人教版 (2019)必修 第二册Unit 4 History and traditions优秀精练

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Part V Writing

妙笔生花

读后续写

　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A Vacation with My Mother

　　I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet， yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.

　　My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the  first day of our trip approached，David，my eight-year-old brother，and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later  after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.

　　David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept：“You stand outside the door and play lookout（放哨） while I go，and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind：“Honey，where are the kids?” “What?! Oh，Gosh... I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren’t about to take any chances.

　　On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections（反对）. If a strange family showed up on her front  doorstep，Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

　　The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.___________________________

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. __________________________

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　　步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键

　　审语篇类型：记叙文

　　审时态：一般过去时

　　审前文大意以及要点

　　who：Mom，Dad，David and I

　　when：when I was eleven

　　where：to Colorado and North Dakota

　　what：one strange family trip

　　why：to spend a few weeks driving to those states to visit my two sets of grandparents and seeing all the sights along the way

　　前文概要

　　第一段：童年有趣，总是充满惊喜和欢乐，皆因母亲可爱又健忘。

　　第二段：准备出游，万事俱备，但出发后又返回家中，因为母亲忘了钱包和旅行支票。

　　第三段：兄弟俩对母亲的粗心大意可谓是心有余悸，生怕母亲把他们落在加油站的卫生间里独自上路，以至于上卫生间要轮流“放哨”。

　　第四段：母亲是善良的，并且认为所有人都和自己一样善良，所以在找不到有空房的旅馆时，母亲才提议去别人的院子里搭帐篷。兄弟俩很紧张，还好父亲否决了这个提议。最终一家人还是住进了旅馆。

　　步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节

　　1. 第一段所给首句：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.

　　本段开头与前文衔接不太自然，却也提供了更广阔的想象空间。既然记起了帐篷，那么可以围绕帐篷展开段落，可以体现母亲的“健忘”，也可突出母亲的“善良”，落脚在一些比较有趣的事上，与第一段中的surprises and amusements呼应。

　　2.第二段所给首句：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.

  与前文“意外不断”不同，本段画风突变，转而写风景，续写可往心情愉悦的方面写。此处可以用一些描述景色、环境的表达来烘托氛围，最终可把故事的落脚点放在“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“母亲的趣事”等方面。

　　步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节

　　话题激活词汇

　　情感：happy，glad，wonderful，terrific，great

　　动作：laugh，smile

　　交通、旅行：drive，pull over，set the brake，set out，set off，trip，journey

　　环境：scenery，mountain，range，valley，river，lake，forest，sun，set，wind，blow

　　句式翻译

　　1. 我们离开旅馆半小时了，这时我们想起把帐篷落在旅馆了。（be away from；leave behind）

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  2. 爸爸建议我们买个新的，而妈妈坚持我们回去拿。（用but连接并列句）

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  3. 妈妈心不在焉，因此我们不得不一次次回去。（用so连接并列句）

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　　4. 我和戴维帮助爸爸搭帐篷，妈妈在忙着准备晚饭。（and连接的并列句）

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　　5. 我们坐在营火周围，有说有笑。（when引导时间状语从句）

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步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级

　　1. 用when升级第1句

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　　2. 用动词-ing形式升级第2句___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　3. 用虚拟语气升级第3句

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　　4. 用while升级第4句 ___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　5. 用动词-ing形式升级第5句

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步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，认真誊写并仔细检查

　The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.___________________________

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. __________________________

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Part V Writing

参考答案

步骤三

1. We were half an hour away from the hotel and at that time we remembered we had left the tent behind.

2. Dad recommended that we buy a new one，but Mom insisted that we go back to fetch it.

3. Mom was absent-minded，so we had to go back again and again.

4. David and I helped Dad put up the tent，and Mom was busy preparing supper.

5. When we were sitting around the campfire，we talked and laughed.

步骤四

1. We were half an hour away from the hotel when we remembered we had left the tent behind.

2.Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it.

3.If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

4.David and I helped Dad put up the tent while Mom was busy preparing supper.

5.Sitting around the campfire，we talked and laughed.

步骤五

One possible version：

　　The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We were half an hour away from the hotel when we remembered we had left the tent behind. Dad recommended buying a new one，while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it，saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly，so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally，we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded，it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

　　We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day，towards evening，we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent while Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountain，the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the campfire，we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey，a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face.