17续写真题2024年浙江卷1月--找寻迷失的自我课件PPT

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读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
Eva spent the first week f high schl trying t keep her head abve water. One f the majr headaches fr her was finding her way in the huge schl building. It was a six-stry building. On each flr hallways stretched in fur directins, leading t classrms, labratries, and teachers’ ffices. Smewhere in the building, there was als a library, a cafeteria, and a gym. Having a pr sense f directin, Eva fund it impssible t get arund in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rms were t much t think abut, let alne cmmit t memry. She decided that she wuld memrize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest f the place didn’t exist. In her first PE class, Eva was shcked when Cach Pitt annunced that everyne had t run ne mile arund the track utside. She searched the faces
2024年浙江卷1月真题原文
f her classmates fr signs f panic. There was nthing she feared mre than having t run a whle mile. T Eva, “a mile” was used t describe lng distances. It was ten miles frm her hme t her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a lng way, even in a car! When Cach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she wuld be left in the dust. Hwever, while sme f her classmates edged ahead, thers actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thught.” I’ll cme in last fr sure. “Sn Eva began t breathe hard, with her heart punding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick n herself. She stpped thinking abut the wrd” mile. “Instead, she fcused n reaching the shadw cast n the track by an ak tree up ahead. Then she cncentrated n jgging t the spt where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried t see if she culd cmplete her first lap. One lap turned int tw, then three, then fur.
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Evaa freshman in high schl
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. _______________________________________________________ Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building. _______________________________________________________
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.  Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Eva ; her classmates
①Hw did Eva feel?
②What did her classmates d?
③What did Eva realize?
④What did Eva decide t d?
Eva eventually challenged the huge building.
use the same mind trick
Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building.
explre the building step by step
When Cach Pitt said “Nice wrk!” t her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.  Eva decided t use the same trick t deal with the schl building. 
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
What did she realize?
Why was she surprised?
She tk actin.
She came up with an idea.
Hw did she feel then?
What did her classmates react?
Eva realized smething.
She decided t cnquer the building.
She explred it step by step.
What abut her first step?
What abut her secnd step?
She made it eventually!
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1） Never in her wildest dream had she imagined that she culd achieve such an eye-catching scre! 2）N sner had she returned t the cnfusing maze than she set ut t explre the first flr.
招式1：倒装句 否定词 (n, never, nt, nt nly, hardly, seldm, nt nly, n sner...) 置于句首，后面的句子采用半倒装的结构。
e.g.:3）Breathless and exhausted, she realized that vercming seemingly invincible challenges just needed a smart strategy like her mind trick.
招式2：形容词作状语 形容词作状语，用来修饰人的状态。
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4）Being a freshman, she tended t get lst in the 6-stry maze, leaving her s helpless.5）Staring at the twering teaching building, Eva came up with a gd idea, with a smile blming acrss her face.
招式3： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① Ding..., ② with + n + ding/dne/t d ③ ..., ding...
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:6）lt dawned n her that gals are easier t achieve in small steps.
招式4： 主旨升华常用句式： “某人突然意识到” lt dawned n sb. that... It hit/struck sb. that... It ccurred t sb. that...
水到渠成 范文赏析
When Cach Pitt said "Great wrk" t her at the finish line,Eva was surprised. Never in her wildest dream had she imagined that she culd achieve such an eye-catching scre! Cnquering this ne mile was a milestne in her running career! Amazingly, Cach Pitts' psitive affirmatin infused an enrmus sense f achievement int her heart. Enthusiastic cheers and thunderus applauses frm her classmates kept her n the tp f the wrld. Breathless and exhausted, she realized that vercming seemingly invincible challenges just needed a smart strategy like her mind trick. Her initial self-dubt gave way t self-cnfidence. Being a freshman, she tended t get lst in the 6-stry maze, leaving her s helpless. Staring at the twering teaching building, Eva came up with a gd idea, with a smile blming acrss her face.
范文赏析
Eva decided t use the same trick t dea with the schl building. N sner had she returned t the cnfusing maze than she set ut t explre the first flr. Cnvinced that here mind trick wuld rientate her in the schl as sn as pssible, she came t a gym, which was well-equipped with varius wrkut facilities. Next t the gym was a cafeteria, which prvided a wide range f fds and drinks. As Eva walked back t her classrm, she nticed that she felt less verwhelmed by this huge cmplex. Time ticking away, Eva eventually gt familiar with the vast maze in the way she finished the ne-mile run. One lap at a time did wrk! S did ne flr a week! lt dawned n her that gals are easier t achieve in small steps.
范文赏析