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Unit 1 The Changing Wrld
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作主题是"变化"——Changes in My Hmetwn 或 Changes in My Life。这类文章的核心逻辑就是"过去怎样→现在怎样→我的感受"，用对比的方式展现变化。建议采用4段式结构：
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入——点明"发生了很大变化"这个主题。
核心句式：Great changes have taken place in... ver the last... years.
在过去……年间，……发生了巨大变化。
My life/hmetwn has changed a lt since...
自……以来，我的生活/家乡发生了巨大变化
第二段（中间1，3-5句）：过去的情况——用used t和一般过去时描述"过去怎样"，具体描写2-3个方面的变化。
核心句式：In the past, ... used t...过去，……常常……
It used t take... t...过去常常需要……才能……
第三段（中间2，3-5句）：现在的情况——用现在完成时和一般现在时描述"现在怎样"，突出变化的成果。
核心句式：Nw,... has/have...现在，……有……
As a result,...因此，……
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华——点明"不变的东西"，用情感升华主题。
核心句式：..., but ne thing stays the same:...……，但有一点始终不变：……
Althugh... has changed,... remains unchanged.
纵然……已然改变，……始终未曾改变。
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换
高分词组
① great changes have taken place 发生了巨大变化
② used t d 过去常常做（暗示现在不同）
③ as a result 结果；因此
④ be cvered with 被……覆盖
⑤ with the develpment f 随着……的发展
⑥ ver the 在过去的……年里
⑦ have a great influence n 对……有很大影响
⑧ make prgress 取得进步
⑨ cmpared with 与……相比
⑩ ne thing stays the same 有一件事始终不变
（三）参考范文
Changes in My Hmetwn
Great changes have taken place in my hmetwn ver the last ten years.
In the past, the rads were narrw and rugh. It used t take us ver tw hurs t travel t the city centre by bus. The hills arund ur village were cvered with sandy sil. Many peple used t wrk in big cities far away frm hme.
Hwever, nw great changes have taken place. A new highway has been built, and the travel time has been cut t just half an hur. The hills are nw cvered with green trees and bushes. The rts f the trees hld the sil tgether, and the envirnment has greatly imprved. Many turists nw cme t visit ur beautiful village. As a result, lcal farmers have becme rich and many have started their wn businesses.
My life has changed in many ways, but ne thing stays the same: the feeling f lve and happiness shared by my family.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
Changes in My _______________
Great changes have taken place in _______________ (表明变化发生的地点/方面) ver the last _______________ (时间段).
In the past, _______________ (描述过去的情况). It used t _______________ (用used t描述过去习惯或状态). Peple used t _______________ (具体描述过去的困难或不足).
Hwever, nw _______________ (描述现在的变化). _______________ has/have been built/imprved (用现在完成时强调变化成果). As a result, _______________ (变化带来的结果或好处).
many things have changed, ne thing stays the same: _______________ (点明不变的东西，升华主题).
Unit 2 Inspiring Peple
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作主题是--我最敬佩的人。
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入——直接点明你最钦佩的人是谁
核心句式：T me, ne f the mst inspiring peple is... / The persn I admire mst is..., wh is full f curage and wisdm.
对我而言，最鼓舞人心的人之一是……/我最敬佩的人是……，他兼具勇气与智慧。
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：事迹与品质
核心句式：It was very difficult fr him/her t..., but he/she never gave up. / It was really brave/admirable f him/her t...
他/她做……这件事十分艰难，但他/她从未放弃。/ 他/她敢于……实在十分勇敢/令人敬佩。
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：影响与传承
核心句式：His/Her lve fr... lives n in... / It is/was inspiring that...
