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目录
TOC \ "1-2" \h \u \l _Tc3096 Unit 5 Pwer f Ideas PAGEREF _Tc3096 \h 2
\l _Tc5158 （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） PAGEREF _Tc5158 \h 2
\l _Tc25626 （二）高分词汇/词组积累 PAGEREF _Tc25626 \h 3
\l _Tc29475 （三）参考范文 PAGEREF _Tc29475 \h 4
\l _Tc21340 （四）写作模板（万能模板） PAGEREF _Tc21340 \h 4
\l _Tc1184 Unit 6 Beynd Earth（同框架，目录省） PAGEREF _Tc1184 \h 5
\l _Tc19770 Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm PAGEREF _Tc19770 \h 8
\l _Tc24364 （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） PAGEREF _Tc24364 \h 8
\l _Tc30984 （二）高分词汇/词组积累 PAGEREF _Tc30984 \h 9
\l _Tc27578 （三）参考范文 PAGEREF _Tc27578 \h 10
\l _Tc3909 （四）写作模板（万能模板） PAGEREF _Tc3909 \h 11
\l _Tc15469 Unit 8 Mre than a Game PAGEREF _Tc15469 \h 11
\l _Tc28809 （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） PAGEREF _Tc28809 \h 11
\l _Tc25577 （二）高分词汇/词组积累 PAGEREF _Tc25577 \h 12
\l _Tc5778 （三）参考范文 PAGEREF _Tc5778 \h 13
\l _Tc29481 （四）写作模板（万能模板） PAGEREF _Tc29481 \h 14
Unit 5 Pwer f Ideas
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作话题是An Inventin / My Creative Inventin（介绍一项发明），属于说明文。整体逻辑是：先介绍发明是什么 → 再说明制作过程/原理 → 最后评价它的影响和意义。
第一段（开头，1-2句）：介绍发明——名称+用途
开门见山，告诉读者你的发明叫什么、是干什么用的。这是全文的'入口'，要让读者一眼就知道你在说什么。
核心句式：
① My inventin is called ...（我的发明叫……）
② It is made f / frm ...（它由……制成）
③ It is designed fr / t ...（它被设计用于……）
第二段（中间1，3-5句）：制作过程/工作原理
这一段是全文的核心，用被动语态按步骤描述发明是怎么制作或工作的。一定要用步骤连接词，让读者清楚地跟着你的思路走。
核心句式：
① In the first step, ... is/are ...（第一步，……被……）
② Then, ... is/are ...（然后，……被……）
③ Next, ... is/are ...（接下来，……被……）
④ Finally, ... is/are ...（最后，……被……）
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：影响与意义
说清楚这项发明给人们的生活带来了什么变化。可以从'它让什么变得更容易''它对什么有巨大影响'等角度写。
核心句式：
① It has a big effect n ...（它对……有巨大影响）
② It makes ... easier and faster.（它使……变得更方便快捷。）
③ It can benefit many peple.（它可以造福很多人。）
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结评价
简短总结这项发明的价值，可以展望未来或表达希望。
核心句式：
① I hpe it will help peple ...（我希望它能帮助人们……）
② It is inexpensive, easy t perate, and benefits sciety.（它便宜、易操作，且造福社会。）
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
基础词：gd → 高分替换：beneficial（有益的）
例：This inventin is beneficial t sciety. 这个发明有益于社会。
基础词：useful → 高分替换：practical / pwerful（实用的 / 强大的）
例：It is a practical tl fr students. 这是一款适合学生使用的实用工具。
基础词：cheap → 高分替换：inexpensive（不贵的）
例：The inventin is inexpensive and easy t use. 这个发明成本低廉，使用简便。
基础词：imprtant → 高分替换：significant / essential（重要的 / 必不可少的）
例：It has a significant effect n ur lives. 它对我们的生活有着重大影响。
基础词：make → 高分替换：prduce / create（生产 / 创造）
例：The machine can prduce different kinds f fd. 这台机器可以生产各类不同的食品。
基础词：new → 高分替换：creative / innvative（有创意的 / 创新的）
例：This is a creative slutin t the prblem. 这是一个富有创意的问题解决方案。
高分词组：
① be designed fr / t d sth. 被设计用于……② be made f / frm 由……制成
③ be used fr (ding) sth. 被用于……④ have a big effect n 对……产生巨大影响
⑤ lead t / result in 导致⑥ benefit peple and sciety 造福人民和社会
⑦ t sb's surprise 令某人惊讶的是⑧ a rapid increase in ……方面的快速增长
（三）参考范文
My Creative Inventin: The Smart Water Bttle
My inventin is called the Smart Water Bttle. It is made f recycled plastic and a small electrnic sensr. It is designed fr students and ffice wrkers wh ften frget t drink enugh water.
