高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 6 At one with nature获奖ppt课件

Period Five　Writing—Writing a summary

 本单元的写作任务是写摘要。主要包括以下方面：

 摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述。它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题。写摘要主要包括三个步骤：1.阅读；2.写作；3.修改成文。

第一步：阅读

 认真阅读给定的原文材料。如果一遍不能理解，就多读两遍。阅读次数越多，你对原文的理解就越深刻。

第二步：动手写作

 摘要应全部用自己的话完成，不要引用原文语句，必须全面、清晰地表明原文信息。

第三步：修改成文

 草稿拟好以后，对其进行修改。首先，与原文比较看是否把所有重要的观点都概括了，摘要中的观点是否与原文中的完全一致。其次，如果摘要中出现了不必要的词汇、短语或长句子，将其删除。再次，检查拼写、语法和标点符号的错误。最后，保持语言简单明了。

1.This article/passage mainly tells (a story) about...

2.This passage mainly deals with/discusses/explores...

3.This article focuses on the topics of...

4.This essay presents knowledge that...

5.This paper provides/gives an overview of...

6.In this passage (about...)，the author...

7.The author began the essay/passage by telling/presenting...

8.First/Firstly/In the beginning/In the first part，the author argues/explains/mentions/states/points out (that)...

9.Secondly/Next/Further on/Then/In the next part/In the main part，the author goes on with...

10.Finally/As a conclusion，the author concludes/adds/stresses that...

11.Finally，the author summarizes that...

 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

It’s the first day of school and you have to find the perfect clothes to make a good impression.Lucky for me，I don’t have this problem：my private school requires I wear a uniform.Some may think this is not a good idea，but I think it is very positive.

In school，one of the most important things is your style.The more you have，the more popular you will probably be.With uniforms，there’s no discrimination(歧视) because of what you’re wearing.Everyone is united under the same style.Clothing often reflects who you are.In most schools，there are groups of students who dress alike.You may even avoid a particular person because of what they are wearing.Uniforms require students to get to know each other by finding out who they really are.

There are many styles of clothing，some appropriate(合适的) for school and others not.Peers and the media pressure us to dress and look a certain way.Some clothing contains logos(标志) promoting drugs，alcohol or even violence.Since some students want to fit in and be cool，they tend to wear this type of clothing.In most school systems，however，it is not allowed.Uniforms help remove these problems.All students look similar.They all fit in.There are no distractions(使人分心的事物).Uniforms allow students to concentrate on learning instead of what they are wearing.

Money also plays a big part in the clothing we wear.Not all styles are affordable.Some students may even feel pressured to steal to get the right clothing.Although uniforms are initially expensive，they can be worn for years，making them cost less than regular clothes.I believe uniforms help unite us in a common goal：to do well in school.They are a symbol of our unity.They make it clear to everyone that we are more than just our clothes：we are all individuals.

审题

本文的要求是写一篇摘要，属于说明文范畴，写作时要注意：

1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文的摘要，结构应该为“总—分”模式。

2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。

3.主体人称：以第三人称为主。

谋篇

要点1：Para 1.主旨句(穿校服有好处)

要点2：Para 2.主旨句(穿校服有助于消除歧视，认识自己)

要点3：Para 3.主旨句(穿校服能让学生关注自己的学习而不是穿着)

要点4：Para 4.主旨句(穿校服经济实惠，还能让学生牢记学习目标)

必备词汇

1.益处多多of great benefit

2.有助于contribute to

3.去除；消除get rid of

4.显示；揭示reveal

5.避免avoid

6.专注于focus on

7.经受；承受withstand

8.提醒某人某事remind sb.of sth.

关键句式

1.我认为穿校服有很多好处。

I think wearing school uniforms has many benefits.

2.尽管有些人认为穿校服有一些负面效应，我还是强烈支持穿校服的。

Although some people consider school uniforms have some negative effects，I am strongly for wearing uniforms.

3.穿校服不但可以消除歧视，还可以展示学生的本性。

Wearing school uniforms can not only help to get rid of discrimination，but it can also show the true nature of students.

4.校服很耐穿，能为学生节约一大笔钱。

School uniforms withstand wear and tear，so they can save a lot of money for students.

句式升级

1.用“be of＋名词”结构改写句1。

As far as I am concerned，wearing school uniforms is of great benefit.

2.用as引导的倒装句改写句2。

Negative as some people consider school uniforms，I am strongly for wearing uniforms.

3.用not only...，but also...的倒装句式改写句3。

Not only do school uniforms contribute to getting rid of discrimination，but also reveal the true nature of students.

4.用现在分词短语作结果状语改写句4。

School uniforms withstand wear and tear，thus saving a fortune for students.

为使各要点之间完整连贯，可利用衔接过渡词汇firstly，secondly，lastly，to begin with，moreover等，连接成一篇60词左右的摘要。

参考范文1

 As far as I’m concerned，wearing school uniforms is of great benefit.Firstly，not only do school uniforms contribute to getting rid of discrimination，but also reveal the true nature of students.Secondly，uniforms benefit students by avoiding some inappropriate clothing styles，and help them focus on learning instead of fashion.Lastly，wearing uniforms saves students quite a large sum of money and also reminds them of their common goal in school.

参考范文2

 Negative as some people consider school uniforms，I’m strongly for wearing uniforms.To begin with，uniforms make prejudice impossible and encourage students to judge people by their characteristics.Moreover，getting rid of the negative influences of improper clothes，uniforms contribute to fixing students’ attention on learning.Lastly，school uniforms withstand wear and tear，thus saving a fortune for students.