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专题10 2017年11月浙江卷（健忘妈妈趣事）-近年新高考英语真题读后续写解析+讲评课件
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这是一份专题10 2017年11月浙江卷（健忘妈妈趣事）-近年新高考英语真题读后续写解析+讲评课件，共40页。PPT课件主要包含了试题再现，试题分析，写作思路，范文赏析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacatin with my mtherI had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther — lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept: “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut (放哨) while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh … I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins (反对). If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drsteps, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. ____________________________________________Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.___________________________________________
根据短文内容完成下面的对话。
A: What’s the mst unfrgettable trip yu’ve taken?B: I believe it wuld be the trip with my ________________________ when I was eleven. It was interesting but ________ due t my mm’s _____________.A: Really? Were yu well prepared befre departure？B: We thught we were. We brught almst everything we needed n the rad including ____________________. But tw hurs after departure we returned t get the ________________________.A: Was there a chance t use the tent?B: Nt at the beginning. On the furth r fifth night, we culdn’t find a htel with vacancy. My mm suggested setting the tent up at __________________________. A: Did yur father agree with that idea?B: Of curse nt.
parents and yunger brther
frgetfulness
camping gear and tent
smene else’s backyard
purse and traveler’s checks
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
My childhd was filled with surprise and amusements because f my sweet absent-minded mther.
We planned a trip t my tw sets f grandparents. Tw hurs after departure we returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
On the furth r fifth night, we were unable t find a htel with vacancy. Mm suggested setting up the tent at smene’s backyard. We all disagreed. Finally we fund a htel in anther twn.
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
A vacatin with my mther I had an interesting childhd: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther-lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
标题作用：交代人物和事件。
形容词感情基调，说明事件是有趣的。
妈妈的特征：可爱，心不在焉健忘。
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
故事的开端：我和父母出去旅游。
妈妈健忘的具体事件。注意积累原文中的细节表达。
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept:” Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh… I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.
讲述妈妈经常忘事的烦恼。
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins. If a strange family shwed upn her frnt drsteps, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
我们终于拒绝了妈妈的建议，住找到了旅馆。
Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
Para2：We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
原文画线单词对后面情节发展做了铺垫和提示：absent-minded, frgetful, nice 点明了妈妈的性格特征；camping, tent, trip, truble 提示了重点情节信息；David, Mm, Dad 说明了故事人物信息。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Q1: Did we use it? Was there any disagreement abut using the tent?
Q2: Where did we put up the tent? Hw was the camping place?
Q3: Hw did we feel abut the camping?
Q4: Hw can the great sights be described in detail?
Q5: What else did we experience alng the trip apart frm the great sights?
Q6: Did we successfully make it t ur grandparents’ place?
Paragraph 1 ： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. _______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. _______________________________________________________________________
第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事
此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等
Paragraph 1 ： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
Mther suggested g camping with the tent
We had a nice day with the camping.
Things f my mther’s kindness and she helped thers.
Paragraph 2 ： We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
We visited my grandparents.
We all had the trip.
I learned frm my mther that the imprtance f giving.
1. 想到这顶帐篷，妈妈建议我们到下一个村子去野营，眼睛闪闪发光。
Thinking f this tent, Mm suggested that we g camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering.
Thinking f this tent
with her eyes glittering
2. 考虑到她的热情，我们都同意了。
Cnsidering her enthusiasm, we all agreed.
Cnsidering her enthusiasm
3. 当我们的车门打开时，妈妈立刻冲了出去，催促我们搭起帐篷。
When the dr f ur car pened, Mm strmed ut instantly and urged us t put up the tent.
4. 大卫和我被要求捡些树枝生火。
David and I were asked t pick up sme branches t build a fire.
absent-minded
pick up sme branches t build a fire
5. 当我们回来时，爸爸妈妈已经舒舒服服地躺在帐篷前的草地上，和一个我们这个年纪的当地男孩愉快地交谈着，他好奇地看着帐篷。
And when we came back, Dad and Mm had already lain dwn the grass cmfrtably in frnt f the tent, talking merrily with a lcal by at ur age, wh kept glancing at this tent curiusly.
a lcal by at ur age
Talk merrily with
6. 很快我们就知道那个衣衫褴褛的男孩连家都没有。
Sn we learnt that the by in rags even didn’t have a hme t live in.
the by in rags
7. 当然，妈妈又“忘了”带帐篷了。
Of curse, Mm “frgt” t take this tent with us again.
8. 在那次旅行中，我们和爷爷奶奶住在一起。
And we als had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip.