The Smart Water Bttle is very easy t perate. First, a sensr is cnnected t the inside f the bttle. Then, the sensr is prgrammed t check the water level every hur. When the water level is lw, a gentle sund is made t remind the user. Next, the data is sent t a phne app thrugh Bluetth. Finally, the app shws hw much water the user has drunk each day. The whle bttle is pwered by a small slar panel n the tp.
This inventin will have a big effect n peple's health. It is inexpensive and easy t perate, s it can benefit many peple. I hpe it will help peple stay healthy and frm gd drinking habits.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Creative Inventin: ________（发明名称）
My inventin is called ________（发明名称）. It is made f/frm ________（材料）. It is designed fr ________（目标用户） wh ________（用户需求）.
The ________（发明名称） is easy t perate. First, ________（第一步，用被动语态）. Then, ________（第二步，用被动语态）. Next, ________（第三步，用被动语态）. Finally, ________（第四步，用被动语态）.
This inventin will have a big effect n ________（影响的领域）. It is ________（评价：inexpensive / easy t perate / creative）, s it can benefit ________（受益人群）. I hpe it will help peple ________（展望未来）.
Unit 6 Beynd Earth
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元话题：My Space Dream
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入
点明你的太空梦想是什么，用一般将来时的被动语态引出主题。
核心句式：
• My space dream is that ne day a space statin will be built n the mn.
我的太空梦想是有朝一日能在月球上建造一座空间站。
• I have a dream that ne day humans will be sent t explre Mars.
我梦想有一天人类将被送往火星开展探索。
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：分析好处/意义
分2-3个方面说明太空梦想的意义（科研、资源、旅游等），每点用被动语态。
核心句式：
• First, it will be a gd place fr scientists t cperate and d space research tgether.
首先，这里将成为各国科学家开展合作、共同进行太空研究的理想场所。
• Secnd, mre resurces will be fund. 其次，将会发现更多资源。
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：展望与挑战
承认目前的困难，但表达信心和希望。可用转折句和高级结构。
核心句式：
• While this is nt pssible right nw, with natins and scientists cperating with ne anther, there is hpe that the necessary technlgy will be develped.虽然目前这一点尚无法实现，但随着各国与科学家开展相互合作，我们有望研发出所需的相关技术。
• It is hped that mn bases will be built in the near future.
人们希望在不久的将来建成月球基地。
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华
呼应开头，表达对梦想实现的期盼。
核心句式：
• I believe my space dream will cme true, and I hpe it will happen during my lifetime.
我相信我的航天梦想终会实现，也希望这份愿景能在我有生之年成真。
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
build → cnstruct（建造）
例：A research statin will be cnstructed n the mn.一座科研站将在月球上建成。
find → discver（发现）
例：New resurces will be discvered in uter space.人类将在外太空发现新资源。
make → develp（研发）
例：New technlgy will be develped fr space travel.将研发用于太空航行的新技术。
use → utilise（利用）
例：Slar energy will be utilised t pwer the statin.太阳能将被用于为该站点供电。
gd → beneficial（有益的）
例：Space explratin will be beneficial t human beings.太空探索将造福人类。
imprtant → significant（重要的）
例：It is significant that internatinal cperatin will be strengthened.
加强国际合作具有重大意义。
高分词组：
① will be develped and tested 将被开发和测试
② will be sent t space 将被送入太空
③ It is hped that... 人们希望……
④ In time, it seems likely that... 迟早，似乎可能……
⑤ with... cperating with ne anther 随着……相互合作
⑥ during my lifetime 在我有生之年
⑦ imprve ur knwledge f 增进我们对……的了解
⑧ run ut f resurces 耗尽资源
（三）参考范文
My Space Dream
My space dream is that ne day a space statin will be built n the mn. I believe there are quite a few benefits.
First, it will be a gd place fr scientists t cperate and d space research tgether. New technlgy will be develped and tested there. Then, mre resurces will be fund. Scientists believe that there may be special energy n the mn that will be useful fr the earth. Finally, peple may live and wrk n the mn statin. Turists will als be able t visit and enjy the beautiful view f the earth frm space.
Humans have achieved many things that were nce nly dreams. While this is nt pssible right nw, with natins and scientists cperating with ne anther, there is hpe that the necessary technlgy will be develped.
I believe my space dream will cme true, and I hpe it will happen during my lifetime.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Space Dream
My space dream is that ne day ________（表明你的太空梦想）________. I believe there are quite a few benefits.
