湖北高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信

推荐信

1．假定你是李华，你的外籍教师Peter近期回国，他打算送给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物，请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括：

1.推荐礼物；

2.推荐原因；

3.表达祝福

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，学校最近正在举行“最美学生”评选活动，请按下列要求给组委会写一封信，推荐你身边的一位同学参选。内容主要包括：

1. 你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质；

2. 你推荐这位同学的理由。

注意：1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack给你发e-mail说他最近对中国古代名医李时珍很感兴趣，想要了解李时珍的故乡——薪春，请给他回一封e-mail，简要地介绍你的家乡蕲春。内容包括：

1. 蕲春人杰地灵，被称为“教授县”；

2. 蕲春物产丰富，有着闻名遐迩的“蕲春四宝”；

3. 蕲春经济飞速发展，即将建成高铁站。

注意：1. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入字数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：教授县 County of Scholar 蕲春四宝 Qichun four treasures

高铁站 high-speed rail station

Dear Jack,

I’m more than delighted and proud to share with you something about Qichun, the hometown of the famous herbalist Li Shizhen as well as me.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是某校高一(6)班学生李华，学校英语社团(the English society)现在要招募新成员，你有意参加该社团。请用英文给社长Johnson写一封自荐信。内容提示如下：

1.写信表示愿意参加；

2.个人情况介绍(英语情况、技能以及性格等)。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数80左右。

Dear Johnson，

I'm Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 1.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm looking forward to being accepted.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David暑假将带弟弟来你市游玩，发邮件请你推荐游玩的地方。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.推荐的地方；

2.推荐的理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear David,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Robin想到中国留学，但对中国大学的情况了解很少，于是寻求你的帮助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表示欢迎；

2.推荐大学；

3.你的期待。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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7．假定你是李华，计划参加学校英语俱乐部开展的看电影分享活动。请你根据看过的一部电影，写一个发言稿，内容包括：

1.电影的简介；

2.推荐的原因。

注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Good evening! My name is Li Hua.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening!

8．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jacky学习汉语发音时碰到困难，写信请你推荐相关学习资源，帮忙解决问题。请你用英语给他回信，内容包括:

1. 资源名称；   2. 推荐理由。

注意:

1. 词数80词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jacky,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中国饮食文化很感兴趣，并将在春节期间来湖北游玩，请你写一封邮件给他。邮件内容如下：

1. 简单介绍春节饮食习俗；

2. 推荐一道你家乡的特色菜；

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Dear Peter,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wish you have a good time here.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Cathy即将回国，希望你能推荐一款具有中国特色的纪念品(souvenir)以馈赠亲友。请你给她回封邮件。内容包括：

1. 推荐的物品；

2. 推荐原因；

3. 表达期待。

注意： 1.词数在80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Cathy,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

1．参考范文1：

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing to give you some advice.

Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.

Please give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文2：

Dear Peter,

Gladly learning that you will return to your motherland and intend to bring your mother some gifts representing Chinese culture, I am writing to give you some advice.

Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. Besides, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot, which illustrates good luck for you all.

By the way, please give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍教师Peter写一封邮件，向他推荐可以代表中国文化特色的礼物，以便他送与他的母亲。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：pleased→glad

建议：suggestion→advice

漂亮的：pretty→beautiful

喜欢：love→like

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：And I am writing to give you some advice.

拓展句：And I am writing to give you some advice, which I believe will help you.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear Sir or Madam,

It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. In my opinion, the candidate should set a good example to others, some good qualities being a must such as selflessness, bravery and honesty. In addition, they must be kind, helpful and encouraging.

My classmate Li Lei is such a person, who is enthusiastic and helpful. Not only is Li Lei always ready to help others, but he is hard-working and intelligent. Therefore, I strongly recommend Li Lei as "the most beautiful student”.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给评选组委会写一封推荐信，推荐“最美学生”。

【详解】1.词汇积累

很棒的：great→excellent

在我看来：In my opinion→As far as I'm concerned

此外：In addition → What’s more/Besides

因此：Therefore→Thus

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, I strongly recommend Li Lei as "the most beautiful student”.

拓展句：Therefore, I strongly recommend that Li Lei should be "the most beautiful student”.

【点睛】【高分句型1】My classmate Li Lei is such a person, who is enthusiastic and helpful.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Not only is Li Lei always ready to help others, but he is hard-working and intelligent. （运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式）

3．Dear Jack,

I’m more than delighted and proud to share with you something about Qichun, the hometown of the famous herbalist Li Shizhen as well as me.

In addition to Li Shizhen, Qichun is also home to many professors and doctors, known as the County of Scholar. Besides, it is abundant in natural resources, among which four unique species are called Qichun four treasures. Now a high-speed railway station is under construction and will be completed in four months. With the rapid development of economy, Qichun will become an increasingly popular modern city.