他/她对……的热爱永存于……之中 / ……这件事令人备受鼓舞
第四段（结尾，2句）：感悟与升华
核心句式：His/Her stry teaches us that it is always imprtant fr us t... / I admire him/her because he/she is full f...他/她的经历告诉我们，……对我们而言始终至关重要/我敬佩他/她，因为他/她充满……
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
基础词→高分替换词：
gd → admirable
brave → curageus
imprtant → significant
hard → demanding
help → supprt and encurage
great → utstanding / remarkable
never give up → persist in / stick t
高分词组：
① be full f curage and wisdm满怀勇气与智慧
② lk up t敬仰；仰慕；钦佩
③ dream big 胸怀大志
④ never give up 永不放弃
⑤ leave behind 留下；遗留；抛下
⑥ live n 依靠……生活；以……为食；
⑦ stand up fr 挺身而出；
⑧ make a difference 带来改变；有所作为；产生影响
（三）参考范文
An Inspiring Persn in My Heart
T me, ne f the mst inspiring peple is Zhng Yang. He was a bilgy prfessr at Fudan University wh spent his whle life researching plants and seeds.
Zhng Yang spent ver 16 years cllecting plant seeds in Xizang. It was very difficult fr him t brave the cld weather and great heights, but he never gave up. He cllected mre than 40 millin seeds and trained many students t cntinue his wrk.
I admire him because he is full f curage and wisdm. His stry teaches us that it is always imprtant fr us t dream big and never give up, n matter hw hard the jurney is.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
An Inspiring Persn in My Heart
T me, ne f the mst inspiring peple is ________（你最钦佩的人的名字）. He/She is a ________（职业/身份）wh ________（概括其主要贡献或品质）.
________（此人姓名）spent many years ________（主要事迹：做了什么）. It was very ________（形容词）fr him/her t ________（遇到的困难或挑战）, but he/she never gave up. He/She ________（具体成就或结果）. It was ________（形容词）f him/her t ________（评价其品质）.
His/Her lve fr ________（他/她热爱的事业）lives n in ________（精神传承的对象）. It is inspiring that ________（令人鼓舞的事实）.
I admire him/her because he/she is full f ________（品质）. His/Her stry teaches us that it is always imprtant fr us t ________（号召或感悟）.
Unit 3 Smart Learning
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）
本单元的写作主题是——我如何学习。
第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入
功能：引出话题，表明自己对学习的态度。
核心句式：
① I believe that learning English is nt difficult if yu find the right methds.
我认为只要找对方法，学习英语并不难。
② Everyne has the ability t learn well. 每个人都具备学好的能力。
③ As a student, I have develped sme gd learning habits ver the years.
作为一名学生，这些年来我养成了一些良好的学习习惯。
第二段（中间1，3-4句）：具体学习方法
功能：详细描述自己使用的2-3种学习方法，这是文章的主体。
核心句式：
① I think that the best way t learn English is t use it as much as pssible.
我认为学习英语最好的方法就是尽可能多地使用英语。
② First, I take ntes in every class and review them after schl.
首先，我每节课都会记笔记，并且放学后复习笔记。
③ Secnd, I read English bks utside class.其次，我会在课外阅读英文书籍。
④ Third, I practise speaking with my friends.第三，我和朋友们练习口语。
第三段（中间2，2-3句）：学习感悟或困难应对
功能：谈谈学习中的困难或感悟，体现成长型思维。
核心句式：
① I believe that making mistakes is nt a bad thing — I see mistakes as chances fr learning.
我认为犯错并非坏事——我把失误看作学习的契机。
② Smetimes I find it difficult t remember new wrds, but I use flashcards t help me.
有时候我觉得记新单词很难，但我会用单词卡片来辅助记忆。
③ I have fund that if yu take things step by step, yu will make prgress.
我发现凡事循序渐进，就能有所进步。
第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结建议
功能：总结观点，给出建议，升华主题。
核心句式：
① My advice is t find methds that suit yur level and keep ging!
我的建议是找到适合自己水平的方法并坚持下去！
② I believe that if we never lse heart, we will find mre jy in learning.
我相信只要我们永不灰心，就能在学习中收获更多乐趣。
③ In a wrd, learning is a lifelng jurney, and we shuld enjy it.
