湖北高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信
1．假设你是晨光中学的李华，为配合学校的“社交媒体脱瘾”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展 了以“Social Media Detox（脱瘾）”为题的征文活动。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
1.脱瘾活动的目的；
2.你的建议和措施；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Social Media Detox
January 22, 2021
By Li Hua
With the development of science and technology, there appear an increasing number of social media apps.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假定你是育才中学高三学生李华，你校学生会决定举办主题为“节约粮食，从我做起”的英文演讲比赛. 请你写一篇参赛演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 校园中浪费粮食的现象.
2. 应对措施或建议.
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear friends,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假定你是李华，在美国某高中做交换生，对你所租借的小区物业管理有些不满，请你用英语给物业经理写一封意见信，内容包括：
1. 车辆停放较乱；2. 垃圾没有及时清理； 3.你的建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已经给出；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m LiHua, a resident of the neighborhood.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是李华，是某时尚杂志的编辑。读者Lucy向你咨询如何选择适合自己的服饰。作为专业人士，请你给Lucy写邮件提供建议，内容包括：
1. 服装款式的选择；
2. 配饰或颜色的搭配；
3. 个人风格的体现。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：accessories 配饰
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是高三学生李华。你感到新作文题型——读后续写（extended writing）很具挑战性。请给外教 Mike 写一封信，咨询他的建议。内容包括：
1. 写作原因；
2. 题型简介；
3. 你的困难。
Dear Mike,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假设你是李华， 你的朋友张豪在英语学习上遇到了困难，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。
1. 要有自信心；
2. 多记一些惯用词组 (set phrases) 和句型结构 (sentence structures)，并练习造句；
3. 要大量阅读，多背诵(recite)一些好的短文；
4. 写日记是提高写作的好方法.
注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Zhanghao,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假设你是李华，Leo是你的初中好友，他现在就读于市区的一所重点高中。他在给你的来信中提到他刚刚进入高中学习，面对学业难度增加，感到学习上有压力。请你回一封信给他，并提一些合理的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Leo,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your good news!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你发邮件说，他最近上课经常走神，无法专心听讲，为此很苦恼。请你给他回一封邮件安慰他，并给他提建议。内容包括:
1. 得知Jack很烦恼。  2.安慰Jack。   3.你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you .
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Lucy打算明年暑假来中国旅游。她想先学习一些中文，特写信向你咨询。请你写封邮件告诉她你的建议。
要点包括：
1、多听简单的对话；
2、多用中文交流；
3、认识一些常见汉字。
注意：1、词数80词左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．你的新西兰笔友Tom所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Tom来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路——“泰山之旅”；
2. 你的理由：
1）一次难忘的登山体验；
2）游历史名山，了解中国文化；
3）山顶观看日出；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1. 80词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 提示词：难忘的unforgettable；历史名山a historical mountain      
Dear Tom,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua










1．Possible version
Social Media Detox
January 22, 2021
By Li Hua
With the development of science and technology, there appear an increasing number of social media apps. Many teenagers are addicted to the colorful apps, leading to a bad effect on our life. The activity social media detox aims to raise the awareness of stepping away from social media, and also improve the ability to control ourselves.
Here are some of my suggestions to do the detox. Firstly, you can give your phones to your parents to avoid giving in. In addition, it is a good idea to pick up some hobbies, which helps to spend less time online. What’s more, you can visit your friends and have a proper conversation, realizing the value of real contact.
I really consider the activity makes agreat difference to us teenagers. By staying away from the various social media apps, we can not only concentrate on studies, but also communicate more with people in reality.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生投稿参加学校英语社团微信公众号开展的以“Social Media Detox (脱瘾)”为题的征文活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
（1）脱瘾活动的目的。
（2）你的建议和措施。
（3）你的感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
with the development of；science and technology；be addicted to；lead to；a bad effect on；aim to；step away from；give in；pick up；communicate with；make a great difference；
第三步：连词成句
1. With the development of science and technology, there appear an increasing number of social media apps.
2. Many teenagers are addicted to the colorful apps, leading to a bad effect on our life.
3. The activity social media detox aims to raise the awareness of stepping away from social media, and also improve the ability to control ourselves.
