13续写真题2017浙江卷6月骑马遇险课件PPT
展开读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday. Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later,
2017年浙江卷真题原文
it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase. Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh. At this mment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him._______________________________________________________A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived._______________________________________________________
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw did Paul and Beeky help Mac t fight against wlf.
Paul and Beeky ; Mac ; wlf
②Hw did they feel?
①Stping the car,what did they d?
③Hw did Mac feel?r What did Mac d?
④Hw did the wlf react?
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The tw cyclists jined them in fighting with the wlf.
tw cyclists
①Seeing the scene, what did they d? Hw did they feel?
③Hw did they wn finally? And hw did they feel?
②What did wlf d?
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
tw cyclists; Mac ; wlf
列大纲:两段12句法
思考:12句话中,有哪几句是固定内容?
列大纲:两段12句法
列大纲:两段12句法
The wlf disappeared.
Paul and Becky helped.
They fund the dangerus situatin
They all fught against wlf.
Paul and Becky felt nervus.
They apprached t the wlf bravely.
The wlf turned its head back.
Mac jumped ut f bike.
They jined t fight.
Mre and mre cars came.
Mre peple helped.
The wlf stepped back.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1)With nthing in the hand, they felt nervus and didn't dare t fight against the wlf.
招式1: with复合结构
with复合结构:with + n. + ding/dne/t d/介词短语/adj./adv.
e.g.:2)At the same time, the wlf als saw them and turned its head back, hwling angrily twards Paul and Becky.
招式2: 非谓语动词常用句式: ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:3) They fund the dangerus situatin, where three men circled the wlf.
招式3: 定语从句 “先行词n. + 关系代词/关系副词 + 定语从句 ”
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4)Mac then jumped ff the bicycle and was ready t fight against the wlf.5)Mac's friends als jumped ff their bicycles and jined the fight with the wlf.
招式4: 动作链(V1, V2 and V3)(V1 and V2) 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作,画面感十足
水到渠成 范文赏析
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Paul and Becky gt ut f the car immediately t give the help. With nthing in the hand, they felt nervus and didn't dare t fight against the wlf. Hwever, they still apprached t the wlf bravely. At the same time, the wlf als saw them and turned its head back, hwling angrily twards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped ff the bicycle and was ready t fight against the wlf. Then came the deadlck.
范文赏析
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They fund the dangerus situatin, where three men circled the wlf. Mac's friends als jumped ff their bicycles and jined the fight with the wlf. Mre and mre cars stpped. Sme drivers tk ut the sticks frm the cars, and sme tk ut the knives, even the guns twards the wlf. In the meanwhile, the wlf might feel the peple's threats arund, s it gave up with disappinted lk and began t step back slwly. Sn, it ran away ff the rad and disappeared in the distance.
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