吉林高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信

推荐信

1．假设你是李华，Brown是你的笔友，他计划寒假期间来青岛旅游。请你写一封邮件给他，内容包括：

1.表示欢迎；

2.推荐景点及出行方式；

3.你的祝愿。

注意:

1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Brown,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua.

2．假定你是李华。你校新来的外教 Mr. Smith 打算周末去参观博物馆，想找一名向导陪同。得知此事后，你写信向他推荐自己，内容包括：

1. 写信目的;

2. 推荐理由;

3. 表达期待。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Smith,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。

要点：

1.介绍你所推荐的老师；

2.推荐该老师的原因；

3.祝愿她拜师成功。

注意：

1.词数100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：民族舞folk dance；推荐recommend

Dear Emily,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假如你是高二学生李华，你的美国朋友 Jenny 在给你写的邮件中提到她对中国文化感兴趣，因此你推荐她观看《中国诗词大会》（The Chinese Poetry Competition)这档电视节目。请你给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍该节目的播出时间和电视频道（每周五晚8:00，CCTV-1) ；

2. 简单介绍中国诗词；

3. 说明推荐的理由。

参考词汇：推荐recommend 电视节目 TV program 播出broadcast

注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jenny,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假设你是来自晨光中学的李华，报纸上的一则招聘小学生英语夏令营志愿者的广告引起了你的兴趣，请你结合个人条件及优势，写一封英文自荐信。主要内容如下：

①表示对该夏令营很感兴趣；

②介绍你的优势（年龄，性格，语言及类似的经历）；

③参加夏令营的目的（至少写出两点）。

注意：1. 词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua from ChenGuang Middle School.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Emily 来信说她非常喜欢中国民族舞，并打算今年暑假来中国学习民族舞，她想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她回一封电子邮件：

1.介绍你推荐的老师；

2.推荐该老师的原因；

3.祝她拜师成功。

注意：1.词数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

7．假设你是新华中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内容要点如下：

1. 个人信息；

2. 你的优势。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：丝绸之路：the Silk Road  驴友：tour pal

Dear David,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假设你叫李华，你和几位英语爱好者在互联网上建了一个叫 easyenglish 的网站。请用英语写一篇推荐信，向你校学生介绍这个网站。要点如下；

1．创立网站的目的；

2．网站内容及功能(英语材料，聊天，展示交流等)；

3．感谢关注，号召使用。

注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。

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9．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mary 将参加她所在社区举办的中文歌曲大赛，发来邮件请你推荐一首参赛歌曲。请你用英语给她回一封邮件，要点包括：1 歌曲名称及简介；(以邓丽君的歌曲：月亮代表我的心 the Moon Represents My Heart 为例展开书写) 2 推荐原因。

注意：1 词数 100 左右；

2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是李华，你校外籍教师 Peter 计划在暑假期间回国，他想送给母亲几件可以代表中 国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括： 1．推荐礼物：旗袍和中国结；2．推荐原因；3．表达祝福。

注意：1.词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：代表 represent; 旗袍 cheongsam; 中国结 Chinese knot

Dear Peter,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Brown,

I am very glad to know that you will visit Qingdao during the winter vacation.

Qingdao is a unique coastal resort city with pleasant climate and beautiful scenery of the mountain and sea. There are many historical and cultural scenic attractions, such as Laoshan Scenic Area, May Fourth Square and Zhanqiao Pier.You can fly to Jiaodong International Airport first and then take the subway or a taxi to your destinations. I believe Qingdao will make your trip worthwhile and enjoyable.

I hope you will have a good time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Brown写邮件，欢迎他来青岛旅游，为他推荐景点及出行方式，并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→pleased

景点：scenic attractions→scenic spots

令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant

玩得开心：have a good time→have fun

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You can fly to Jiaodong International Airport first and then take the subway or a taxi to your destinations.

拓展句：You can fly to Jiaodong International Airport first, after which you can take the subway or a taxi to your destinations.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to know that you will visit Qingdao during the winter vacation.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

【高分句型2】I believe Qingdao will make your trip worthwhile and enjoyable.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）

2．Dear Smith,

I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Union of our school. Having learned you are looking for a guide for your visit to our local museum this weekend, I am writing to recommend myself.

