8续写真题2021浙江卷6月打工男孩课件PPT

这是一份8续写真题2021浙江卷6月打工男孩课件PPT，共22页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
My dad, Gerge, nly had an eighth grade educatin. A quiet man, he didn't understand my wrld f schl activities. Frm age 14, he wrked. And his dad, Albert, tk the mney my dad earned and used it t pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his wrld either: He was a livestck trucker, and I thught that I wuld surpass(超过) anything he had accmplished by the time I walked acrss the stage at high schl graduatin.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at hme shting baskets, hitting a baseball, r thrwing a ftball, preparing fr my future as a quarterback n a ftball team. In pr weather, I read abut sprts r practiced my trmbne(长号).The summer befre my eighth grade I was ne f a grup f bys that a neighbring farmer hired t wrk in his field. He explained ur basic task, the tractr fired up and we were ff, riding dwn the field lking fr weeds t
2021年浙江卷6月真题原文
spray with chemicals. After a shrt way, the farmer stpped and pinted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened ver and ver, but we sn learned t identify different grasses like cckleburs, lamb's-quarters, fxtails, and the king f weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring wrk, but I lked frward t the pay, even thugh I wasn't sure hw much it wuld amunt t.At hme, my dad said, "A jb's a big step t grwing up. I'm glad yu will be cntributing t the husehld." My dad's wrds made me realize that my earnings might nt be mine t d with as I wished.My labrs lasted abut tw weeks, and the farmer said there might be mre wrk, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was nt fair that I had t cntribute my mney.
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The pay arrived at last._______________________________________________________ After hearing what he had said, I felt embarrassed. _______________________________________________________
The pay arrived at last. After hearing what he had said, I felt embarrassed.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
①Hw did I feel after receiving the mney?
②Arriving hme, what did I d?
③What did he said t me?
This time I undertand Dad and am willing t share my mney.
③Hw did he feel? Hw did he react?
After hearing what he had said, I felt embarrassed.
① Hw did I feel?② What did I d?
What’s the ending?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
The pay arrived at last.. After hearing what he had said, I felt embarrassed.
列大纲：两段12句法
The pay arrived at last. After hearing what he had said, I felt embarrassed.
列大纲：两段12句法
I began t understand my father and learn frm him.
I was afraid and angry.
I wasn’t angry any mre.
He let me make the decisin.
My dad called me.
My heart sank.
I stepped unwillingly.
My dad didn’t take my mney.
I hugged him.
I nticed his grey hair.
I realized hw tired he was.
I regreted.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1> Knwing that he wuld talk abut my earnings, I pulled a lng face and intended t simply walk past him and slip back t my bedrm.2> Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expressin.3> Hwever, Dad slid the paycheck back int my hand, saying in a tender vice.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4> Reluctantly, I inched frward and submitted the paycheck.5> I stepped clser and hugged him tightly.
招式2： 动作链（V1 and V2）（V1, V2 and V3） 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
e.g.:6> Memries f his usual cry f pain n the neck came crwding in.
招式3：无灵主语 Memries f ... came crwding in. a fld f + （情绪类）n. seized/welled up/came ver sb.
水到渠成 范文赏析
When I brught my paycheck hme--it was$119--my dad wanted t talk t me.  Knwing that he wuld talk abut my earnings, I pulled a lng face and intended t simply walk past him and slip back t my bedrm. “Cme here, sn.” Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expressin. My heart sank. What I had been lking frward t—a dreamy new ftball utfit wuld finally give way t family expenses. Reluctantly, I inched frward and submitted the paycheck. Hwever, Dad slid the paycheck back int my hand, saying in a tender vice, “Yu've grwn up. Yu have every right t decide what t d with the mney.”
范文赏析
I was surprised that my dad allwed me t use the mney as I wished. My previus desperatin was immediately erased by great bills. I stepped clser and hugged him tightly. Just at that mment I nticed his grey hair and stiff neck. Memries f his usual cry f pain n the neck came crwding in. I realized hw much he had cntributed t the family thrugh his tiring wrk f being a trucker. Tears began t blur my visin, “Dad, thanks fr yur hard wrk these years. I shuldn’t have been s selfish and nt willing t cntribute my mney.” On that day, I began t understand Dad’s wrld and it seemed that he was als n the way int my wrld.
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