9. 但给我印象最深的是那个帐篷，妈妈故意忘记了。
But what impressed me mst was that tent, which was frgtten deliberately by Mm.
deliberately
what impressed me mst was that
10. 虽然她很喜欢去野营，但出于同情，她把这顶帐篷送给了那个可怜的男孩。
Thugh she did lve ging camping, she presented that pr by with this tent ut f sympathy.
ut f sympathy
11. 是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。
It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. And it was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
made my childhd clrful
the true meaning f giving
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. ______________________________（妈妈坚持要用帐篷，我和David朝爸爸看了看，他笑着同意了。非限制性定语从句）Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. ____________________________ （这是我第一次觉得妈妈睿智，因为我非常喜欢这个帐篷。It作形式主语）“Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night. We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. ____________________________ （我们不仅欣赏到了如画的风景，也非常开心有个健忘的妈妈陪伴我们，她让旅途充满了欢乐。非限制性定语从句）I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ place, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Mm insisted that we shuld make full use f it. David and I lked at Dad, wh smiled and ndded in agreement. Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. It was the first time that I had thught Mm culd be wise as I admired ur stunning tent. “Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night.Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. Nt nly did we enjy the picturesque scenery, but we were als happy t have frgetful and absent-minded Mm arund, wh brught lts f laughter t ur trip. I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ place, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Mm insisted that we shuld make full use f it. David and I lked at Dad, wh smiled and ndded in agreement. Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. It was the first time that I had thught Mm culd be wise as I admired ur stunning tent. “Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night.Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. Nt nly did we enjy the picturesque scenery, but we were als happy t have frgetful and absent-minded Mm arund, wh brught lts f laughter t ur trip. I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ places, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
It was the first time
nt nly… but als
nd in agreement set up ur tent an unfrgettable night bring lts f laughter t
把车开走放哨充满了令我们欣慰的是拒绝当旅行第一天临近我们准备离开的时候
be filled withas the first day f ur trip apprached the mment f ur departure arriveddrive ffplay lkutt ur great reliefturn dwn
点头同意一个难忘的夜晚搭起我们的帐篷给……带来许多欢乐
检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
◎ Obviusly, the tent was nwhere t be fund and Mm insisted n ging back t fetch it.◎ Thinking f the tent, Mm excitedly suggested that we g camping.◎ Cnsidering Mm’s enthusiasm, we all agreed.◎ It was a clearing in the wds by a small lake, where Dad culd catch sme fish fr dinner.◎ We had n truble setting up ur tent, but we were disappinted t find that Mm frgt t pack pillws.◎ Needless t say, we all wke up with a sre neck the next mrning.◎ That starry night, admiring the mn rising abve the distant muntain and accmpanied by the amusing stries f naughty David, we felt we’d had the mst enjyable camping trip.◎ We crssed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high muntains, and verlked deep valleys.◎ During the trip, Mm’s being absent-minded nt nly gt us int much truble, but als gave us many funny mments.◎ Hwever, it was hard t deny that thse incidents actually added laughter t ur jurney.◎ We all arrived at ur grandparents’ hme safe and sund.◎ This strange family trip wuld definitely be a cherished memry fr the rest f ur life.◎ There is n persn that can match her — my lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful mm.◎ It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. It was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
List varius expressins f “lk”!
Mrs Dursley was thin and blnde and had nearly twice the usual amunt f neck, which came in very useful as she spent s much f her time craning ver (伸长脖子看) garden fences, spying n(窥探 ) the neighbrs. ─Harry Ptter
Fern peered thrugh the dr(透过门缝窥视). ─Charltte’s Web
① Dad lked at me. Why nt camp t satisfy Mm?
② Dad lked at us, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers lked ut and greeted us warmly.
Dad __________________ with me. Why nt camp t satisfy Mm?
peep ut(朝外看)；give sb a wink(朝某人眨眼)； exchange a glance (交换眼色)
exchanged a glance
Dad _____________, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers ____________ and greeted us warmly.
gave us a wink
③ Just then an ideal campsite which nestled n the edge f a lake spread befre us.
② Dad gave us a wink, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers peeped ut and greeted us warmly.
_______________, Dad pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers peeped ut and greeted us warmly.
Giving us a wink
Just then an ideal campsite ___________________________ spread befre us.
nestling n the edge f a lake
④ Mm let ut a scream f thrill, lcated a clearing and immediately guided us t pitch the tent.
⑤ At dusk, against the deep blue sky, we tgether with ther campers gathered arund, and exchanged yummy snacks in the cmpany f fire.
_________________________, Mm lcated a clearing and immediately guided us t pitch the tent.
At dusk, against the deep blue sky, we tgether with ther campers gathered arund, _______________________ in the cmpany f fire.
