译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导学案unit5-unit8（写作框架+高分词汇词组+参考范文+写作模版）

这是一份译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导学案unit5-unit8（写作框架+高分词汇词组+参考范文+写作模版），共15页。
Unit 5 Music speaks
写作任务：写一篇关于你最喜欢的音乐风格的文章
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入
功能：直接点明你最喜欢的音乐风格是什么，引起读者兴趣。
核心句式：
1. My favurite music style is classical/rck/jazz/cuntry music.
我最喜欢的音乐风格是古典乐/摇滚乐/爵士乐/乡村音乐。
2. Of all the music styles, I lve ... mst.在所有音乐风格里，我最喜欢……
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：分析喜欢的原因
功能：说明你喜欢这种音乐风格的原因，可以从感受、功能等角度展开。
核心句式：
1. I lve this style because ...我喜欢这种风格，因为……
2. This style f music always makes me feel relaxed/happy/excited.
这种曲风总能让我感到放松/愉悦/兴奋。
3. I first fell in lve with this style when ...我初次爱上这种风格是在……
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：补充细节或举例
功能：补充这种音乐风格的特点、代表人物或你喜欢的作品。
核心句式：
1. Cmmn instruments in this style are/include the guitar/pian/vilin.
这种曲风常用乐器有吉他、钢琴、小提琴。
2. One f the best-knwn ... musicians is ... 最负盛名的……音乐人之一是……
3. My favurite piece f ... music is ... 我最喜欢的一段……音乐是……
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华
功能：总结你对这种音乐的感受，表达热爱。
核心句式：
1. There is nthing mre pwerful and relaxing than ...
没有什么比……更能让人充满力量、舒缓身心了
2. ... will always be an imprtant part f my life.
……永远会是我人生中重要的一部分。
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
高分词组：
① be deeply mved by 被……深深打动
② have a pwerful effect n 对……有强烈影响
③ can't help ding 忍不住做某事
④ be impressed by 对……印象深刻
⑤ be/becme ppular arund the wrld 在全世界流行
⑥ play an imprtant rle in 在……中扮演重要角色
⑦ mix ... with ... 把……与……融合
（三）参考范文
My Favurite Music Style
My favurite music style is classical music. Of all the music styles, it tuches my heart the mst deeply.
I lve classical music because it is beautiful and exciting. Whenever I feel stressed after a lng day f study, listening t a piece f classical music can always help me relax and calm dwn. I first fell in lve with this style when I heard Beethven's Mnlight Snata at a cncert. The gentle meldy was s mving that I was deeply attracted.
Cmmn instruments in classical music include the pian, the vilin and the cell. One f the best-knwn classical musicians is Beethven. My favurite piece f classical music is his Symphny N. 5, which is pwerful and inspiring.
There is nthing mre pwerful and relaxing than classical music. It will always be an imprtant part f my life.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Favurite Music Style
My favurite music style is ________ (表明你最喜欢的音乐风格). Of all the music styles, I lve it the mst.
I lve this style because ________ (说明喜欢的原因). This style f music always makes me feel ________ (描述你的感受). I first fell in lve with this style when ________ (描述你第一次接触这种音乐的经历).
Cmmn instruments in this style are ________ (列举该风格常用的乐器). One f the best-knwn musicians f this style is ________ (介绍代表音乐家). My favurite piece f this style is ________ (介绍你最喜欢的作品).
There is nthing mre ________ than ________ (总结你的感受). ________ (表达这种音乐对你的意义).
Unit 6 The art f the brush
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元写作任务：写一篇关于你最喜欢的画家的文章（An article abut yur favurite painter）
第一段（开头，1-2句）：引入话题，点明你最喜欢的画家是谁
核心内容：直接点出画家的名字和国籍，表明"这是我最喜欢的画家"的态度。
核心句式：
① My favurite painter is ... / The painter I like best is ...
我最喜欢的画家是……/我最喜爱的画家是……
② He/She is a famus Chinese/French/... painter wh ...
他/她是一位知名的中国/法国/……画家，其……
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：介绍画家的生平和绘画风格
核心内容：讲述画家何时开始绘画、绘画风格是什么、擅长画什么题材。
核心句式：
① He/She began painting when he/she was very yung/a teenager/...
他/她在年幼时/青少年时期/……便开始绘画
② He/She paints/painted in a mdern/traditinal style.
他/她以现代/传统风格作画/曾作画。
③ He/She ften paints/painted animals/landscapes/peple/...
他/她经常画/曾画动物/风景/人物/……
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：介绍画家的代表作品及其影响
核心内容：提到画家最著名的作品，说明这些作品为什么了不起。
核心句式：
① His/Her mst famus wrk is ... which ...他/她最知名的作品是……该作品……
② My favurite paintings by this painter are ... because ...