With a good command of English and outgoing personality, I think I will be a good guide for you. Besides, I have gained some relevant experience while working as a volunteer in the museum. Additionally, as a history lover, my insight into the local history and culture is bound to make your visit enjoyable and unforgettable.

Hopefully, you will consider my recommendation and have a good weekend!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校新来的外教 Mr. Smith写信，推荐自己做向导陪伴他周末去参观博物馆，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 推荐理由；3. 表达期待。

【详解】1.词汇积累

性格：personality→character

有关的：relevant→related

另外：additionally→besides/furthermore/moreover/in addition

愉快的：enjoyable→entertaining

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Additionally, as a history lover, my insight into the local history and culture is bound to make your visit enjoyable and unforgettable.

拓展句：Additionally, because I am a history lover, my insight into the local history and culture is bound to make your visit enjoyable and unforgettable.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Having learned you are looking for a guide for your visit to our local museum this weekend, I am writing to recommend myself. （运用了现在分词的完成式having learned作状语，learned后面至逗号之前为that引导的宾语从句，that省略掉了。）

[高分句型2] Besides, I have gained some relevant experience while working as a volunteer in the museum. （运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略。）

3．Dear Emily,

Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China.

I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.

Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.

I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen’s student.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师，请你根据题目要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：love→be fond of

极好的：excellent→superb

热情的：enthusiastic→passionate

此外：Besides =In addition to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.

拓展句：I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher to you, who is Miss Chen,.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. (运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)

4．Dear Jenny,

I’m more than glad to receive you E-mail where you said you were interested in Chinese culture. I’d like to recommend a popular TV program called the Chinese Poetry Competition to you. Here are the details about it, and I hope you like it.

It is a TV program broadcast on CCTV-1 at 8:00 every Friday night. As we all know, Chinese poetry has a long history. Most poems rhyme at the end of the lines, which makes poems really beautiful. I believe the program will help you better understand Chinese culture.

If you want to know more about it, please let me know. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇是一篇书信写作，是一篇推荐信。要求考试给美国朋友Jenny介绍并推荐《中国诗词大会》。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad → delighted

美丽的：beautiful → gorgeous

理解：understand → have a knowledge of

期待：look forward to → expect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As we all know, Chinese poetry has a long history.

拓展句：As we all know, Chinese poetry, which dates back to Qin Dynasty, has a long history.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

I’m more than glad to receive you E-mail where you said you were interested in Chinese culture. (限制性定语从句关系副词where的使用)

【高分句型2】

I’d like to recommend a popular TV program called the Chinese Poetry Competition to you. (过去分词形式作定语)

5．Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua from ChenGuang Middle School. Reading your advertisement in the newspaper, I am quite interested in it. Therefore, I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

As a boy of 17, I am outgoing and easy to get along with. In addition, I am fond of English and good at spoken English. Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I took part in similar camps twice when I was in primary school. So I’m sure I can do the job well if you give me the chance to get the position.

I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another, I can improve my English as well as make more friends.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合个人条件及优势写一封自荐信，应聘夏令营志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

因此：therefore → thus

毫不犹豫：without hesitation → without a second thought

机会：chance → opportunity

喜爱：take care of → look after

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

拓展句：That is the reason why I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I took part in similar camps twice when I was in primary school. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] So I’m sure I can do the job well if you give me the chance to get the position. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

6．Dear Emily,

Knowing that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China, I'm happy to recommend an excellent teacher Miss Chen to you. Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.

I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen's student.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生英国朋友 Emily写一封回信，帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。

【详解】1.    词汇积累

很高兴：be glad to →be happy to

优秀的：nice →excellent

很棒：good →wonderful

除此而外：Moreover = Besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school.

拓展句：Miss Chen is a teacher who dances best in our school.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2] She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me.这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。

7．Dear David,

Learning that you are scouting a tour pal, I am sure to be the right one for you.

I’m Li Hua, an easygoing student with a sense of humor. Coincidentally, I am always longing to travel along the Silk Road, which carries rich traditional culture and bears witness to history. Actually, I have done so much research into the route that I will be a wonderful tour guide to make our exploration efficient. Don’t worry about communication for I am a good English speaker. Above all, I have a good command of emergency survival skills. Trust me, you will enjoy my company.

