湖北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：

1. 学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；

2. 加强锻炼保持健康，养成良好的饮食和作息习惯；

3. 健康的心态也很重要。

注意：词数100左右；开头已经写出，不计入总词数。

为使上下文连贯，可以适当增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译。

参考词汇：state of mind 心态

Dear Xiao Wang,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Alex作为交换生来你校学习。刚到学校不久，还不适应学校的生活，为此感到焦虑。请用英文给他写一封电子邮件，安慰他并告诉他如何快速适应新学校的生活 。内容包括：

1.给与安慰；

2.尽快适应新学校的建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假设你是一名高中生，名字叫李华，你的美国笔友 David 来信向你求助。他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：

1.建议他向妈妈道歉；

2.说明过多上网的危害；

3.列举一些健康的休闲方式。

注意： 1.词数100词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇： Internet addiction 网瘾

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 David最近总是失眠，为此他感到非常苦恼，特发来邮件向你寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 养成良好的睡前习惯；

2. 保持健康的饮食；

3. 保持乐观的心态。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。 参考词汇：insomnia 失眠

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友 Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件, 给他一些建议, 内容包括: (1)到达时间; (2)合适的礼物词数80左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.

Dear Terry,

How are you doing?

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的来信。他在信中说，进入高中后，他不能适应高中的学习生活，在学习上也遇到了障碍，因而情绪低落，甚至有了放弃的想法。请你给他回信，内容如下：

1. 向Bob表示问候和安慰；

2. 针对他的问题提出建议。要点如下：

(1) 在高中要了解正确的学习方法，并学会把知识转化为能力；

(2) 上课认真听讲，遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助；

(3) 不要丧失信心。

注意: 1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,

I am sorry to hear that

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I hope you will find my ideas helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter想选修中文作为外语，为此写信征求你的意见。请按以下要求给Peter写一封回信。

1. 鼓励他选修中文；

2. 中文的魅力；

3. 学好中文的意义。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Leo发邮件说他即将到北京的一所大学做交换生一年，目前有一些困惑，想向你寻求一些建议。请你写一篇短文给他回复，内容包括：

1.如何克服语言障碍；

2.如何适应新环境（文化差异、学习压力等）；

3.祝福对方。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数；

3.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。

Dear Leo,

I'm more than delighted to hear that you will study at a Chinese university as an ex-change student.

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。

1．参加中文学习班；

2．看中文书刊、电视；

3．学唱中文歌曲；

4．交中国朋友。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

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Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是王华，你的笔友John来信询问关于如何结交朋友的问题。请根据下面的汉语提示，结合自身实际，给他写一封英文回信。内容包括：

1.交友的重要性；2.如何交友：至少提三条建议；3.患难朋友才是真正的朋友。

注意：

1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear John,

Glad to hear from you.

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                                             Yours,

Wang Hua

1．Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.（写信目的）

It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.（高分句型一) However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise, changing unhealthy eating habits and having a good sleep. （高分句型二）The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.（高分句型三）（建议）

I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.（期待）

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某中学生小王写封信，谈谈对节食减肥的见解。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

漂亮的：beautiful→pretty

然而：however→nevertheless

影响：affect→influence

有用的：helpful→useful

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty.

拓展句：However, I hold the view that health is more important than beauty.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful.(运用了that引导的主语从句)

2．I am Li hua. I quite understand how you feel. Take it easy, my dear friend. It is common for us all to go through a similar hard time when we come to a new environment. I hope the following advice can be of help to you.

To begin with, I recommend you should take part in some school activities, in which you will make some friends. With some new friends, you will feel less lonely. What’s more, you’d better have a talk with your teacher when in trouble, for teachers always have their own ways to find solutions to students’ problems.

I truly hope you can get used to your new school life as soon as possible.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Alex写一封电子邮件，针对他刚到学校不久，还不适应学校的生活，为此感到焦虑，给予安慰，并合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

正常的：common→normal

建议：advice → suggestion

参加：take part in→ participate in

在困境中：in trouble→ in need

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With some new friends, you will feel less lonely.

拓展句：If you have some new friends, you will feel less lonely.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, I recommend you should take part in some school activities, in which you will make some friends.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I truly hope you can get used to your new school life as soon as possible.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

3．One possible version:

Dear David,

I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.

In my opinion, you should apologize to your mother, as she has done nothing wrong to prevent you from Internet addiction. Although the Internet plays an important role in modern life, we can’t ignore its harm to us. Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world.

As students, we should devote our energy to study. When available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games. Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友 David写封信，建议他向妈妈道歉，说明过多上网的危害，列举一些健康的休闲方式。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

冲突：conflict→clash

因为：as→because

在……中起重要作用：play an important role in→play an important part in

导致：result in→lead to

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：When available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games.

拓展句：When you are available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.(运用了only修饰if条件句位于句首引起的部分倒装句)

4．Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have a problem with insomnia. To help you out, I’d love to offer you some advice.

First, it’s vital to form a healthy bedtime habit. You’d better not watch films for a long time or listen to music that excites you. Also, keeping a balanced diet plays a significant role in your good sleep. A cup of milk before bed may help you sleep sound through the whole night. More importantly, it’s a good idea to hold a positive attitude towards life instead of being anxious frequently.

