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湖北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份湖北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。

建议信

1．假定你是李华，上周你收到了英国朋友Mike的邮件。他刚刚进入高中，在学习和生活中遇到了很多困难和压力，希望你能给他建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 学习和生活方面的建议；

2. 安慰和鼓励。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John发来邮件说学习汉语时遇到困难，希望你给出一些建议。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1. 建议；

2. 鼓励。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear John,

Yours

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Chris打算寒假来中国旅游，发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.预订酒店；

2.租用车辆；

3.雇佣导游。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

Welcome to China in the coming winter vacation,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假设你是祝人乐，最近收到你的笔友李华的来信，他谈到自己在网课期间，英语学习成绩下滑，为此非常苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1. 具体建议；

2. 期盼与祝福；

注意事项：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Hua,

I have already received your letter.

Yours,

Zhu Renle

5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jordan今年寒假要来中国北京旅行。请你写封邮件给他提出建议，内容包括：

1.写信的目的；

2.你的建议；

3.你的希望。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jordan,

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom将在寒假期间来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但仍然担心中文交流时遇到困难，写信向你求助。请你用英语给Tom回信，内容包括：

(1)宽慰对方；

(2)提出建议；

(3)期待收获。

注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

7．假设你是李华，你在网上看到李梅发的帖子，她说她刚上高一，在英语学习中遇到了一些困难，向你求助。请你根据以下内容要点给她回帖。要点包括：

1. 给出建议（如：认真听课，积累词汇以及多用英语交流，利用课余时间听英文歌曲等）；

2. 注意：

(1) 词数80左右；

(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Mei,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim跟你写信提到，他感觉自己现在的身体素质没有以前好了，希望你能给他一些建议，如何保持身体健康。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数应为80字左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假如你是李华，你的外籍笔友 Frank 在邮件中说她将要参加一个重要的考试，但是现在感到非常焦虑。请你给他回封邮件，就“如何减轻压力，高效地进行复习”提供一些建议。

注意：

1. 词数为 80 左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Frank,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假如你是小明，你的英国朋友Paul来信跟你抱怨中文语言难学，他觉得学习精力投入很多，但进展缓慢，收效甚微，所以心情沮丧。请你给他回信，帮他解决困惑。

内容包括：1.表示理解并安慰；2.提出有效的建议；3.表达祝福与期盼。

注意：1、字数80词左右；

2、开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。

Dear Paul,

Nice to have received your letter.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

1．Dear Mike,

How is it going? Learning from your mail that you are stressed out in the senior high school, I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

It’s quite normal to feel depressed when you begin the new life in the senior high school. The most important thing is to be positive and optimistic. The difficulties in learning and troubles in life will go away if you are confident and brave enough. In addition, taking an active part in the extra-curricular activities is also helpful. You can play football, jog or join the music club. These activities are not only good for your physical and mental health, but also offer you the chance to make new friends. Last but not least, don’t hesitate to ask for help when you are in trouble.

Nothing is too difficult for a strong mind. I believe you can quickly adjust to your senior high school life. Hope the advice above might be of help. Looking forward to your good news.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike回一封邮件，就他进入高中后在学习和生活中遇到的困难和压力给他建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

此外：in addition →additionally

重要的：important→significant

适应：adjust to→adapt to

2.句式拓展

陈述句变倒装句

原句：These activities are not only good for your physical and mental health, but also offer you the chance to make new friends.

拓展句：Not only are these activities good for your physical and mental health, but also offer you the chance to make new friends.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The difficulties in learning and troubles in life will go away if you are confident and brave enough.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

【高分句型2】These activities are not only good for your physical and mental health, but also offer you the chance to make new friends.（运用了not only …but also …句型）

2．Dear John,

I know you have trouble in learning Chinese. Here is my advice for you.

To tell the truth, learning Chinese takes time, so you should spend as much time as you can. Use Chinese whenever you can, which is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. In addition, you’d better watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on. If you work hard, you’re certain to learn Chinese well.