Hopefully, we’ll make a team sooner. I can’t wait to go on this adventure with you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚籍中学生David写一封自荐信，愿意做他的驴友兼向导。

【详解】1.词汇积累

寻找：scout→look for

渴望做某事：long to do sth.→ eager to do sth.

承载，反映：carry→reflect

熟练掌握：have a good command of →master

2.句式提升

原句：Don’t worry about communication for I am a good English speaker.

拓展句：There is no point in worrying about communication for I am a good English speaker.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

 I am always longing to travel along the Silk Road, which carries rich traditional culture and bears witness to history.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[定语从句2]

Actually, I have done so much research into the route that I will be a wonderful tour guide to make our exploration efficient.（运用了so...that...的结果状语从句）

8．Dear fellow students,

My name is Li Hua and I’d like to introduce you a new website — easyenglish.com. It is common that most of us place great importance on learning English. We have set up this website aiming to develop your interest in learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for you.

A wide variety of English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your spoken and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by being corrected by others.

Thank you so much for your concern. Hopefully our website can be of benefit to you in your English study. Welcome to visit it frequently and your advice for any improvement will be greatly appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇推荐信，向你校学生介绍一个叫 easyenglish 的网站。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：build up→set up

培养：cultivate→develop

选择：option→choice

此外：besides→furthermore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：We have set up this website aiming to develop your interest in learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for you.

拓展句：We have set up this website whose aim is to develop your interest in learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is common that most of us place great importance on learning English. (运用了it作形式主语)

[高分句型2] Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)

9．I’m delighted to know that you are going to sign up for the Chinese Songs Competition held in your community. I’m glad to recommend a song to you.

A classic Chinese song called The Moon Represents My Heart is popular among many listeners. It was made famous by a singer named Teresa Teng (Deng Lijun), who was known as the queen of pop music in Asia. The song, using the moon as a symbol of love and concern, is really beautiful. That’s why it has been loved by people of all ages. Moreover, the words are simple, so you will have no difficulty learning it.

I hope you will like the song.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友 Mary回一封邮件，给她推荐一首参赛歌曲。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,一般过去时，一般将来时。

结构：三段式

第一段写来信目的。第二段详细介绍歌曲，说明推荐原因。第三段希望对方喜欢。

要求：

1 歌曲名称及简介；(以邓丽君的歌曲：月亮代表我的心 the Moon Represents My Heart 为例展开书写)

2 推荐原因。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to know, sign up for, the Chinese Songs Competition, recommend a song to you, be popular among, be known as, the queen of pop music, use… as…, have no difficulty doing sth.

第三步：连词成句

I’m delighted to know that you are going to sign up for the Chinese Songs Competition held in your community.

I’m glad to recommend a song to you.

Teresa Teng (Deng Lijun) was known as the queen of pop music in Asia.

The song, uses the moon as a symbol of love and concern.

The words are simple, so you will have no difficulty learning it.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系： Moreover

3.表修饰限定关系：who引导定语从句，using现在分词作定语

4.表因果关系： so. why引导表语从句

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，确保句式丰富多样，行文流畅。

【点睛】[高分句型1] It was made famous by a singer named Teresa Teng (Deng Lijun), who was known as the queen of pop music in Asia.

who 引导非限定性定语从句，先行词是Teresa Teng (Deng Lijun)，对邓丽君的身份进行了补充说明。

[高分句型2] The song, using the moon as a symbol of love and concern, is really beautiful.

using the moon as a symbol of love and concern是现在分词短语作后置定语，修饰The song，用分词作定语，在形式上避免与上文的定语从句重复，从而丰富了文章的句式。

10．Dear Peter,

I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing to give you some advice.

Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts. Cheongsam, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. What's more, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.

Wish you a good vacation and give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外籍教师 Peter推荐代表中国文化的礼物。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法   

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表明写信目的

 2.介绍推荐情况

 1）推荐礼物。（gifts）

 2）推荐原因。（reasons）

 3) 表达祝福。（wishes）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be glad to; represent; Chinese culture; cultural experience; following; traditional; be sure; very much; a good choice; Wish; give…to

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture.

2. Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts.

3. Cheongsam, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women,

4. I am sure your mother will like it very much.

5. it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot.

6. Wish you a good vacation and give my best wishes to your family.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be glad to; be sure; very much等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。