总而言之，学习是一场终身旅程，我们应当乐在其中。
（二）高分词汇/词组积累
高分词汇替换：
高分词组：
① take advantage f 利用
② step by step 循序渐进
③ grwth mindset 成长型心态
④ see mistakes as chances 把错误看作机会
⑤ never lse heart 永不灰心
⑥ build up gradually 逐步提高
⑦ find methds that suit ne's level 找到适合自己的方法
⑧ make prgress 取得进步
⑨ a lifelng jurney 终身之旅
⑩ learn frm each ther 互相学习
（三）参考范文
Hw I Learn English
I believe that learning English is nt difficult if yu find the right methds. Everyne has the ability t learn well, but many students dn't realize this.
I think that the best way t learn English is t use it as much as pssible. First, I take ntes in every class and review them after schl. Secnd, I read English bks utside class. My mther always tells me that reading pens up new wrlds. I start with simple bks and build up gradually. Third, I practise speaking with my friends. I believe that making mistakes is nt a bad thing — I see mistakes as chances fr learning.
Smetimes I find it difficult t remember new wrds. I wnder if using flashcards can help. In fact, I have fund that flashcards are useful because I can take them anywhere and review anytime.
I have fund that if yu take things step by step and never lse heart, yu will make prgress. My advice is t find methds that suit yur level and keep ging!
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
My Learning Habits
I believe that learning ________(学科) is nt difficult if yu find the right methds. Everyne has the ability t learn well, but many students dn't realize this.
I think that the best way t learn ________(学科) is t ________(方法1). First, I ________(具体做法1). Secnd, I ________(具体做法2). My ________(家人/老师) always tells me that ________(他人建议). Third, I ________(具体做法3). I believe that making mistakes is nt a bad thing — I see mistakes as chances fr learning.
Smetimes I find it difficult t ________(困难). I wnder if ________(可能的解决办法) can help. In fact, I have fund that ________(发现的规律/方法).
I have fund that if yu take things step by step and never lse heart, yu will make prgress. My advice is t ________(总结建议)!
Unit 4 Our Memry
（一）写作框架梳理（4段式，日记体）
本单元的写作主题是——Hw I Overcame My Memry Challenge。
第一段（开头，1-2句）：点出挑战+目标
描述你过去在记忆方面遇到的困难，以及你决定改变的目标。
核心句式：
• In the past, I always struggled with...过去，我一直深受……的困扰
• I used t have difficulty in...我过去常常在……方面感到吃力
• Last week, I decided t find a better way t...上周，我决定寻找一种更好的方法来……
第二段（主体，4-5句）：尝试的方法（2-3个）
具体写出你尝试了哪些记忆方法，每个方法怎么操作、效果如何。用instead f、by ding等结构串联。
核心句式：
• First, I tried ding... Instead f..., I...首先，我尝试过……我没有选择……，而是……
• Secnd, I frmed images in my mind fr each wrd.其次，我会在脑海中为每个单词构建画面。
• Third, I studied in shrt sectins and tk breaks every 40 minutes.
第三，我分段短时学习，每四十分钟就休息一次。
第三段（转折/鼓励，2-3句）：他人的帮助与鼓励
写朋友或老师给了你什么建议和鼓励，用宾语从句表达。
核心句式：
• A friend tld me (that) I shuld have cnfidence in myself.
一位朋友告诉我，我应当对自己抱有信心。
• She said that if I frgt a wrd, I shuldn't panic.她说如果我忘了单词，不必慌张。
第四段（结尾，2句）：成果+感悟
写出方法的效果和你的感悟，引用金句升华主题。
核心句式：
• I fllwed these methds and my test was a great success!
我采用了这些方法，测试取得了圆满成功！
• I have realized that there is n ne-size-fits-all methd.
我意识到不存在一种适用于所有情况的通用方法。
• The key is t find what wrks best fr yu and keep ging.