First, ________（好处1：科研/合作）________. New technlgy will be develped and tested there. Secnd, ________（好处2：资源/能源）________. Scientists believe that ________（具体发现或可能性）________. Finally, ________（好处3：居住/旅游）________. Turists will als be able t ________（相关活动）________.
Humans have achieved many things that were nce nly dreams. While this is nt pssible right nw, with ________（合作方）________ cperating with ne anther, there is hpe that ________（必要条件）________ will be develped.
I believe my space dream will cme true, and I hpe it will happen during my lifetime.
Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm
话题：My Music Stry
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入——音乐在你生活中的位置，引出你的音乐故事。
核心句式：
① Music has always been an imprtant part f my life. 音乐一直是我生活中不可或缺的一部分。
② I still remember the day when I first...我仍记得初次……的那天
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：契机与启蒙——你是如何接触音乐的，初期的困难和感受。
核心句式：
① My father bught me a guitar/pian fr my birthday.
爸爸给我买了一把吉他/一架钢琴当作我的生日礼物。
② At first, I fund it very difficult t... 起初，我发现这件事很难……
③ But I never gave up. 但我从未放弃。
第三段（中间2，3-4句）：突破与分享——坚持练习后的进步，与他人分享音乐的快乐。
核心句式：
① Gradually, I became gd at... 渐渐地，我变得擅长……
② I jined a schl band with friends wh... 我和朋友们加入了一支校园乐队，他们……
③ We perfrmed at... and received warm applause.我们在……进行了演出，收获了热烈的掌声。
第四段（结尾，2-3句）：情感升华——音乐对你的意义，总结全文。
核心句式：
① Music brings me happiness when I am sad. 悲伤时，音乐能带给我快乐。
② Music is nt just a hbby — it is part f wh I am.
音乐不仅仅是一种爱好——它早已融入了我的生命本质。
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
like → prefer / be fnd f（更喜欢）
— I prefer music that tuches my heart.我偏爱能触动心灵的音乐。
happy → delighted / verjyed（高兴的）
— I was delighted when I first heard the piece.初次听到这首乐曲时，我满心欢喜。
sad → heartbrken / mved（伤心的/感动的）
— The music made me feel mved.这段音乐令我心生触动。
imprtant → significant / valuable（重要的）
— Music plays a significant rle in my life.音乐在我的生活中占据着十分重要的地位。
gd → gifted / talented / utstanding（优秀的）
— She is a gifted musician wh creates beautiful meldies.
她是一名极具天赋的音乐人，创作出动听优美的旋律。
beautiful → mving / tuching / enchanting（美的）
— The meldy was s enchanting that I culdn’t stp listening.
这段旋律太过动人，我听得欲罢不能。
高分词组：
① make a big difference 产生重大影响② cmmunicate emtins 传达情感
③ put all yur sul int 倾注全部灵魂④ inspire imaginatin 激发想象力
⑤ find curage 找到勇气⑥ bring happiness 带来幸福
⑦ keep ging thrugh years f difficulty 在多年困难中坚持前行
（三）参考范文
My Music Stry
Music has always been an imprtant part f my life. I still remember the day when my father gave me a guitar fr my thirteenth birthday. It was the first musical instrument that I wned, and it changed my life.
At first, I fund it very difficult t play. My fingers hurt and the sund was terrible. But I never gave up. I practised every day after schl. Gradually, I culd play simple sngs. I fund that music which I culd sing alng t was the mst fun t play.
Sn, I jined a schl band with sme friends wh lved music as much as I did. We perfrmed at the schl festival and received warm applause. It was the first time that I shared music with thers, and it felt amazing.
Music has made a big difference in my life. It brings me happiness when I am sad, helps me relax when I am stressed, and gives me curage when I face difficulties. I believe that music which tuches the heart can cmmunicate emtins that wrds cannt express. Music is nt just a hbby — it is part f wh I am.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
Music has always been an imprtant part f my life. I still remember the day when ________（描述你与音乐的初次接触）. It was the first time that ________（音乐给你的初步印象或影响）, and it changed my life.
At first, I fund it very difficult t ________（描述初期困难）. But I never gave up. I ________（描述你的坚持和努力）. Gradually, I ________（描述进步）. I fund that ________（你对某种音乐的感悟）.
Sn, I ________（描述与他人分享音乐的经历）with sme friends wh ________（描述朋友特点）. We ________（描述共同的音乐活动）and ________（描述收获或感受）.
Music has made a big difference in my life. It brings me ________（音乐带来的积极影响1）when I am ________（对应情境1）, helps me ________（积极影响2）when I am ________（对应情境2）, and gives me ________（积极影响3）when I ________（对应情境3）. I believe that music which ________（总结音乐的力量）. Music is nt just a hbby — it is part f wh I am.
