人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲1-学习方法 Unit1How can we become good learners

主题：学习方法

导读

本单元的主题是用英语谈论如何学习和如何学会学习.同学们可通过教材所提供的听力对话和阅读材料提炼句式,进而用于介绍某一学科的学习方法和心得.围绕学会学习的主题,可以介绍学习中遇到的困难及解决办法,分享英语学习的方法及其优势,发表对自主学习、合作探究等学习方式的看法.

可适用于本单元的主题有很多,如How I learn English, How to learn math, Advice on how to reduce learning pressure 等.

题目回放

在学习英语的过程中你一定有很多心得体会.请以How I learn English为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习方法和建议.

写作要求：

1.最少提出三种你学习英语的方法或建议；

2.语句通顺流畅；

3.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

4.词数90左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：介绍说明个人的学习方法和体会,属于说明文.

2 审内容：从三个方面介绍自己的学习方法.

3 审时态：主体时态为一般现在时.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：从谈论英语学习重要性引出英语学习方法的话题.

中间：中间主体内容分为三段,每段分别表述不同的英语学习方法.

结尾：总结全文.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: It is important to learn English in proper ways. I would like to share some of my ideas on how to learn English well.

(It is true that ... Here are some suggestions...)

2.The body :First...Second...

3. Last paragraph: All in all, if you put your heart into English learning, you will...

范本淬炼

A

How I learn English

① It is important to learn English in proper ways. I would like to share some of my ideas on how to learn English well.

First, it is a good way ② to learn English by reading aloud every day. ③ The more you practice, the better you will learn. Second, you can learn English by watching English movies and listening to English songs. These methods will ④ stimulate your interest in English learning, and help you ⑤ acquire more knowledge about English language and culture. Last but not least, you can ask your English teacher for help if you ⑥ find any difficulty in learning English.

All in all, if you ⑦ put your heart into English learning, you will certainly learn it well.

亮点点评

1.这篇作文能紧扣主题展开,层次分明,逻辑清晰.第一段点明主题,中间一段集中介绍如何学好英语,最后一段归纳总结.整篇文章内容充实,要点齐全.

2.衔接词运用适当,使用了first, second, last but not least 等连接前后句,语句衔接自然.

3.文章语言丰富,如使用了 in proper ways, stimulate sb.'s interest in, acquire knowledge ,language and culture, find difficulty in, put sb.'s heart into等,提升了文章的档次.

B

How I learn English

We cannot learn English well ① without proper ways. Here are some suggestions on how to learn English well.

② First and foremost, I think it a good way to read English aloud every day. ③I believe that the more you practice reading, the better you will learn. Second, when you find difficulty in learning English, do not ④ hesitate to seek help from your English teacher, ⑤ who will be glad to offer help. Most importantly, to stimulate ⑥ your interest in English learning, you can try to find some interesting methods, ⑦ such as watching English movies, and

listening to English songs.

Hopefully, the above advice will be helpful to you.

亮点点评

1.这篇作文紧扣主题,采用“三段式”框架,清晰表达了文章主题.首段引出主题,中间主体段落集中说明如何学英语这一主题,尾段总结.

2.句子和句子间的衔接自然恰当,使用了 first and foremost, second, most importantly 等衔接词,使得文章衔接紧密,逻辑性强.

3.文章句式多样,采用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等,增强了文章的可读性.

4.比起上一篇作文,该作文用语更为丰富,如使用了 hesitate, seek help from, stimulate one's interest in等,提升了作文的语言表现力.

佳作赏析

A

Advice on how to learn English

As we know, English ① is widely used in the world, and it is important for us to learn it well. Now let me ② give you some advice on how to learn English.

First,③ go over what we have learned before, take notes in class, and review them after class. Second, try to talk with your classmates in English ④ as often as possible, and do not be afraid of making mistakes when you are speaking English. Third, read ⑤ English materials and keep an English diary every day.

I am sure that you will ⑥ make progress if you follow the above advice.

亮点点评

1.文章布局合理,段落清晰,集中叙述了提出英语学习建议这一主题.

2.用表顺序的first, second, third等衔接词,自然、顺畅衔接句子.

3.句式较为丰富,恰当运用了宾语从句、状语从句等句式.

4.英语短语的使用,也为本文添彩,如 go over, be afraid of, make progress 等.

B

Advice on how to reduce learning pressure

As① ninth-graders, we spend much time studying our lessons and preparing for tests. Here is some advice on how to reduce our learning pressure.

First, we can listen to our favorite music ② before going to sleep at night. Second, we can take exercise in our spare time ③ to rest our brains and eyes. Finally, we can talk about our difficulties or worries in our studies with our parents or friends.

④ I hope that the above advice will be helpful to Grade 9 students.

亮点点评

1.本文围绕减轻学习压力这个主题,分段叙述,逻辑清晰.

2.文中动名词、动词不定式等运用恰当,语句通顺流畅.

3.衔接词 first, second, finally等使用恰当,语句过渡自然.

C

Why do we study?

As students, we go to school every day, but ① have you ever thought about why we study? In my opinion, we study for the following reasons.

First, we can become knowledgeable through our studies at school,② which will enable us to make wiser decisions and act more effectively. Second, by means of studying we can ③ broaden our horizons and know more about the world. Third, we study ④ to keep pace with the rapidly changing world; otherwise, we will ⑤ lag behind in the development of the world.

In short, studying is an important way for us to improve ourselves.

亮点点评

1.主题鲜明,段落清晰,主次分明.主体段落详细说明了学习的益处.

2.定语从句、动词不定式、动名词等的运用,使这篇作文句式丰富多样.

3.衔接词 first, second, third等运用得当,段落衔接自然.

素材宝库

1.好词妙语

first and foremost首先也是最重要的

acquire more knowledge 获取更多知识

give sb. some advice on 针对······给某人提些建议

a lifelong journey 终生的旅行

It is well known that...众所周知·.....

depend on learning habits 取决于学习习惯

make use of 使用

have a better understanding of ...更好地理解·.

broaden our horizons 开阔我们的视野

2.提分佳句

Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧.

Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

世上无难事,只怕有心人.

The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you will make.

你说得越多,犯的错误就越少.

Learning is a lifelong journey.

学习是终生的旅行.

It is well known that success cannot be achieved overnight.

众所周知,成功不能一蹴而就.

Only by reading books can we understand its secrets.

只有通过读书我们才能理解它的奥秘.

Whether you can learn it well depends on your learning habits.

你是否能够学好它取决于你的学习习惯.

The best way to learn English well is to use it all the time.

学好英语最好的方法就是一直使用它.

A group discussion helps me have a better understanding of what I have learned.

小组讨论有助于我更好地理解我所学的东西.

实战练笔

假如你是李华,你的美国好友Lucy对中文感兴趣,发邮件向你请教学习中文的方法.请你自拟标题,回复信息,就如何学好中文发表你的看法.

写作要求：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

2.词数90左右.

Advice on how to learn Chinese well

Dear Lucy,

I am very glad to receive your email. Since you are interested in learning Chinese, I would like to give you some advice on how to learn it well.

First, it is helpful to read Chinese newspapers and magazines. In this way, your reading ability will be improved. Besides, listening to your favorite Chinese songs is an effective way to improve your listening. Moreover, try to speak Chinese as much as possible, and do not be afraid of making mistakes. Finally, keeping a diary in Chinese is a good way to improve your writing.

Hopefully, the above advice will help you learn Chinese well.

Yours,

Li H