人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲5-介绍物品 Unit5 where are the shirts made of

主题：介绍物品

导读

本单元基于制作生活中的常见物品及中国传统文化中的剪纸及陶泥等,引领同学们试着用英语描述某种物品的材质、产地、用途等.同学们可以试着用英语介绍生活中所喜爱的某样物品,所喜爱的某种运动,时下科技产品如学习软件和网购软件等的特征与功能,某一地点如家乡或名胜古迹的地理位置、历史、气候、环境、特色食品以及值得参观的理由等.

可适用于本单元的主题有很多,如The Chinese knot, My favorite sport, My hometown 等.

题目回放

人们常说,生命在于运动.的确,运动不仅让我们身体健康,而且使我们的生活充满活力和幸福.请自拟标题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文,介绍一下生活中常见的运动和你的看法.

审题指引

1 审体裁：说明文,可夹叙夹议.

2 审内容：介绍生活中的运动并提出自己的看法.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：点明人们喜爱的运动.

中间：主体段落介绍一种或两种运动形式及有关细节.

结尾：总结并提出自己的看法.

段落素描

1.First paragraph: Sports are enjoyed by...

2. The body: The most common sport is ... It is so popular that ...Another sport worth mentioning is ...,which...

3.Last paragraph: Sports can make us ...Let's ...

范本淬炼

A

Football, a popular sport

Sports ① are enjoyed by a great many people. When we talk about sports, we ② cannot but mention

Football, which helps build up the body and develop friendship, is ③ popular with the people throughout the world, and has almost become a part of their life. Every day, football matches are going on here and there around the world. ④ If we read a newspaper, turn on the TV, or ⑤ surf the Internet, we will find information about football easily. People ⑥ enjoy playing football and watching football matches after work. When their favorite team wins, they will ⑦ cheer for it; when it fails, they will feel sad.

As we can see, football is around us in our daily life. Let's ⑧ enjoy the pleasure of football.

亮点点评

1.文章结构合理,层次分明.开篇直接点题,中间主体段落集中说明主题,结尾再次扣题并表达感想.

2.文中时态运用灵活准确,而且句式富于变化,恰当运用了时间状语从句、非限制性定语从句、条件状语从句等从句.

3.作者注意使用了较为丰富的词汇和短语,如 cannot but mention, build up the body, develop friendship, cheer for, pleasure 等.

B

Sports

Almost all people like sports,① from which they gain different kinds of pleasure.

Basketball ② is believed to be a favorite sport of most people, for it ③ strengthens the body and attracts spectators with the clever skills of passing and catching the ball. Football is also one of people's favorite sports. As it helps ④ build up the body and develop friendship, it is welcomed by people across the globe, and has almost become a part of their life. Another ⑤ sport worth mentioning is table tennis, which exercises the body and the mind, and ⑥ is favored by almost all people worldwide, especially the Chinese people.

In all, sports ⑦ make us strong and bring us happiness. Let's play sports right now!

亮点点评

1.这篇作文紧扣主题,从不同角度描写了篮球、足球、乒乓球这些常见的体育运动,内容完整,段落清晰.

2.句式丰富多变,如使用了定语从句、被动句、并列句、状语从句等；多种句式交替使用,优于二类文.

3.句子衔接自然,如使用 for, as, and, in all 等衔接语,使文章前后衔接紧密,表达流畅.

4.词语运用丰富,尤其是几个关键动词,如 gain, strengthen, attract, make, bring等,增强了文章感染力.

佳作赏析

A

A Chinese knot

A Chinese knot, a knot woven of a single cord or rope, ① dates back to ancient times, when Chinese ancestors used it to record events or do other things.

Usually ② shaped like a diamond, a Chinese knot is made of red silk, cloth, or other materials. ③ As an elegant kind of handiwork, it is used as a home decoration, a gift for special occasions, and even an adornment on clothes. One of ④ the symbols of traditional Chinese culture, a Chinese knot stands for friendship, love, happiness and good luck, and⑤ expresses the Chinese people's warmest regards, best wishes and finest ideals.

亮点点评

1.文章分别描写了中国结的外观、材料、用途及象征意义,要点齐全,内容完整,段落清晰.

2.多次恰当使用同位语,并使用when引导的定语从句和过去分词等多种结构,提升了文章档次.

3.大量使用亮点词汇和短语,如：a knot woven of ...,single cord, date back to ancient times, ancestor, record events, shaped like a diamond, elegant, handiwork, decoration, special occasion, adornment, stand for等,增强了文章的生动性.