I’m sure that you’ll make more progress if you follow my advice. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国笔友John写一封电子邮件，就他学习汉语时遇到困难给出一些建议。内容包括：建议；鼓励。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做某事有困难：have trouble in doing→have difficulty in doing

建议：advice→suggestion

重要的：important→of importance

肯定的：certain→sure

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In addition, you’d better watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on.

拓展句：In addition, you’d better watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on, which can help you learn Chinese well.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Use Chinese whenever you can, which is very important. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] If you work hard, you’re certain to learn Chinese well.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

3．Dear Chris,

Welcome to China in the coming winter vacation. In order for you to have a better sightseeing, I have the following suggestions.

First of all, you should book the hotel in advance, because winter vacation is the peak season of travel. What’s more, you’d better rent a car, so that you can have a better tour according to your plan without being at the mercy of public transport. Finally, I advise you to hire a guide. The tour guide knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Chris回封邮件，给他一些在中国旅游的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

预订：book→reserve

最后：finally→at last

首先：first of all→in the first place

另外：what’s more→in addition

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, I advise you to hire a guide. The tour guide knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

拓展句：Finally, I advise you to hire a guide who knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, you should book the hotel in advance, because winter vacation is the peak season of travel. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] What’s more, you’d better rent a car, so that you can have a better tour according to your plan without being at the mercy of public transport. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)

4．Dear Li Hua,

I have already received your letter. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your English learning when taking online courses. Here, I‘d like to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, you should take every online English lesson seriously and hand in your homework on time, which will keep you on a regular learning schedule. Besides, I recommend you revise after class to strengthen what have been learned. Most importantly, keep close contact with your English teacher even though you cannot meet face to face. Your teacher will surely offer you practical English learning tips.

Hope you can find my advice useful and improve your English.

【导语】该书面报答为建议信。要求考生以祝人乐的身份，给笔友李华回一封信，就网课期间如何提升英语成绩提出建议，加以鼓励。

【详解】1.词汇积累

课程：course→lesson

建议：suggestion→advice

建议：recommend→suggest

巩固：strengthen→consolidate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Your teacher will surely offer you practical English learning tips.

拓展句：Your teacher will surely offer you some English learning tips which are practical and useful.

【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, you should take every online English lesson seriously and hand in your homework on time, which will keep you on a regular learning schedule. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Hope you can find my advice useful and improve your English. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，that省略)

5．Dear Jordan,

Knowing that you’ll pay a visit to Beijing this winter holiday, I am delighted. Now I’ll give you some advice.

First, it’s freezing cold here, so you’d better wear some warm clothes. Second, you should know where to go. To tell the truth, there are so many places of interest that you shouldn’t miss. Take the Great Wall as an example. As an old saying goes, ‘‘He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.’’

I hope that you are certain to have a pleasant time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jordan写封邮件，给他一些寒假来中国北京旅行的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

假期：holiday→vacation

高兴的：delighted→happy

建议：advice→suggestion

令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Second, you should know where to go.

拓展句：Second, you should know where you should go.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’ll pay a visit to Beijing this winter holiday, I am delighted. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] To tell the truth, there are so many places of interest that you shouldn’t miss. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Tom,

I feel sorry to learn that you are concerned about communicating in Chinese, so I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.

Knowing that speaking a foreign language requires courage, you’re supposed to take it easy and never shy away from your confusion. Besides, appropriate gestures allow a smoother interaction, which can generally reveal your ideas together with what you say.

I do hope my proposal could be practical and I believe you’ll pocket abundant harvest during your exchange study in China. Wish you good luck.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就英国朋友Tom担心中文交流困难的问题写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

遗憾的：sorry→regretful

担心的：concerned→worried

建议：suggestion→advice

此外：besides→what’s more

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：I feel sorry to learn that you are concerned about communicating in Chinese, so I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.