关键在于找到最适合自己的方式并坚持下去。
（二）高分替换词表+高分词组
高分词组
① pay attentin t 注意；关注② use it r lse it 用进废退
③ make use f 利用④ keep in mind 牢记在心
⑤ instead f 代替；而不是⑥ ne-size-fits-all 一刀切的
⑦ put ... t gd use 好好利用⑧ step by step 逐步
⑨ last but nt least 最后但同样重要的⑩ have cnfidence in 对……有信心
（三）参考范文
Hw I Overcame My Memry Challenge
In the past, I always struggled with remembering English wrds. I wuld memrize them ne night and frget them the next mrning. Last week, I decided t find a better way t imprve my memry.
First, I tried making wrd cards and gruping infrmatin by tpic. Instead f memrizing randm wrds, I rganized them int categries like 'fd', 'travel' and 'emtins'. Secnd, I frmed images in my mind fr each wrd. Fr example, when I learned 'freezing', I pictured myself standing in snw. Third, I studied in shrt sectins and tk breaks every 40 minutes. A friend tld me t have cnfidence in myself. She said that if I frgt a wrd, I shuldn't panic. I shuld just review it again.
I fllwed these methds and my test tday was a great success! I remembered 95% f the wrds. I have realized that there is n ne-size-fits-all methd. The key is t find what wrks best fr yu and keep ging.
（四）写作模板（万能模板）
Hw I Overcame My Memry Challenge
In the past, I always struggled with ________（你记忆方面的困难）. I wuld ________（描述具体问题）and frget them the next mrning. Last week, I decided t find a better way t imprve my memry.
First, I tried ________（方法1：如making wrd cards）. Instead f ________（原来的做法）, I ________（改进后的做法）. Secnd, I ________（方法2：如frmed images in my mind）. Fr example, when I learned '________', I pictured ________（具体联想画面）. Third, I ________（方法3：如studied in shrt sectins）. A friend tld me (that) I shuld ________（朋友的建议）. She said that if I frgt a wrd, I shuldn't panic.
I fllwed these methds and my test was a great success! I have realized that there is n ne-size-fits-all methd. The key is t find what wrks best fr yu and keep ging.
基础词
高分替换词
含义
写作例句
change
transfrm / imprve
转变/改善
The twn has been transfrmed int a mdern city.这座小镇已蜕变为一座现代化城市。
many
a great deal f / a large number f
大量的
A great deal f mney has been spent n the prject.这个项目已经投入了大量资金。
gd
remarkable / significant
显著的
Significant changes have taken place in the last decade.过去十年间发生了巨大变化。
ld
utdated / traditinal
过时的/传统的
The ld transprt system was utdated and slw.老旧的交通体系落后且运行缓慢。
big
enrmus / tremendus
巨大的
The twn has made tremendus prgress.
这座小镇取得了巨大的发展。
imprtant
crucial / vital
关键的/至关重要的
The new highway is crucial fr lcal develpment.这条新建高速公路对当地发展至关重要。
基础词
高分替换词
含义
例句
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gd
effective / efficient
有效的/高效的
an effective methd
imprtant
crucial / essential
至关重要的
It is crucial t review regularly.
difficult
challenging
有挑战性的
a challenging task
try
attempt / make an effrt
尝试/努力
I attempt t read English nvels.
use
take advantage f / make use f
利用
Take advantage f learning apps.
help
guidance / supprt
指导/支持
I get guidance frm my teacher.
want
aim t / be determined t
旨在/决心
I aim t imprve my reading speed.
remember
memrize / keep in mind
记忆/牢记
I memrize key pints after class.
基础词
高分替换词
含义
例句
remember
memrize / recall
记忆；回忆
I memrized the wrds by making cards.
hard
demanding / difficult
要求高的；困难的
The task was demanding but rewarding.
gd
effective / impressive
有效的；令人印象深刻的
The methd prved highly effective.
help
bst / supprt
提升；支持
These techniques can bst yur memry.
use
make use f / put t gd use
好好利用
Put what yu learn t gd use.
imprtant
significant / essential
重要的；必要的
Regular review is essential fr memry.
frget
be frgetful / fail t recall
健忘；未能回忆
Dn't be frgetful — review daily!
way
methd / technique
方法；技巧
She taught me a clever memrizatin technique.