专题15 1月浙江卷(蜂鸟报恩)—高考英语读后续写历年真题解析(PPT课件)
展开历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in western Washingtn. I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years. A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying t escape. She was cvered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able t mve her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in. The brken windw glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me.When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes. I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings. Still, she made n attempt t fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve. I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away. Hvering(悬停), she apprached within six inches f my face. Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side. Then she flew quickly ut f sight.During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident. They prmised t fix the windw. As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering. She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne. Fr a mment, all were speechless. Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gd-bye.”注意:1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. .I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. .
梗概 故事讲述了主人公“我”发现一个废弃房子里面有一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了。“我”把蜂鸟救了出来。在“我”要离开时,这只蜂鸟停在了我的面前,似乎在和我告别。 主题:人与自然——讲述了人与动物之间的趣事,体现了人与自然和谐相处。 视角:第一人称
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
I went t a farm
I fund a trapped hummingbird and saved it
It came back t me want t say gdbye
I came back t the farm
The hummingbird appeared
When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes.
Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side.
She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne.
蜂鸟表现出类似人类的情感:感谢
野生鸟类盯着人类,发出叫声
Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gd-bye.”
主人公对蜂鸟行为进行猜测
话语:烹饪对蜂鸟的行为进行猜测
第一步 依据首句,构思框架
两段首句定一框,二框二首正能量。
第一段首句后的衔接句、第一段尾句 、第二段首句后的衔接句。
即第二段的尾句——能体现故事圆满结局的句子或故事给我们启示的句子。
(2) 写好三个衔接句
(3) 写好一个升华句
第二步 增加细节,展开续写
Para 1:A few weeks later, I went t the farm again
情节一: brken windw
When passing the familiar deserted milking huse where I last met my hummingbird, I instantly nticed the brken windw had been replaced as prmised.
情节二: thught abut the hummingbird
I culd nt help t fndly recall the lvely hummingbird that charmed everyne f us with its determinatin t bid farewell. What a cute and intelligent creature it was!
情节三: want t see the hummingbird again.
As a matter f fact, I secretly made a wish t see her nce again smehw and smewhere in this expeditin thugh I knew deep dwn in my heart it was an extravagant idea. Things went as planned and as usual, cheerfully but nt surprisingly.
Para 2:I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
主要预测: the hummingbird expressed her gratitude.
The amazing little bird with shcking memry used its unique way t express her gratitude t a human friend. Nature was s adrable and mysterius that we all felt awed and humble when faced with it.
A few weeks later, I visited the farm again. The same dilapidated huse, the same gigantic spider web, the same green blackberry path. "Will the hummingbird be the same? Will this lvely and humanistic creature be trapped in the web again? Nt likely, since the hle in the windw had been fixed." These questins and thughts ppped int my head like strands f spider thread. With smell f rasted fd wafting in the air, my friends and I chatted and laughed merrily arund the picnic table. It seemed the hummingbird was temprarily thrwn t the back f my mind. Sn, the sun began t set and it was time fr hme.
I was abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. It perched n a small twig just an inch befre me and studied me with the same sparkling and pleasant eyes. In an ecstasy f delight, I held ut my fingers fr it t rest and we cmmunicated with ur half-human, half-bird language. My teary friends were all deeply struck by the prfund bnd between a little bird and her saver. Were there magic pwer existing in this wrld, it must be the universal lve that surpassed beynd any species, as was the case with my sacred hummingbird and me.
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