I hope my advice is worth taking and will benefit you.

 Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David写邮件就对方失眠问题给出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：vital→essential

帮助：help→assist

保持：hold→maintain

频繁地：frequently→continually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：More importantly, it’s a good idea to hold a positive attitude towards life instead of being anxious frequently.

拓展句：More importantly, it’s a good idea that you hold a positive attitude towards life instead of being anxious frequently.

【点睛】【高分句型1】You’d better not watch films for a long time or listen to music that excites you.（运用that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I hope my advice is worth taking and will benefit you.（运用了宾语从句）

5．Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

First of all, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Besides, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. What's more, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友 Terry提供一些在中国朋友家做客的有关习俗的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困惑的：puzzled→confused

提供：provide→put forward

另外：in addition→ besides

应该：should/ought to=be supposed to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food.

拓展句：For example, it is vital that you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food.

【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. (运用了if引导的虚拟语气)

6．Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering senior high school. You should remember that it is very common and other students may face the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. Here are some tips to help you.

First of all, it is necessary to know about the proper learning methods at senior high school and learn to turn knowledge into ability. Secondly, it is a good idea to listen to the teachers carefully and turn to your teachers and classmates for help when you meet any difficulties in study. I’m sure they will be willing to help you. Finally, never lose confidence. After all, confidence is the first step to success.

I hope you will find my ideas helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Bob回信，向Bob表示问候和安慰以及针对他的问题提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→tips

问题：trouble→problem

方法：way→method

失去信心：lose heart=lose confidence

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, never lose confidence. After all, confidence is the first step to success.

拓展句：Finally, never lose confidence, which is the first step to success.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering senior high school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Here are some tips to help you. (运用了倒装句)

7．Dear Peter,

Nice to receive your letter, in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language.I consider it as a wise choice.

For one thing, Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world. For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, thus helping you create a new way of thinking.

If you learn Chinese well, you can communicate with the largest population in the world, which provides you with more opportunities to make a career.What’s more, the Chinese language is sure to give you a glimpse of the colourful culture of China.

May you do well in learning Chinese. If you have any problems, don’t hesitate to write to me.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Peter写信，就选修中文作为外语提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

帮助：help→assist

提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.=offer sb. sth.

机会：opportunity→chance

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, thus helping you create a new way of thinking.

拓展句：For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, which can help you create a new way of thinking.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Nice to receive your letter, in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language.（in which引导非限制性定语从句，whether引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

For another, the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique, thus helping you create a new way of thinking.（现在分词作状语）

8．Dear Leo,

 I'm more than delighted to hear that you will study at a Chinese university as an exchange student. After learning that you are confused about how to adapt to the new environment, I'm writing to give you some tips.

Face-to-face interaction with native speakers can help you overcome language and cultural barriers. To attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in a foreign language, why not make friends with native speakers and spend time with them? It is a good way to exchange language and culture. You'd better listen to Chinese songs as well as watch Chinese movies or TV shows in your daily life to ensure that you are exposed to the language environment all the time.

All beginnings are hard. I advise you to be tolerant and considerate of others, which is necessary for group living. It might be a good idea to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and communication with other students. Fight against homesickness and form a good habit of self-learning and independence, which are good for developing friendly relationships.

I do hope that my suggestions are beneficial to you. May you enjoy a wonderful college life in China and best wishes to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文给你的英国朋友Leo，解答他对于即将到北京的一所大学做交换生一年的一些困惑并给出一些建议。

【详解】1.    词汇积累

高兴的：happy →delighted

适应：adjust to →adapt to

建议：advice →tips

得到：get = attain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Face-to-face interaction with native speakers can help you overcome language and cultural barriers.

拓展句：It is face-to-face interaction with native speakers that can help you overcome language and cultural barriers.

【点睛】[高分句型1] After learning that you are confused about how to adapt to the new environment, I'm writing to give you some tips.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。

[高分句型2] I advise you to be tolerant and considerate of others, which is necessary for group living.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

19．One possible version:

Dear Peter.

I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will help you learn Chinese

Try and write to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad →happy

建议：advice →suggestion

学习：learn → study

此外：Besides =Moreover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.

拓展句：First, the reason why it is important to take a Chinese course is that you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. (运用了不定式作主语)

10．Dear John,

    Glad to hear from you.Now, I’m writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends.

    As you know everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody.In my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return.Besides, never judge a person only by his appearance.What’s more, you should think more of others than of yourself.

    On the other hand, if you don’t agree with others on a certain matter, don’t argue but discuss with him.Always remember, a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out, as the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

Yours,

Wang Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给笔友John写封回信，就如何结交朋友提出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：important→significant

在我看来：in my opinion=from my point of view

一定做某事：be sure to do sth.=be bound to do sth.

作为回报：in return=as a reward

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, never judge a person only by his appearance.

拓展句：Besides, never judge a person only by his appearance, which is not reliable.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

In my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others.（that引导表语从句）

[高分句型2]

On the other hand, if you don’t agree with others on a certain matter, don’t argue but discuss with him.（if引导条件状语从句）