4. Here are some of my suggestions to do the detox.
5.Firstly, you can give your phones to your parents to avoid giving in.
6. In addition, it is a good idea to pick up some hobbies, which helps to spend less time online.
7. What’s more, you can visit your friends and have a proper conversation, realizing the value of real contact.
8. I really consider the activity makes a great difference to us teenagers.
9. By staying away from the various social media apps, we can not only concentrate on studies, but also communicate more with people in reality.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly；
2.表并列补充关系：What's more；In addition；not only…but also…
2.表因果关系：Because；So；Thus；Therefore；As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Many teenagers are addicted to the colorful apps, leading to a bad effect on our life.（使用了现在分词作结果状语）
[高分句型2] In addition, it is a good idea to pick up some hobbies, which helps to spend less time online.（使用了it作形式主语和由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] By staying away from the various social media apps, we can not only concentrate on studies, but also communicate more with people in reality.（使用了not only…but also…连接的并列成分）
2．Dear friends,
I'm here to make some proposals, aiming to call on all of us not to waste food in our campus. Students can be seen waste food in the dining hall. They may order too much for their meals or they may feel the food not delicious or they may think it is a shame to take the food away. They may forget the line of the famous poem, "Every grain on the plate comes from hard work" or actually don't get its real meaning. So what should we do to stop this? First, we should order a proper amount of food and not be too picky about food. Besides, if we cannot eat all the food we order, take-it-away is good choice. Saving food is everybody's responsibility. Let's start right now!
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“节约粮食，从我做起”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍校园中浪费粮食的现象；
2. 提出应对措施或建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
make some proposals;waste food in our campus; order too much for their meals; feel the food not delicious; it is a shame to take the food away; order a proper amount of food; not be too picky about food; take-it-away
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1.I'm here to make some proposals, aiming to call on all of us not to waste food in our campus.
2. Students can be seen waste food in the dining hall.
3. They may order too much for their meals or they may feel the food not delicious or they may think it is a shame to take the food away.
4.So what should we do to stop this?
5.First, we should order a proper amount of food and not be too picky about food.
6.Besides, if we cannot eat all the food we order, take-it-away is good choice.
7.Saving food is everybody's responsibility.
8.Let's start right now!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I'm here to make some proposals, aiming to call on all of us not to waste food in our campus. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Besides, if we cannot eat all the food we order, take-it-away is good choice.（if条件状语从句）
[高分句型3]Saving food is everybody's responsibility. （动名词做主语）
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems.
Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars. As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us. Secondly, the dustbins are not cleared in time. As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment. Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable that you make.
I hope you can help us have a nice living environment. Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给物业经理写一封意见信，表达你对所租借的小区物业管理的不满，并提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 车辆停放较乱；
2. 垃圾没有及时清理；
3. 你的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
raise some problems; limited parking space; in the way; be not cleared in time; give off; pollute our environment; make standard parking space; follow the rules; have a nice living environment
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems.
2. Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars.
3. Secondly, the dustbins are not cleared in time.
4. Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules.
5. I hope you can help us have a nice living environment.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, and, not only…but (also)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考）
4.表因果关系：As a result, Thus
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems.（and连接的并列句）
[高分句型2] As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment.（as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it. Fine clothes make a man. As an experienced editor, I am more than happy to help you.  
Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy. First of all, buying classics is a wise decision. Compared with fads, classics can stay popular for a long time. Secondly, colors and accessories can change the way you look. The same style can have different effects in different colors. At last, the clothes you choose often reflect your inner feelings and preferences. Your willingness to select your clothes carefully and keep them in good condition indicates that you feel good about yourself and take pride in your appearance.
I really hope you can become more beautiful and confident with fine clothes. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Lucy写封邮件，在如何选择适合自己服饰方面给出一些专业的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 服装款式的选择；
2. 配饰或颜色的搭配；
3. 个人风格的体现。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have trouble in doing sth.; more than; compare with; stay popular; feel good about oneself; take pride in; faced with
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it.
2.Fine clothes make a man.
3.As an experienced editor, I am more than happy to help you.  
4.Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy.
5.First of all, buying classics is a wise decision.
