11续写真题2020浙江卷6月拍摄北极熊课件PPT

这是一份11续写真题2020浙江卷6月拍摄北极熊课件PPT，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal：t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada. Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread. The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
2020年浙江卷6月真题原文
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）. I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
读原文 划要素 填表格
Elli and I
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. _______________________________________________________At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The angry bear came back and hit the fence mre fiercely.
Elli and I ; the angry bear
①What did the bear d?
②Hw did we feel?③What did we d?
④hw did the bear react?
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
We were rescued and phtgraphed the bear n bard.
the angry bear
Elli and I
②what did the angry bear d?
①Seeing the helicpter, hw did we feel? what did we d?
③After being rescued, what did we d?
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
It was an unfrgettable experience.
It smashed the fence madly.
The helicpter threw a rpe t us.
The bear was nearing us.
We were terrified.
Elli fetched the garlic bread.
We threw the bread t it.
The bread used up.
We climbed it quickly.
We were rescued.
The bear headed fr ur camp.
I phted the bear.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）Anger verwhelming him , he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. 2）Suddenly, Elli dashed t the kitchen, shuting that she went t fetch the garlic bread. 3）At this nce-in-a-lifetime mment, I reached int my backpack and pulled ut the camera , phtgraphing that impressive scene.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4）Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear, my survival instinct vertk my desire t capture the perfect pht.
招式2：as引导倒装句，意为“虽然” 主+谓，xxx.
e.g.:5）With nthing t eat, the guy wildly banged again and shved the wden psts which were evidently cllapsing! 6）With this angry giant beast within a stne's thrw, I huddled with Elli tightly.
招式3： with复合结构常用句式：
with复合结构：with + n. + ding/dne/t d/介词/adj...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:7）Thrilled but relieved, we caught the rpe tightly and eventually landed n the helicpter safe and sund.
招式4： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
水到渠成 范文赏析
A few minutes later,the bear headed back t ur camp. Anger verwhelming him , he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. Much as I wanted t phtgraph the appraching bear, my survival instinct vertk my desire t capture the perfect pht. Suddenly, Elli dashed t the kitchen, shuting that she went t fetch the garlic bread. Then we threw the bread at the intruder a little bit at a time until it ran ut. With nthing t eat, the guy wildly banged again and shved the wden psts which were evidently cllapsing! With this angry giant beast within a stne's thrw , I huddled with Elli tightly. I culd hear nthing but the sund f ur hearts beating vilently in ur chests.
范文赏析
At that very mment,the helicpter arrived. The hvering vehicle swept away ur chking fear immediately. Out f the helicpter descended a rpe t pull us up. Thrilled but relieved, we caught the rpe tightly and eventually landed n the helicpter safe and sund. While verlking the bear frm high abve, I was amazed t spt this stubbrn guy had crushed the fence and headed tward ur camp fr the inviting garlic bread. At this nce-in-a-lifetime mment, I reached int my backpack and pulled ut the camera , phtgraphing that impressive scene.
范文赏析