I sincerely invite you to pay a visit to my hometown if you are available. I will be your guide. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国笔友Jack发一封e-mail简要地介绍你的家乡蕲春。

【详解】1.词汇积累

此外：Besides→What’s more

在……富足：is abundant in→be rich in

快速的：rapid→quick

越来越受欢迎：more and more popular→increasingly popular

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Now a high-speed railway station is under construction and will be completed in four months.

复合句：Now a high-speed railway station is under construction, which will be completed in four months.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, it is abundant in natural resources, among which four unique species are called Qichun four treasures. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I sincerely invite you to pay a visit to my hometown if you are available. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

4．Dear Johnson,

I'm Li Hun from Class 6, Grade 1. I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society.

I'm willing to join it.

I'm interested in English and have a good knowledge of it. Last year, I won the first prize in the English competition. Having learnt English far more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently. What's more, I have some special skills, such as singing songs, telling stories and making speeches. I'm sure I can play an active part in the future activities of the society. Above all, I'm an easy-going guy who gets along well with others and enjoy working with others.

I'm looking forward to being accepted.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇自荐信，推荐自己加入学校的英语社团。

【详解】词语积累

想要、愿意做某事：want to do→be willing to do

交流：talk with→communicate with

扮演…角色：play a role in→play a part in

最重要的是：most importantly→above all

句式拓展

原句：Above all, I'm an easy-going guy. I get along well with others. I enjoy working with others.

拓展句：Above all, I'm an easy-going guy who gets along well with others and enjoy working with others.

【点睛】[高分句式1] . I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句式2] Having learnt English far more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently.（运用了现在分词短语做原因状语）

5．Dear David,

Knowing that you're going to visit my city with your younger brother, I'm pleased to give you some advice.

I'd like to recommend the new Ocean Park in our city to you. Besides different kinds of sea animals, a lovely dolphin settles down there, which gives wonderful performances with a pretty girl. I'm sure your brother will like it. What's more, Ocean Park is not far from our snack street, where you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks.

Wish you a happy trip!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David暑假将带弟弟来你市游玩，发邮件请你推荐游玩的地方。

【详解】1.词汇积累

得知：learning→knowing

高兴的：happy→pleased

可爱的：cute→lovely

奇妙的：fantastic→wonderful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I'd like to recommend the new Ocean Park in our city to you.

拓展句：As our city is near the sea, I'd like to recommend the new Ocean Park in our city to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you're going to visit my city with your younger brother, I'm pleased to give you some advice. (运用了现在分词作状语，以及that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] What's more, Ocean Park is not far from our snack street, where you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Robin,

   Knowing that you are thinking about having college education in China, I’m very glad and firmly believe that it’s a right choice.

   I recommend Beijing University to you. You are sure to benefit a lot from it. With four years spent in Beijing University, you’ll have a further understanding of traditional Chinese culture and the present Chinese society, which will in turn make it easy for you to make more friends and start your own business after graduation. If you don’t want to stay in China, the ability of speaking Chinese and experiences of living in China can also guarantee you many good job opportunities.

   As for me, I would be more than happy to help you. All in all, if I were you, I wouldn’t let go of such a good chance. Write to me soon to let me know your decision.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Robin写封信，推荐一所中国大学。

【详解】1.词汇积累

选择：option→choice

了解：learn→know

高兴的：pleased→happy

放弃：give up= let go of

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I recommend Beijing University to you. You are sure to benefit a lot from it.

拓展句：I recommend Beijing University to you, which you are sure to benefit a lot from.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are thinking about having college education in China, I’m very glad and firmly believe that it’s right choice. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] All in all, if I were you, I wouldn’t let go of such a good chance.(运用了虚拟语气)

7．Good evening! My name is Li Hua. It’s my honor to be here to share with you one of my favourite films.

The film that impresses me most is Hi, Mom, directed by the celebrated actress Jia Ling, who also plays the leading role. It describes Jia travelling back to the year 1981, when she meets her mother at a young age and becomes her friend hoping to improve her life and make her happy.

This film has received many positive reviews. Many moviegoers can’t help but shed tears because of the main characters’ sincere affection for each other. I strongly recommend you to watch it.

That’s all. Thank you for listening!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一个发言稿，分享看过的一部电影的内容。

【详解】词汇积累

荣幸：It’s one’s honor to → be honored to

留下印象：impress →make an impression on

著名的：celebrated → famous

评论：review →comment

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I strongly recommend you to watch it.

拓展句：I'd strongly recommend that you  (should) watch it.

【点睛】[高分句型1] The film that impresses me most is Hi, Mom, directed by the celebrated actress Jia Ling, who also plays the leading role. (运用了过去分词作定语和who引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It describes Jia travelling back to the year 1981, when she meets her mother at a young age and becomes her friend hoping to improve her life and make her happy. (运用了when引导的非限制性定语从句)

8．Dear Jacky,

I'm writing in response to your request for information about Chinese pronunciation. I'm pleased to provide you with answers to solve your problem.