6.Compared with fads, classics can stay popular for a long time.
7.Secondly, colors and accessories can change the way you look.
8.The same style can have different effects in different colors.
9.At last, the clothes you choose often reflect your inner feelings and preferences.
10.Your willingness to select your clothes carefully and keep them in good condition indicates that you feel good about yourself and take pride in your appearance.
11.I really hope you can become more beautiful and confident with fine clothes.
12.If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, At last
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it.句中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy.句中使用了过去分词作状语。
[高分句型3] If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. 句中if引导条件状语从句。
5．Dear Mike,
I’d like your advice on my English study.
Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mike写一封信，咨询他写读后续写类型作文的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写作原因；
2. 题型简介；
3. 你的困难。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
require sb to do sth;  find it adj to do sth;  have trouble doing;  due to;  appreciate;  look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’d like your advice on my English study.
2. Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given.
3. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities.
4. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.
5. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
6. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
7.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given.（过去分词作后置定语）
[高分句型2] While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.（while让步状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Dear Zhanghao,
Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English. I can understand your feeling now, but don’t worry too much and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
First of all, don’t be disappointed and just believe in yourself. Secondly, you’d better memorize some set phrases and sentence structures and practice making sentences with them. Thirdly, spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills. Last but not least, keeping a diary in English is a good way to improve your English writing. You can have a try without delay.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and I believe with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help. Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给张豪写一封回信，解决他在英语学习上遇到的困难。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 说明写信目的
2. 提出建议
①要有自信心
②多记一些惯用词组 (set phrases) 和句型结构 (sentence structures)，并练习造句
③要大量阅读，多背诵(recite)一些好的短文
④写日记是提高写作的好方法
3.表达祝福
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have difficulty in;  believe in;  had better do sth;  spend time in doing;  contribute to doing;  help to do;  keep a diary;  a way to do;  have a try;  manage to do
第三步：连词成句
1. Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.
2. I can understand your feeling now, but don’t worry too much and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
3. Don’t be disappointed and just believe in yourself
4. You’d better memorize some set phrases and sentence structures and practice making sentences with them.
5.Spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills.
6. Keeping a diary in English is a good way to improve your English writing
7. I hope you will find these suggestions useful and I believe with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
8. Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly,Thirdly, Last but not least
2.表转折对比关系：but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having received your letter, I feel sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] spend more time in reading and reciting good passages, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.（if引导条件状语从句）
7．Dear Leo,
I’m sorry to know that you feel stressed because the subjects in senior high school become difficult and challenging.
I hope you will soon cheer up．Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress．First，try to build up your confidence．Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens．Second，you should find your own strengths and weaknesses in your study，and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress．Last but not least，you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourself．I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
I am looking forward to your good news!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给初中好友Leo提一些高中学习中减压的合理的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 同情对方的处境；2. 希望提供有效的学习建议;3. 期待对方的好消息。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
cheer up;try to; build up ;prepare for ； play an important role in ； give up ；lose heart ；no matter what ；find your own strengths and weaknesses ； seek help from ；in the face of ；Last but not least；you ought to do ； so as to； keep fit ；as well as； relax yourself；get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
第三步：连词成句
1.I hope you will soon cheer up．
2.Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress．
3.First，try to build up your confidence．
4.Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．
5.So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens．
6.Second，you should find your own strengths and weaknesses in your study，and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress．
7.Last but not least，you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourself．
8.I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second，Last but not least
2.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m sorry to know that you feel stressed because the subjects in senior high school become difficult and challenging.运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的状语从句。
[高分句型2]Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it．运用了动名词作主语。
8．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you .You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class. I understand quite well what you are going through. Don’t worry too much. There is always a way out.
Firstly, you are highly advised to take notes while listening. Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying. Secondly, it is wise to preview before class. Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
Hopefully, you may find my advice helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给最近上课经常走神、无法专心听讲，为此很苦恼的美国笔友Jack回一封邮件安慰他，并给他提建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 得知Jack很烦恼。（know Jack is upset）
      2. 安慰Jack。（comfort Jack）
      3. 你的建议。（Your suggestions）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be unable to; go through ; be highly advised to ; focus…on ; contribute to ; find…helpful
第三步：连词成句
1. You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class.
2. I understand quite well what you are going through.
3. Don’t worry too much.
4. There is always a way out.
5. Firstly, you are highly advised to take notes while listening.
6. Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying.