这位画家我最喜欢的画作是……因为……
③ The painting that I like best is ...我最喜欢的那幅画作是……
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结评价，表达敬意
核心内容：表达你对这位画家的敬佩之情，说明他/她的艺术对你有什么影响。
核心句式：
① I admire him/her because his/her wrks always ...我钦佩他/她，因为他/她的作品总是……
② His/Her art has taught me t ...他/她的作品教会我去……
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
高分词组：
① be famus fr 因……而闻名
② be admired by 被……赞赏
③ date back t 追溯到
④ take pride in 以……为豪
⑤ cncentrate n 专注于
⑥ be drawn t 被……吸引
⑦ have a great influence n 对……有巨大影响
⑧ leave a lasting impressin n 给……留下深刻印象
（三）参考范文
My Favurite Painter
My favurite painter is Qi Baishi, ne f the mst famus Chinese painters in mdern histry. He was brn in 1864 in Hunan Prvince. Qi Baishi started learning painting when he was very yung, and he taught himself hw t paint after lng days f wrk as a wdwrker.
Qi Baishi is famus fr his unique painting style that cmbines bright clurs with heavy ink. Unlike many traditinal painters wh fcused n large landscapes, he cncentrated n small things in nature. His favurite subjects were things that he nticed in the natural wrld, like flwers, fish, frgs and especially shrimps.
The paintings that I like best are his shrimp paintings. The shrimps in his wrks seem s alive that yu can almst feel them mving. His brush strkes are simple but full f life, which shws his deep understanding f nature and his utstanding artistic technique.
I admire Qi Baishi nt nly because f his artistic talent, but als because f his spirit f never giving up. His stry has taught me that with hard wrk and passin, anyne can achieve their dreams. His wrks will always be a surce f inspiratin fr me.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Favurite Painter
My favurite painter is ________（画家名字）. He/She is a(n) ________（国籍/地区）painter wh ________（用定语从句简要介绍）.
He/She began painting when he/she was ________（开始绘画的时间/年龄）. He/She paints/painted in a ________（绘画风格）style. He/She ften paints/painted ________（擅长题材）, and his/her wrks are/were ________（作品特点）.
His/Her mst famus wrk is ________（代表作品）, which ________（用定语从句介绍作品特点或成就）. The painting that I like best is ________（你最喜欢的那幅画）because ________（喜欢的原因）.
I admire him/her because ________（表达敬佩的原因）. His/Her art has taught me t ________（画家对你有什么启发）, and I believe that his/her wrks will ________（对未来的影响或展望）.
Unit 7 The big screen
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作任务是"写一篇关于你最喜欢的电影的文章"，属于说明+议论类文章。推荐用4段式结构：
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入
开门见山地点出你最喜欢的电影是什么，用一两句话引起读者的兴趣。
核心句式：
① My favurite film is..., which is a... (type) film directed by...
我最喜欢的电影是……，这是一部由……执导的……（类型）影片
② Of all the films I have watched, ... leaves the deepest impressin n me.
在我看过的所有电影里，……给我留下了最深刻的印象。
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：介绍电影情节
简要介绍电影的主要情节（plt），不必太详细，抓住主线即可。
核心句式：
① The film tells the stry f... 这部影片讲述了……的故事
② It is abut a... wh/that... 这是关于一个……其……
第三段（中间2，3-4句）：表达你的感受
说明你喜欢这部电影的原因，可以从情感、演技、主题等角度展开。
核心句式：
① What I lve mst abut this film is that... 这部电影最打动我的一点是……
② The film is s tuching/mving/inspiring that... 这部电影十分感人/动人/鼓舞人心，以至于……
③ I was deeply impressed by... ……给我留下了极为深刻的印象
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结推荐
总结从电影中学到了什么，或者向读者推荐这部电影。
核心句式：
① Frm this film, I learn that... 从这部影片中，我明白了……
② I highly recmmend this film t anyne wh... 我强烈向所有……的人推荐这部影片
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换表
高分词组
① catch ne's attentin 引起注意
② play the lead rle 扮演主角
③ be based upn/n 基于；改编自
④ g beynd 超出；超越
⑤ pass away 去世（委婉语）
⑥ mark the beginning f 标志着……的开始
⑦ / 如此……以至于
⑧ s that 以便；为了
⑨ live thrugh 经历（灾难等）而幸存
⑩ cme t life 活了过来；变得生动
（三）参考范文
My Favurite Film
Of all the films I have watched, Dangal leaves the deepest impressin n me. It is a tuching sprts film based n a true stry, directed by Nitesh Tiwari.
The film tells the stry f a father wh trains his daughters t becme wrld-class wrestlers. Althugh the girls face many difficulties, they never give up. Their hard wrk and determinatin finally lead them t success.
What I lve mst abut this film is that it is bth funny and inspiring. The father is s strict yet s lving that his daughters understand his intentins in the end. The film is such a mving stry abut family supprt and girl pwer that I culdn't help crying when I watched it.
Frm this film, I learn that hard wrk is the key t success and family supprt is f great imprtance. I highly recmmend this film t everyne s that mre peple can be inspired by this wnderful stry.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Favurite Film
Of all the films I have watched, ________ leaves the deepest impressin n me. It is a ________（电影类型）film directed by ________（导演）.
The film tells the stry f ________（电影主要情节）. Althugh ________（遇到的困难或转折）, ________（最终结果）.