Letting ut a scream f thrill
exchanging yummy snacks
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacatin with my mtherI had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther — lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept: “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut (放哨) while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh … I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins (反对). If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drsteps, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. ____________________________________________Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.___________________________________________
根据短文内容完成下面的对话。
A: What’s the mst unfrgettable trip yu’ve taken?B: I believe it wuld be the trip with my ________________________ when I was eleven. It was interesting but ________ due t my mm’s _____________.A: Really? Were yu well prepared befre departure？B: We thught we were. We brught almst everything we needed n the rad including ____________________. But tw hurs after departure we returned t get the ________________________.A: Was there a chance t use the tent?B: Nt at the beginning. On the furth r fifth night, we culdn’t find a htel with vacancy. My mm suggested setting the tent up at __________________________. A: Did yur father agree with that idea?B: Of curse nt.
parents and yunger brther
frgetfulness
camping gear and tent
smene else’s backyard
purse and traveler’s checks
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
My childhd was filled with surprise and amusements because f my sweet absent-minded mther.
We planned a trip t my tw sets f grandparents. Tw hurs after departure we returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
On the furth r fifth night, we were unable t find a htel with vacancy. Mm suggested setting up the tent at smene’s backyard. We all disagreed. Finally we fund a htel in anther twn.
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
A vacatin with my mther I had an interesting childhd: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther-lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
标题作用：交代人物和事件。
形容词感情基调，说明事件是有趣的。
妈妈的特征：可爱，心不在焉健忘。
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
故事的开端：我和父母出去旅游。
妈妈健忘的具体事件。注意积累原文中的细节表达。
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept:” Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh… I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.
讲述妈妈经常忘事的烦恼。
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins. If a strange family shwed upn her frnt drsteps, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
我们终于拒绝了妈妈的建议，住找到了旅馆。
Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
Para2：We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
原文画线单词对后面情节发展做了铺垫和提示：absent-minded, frgetful, nice 点明了妈妈的性格特征；camping, tent, trip, truble 提示了重点情节信息；David, Mm, Dad 说明了故事人物信息。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Q1: Did we use it? Was there any disagreement abut using the tent?
Q2: Where did we put up the tent? Hw was the camping place?
Q3: Hw did we feel abut the camping?
Q4: Hw can the great sights be described in detail?
Q5: What else did we experience alng the trip apart frm the great sights?
Q6: Did we successfully make it t ur grandparents’ place?
Paragraph 1 ： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. _______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. _______________________________________________________________________
第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事
此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等
Paragraph 1 ： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
Mther suggested g camping with the tent
We had a nice day with the camping.
Things f my mther’s kindness and she helped thers.
Paragraph 2 ： We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
We visited my grandparents.
We all had the trip.
I learned frm my mther that the imprtance f giving.
1. 想到这顶帐篷，妈妈建议我们到下一个村子去野营，眼睛闪闪发光。
Thinking f this tent, Mm suggested that we g camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering.
Thinking f this tent
with her eyes glittering
2. 考虑到她的热情，我们都同意了。
Cnsidering her enthusiasm, we all agreed.
Cnsidering her enthusiasm
3. 当我们的车门打开时，妈妈立刻冲了出去，催促我们搭起帐篷。
When the dr f ur car pened, Mm strmed ut instantly and urged us t put up the tent.
4. 大卫和我被要求捡些树枝生火。
David and I were asked t pick up sme branches t build a fire.
absent-minded
pick up sme branches t build a fire
5. 当我们回来时，爸爸妈妈已经舒舒服服地躺在帐篷前的草地上，和一个我们这个年纪的当地男孩愉快地交谈着，他好奇地看着帐篷。
And when we came back, Dad and Mm had already lain dwn the grass cmfrtably in frnt f the tent, talking merrily with a lcal by at ur age, wh kept glancing at this tent curiusly.
a lcal by at ur age
Talk merrily with
6. 很快我们就知道那个衣衫褴褛的男孩连家都没有。
Sn we learnt that the by in rags even didn’t have a hme t live in.
the by in rags
7. 当然，妈妈又“忘了”带帐篷了。
Of curse, Mm “frgt” t take this tent with us again.
8. 在那次旅行中，我们和爷爷奶奶住在一起。
And we als had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip.
