人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲3-打听介绍 Unit3 Could you tell me where the restrooms are

主题：打听介绍

导读

本单元的主题是用英语谈论如何有礼貌地提出请求或打听信息.围绕本单元的主题及教材所给的语言材料,同学们将学会灵活运用宾语从句等句式表达请求或给予别人帮助,还可以拓展主题,学会介绍某地或某个特定的生活环境等.

可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如 A consultation letter, An invitation to the Dragon Boat Festival, Asking for information 等.

题目回放

假如你叫李华,是新华中学的九年级学生.今年暑假你想参加北京英语夏令营(the Beijing English Summer Camp).请你自拟标题,用英语写封信向负责人林老师咨询一些信息.

内容包括：

1.介绍自己的一些基本信息,如姓名、英语能力等；

2.礼貌地询问信息,如时间、准备、食宿、活动、英语学习等；

3.表示感谢.

写作要求：

1.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等信息；

2.词数90左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：询问信息,属于说明文.

2审内容：自己的个人情况介绍；用礼貌用语咨询信息；表达谢意.

3审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：以自我介绍的形式引出写作话题,即咨询信息.

中间：以礼貌的询问方式咨询相关信息.

结尾：以表达感谢结束.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: I am ... I am interested in ... I would like to ...

2.The body: Could you tell me ...? I also want to know ...

3. Last paragraph: Thank you for helping me, and I am looking forward to your reply.

范本淬炼

A

A consultation letter

Dear Mr. Lin,

I am Li Hua, a 9th-grader from Xinhua Middle School. I love English, and I want to improve my English. I would like to go to Beijing for the English Summer Camp. I am writing ① to know more information about it.

I ② would like to know when the summer camp will begin, how long it will last, what the participants will do, and where they will stay. What is more, please let me know the ③ accommodation costs, and the living conditions of the hotel.

Thank you very much for your help. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点点评

1.本文用三段布局段落.第一段引出话题,中间段展开咨询,第三段表达谢意.段落设计合理,层次分明.

2.文章恰当地运用了礼貌用语和宾语从句等句式,读起来顺畅、自然.

3.文章用语较为丰富,如使用了9th-grader, improve, participant, accommodation costs, living conditions,提升了文章档次.

B

A consultation letter

Dear Mr. Lin,

My name is Li Hua, and I am a 9th-grade student from Xinhua Middle School. I ① am interested in language learning, and I hope to improve my English. There fore, I would like to go to Beijing for the English Summer Camp. I wonder ② if you can give me some information about it.

First, please tell me when the summer camp will start, how long it will last, what the ③ participants need to prepare before leaving home, what they will do during the summer camp, and where they will stay. Besides, I would like to know the ④ living conditions of the hotel. Moreover, I want to know whether ⑤ it is convenient to go shopping near the hotel.

Thank you very much for your help. I am expecting your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

亮点点评

1.文章段落布局合理,要点齐全,内容完整.主体段落用形式多样并且规范的礼貌用语,恰当完成了各项信息的咨询.

2.文中句式多样,宾语从句等句式运用准确到位.

3.上下文衔接语运用得当,使用了first, besides, moreover 等词,使文章衔接自然.

4.文章语言丰富,使用了 improve, living conditions, convenient等用语,增强了语言感染力.整体上看,比起上一篇文章,本文句式、用词更为丰富.

佳作赏析

A

Asking for a help

Dear David,

How are you ① getting along these days?

I am writing to tell you ② that my aunt Lucy is going to New York City for a Chinese silk exhibition. ③ As it is her first time to visit your city and she knows little about it, I would like you to meet her at the airport.

My aunt's flight number is CA186,and she will arrive at 11 am on August 6. She is tall with short black hair, and she will wear a blue silk dress.

④ Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Da Ming

亮点点评

1.本文以写信的方式表达了请求帮助的信息.文章布局合理,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段问候,第二段和第三段展开话题,第四段表达对回复的期待.

2.本文句子之间衔接恰当,使用了as, and等简单而准确的衔接语.

B

An invitation to the Dragon Boat Festival

Dear David,

I am writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Week,① which will be held in our school next Thursday.

② Focusing on the theme of the Dragon Boat Festival, we will let the participants experience the charm of traditional Chinese culture. The ③ major activities are as follows.

First, we will make zongzi, a dumpling ④ shaped like a tiny pyramid and wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves, in the school hall from 2 pm to 3 pm. Then, we will take a bus together to a dragon boat race at 3:10 pm. Finally yet importantly, we would like to invite you to make a speech on the closing ceremony at 5 pm. ⑤ I wonder if you would like to come.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点点评

1.本文以写信的方式展开,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段交代写信目的,第二段和第三段分别介绍邀请活动的目的和内容,第四段表达对回复的期待.

2.本文句式多样,使用了定语从句、现在分词充当状语、同位语、过去分词充当后置定语等.

3.本文在词汇运用方面也表现不错,如focus on, participant, make a speech, closing ceremony 等运用得当.

C

Asking for information

Dear sir or madam,

My name is Li Hua. I am taking a language ① training at Oxford University. I plan to have a trip to London this Sunday. ② Luckily, I notice an advertisement on a tour around London on the website, and I am writing ③ for further information.

First, ④ I would like to know the price for students, and I wonder if it includes the entrance fee and the lunch. Second, I want to know ⑤ whether those visiting the Buckingham Palace have time for shopping. Finally, will you

please tell me ⑥ when the tour of London will be finished?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点点评

1.本文内容是以写信为形式的咨询.文章整体结构清晰,富有逻辑.

2.主体段落有两段,分别表达了咨询的缘由和内容,表述清晰.

3.写作中运用了宾语从句、现在分词充当后置定语等句式,同时运用了多种时态,如一般现在时和现在进行时等.

4.写作中的用词也有亮点,如 take a language training, luckily, further, include 等.

素材宝库

1.好词妙语

look forward to sb.'s coming 期盼着某人的到来

turn right at the second crossing 在第二个路口右转

not only because of ... but also because of ... 不仅因为······而且因为······

walk straight down the street 沿着这条街道直走

see a hospital on your left 在你左边看到一家医院

be interested in language learning 对语言学习感兴趣

2.提分佳句

You won't miss it.

你不会错过的.

I am looking forward to your coming.

我期盼着你的到来.

I am wondering if I can get there by bus.

我不知道是否能乘公交车到达那里.

Could you tell me something about it?

你能告诉我相关情况吗?

Go down the street, and then turn right at the second crossing.

沿着这条街道走,接下来在第二个路口右转.

I love my hometown, not only because of her beauty, but also because of the lovely people here.

我热爱我的家乡,不仅因为她的美丽,而且因为这里可爱的人们.

Walk straight down the street, and soon you will see a hospital on your left.

沿着这条街道直走,很快你就会在你的左边看到一家医院.

实战练笔

每个人都生活在一个特定环境中.请以 What I like about where I live为题,并根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文描述你生活的环境.

写作要点：

1.你生活在什么样的环境中；

2.你喜欢这个环境的哪些方面；

3.你对这个环境有何期待.

写作要求：

1.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名；

2.词数90左右.

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范文：

What I like about where I live

I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province, China.

In the city, stores and tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Therefore, life is very convenient here. What is more, people here are hardworking and friendly. That is what I like most about the city.

Frankly speaking, the city has its own problems. Air pollution is the biggest problem. Luckily, something has been done to control the pollution.

Hopefully, the air in the city will become fresher, and the city will become more livable.