B

The advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones

No doubt, mobile phones ① play an important role in our daily life, but in my mind they have both advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, mobile phones make it convenient for people to ② keep in touch with each other wherever they are. Second, we can send messages with mobile phones. Third, we can use them to play games, take photos, listen to music, ③ and so on.

However, mobile phones have their disadvantages. ④ It does harm to our eyesight to spend too much time on mobile phones. Moreover, using them in public ⑤ is likely to affect others.

In all, we are supposed to ⑥ make good use of the convenience that mobile phones bring to us, and try to avoid the side effects.

亮点点评

1.文章观点明确,框架设计合理,层次分明.

2.文中用 no doubt 和 but in my mind 引出主题,用 first of all 和 however分别展开叙述,最后用in all引出自己的观点.这些衔接语使文章语句通顺,逻辑清晰,环环相扣.

3.文章句式多样,如用but引导并列句,用it充当形式宾语和形式主语,用that 引导定语从句等.

4.作者注意运用丰富的词汇、短语,如 play an important role in, convenient, keep in touch with, wherever, send messages, do harm to, likely, affect, make good use of, avoid, side effect等,使文章更加生动.

C

Some information about the UK

The United Kingdom (UK) is an island country ① located in Europe. One of the nearest countries to it, France, is over 30 miles away. The capital city of the UK is London, ② which lies in the southeast of England. It is a city with a long history.

The weather in the UK is changeable. That is ③ why people there often talk about the weather when they meet. Indeed, it is interesting and amazing to experience four seasons in one day in some places of the country.

There are ④ plenty of places of interest in the UK. Big Ben, the Buckingham Palace, and London Bridge are ⑤ attractive places to visit.

亮点点评

1.本文从英国所处地理位置、气候以及名胜古迹等多方面进行描述.整篇文章逻辑严谨,层次感强,内容丰富.

2.句式简洁,定语从句、表语从句、it充当形式主语等多种句式避免了句式过于单一.

3.文中用语丰富,如使用了 located in, a city with a long history, changeable等,增强了文章的感染力.

素材宝库

1.好词妙语

be likely to do sth.有可能做某事

make proper use of 正确利用

remind sb. of sth.使某人想起某事

sweet memories 美好的回忆

date back to ancient times 追溯到古代

shaped like a diamond 形状像钻石

with the development of society 随着社会的发展

very popular in our daily life 在我们的生活中非常流行

obviously 显然

people throughout the world 世界各地的人们

play a vital role 扮演着重要角色

enjoy the widest popularity in China 在中国享有最广泛的知名度

plenty of places of interest 很多名胜古迹

2.提分佳句

When we talk about..., we cannot but mention ... first.

当我们谈到··.··时,我们不能不首先提到··...·

No doubt,...plays a significant role in our daily life.

毫无疑问,···.在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用.

Reading makes a ful1 man.

阅读使人充实.

A good book is like a good friend.

好书如挚友.

Doing is better than saying.

与其挂在嘴上,不如落实在行动上.(行动胜于言语.)

We should make proper use of shopping online.

我们应该正确利用网上购物.

Whenever I see it, it reminds me of my happy childhood.

每当我看到它,它都使我想起我幸福的童年.

I have kept it for many years, and it gives me many sweet memories.

我保留着它已经很多年了,它总是带给我很多美好的回忆.

With the development of society, shopping online is quite popular in our daily life.

随着社会的发展,网上购物在我们的生活中非常流行.

Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the widest popularity in China.

显然,中国红在中国扮演着重要的角色,享有最广泛的知名度.

Shaped like a ball, it is made of silk, cloth, or other materials.

它的形状如同一个球,是由丝、布或其他材料做成的.

实战练笔

现在,越来越多的学习软件帮助同学们高效学习.请自拟标题,根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文,介绍一款你喜欢的学习软件.

写作要求：

1.你喜欢的软件及你喜欢它的原因；

2.这款软件的优缺点；

3.词数90左右.

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范文：

My favorite study app

My favorite study app is the one with an interesting name Little Bee. Thanks to it, my math has improved a lot.

Different from ordinary online apps, Little Bee has no real teachers. Instead, the app uses a number of cartoon videos to explain math, which makes math interesting and enjoyable. What is more, if I find any difficulty understanding some math problems, I can watch the cartoon videos again until I understand them.

Every coin has two sides. Though the study app is nice, it still has some disadvantages. For example, it does not offer enough exercises, and it will do harm to my eyes if I spend too much time on it.