14续写真题2017浙江卷11月健忘母亲课件PPT

这是一份14续写真题2017浙江卷11月健忘母亲课件PPT，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
A Vacatin with My Mther I had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because f my mther---lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
2017年浙江卷真题原文
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept: “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut(放哨) while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh…I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins(反对). If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drstep, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
读原文 划要素 填表格
I and David
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us._______________________________________________________We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. _______________________________________________________
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
We decided t use the tent.
I and David; Mm ; Dad
①thinking f the tent,what did mm d?
②Hw did we feel?r What did we d?
③What did dad d?
④What happened t shw mm’s kindness?
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The interesting and unfrgettable experience f this trip.
①Seeing the scenery, hw did we feel?
④Hw did we recall the experience?
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
We family: I and David; Mm ; Dad ; grandparents
②Arriving at grandparents’, what did we d?
③Arriving at grandparents’, what did they d?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
Mm wanted t camp.
We had fun at grandparents’
Mm gave him ur tent.
We all agreed.
we put up the tent.
A pr by liked ur tent.
What impressed me mst.
Her kindness
Her frgetfulness
She influenced me.
We prepared everything well.
But mm impressed me mst.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1） Thinking f this tent, Mm suggested that we g camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering.2） Cnsidering her enthusiasm, we all agreed.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:3） When the dr f ur car pened, Mm strmed ut instantly and urged us t put up the tent.
招式2： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3）（V1 and V2） 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4） And when we came back, Dad and Mm had already lain dwn the grass cmfrtably in frnt f the tent, talking merrily with a lcal by at ur age, wh kept glancing at this tent curiusly. 5）But what impressed me mst was that tent, which was frgtten deliberately by Mm.
招式3： 定语从句 “先行词n. + 关系代词/关系副词 + 定语从句 ”
e.g.:6）It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. 7）And it was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
招式4： 强调句 “It was ... that/wh ...”
水到渠成 范文赏析
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Thinking f this tent, Mm suggested that we g camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Cnsidering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the dr f ur car pened, Mm strmed ut instantly and urged us t put up the tent. David and I were asked t pick up sme branches t build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mm had already lain dwn the grass cmfrtably in frnt f the tent, talking merrily with a lcal by at ur age, wh kept glancing at this tent curiusly. Sn we learnt that the by in rags even didn’t have a hme t live in. Of curse, Mm “frgt” t take this tent with us again.
范文赏析
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. And we als had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me mst was that tent, which was frgtten deliberately by Mm. Thugh she did lve ging camping, she presented that pr by with this tent ut f sympathy. It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. And it was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving.
范文赏析