和一个h(how)展开。时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时，描述经历需用一般过去时，描述景观及个人感受通常用一般现在时。　　

[篇章结构]

(1)写作背景

开篇点题，总述自己的某次经历，介绍基本信息，包括时间、地点、人物等，引出下文。

(2)描述经历

详细介绍此次经历，从一定的角度入手，一般按时间或空间顺序进行描述。注意行文连贯性。

(3)个人感受

阐述本次经历带给自己的收获或感受。

[常用表达]

❶One of my most unforgettable experiences was...

我最难忘的一次经历是……

❷Here is something that I can't forget and will always recall.

这是我无法忘记并会一直想起的事情。

❸Upon arrival，we began to...immediately.

我们一到达就马上开始……

❹The...gave me a great sense of achievement.

……让我很有成就感。

❺This...was really meaningful and I benefited a lot from it.

……的确很有意义，我从中获益颇多。

❻Full of happiness, I was proud that I could do so much for...

我感到很幸福，并很自豪我能为……做这么多。

❼I'll never forget...

我将永远不会忘记……

❽...will live in my mind forever.我将永远铭记……

❾I feel very happy/sad/proud...because...

我感到很高兴/难过/自豪……因为……

⑩Only then did I realise...

只有在那时我才意识到……

⑪Today I felt very happy because I did a good deed.

今天我感到很开心，因为我做了一件好事。

⑫I will remember...forever.我将永远记住……

⑬I've learnt a lot from...

我从……中学到了很多。

[实践应用]

假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括：

1．时间、地点；

2．探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等；

3．你的感受。

注意：1.词数80个左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：探险expedition

第一步　布局谋篇

第二步　遣词造句

完成句子

1．昨天，我和一些游客参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。

Yesterday, I, together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition __________________________ in the West Sea.

2．我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。

We had ________________________．

3．其中之一是深海潜水。

One of them was __________________________．

4．在潜水期间，我们享受海底的美丽和观看海洋生物。

During the diving, we ______________________ and watched the marine life.

5．我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。

We ____________________________ the marine life so close.

6．给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。

__________________________ was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea.

7．当我看到那些废墟时，我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的，他们后来经历了什么。

When I saw those ruins, I ____________________________ what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.

8．就我而言，这次旅行拓宽了我们的视野，也帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识。

As far as I'm concerned, this travel ____________________________ as well as helping us learn more about the sea.

句式升级

9．用定语从句合并句2和句3。

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10．用现在分词短语作状语改写句7。

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第三步　完美成篇

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Section Ⅳ　Writing——描写探险或旅行经历

写作精析·技能提升

Step Ⅰ　文本研读

Ⅰ.框架建构：整体理解

1．place, scenery and activity　2.undersea adventure

Ⅱ.文本剖析：特色表达

1．tour　2.Available　3.dives　4.divers　5.instructors

Step Ⅱ　Writhing about a diving experience

第二步

1．organized by a travel agency

2．many exciting activities

3．deep sea diving

4．enjoyed the undersea beauty

5．had never seen

6．What impressed me most

7．couldn't help wondering

8．broadened our horizons

9．We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.

10．Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.

第三步

Yesterday, I, together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea, which left a deep impression on me.

We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep  sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.

As far as I'm concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.