12续写真题2018浙江卷骑马迷路课件PPT

这是一份12续写真题2018浙江卷骑马迷路课件PPT，共24页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
2018年浙江卷真题原文
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
读原文 划要素 填表格
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. _______________________________________________________We had n idea where we were and it gt dark._______________________________________________________
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw did my hrse react? And what abut me?
I ; my dad ; my hrse
②Hw did I feel?What did I d?
①Seeing the rabbit,hw did my hrse react?
③Hw did my dad feel?What did he d?
④Hw did the hrse stp?
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
We were lst and Uncle Paul came t rescue us.
my dad and I
Uncle Paul
I ; my dad; Uncle Paul
①Lst, what did we d?
④Hw did we return the farm?
②What did Uncle Paul d?
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
Hw did we feel?
③Why did Uncle Paul cme?
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
We were safe and sund.
It scared my hrse.
Everything was strange.
But we fund we were lst.
My father wrried me a lt.
I was afraid,t.
The hrse stpped.
We felt relieved.
A faint vice came.
It was Uncle Paul.
He fund us.
He guessed we were lst.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1） Its abrupt appearance scared my hrse, making it run ff the track wildly.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:2）I spared n effrts t hld n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up, extremely wrried abut my safety.3）Relieved, we lked arund trying t find the track.
招式2： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4） S aimlessly did the frightened hrse run that we gt lst uncnsciusly.
招式3：“s ... that ...” 因果关系逻辑强，动作情绪全包含， 想更高级也容易，s提前变成倒装
e.g.:5）Nthing in sight was familiar and neither did we knw where the farm huse was.
招式4： 否定词置于句首，使用半倒装结构 ①“Nt nly + 半倒装, but als...” ②“Never/N/neither + + 半倒装”
e.g.:6）Just at the pint f desperatin, frm the distance came a faint vice.
招式5： 完全倒装 表示时间、地点、方位的介词或副词置于句首时，使用完全倒装 结构，即“谓语动词+主语”
水到渠成 范文赏析
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. Its abrupt appearance scared my hrse, making it run ff the track wildly. I spared n effrts t hld n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up, extremely wrried abut my safety. Frtunately, minutes later, the hrse stpped befre a river, ut f breath. Relieved, we lked arund trying t find the track. Hwever, it was nwhere t be fund. S aimlessly did the frightened hrse run that we gt lst uncnsciusly.
范文赏析
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. Nthing in sight was familiar and neither did we knw where the farm huse was. Just at the pint f desperatin, frm the distance came a faint vice. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I exclaimed excitedly. That we didn’t cme back fr dinner made him realize smething unusual might have happened. S my uncle went ut t lk fr us. Finally, we reached ur uncle’s farm huse safe and sund.
范文赏析