Unit 8 Mre than a Game
单元话题：My Favurite Athlete / An Athlete I Admire
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入——介绍你最钦佩的运动员是谁，点明他/她的身份和主要成就。
核心句式：
① The athlete I admire mst is..., a(n)... frm...
（我最钦佩的运动员是……，一位来自……的……）
② Of all the athletes, ... is the ne I lk up t the mst.（在所有运动员中，……是我最仰慕的。）
③ When it cmes t my favurite athlete, ... is always the first name that cmes t my mind.
（提到我最喜欢的运动员，……总是我第一个想到的名字。）
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：人物经历与挑战——讲述他/她面临的困难和挑战，突出其不屈不挠的精神。
核心句式：
① He/She had nly... befre..., and...（在……之前他/她仅仅……，而且……）
② During..., he/she nearly..., but he/she never gave up.
（在……期间，他/她差点……，但从未放弃。）
③ What amazed everybdy was that he/she...（让所有人惊讶的是他/她……）
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：精神品质与影响——分析他/她体现的精神品质，以及给你带来的影响。
核心句式：
① He/She is a perfect example f the Olympic spirit.（他/她是奥运精神的完美诠释。）
② He/She prved that neither winning nr lsing is everything.（他/她证明了输赢并非一切。）
③ His/Her stry taught me that...（他/她的故事教会我……）
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华——用一句话点明他/她对你的意义，升华主题。
核心句式：
① His/Her stry tuched my heart and taught me that the true meaning f sprts is nt abut the medal, but abut the curage t try.
（他/她的故事触动了我的心，教会我体育的真正意义不在于奖牌，而在于尝试的勇气。）
② He/She will always be my rle mdel, bth in sprts and in life.
（他/她将永远是我在体育和生活中的榜样。）
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换
高分词组
① never give up 永不放弃
② t the best f ne's ability 尽某人最大努力
③ set a recrd 创造纪录
④ watch in wnder 惊奇地观看
⑤ neither winning nr lsing is everything 输赢并非一切
⑥ an example f the Olympic spirit 奥运精神的典范
⑦ gain wrldwide attentin 获得全世界的关注
⑧ with pride 自豪地
⑨ cme-frm-behind victry 逆转胜利
⑩ dramatic mments 激动人心的时刻
（三）参考范文
An Athlete I Admire
The athlete I admire mst is Eric Mussambani, a swimmer frm Equatrial Guinea. He cmpeted in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
Eric had nly trained fr six mnths befre the Olympics, and his nly practice pl was a 13-metre htel pl. During the race, he nearly drwned in the secnd half, but he never gave up. He swam t the best f his ability and finished the race. Althugh he did nt win a medal, he gained wrldwide attentin. Everybdy watched in wnder as he struggled t the finish line.
I admire Eric because he is a perfect example f the Olympic spirit. He prved that neither winning nr lsing is everything — what matters mst is t d yur best and never give up. His stry tuched my heart and taught me that the true meaning f sprts is nt abut the medal, but abut the curage t try.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
The athlete I admire mst is ________（运动员姓名）, a(n) ________（运动项目）frm ________（国家/地区）. He/She cmpeted in ________（具体赛事）at ________（时间地点）.
________（运动员姓名）had nly ________（训练条件/时间）befre ________（重要赛事）, and ________（困难描述）. During ________（关键时刻）, he/she nearly ________（遇到的困难）, but he/she never gave up. He/She ________（具体行动）t the best f his/her ability and ________（最终结果）. Althugh he/she did nt ________（未实现的期望）, he/she gained ________（获得的东西）. Everybdy watched in wnder as he/she ________（令人惊叹的表现）.
I admire ________（运动员姓名）because he/she is a perfect example f ________（精神品质）. He/She prved that neither winning nr lsing is everything — what matters mst is ________（核心信念）. His/Her stry tuched my heart and taught me that the true meaning f sprts is nt abut ________（表面追求）, but abut ________（深层价值）.
基础词
高分替换词
含义
例句
gd
admirable / utstanding
令人钦佩的；杰出的
He is an admirable athlete.
brave
curageus / fearless
勇敢的；无畏的
She is a curageus cmpetitr.
surprising
dramatic / amazing
激动人心的；令人惊奇的
It was a dramatic victry.
try hard
t the best f ne's ability
尽某人最大努力
He cmpeted t the best f his ability.
famus
wrldwide / wrld-renwned
世界范围的；举世闻名的
He gained wrldwide attentin.
happy
prud / satisfied
自豪的；满意的
They wrked with pride.