人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land学案

这是一份人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land学案，共4页。

有关旅行的电子邮件
电子邮件(electrnic mail，常缩写为E­mail、e­mail或email)指通过互联网传递的邮件，即用户之间通过互联网发出或收到的信息，是目前互联网上应用最广泛的一种服务。
[基本框架]
电子邮件的正文部分通常由称呼、正文、结束语及署名四部分构成。
1．称呼。一般在收件人姓氏前加上Dear。
2．正文。正文是邮件的主体部分，是写信人要谈论或陈述的内容。正文内容要求简洁达意，层次分明。
3．结束语。常见的结束语有：I am lking frward t yur reply./With best regards./I wish yu gd luck.等。有时这部分也可省略。
4．署名。写在正文右下角的位置。
[常用词块]
1．all the way一路上
2．braden ne's perspective开阔某人的视野
3．cme int cntact with different cultures接触不同的文化
4．make yur knwledge and experience rich丰富你的知识和经验
5．experience many new things体验许多新事物
6．be greatly impressed by its beautiful view它的美丽景色给我留下了深刻的印象
7．care abut the envirnment爱护环境
8．have a bird's­eye view f the city鸟瞰这个城市
9．enjy a pleasant jurney旅途愉快
10．pen t the public向公众开放
[常用语句]
1．常用的开头语
①表示高兴
I am s glad/pleased/happy t receive yur e­mail.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。
②表示感谢
Thank yu fr yur wnderful gift/interesting e­mail.
谢谢你的礼物/有趣的电子邮件。
③表示关心与询问
Hw are yu ding these days?
你最近怎么样？
Hw are yu getting n these days?
你这几天过得怎么样？
Hw are yu getting n with yur wrk/study?
你的工作/学习进展如何？
④表示抱歉
I am srry that I did nt write t yu sn but I have been very busy these days.
很抱歉，我没有尽快给你写信，但我最近很忙。
⑤表示遗憾
I am srry t learn that yu did nt pass the examinatin.
听说你考试不及格，我很遗憾。
I am s upset t hear that yu are ill these days.I d hpe yu are feeling better.
听说你这几天生病了，我很难过。我真希望你感觉好些。
2．常用的结束语
I am lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
我期待着很快收到你的来信。
Please give yur family my regards.
请代我问候你的家人。
Take gd care f yurself and keep in tuch.
照顾好自己，保持联系。
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Tracy来信询问你一次最难忘的旅行经历。请给她回信，内容包括：
1．旅行时间、地点；
2．旅行经过；
3．旅行感触。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
[升格作文]
Dear Tracy，
I'm glad t share ne f my mst unfrgettable travel experiences with yu.
It was during the natinal hliday last year that I visited Gulangyu Island in Xiamen. I arrived there in the mrning tgether with my parents. It's a beautiful island, whse scenery is breathtaking. We std n the secnd flr f the bat, enjying the sights f the sea. Then we tk lts f phts and tasted special lcal snacks. At dusk, we enjyed urselves as much as t frget t leave.
Thrugh the trip, I've bradened my hrizns and enriched my life experience.
Yurs，
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的朋友Tm 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。内容包括：
1．由学生会组织；
2．一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车；
3．美丽的风景让人难以忘怀；
4．感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tm，
Hw happy I am t receive yur letter.


Best wishes.
Yurs，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tm,
Hw happy I am t receive yur letter.Nw I will tell yu smething abut the trip rganized by ur Students' Unin. Sme f us preferred t take a bus while thers were fnd f walking，and finally we were persuaded t cycle.
When we gt there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.All kinds f butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire muntain was cvered with beautiful flwers，and the air there was pleasant t breathe；as a result，we culdn't wait t walk int nature.
Thugh we were tired，it was the trip that imprved ur friendship and raised ur awareness t care abut the envirnment.
Best wishes.
Yurs，
Li Hua
Dear Tracy，
I'm glad t tell yu an unfrgettable travel experience. Last year, my parents and I visit Gulangyu Island in Xiamen. We arrive there in the mrning. It's a very beautiful island. We enjy the sights f the sea. We tk lts f phts and tasted sme lcal snacks. At dusk, we had t leave fr hme.
I think that I've learned a lt frm the trip.
Yurs，
Li Hua
点评：
1．基本覆盖了所有写作要点，但有个别要点的表达过于简单，不够清楚合理。
2．文中出现了一些简单的语言错误。如时态，描述过去发生的事情要用一般过去时。
3．仅使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，高级词汇太少，缺少高级句式。
4．未能有效地使用衔接词语。