What I lve mst abut this film is that ________（喜欢的原因）. The film is s ________（形容词）that ________（结果）. It is such a ________（名词短语）that ________（结果）.
Frm this film, I learn that ________（学到的道理）. I highly recmmend this film t anyne wh ________（推荐理由）.
Unit 8 The wrld f literature
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作任务是"创编一段舞台剧故事"
功能：交代背景（时间、地点、人物），设置场景
核心句式：
The scene is set in ________.（场景设定在……）
[Character] is ________ when ________.（当……时，某角色正在……）
第二段（中间1，3-5行对话）
功能：引入冲突或问题，展开人物对话
核心句式：
[Character A]: What's the matter?（怎么了？）
[Character B]: I dn't want t ________ because ________.（我不想……因为……）
第三段（中间2，3-5行对话）
功能：推动情节发展，出现转折点
核心句式：
[Stage directin: Smething unexpected happens.]（舞台提示：意外事件发生）
[Character A]: Dn't wrry. If yu ________, yu will ________.（别担心。如果你……，你就会……）
第四段（结尾，1-2行）
功能：解决冲突，或留下悬念
核心句式：
[Character] realizes that ________.（某角色意识到……）
[The drbell rings / The lights g ut.]（门铃响了/灯灭了——用舞台提示营造悬念）
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换
gd → utstanding 杰出的 例：an utstanding perfrmance
sad → heartbreaking 令人心碎的 例：a heartbreaking stry
imprtant → meaningful 有意义的 例：a meaningful experience
surprising → unexpected 出乎意料的 例：an unexpected ending
like → be fnd f 喜爱 例：be fnd f reading
shw → reflect 反映 例：reflect the beauty f life
高分词组
① be set in 以……为背景
② be full f 充满
③ cannt help ding 忍不住做某事
④ leave a deep impressin n 给……留下深刻印象
⑤ cme up with 想出；提出
⑥ remind sb f sth 使某人想起某事
⑦ make up ne's mind 下定决心
⑧ give up 放弃
（三）参考范文
Act 1, Scene 2
Emily's bedrm at Julie's huse
[Emily is standing at the dr, hlding a bk. Julie is sitting n her bed, lking ut f the windw.]
Emily: Hi, Julie! I am Emily, yur neighbur. I saw yu walking t schl alne this mrning. Are yu new here?
Julie: Yes, I just mved here last week. I d nt knw anyne at this schl.
Emily: D nt wrry! If yu cme with me, I will intrduce yu t my friends. We are all very friendly.
Julie: Really? That is s kind f yu. Unless smene talks t me first, I am usually t shy t speak.
Emily: I understand. I used t be shy t. But unless yu take the first step, yu will never make new friends. Cme n, let us g!
Julie: [smiling] OK. Thank yu, Emily.
[They walk ut f the dr tgether. The lights dim.]
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
Act ________, Scene ________
________（场景地点）
[________（舞台提示：描述人物动作和环境）]
________（角色A）: ________（表明自己的基本态度/问题）
________（角色B）: ________（回应，提供建议或安慰）
________（角色A）: ________（表达犹豫或担忧）
________（角色B）: If yu ________（建议1）, yu will ________（可能的结果）. Unless yu ________（建议2）, yu will nt ________（不采取行动的后果）.
________（角色A）: [________（舞台提示：态度变化）] ________（接受建议/做出决定）
[________（舞台提示：情节转折/悬念结尾）]
基础词
高分替换词
含义
写作可用例句
like
be fnd f / be crazy abut
喜欢
I am fnd f classical music.
gd
amazing / extrardinary / remarkable
极好的
The music has an amazing effect n me.
make me happy
lift my spirits / cheer me up
让我开心
Rck music always lifts my spirits.
famus
well-knwn / wrld-famus / celebrated
著名的
Beethven is a celebrated cmpser.
imprtant
significant / essential / vital
重要的
Music plays a vital rle in my life.
基础词
高分替换词
含义
写作可用例句
gd
utstanding / remarkable
杰出的；非凡的
He is an utstanding painter in mdern art.
famus
wrld-renwned / well-knwn
世界闻名的
She is a wrld-renwned artist whse wrks are admired glbally.
like
be fascinated by / be drawn t
被……深深吸引
I am fascinated by his unique painting style.
beautiful
breathtaking / magnificent
令人叹为观止的
The painting is truly breathtaking.
shw
demnstrate / reveal
展现；揭示
His wrks demnstrate a deep understanding f nature.
基础词
高分替换词
含义
例句
gd
utstanding/remarkable
杰出的；非凡的
Her perfrmance is utstanding.
like
be fnd f / be attracted by
喜爱；被吸引
I am fnd f actin films.
sad
tuching / mving
感人的
The stry is s tuching that I cried.
famus
well-knwn / wrld-famus
著名的
She is a wrld-famus actress.
imprtant
significant / meaningful
有意义的；重要的
The film has significant educatinal value.
very
extremely / remarkably
极其；非常
The film is extremely ppular.