外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 5 What an adventure!学案

这是一份外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 5 What an adventure!学案，共3页。


本单元的写作项目是描述一次探险或者冒险经历，属于记叙文文体。记叙文有六大要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。探险类文章需要注意重点要放在“探险”上；主人公是有意识地去做的，而不是偶然或者意外发生的事情。另外需要体现探险的意义所在，读过之后能让读者有所启发。通常用过去相关的时态。在文章里要写出自己做了什么，自己看见了什么，以及自己的感受。
[基本框架]
1．开头(beginning)——交代探险发生的时间、地点以及内容；
2．主体(bdy)——详细说明探险的经过或过程；
3．结尾(ending)——写出对探险的评价以及自己的感受。
[常用词块]
1．save the earth拯救地球
2．take the time machine 乘坐时光机
3．fly past the stars飞过星球
4．be transfrmed int an insect变成了昆虫
5．be eaten by a mnster 被怪物吃掉
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．When it cmes t the adventure stry，the Magic Schl Bus came int my mind first.
一说到冒险故事，我首先想到的就是《神奇校车》。
2．Speaking f the adventure，I experienced nce three years ag.
说起冒险，我三年前经历了一次。
3．If yu want t experience the travel in space, let's read the fllwing stry tgether.
如果你想感受太空旅行，我们一起来读读下面的故事吧。
★正文佳句
1．We flew thrugh the tunnel and gt int the time machine.
我们飞跃隧道，进入了时光机器。
2．I was swimming in the sea when a big shark appeared several meters away frm me.
我正在海里游泳，突然一条大鲨鱼出现在离我几米远的地方。
3．They jumped int the tree hle and then shrank int a little man f the same size as a muse.
他们跳入树洞，然后缩成了像一只老鼠大小的小人。
★余味结尾
1．The little girl came t herself and fund she was still sleeping under the tree.
小姑娘苏醒过来，发现自己依然睡在树底下。
2．Till nw I still feel frightened at the thught f that adventure.
直到现在，一想起那次冒险我依然感到恐惧。
3．The her in the mvie saved the peple in truble and taught me t be kind and helpful t peple arund me.
电影中的男主角拯救了苦难中的人们，教会我要对周围的人善良，要乐于帮助他们。
请用英语写一篇记叙文，描述你的一次探险经历。
注意：词数80左右。
【学生习作】
【升格作文】
As a child, I experienced an adventure when I was a little child.
As a naughty by, I, tgether with anther tw bys, was determined t make an adventure int the cave at the back f ur village. We were very excited t find sme strange stnes never seen befre and went further int the cave. Hwever, the deeper, the darker. Sn it became cmpletely dark befre we realized it, and we culdn't see anything and culdn't find ur way back. We felt frightened and burst int tears.
Frtunately, my father and sme villagers came t find us. We were safe. I am s deeply impressed that I shall never frget it.
你是新华中学的学生李华，今年暑假和父母去了夏威夷。期间经历了人生第一次潜水探险。请以日记的形式描述自己的这一次冒险经历，并写出从中自己的所思所想所获。
1．潜水地点是普普克阿海滩公园(Pupukea Beach Park)；
2．我刚开始听说这里有时会出现鲨鱼，有点担心，但因为它们一般不会主动攻击人类，我尝试下水；
3．这里是一个海洋生物保护区，海里的鱼类非常丰富，还有海龟；
4．因为海里全是礁石，需要注意安全；
5．建议想要去的朋友最好选择每年的夏季，海面平静且海浪很小的最佳浮潜季节。
要求：1.词数80左右；
2．内容积极向上，可适当增添细节以使行文流畅。





【参考范文】
Tday the adventure stry is my first diving experience.In the early mrning my parents and I went t Pupukea Beach by bus and then t an island by bat.
Hearing the basic ds and dn'ts including the infrmatin f sharks，I dare nt t jump int the sea.After the cach's explanatin I jumped in with the guide.At first I didn't see any fish but sme crals and seaweeds.Sn I fund grups f fishes f all kinds and the turtles.What shcked me mst was that I shuld see sme sharks running after the fish grups with my wn eyes.
Diving experience is impressive and unfrgettable.We shuld be kind t the sea creatures and live in harmny with them.When I was a child, I had an
adventure. I still remember it very well.
Being naughty, I and tw bys made an adventure int the cave at the back f ur village. We were very excited t find sme strange stnes never seen befre. We went int the cave. Sn it became cmpletely dark.We culdn't see anything and culdn't find ur way back. We were afraid and cried.
Frtunately, my father and sme villagers came t find us. We were safe. I am s deeply impressed that I shall never frget it.
[点评]
1.对探险经历描述比较浅显，重点在于“探险”的过程。
2.情节的描述不够生动，不能让人读后难忘。