Hello Talk is a suitable app for you. It has a collection of audio materials covering various levels. Besides, it offers a voice recorder tool, with which you may record your pronunciation and compare it with that of a native speaker. With the app, you will definitely make great progress.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of help. Feel free to ask me if you have any other questions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jacky写封回信，推荐相关学习资源，帮忙解决他学习汉语发音时碰到的困难。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 资源名称；

2. 推荐理由。

3. 询问对方的意向。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

in response to; be pleased to do; provide sb. with sth.; a collection of; compare with; make great progress; be of help

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm writing in response to your request for information about Chinese pronunciation.

2. I'm pleased to provide you with answers to solve your problem.

3. It has a collection of audio materials covering various levels.

4. Besides，it offers a voice recorder tool, with which you may record your pronunciation and compare it with that of a native speaker.

5. With the app, you will definitely make great progress.

6. I sincerely hope my advice will be of help.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：Besides

2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, it offers a voice recorder tool, with which you may record your pronunciation and compare it with that of a native speaker. （这句话运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Feel free to ask me if you have any other questions. （这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

9．Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I am delighted that you are fascinated by Chinese food culture. Knowing that you are scheduled to visit Hubei Province during Chinese New Year, I am writing to give you some suggestions.

During Chinese New Year, Chinese people have the custom of dining on tangyuan, which means family reunion. As a native of Hubei, I highly recommend you to get a taste of hot and dry noodles, a famous and popular breakfast here.

Wish you have a good time here!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Peter写一封邮件介绍湖北的春节习俗和推荐家乡菜。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 简单介绍春节饮食习俗；

2. 推荐一道你家乡的特色菜；

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted; be fascinated by; Chinese food culture; schedule; suggestion; custom; mean; family reunion; native; highly recommend; get a taste of; famous; popular

第三步：连词成句

1. I am delighted that you are fascinated by Chinese food culture.

2.Knowing that you are scheduled to visit Hubei Province during Chinese New Year, I am writing to give you some suggestions.

3.During Chinese New Year, Chinese people have the custom of dining on tangyuan, which means family reunion.

4.As a native of Hubei, I highly recommend you to get a taste of hot and dry noodles, a famous and popular breakfast here.

5.Wish you have a good time here!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Thirdly. (供参考)

2.表并列补充关系：Additionally, moreover. (供参考)

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but. (供参考)

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are scheduled to visit Hubei Province during Chinese New Year, I am writing to give you some suggestions.(使用that 引导宾语从句。)

[高分句型2] During Chinese New Year, Chinese people have the custom of dining on tangyuan, which means family reunion. (使用which引导非限定性定语从句。)

10．Dear Cathy,

Hearing that you’ll be back to the UK, I just can’t wait to tell you how I’ll miss you in the following days. And at your request I am rather glad to recommend one typical souvenir of China to you.

For foreigners like you, it’s strongly recommended to choose traditional Chinese landscape paintings as souvenirs for they not only reveal the intoxicating beauty of Chinese natural scenery, but serve as decorations to beautify houses as well. Besides, the paintings are more or less associated with ancient Chinese poetry, from which you could dive deep into Chinese culture and help promote the understanding about the cross-cultural differences.

Hope my recommendation will be of great help to you. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Cathy写封邮件，推荐一款具有中国特色的纪念品(souvenir)以馈赠亲友。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 推荐的物品；

2. 推荐原因；

3. 表达期待。

第二步:列提纲

be back to the UK, recommend sth. to sb., recommendation, reveal, natural scenery, decorations, be associated with, dive into Chinese culture, promote the understanding, cross-cultural differences, be of help, look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. Hearing that you’ll be back to the UK, I just can’t wait to tell you how I’ll miss you in the following days.

2. And at your request I am rather glad to recommend one typical souvenir of China to you.

3. For foreigners like you, it’s strongly recommended to choose traditional Chinese landscape paintings as souvenirs for they not only reveal the intoxicating beauty of Chinese natural scenery, but serve as decorations to beautify houses as well.

4. Besides, the paintings are more or less associated with ancient Chinese poetry, from which you could dive deep into Chinese culture and help promote the understanding about the cross-cultural differences.

5. Hope my recommendation will be of great help to you.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序（供参考）：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：as well, besides, not only…but (also),

 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] For foreigners like you, it’s strongly recommended to choose traditional Chinese landscape paintings as souvenirs for they not only reveal the intoxicating beauty of Chinese natural scenery, but serve as decorations to beautify houses as well.（该句使用了it作形式主语，原因状语从句和not only… but (also)…连接词）

[高分句型2] Besides, the paintings are more or less associated with ancient Chinese poetry, from which you could dive deep into Chinese culture and help promote the understanding about the cross-cultural differences.（该句使用了“介词+关系代词”引导定语从句结构，用词精准高级）