7. Secondly, it is wise to preview before class.
8. Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
9. Hopefully, you may find my advice helpful.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly…
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
You wrote that you feel anxious because you are unable to concentrate in class.
你在信中说你感到焦虑是因为你在课堂上无法集中注意力。运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句。
[高分句型2]
Only in this way can you focus your attention on what the teacher is saying.
只有这样你才能把注意力集中在老师说的话上。运用了倒装句和what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型3]
Being well prepared will increase your confidence and interest, which contributes to improving your concentration.
做好充分的准备会增加你的信心和兴趣，这有助于提高你的注意力。 运用了动名词作主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．Dear Lucy,
Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China next summer holiday. Here are some suggestions about how to learn Chinese well.
First of all, it is a useful way to listen to some simple Chinese conversations daily, which will help you a lot during your trip. Besides, you’d better make some Chinese friends around you and talk to them as often as possible in Chinese. I’m sure you can speak Chinese fluently before you come to China if you insist on doing as I tell you. Finally, I will send you a Chinese-English book which contains some common Chinese characters that you should master. Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国网友Lucy打算明年暑假来中国旅游。她想先学习一些中文，特写信咨询。要求考生写封邮件给她回复一些学好中文的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：建议内容包括以下三点
1、多听简单的对话；
2、多用中文交流；
3、认识一些常见汉字。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
glad to hear; take a trip; summer holiday; suggestions; first of all; useful; conversations; daily; besides; as often as possible; in Chinese; fluently; insist on doing ; finally; contains; common; Chinese characters; master.
第三步：连词成句
1. Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China next summer holiday.
2. Here are some suggestions about how to learn Chinese well.
3. First of all, it is a useful way to listen to some simple Chinese conversations daily, which will help you a lot during your trip.
4. Besides, you’d better make some Chinese friends around you and talk to them as often as possible in Chinese.
5. I’m sure you can speak Chinese fluently before you come to China if you insist on doing as I tell you.
6. Finally, I will send you a Chinese-English book which contains some common Chinese characters that you should master.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all; Besides; Finally.
2.表并列补充关系：Additionally, moreover(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Some…,while others…, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China next summer holiday. (由that引导宾语从句。)
[高分句型2] First of all, it is a useful way to listen to some simple Chinese conversations daily, which will help you a lot during your trip.(由which引导非限定性定语从句。)
[高分句型3] I’m sure you can speak Chinese fluently before you come to China if you insist on doing as I tell you.(由before引导时间状语从句；if引导条件状语从句；as引导定语从句。)
10．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you asked me for advice on how to make a choice between trips to the Changjiang River and Mount Tai. Here is my advice.
Of the two trips, both are well worth visiting. Personally, I prefer the tour to Mount Tai. As a lover of mountain climbing, climbing Mount Tai will give you an unforgettable experience. The historical mountain will help you learn more about Chinese culture. What’s more, you can also admire the sunrise at the top of the mountain. So I think the trip to Mount Tai will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Tom写封回信，给他来中国旅行线路方面的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 介绍建议的线路并说明建议的理由；
3. 希望对方玩得愉快。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be glad to; ask sb. for advice on; be worth doing; at the top of; the trip to; have a good time
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to receive your letter.
2. In your letter, you asked me for advice on how to make a choice between trips to the Changjiang River and Mount Tai.
3. Of the two trips, both are well worth visiting.
4. What’s more, you can also admire the sunrise at the top of the mountain.
5. So I think the trip to Mount Tai will be a better choice.
6.We really hope you can put forward some effective learning methods for us.
7. Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：In your letter, you asked me for advice on how to make a choice between trips to the Changjiang River and Mount Tai. 这句话运用了“疑问词+动词不定式”结构做介词on的宾语。
[高分句型2]：As a lover of mountain climbing, climbing Mount Tai will give you an unforgettable experience.这句话运用了动名词短语作做主语。
[高分句型3]：So I think the trip to Mount Tai will be a better choice.这句话运用宾语从句。