拓展句：Feeling sorry to learn that you are concerned about communicating in Chinese, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel sorry to learn that you are concerned about communicating in Chinese, so I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Besides, appropriate gestures allow a smoother interaction, which can generally reveal your ideas together with what you say.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Li Mei,

Learning that you are now struggling to learn English, I am more than pleased to share with you some effective means to conquer English.

Three ways, I believe, allow you to have a good command of English. Above all, you are supposed to listen to English classes more attentively, which can benefit you a lot in terms of grammar and vocabulary usage. What’s more, blurting out English helps you to be familiar with English culture and idioms. You can join in some English corner activities. Finally, you can enjoy some English songs in your spare time. In doing so, not only will your vocabulary be enriched, but your oral English can get more fluent.

I hope the suggestions above can help you out. If you need further help, don’t hesitate to email me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给李梅写封信，就她遇到的英语学习方面的问题，提出一些建议，帮助她提高英语成绩。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：pleased→glad

增加：enrich→increase

做某事困难；艰难地做某事：struggle to do sth→have difficulty doing sth

建议：suggestion→advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You can join in some English corner activities.

拓展句：You can join in some English corner activities, which will benefit you a lot.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are now struggling to learn English, I am more than pleased to share with you some effective means to conquer English. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] In doing so, not only will your vocabulary be enriched, but your oral English can get more fluent. (运用了部分倒装固定句型)

8．Dear Jim,

I am really sorry to know that you have been suffering from poor health these days. In response to your request in the last letter, I am glad to offer my advice.

First of all, a balanced diet is of prime importance, considering how obsessed you are with sweet food. It is urgent that you eat more fresh vegetables and fruit and avoid food high in fat and sugar. Besides, daily exercise is equally important. Stick to it, and you will definitely get in better shape. Furthermore, it is said that you will have a healthier heart with at least 7 hours of sleep every night. So, do get enough sleep! One more thing: stay positive and smile more.

I do hope my advice will be of practical help to you. I’m looking forward to your recovery.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim回信，就如何保持身体健康给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供：offer→ provide

主要的：prime → main

急迫的：urgent →pressing

建议： advice → suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, daily exercise is equally important.

拓展句：Besides, it is equally important that you should do daily exercise.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am really sorry to know that you have been suffering from poor health these days.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is urgent that you eat more fresh vegetables and fruit and avoid food high in fat and sugar.(运用it作形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的主语从句)

9．One possible version:

Dear Frank,

Terribly sorry to hear that you’re stressed right now with the important examination approaching, I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

First and foremost, the best thing to do is make a revision timetable. Besides, make sure that regular breaks are included in the timetable so that you can study more efficiently. It would be wise of you to think about getting some exercise to relieve stress, such as swimming or jogging. Last but not least, you’d better not stay up too late every day, which will do harm to your health.

Anyway, I do hope my suggestions are practical and things will be better soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍笔友 Frank回封邮件，就“如何减轻压力，高效地进行复习”提供一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→tip→suggestion

另外：moreover→besides

学习：learn→study

聪明的：smart→clever→wise

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First and foremost, the best thing to do is make a revision timetable.

拓展句：First and foremost, the best thing to do is make a revision timetable, which is very useful.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be wise of you to think about getting some exercise to relieve stress, such as swimming or jogging. (运用了it作形式主语，非谓语动词不定式作真正主语)

【高分句型2】Last but not least, you’d better not stay up too late every day, which will do harm to your health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

10．Dear Paul,

Nice to have received your letter. I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about the difficulties you have had in learning Chinese all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise orally in your spare time, which will be good for enhancing your language sense.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Paul回信，帮他解决因为学习中文太难而产生的困惑。

【详解】1.词汇积累

为了：so as to →in order to

有压力的：be stressed out → be stressful

此外：in addition →besides

空闲时间：spare time→ free time

2.句式拓展

句型转换

原句：I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.

拓展句：I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so that you can get help from them.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.（运用了宾语从句）