9. 但给我印象最深的是那个帐篷，妈妈故意忘记了。
But what impressed me mst was that tent, which was frgtten deliberately by Mm.
deliberately
what impressed me mst was that
10. 虽然她很喜欢去野营，但出于同情，她把这顶帐篷送给了那个可怜的男孩。
Thugh she did lve ging camping, she presented that pr by with this tent ut f sympathy.
ut f sympathy
11. 是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。
It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. And it was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
made my childhd clrful
the true meaning f giving
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. ______________________________（妈妈坚持要用帐篷，我和David朝爸爸看了看，他笑着同意了。非限制性定语从句）Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. ____________________________ （这是我第一次觉得妈妈睿智，因为我非常喜欢这个帐篷。It作形式主语）“Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night. We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. ____________________________ （我们不仅欣赏到了如画的风景，也非常开心有个健忘的妈妈陪伴我们，她让旅途充满了欢乐。非限制性定语从句）I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ place, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Mm insisted that we shuld make full use f it. David and I lked at Dad, wh smiled and ndded in agreement. Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. It was the first time that I had thught Mm culd be wise as I admired ur stunning tent. “Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night.Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. Nt nly did we enjy the picturesque scenery, but we were als happy t have frgetful and absent-minded Mm arund, wh brught lts f laughter t ur trip. I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ place, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。
范文赏析——生动的语言
Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Mm insisted that we shuld make full use f it. David and I lked at Dad, wh smiled and ndded in agreement. Then we spent a whle afternn seeking a nice camping place and finally set up ur tent befre night fell. It was the first time that I had thught Mm culd be wise as I admired ur stunning tent. “Oh, I frgt the pillws!” Mm screamed. Despite the ache in my neck, we had an unfrgettable night.Paragraph 2: We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. The limitless green grass, the wandering sheep, the setting sun and the cuntless stars abve the curtain f night kept me spellbund. Nt nly did we enjy the picturesque scenery, but we were als happy t have frgetful and absent-minded Mm arund, wh brught lts f laughter t ur trip. I really lve her. Eventually, we arrived at ur grandparents’ places, all fur f us and nt a single ne left behind.
It was the first time
nt nly… but als
nd in agreement set up ur tent an unfrgettable night bring lts f laughter t
把车开走放哨充满了令我们欣慰的是拒绝当旅行第一天临近我们准备离开的时候
be filled withas the first day f ur trip apprached the mment f ur departure arriveddrive ffplay lkutt ur great reliefturn dwn
点头同意一个难忘的夜晚搭起我们的帐篷给……带来许多欢乐
检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
◎ Obviusly, the tent was nwhere t be fund and Mm insisted n ging back t fetch it.◎ Thinking f the tent, Mm excitedly suggested that we g camping.◎ Cnsidering Mm’s enthusiasm, we all agreed.◎ It was a clearing in the wds by a small lake, where Dad culd catch sme fish fr dinner.◎ We had n truble setting up ur tent, but we were disappinted t find that Mm frgt t pack pillws.◎ Needless t say, we all wke up with a sre neck the next mrning.◎ That starry night, admiring the mn rising abve the distant muntain and accmpanied by the amusing stries f naughty David, we felt we’d had the mst enjyable camping trip.◎ We crssed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high muntains, and verlked deep valleys.◎ During the trip, Mm’s being absent-minded nt nly gt us int much truble, but als gave us many funny mments.◎ Hwever, it was hard t deny that thse incidents actually added laughter t ur jurney.◎ We all arrived at ur grandparents’ hme safe and sund.◎ This strange family trip wuld definitely be a cherished memry fr the rest f ur life.◎ There is n persn that can match her — my lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful mm.◎ It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. It was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
List varius expressins f “lk”!
Mrs Dursley was thin and blnde and had nearly twice the usual amunt f neck, which came in very useful as she spent s much f her time craning ver (伸长脖子看) garden fences, spying n(窥探 ) the neighbrs. ─Harry Ptter
Fern peered thrugh the dr(透过门缝窥视). ─Charltte’s Web
① Dad lked at me. Why nt camp t satisfy Mm?
② Dad lked at us, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers lked ut and greeted us warmly.
Dad __________________ with me. Why nt camp t satisfy Mm?
peep ut(朝外看)；give sb a wink(朝某人眨眼)； exchange a glance (交换眼色)
exchanged a glance
Dad _____________, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers ____________ and greeted us warmly.
gave us a wink
③ Just then an ideal campsite which nestled n the edge f a lake spread befre us.
② Dad gave us a wink, pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers peeped ut and greeted us warmly.
_______________, Dad pulled up beside a brightly-clred tent, frm where sme campers peeped ut and greeted us warmly.
Giving us a wink
Just then an ideal campsite ___________________________ spread befre us.
nestling n the edge f a lake
④ Mm let ut a scream f thrill, lcated a clearing and immediately guided us t pitch the tent.
⑤ At dusk, against the deep blue sky, we tgether with ther campers gathered arund, and exchanged yummy snacks in the cmpany f fire.
_________________________, Mm lcated a clearing and immediately guided us t pitch the tent.
At dusk, against the deep blue sky, we tgether with ther campers gathered arund, _______________________ in the cmpany f fire.
Letting ut a scream f thrill
exchanging yummy snacks
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