英语必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life课时训练

同步练习

Part V Writing

妙笔生花

　 假设你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

　　1. 到达时间；

　　2. 合适的礼物；

　　3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

　   2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻很关键

一、审题

1. 确定体裁：应用文。

2. 确定人称：主要人称为第一、二人称。

3. 确定时态：以一般现在时为主。

二、构思

第一段：到达的时间（提前五分钟）。

第二段：合适的礼物；练习用筷子。

第三段：祝愿。

步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全

1. _______________________邀请

2. _______________________至于

3. _______________________注意……

4. _______________________对……谨慎

5. _______________________建议某人做

6. _______________________极有价值

7. _______________________提前

步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现

1. 你的中国朋友邀请你到他家做客。（主谓复合宾语结构）

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2. 没有太多你需要注意的地方。（there be结构）

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3. 我强烈建议你早到五分钟。（主谓复合宾语结构）

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4. 它不一定是很贵重的东西。（be of + n.）

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5. 你最好提前练习使用筷子。（主谓宾结构）

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6. 提前让他们知道你需要叉子或勺子。（祈使句）

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步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点

1. 把第1句变成被动语态

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2. 用I don’t think作主句把第2句变成含宾语从句的复合句

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3. 把第3句变成含宾语从句的复合句

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4. 把第5句和第6句用or合并成一个并列句

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步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇（可能会用到衔接词as for，however，but等）

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Part V Writing

参考答案

步骤二

1. invite  2. as for    3. pay attention to  4. be cautious about   5. advise sb. to do

6. of great value  7. in advance

步骤三

1. Your Chinese friend invites you to dinner at his house.

2. There isn’t much for you to pay attention to.

3. I strongly advise you to arrive 5 minutes earlier.

4. It doesn’t have to be something of great value.

5. You’d better practise using chopsticks in advance.

6. Let them know ahead of time that you need a fork or a spoon.

步骤四

1. I’m glad to hear you are invited to dinner at your Chinese friend’s house.

2. I don’t think there is much for you to pay attention to.

3. I strongly advise that you should arrive 5 minutes earlier.

4. You’d better practise using chopsticks in advance or let them know ahead of time that you need a fork or a spoon.

步骤五

Dear Terry，

　　I’m glad to hear you are invited to dinner at your Chinese friend’s house. It’s a good chance for you to know more about Chinese culture. As for this，I don’t think there is much for you to pay attention to. However，I do have a few suggestions for you. Since some people are very cautious about time，I strongly advise that you should arrive 5 minutes earlier.

　　You may take a gift with you，but it doesn’t have to be something of great value. And you’d better practise using chopsticks in advance or let them know ahead of time that you need a fork or a spoon.

　　All the best.

 Yours，

Li Hua