适用于新高考新教材2024版高考英语二轮复习专题5NO.1写作总策略破解书面表达2维度课件

这是一份适用于新高考新教材2024版高考英语二轮复习专题5NO.1写作总策略破解书面表达2维度课件，共57页。PPT课件主要包含了维度1，维度2，评分标准解读 ，高分语料 ，类型2　动作行为 ，类型3　人际关系 ，类型4　修饰形容 ，类型5　陈述事实 ，make it，As long as等内容，欢迎下载使用。
目 录 索 引
维度1　学习评分标准,实现高分有方向
二、评分细则1.满分15分,按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时主要从内容要点、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为:①内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性;②使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;③上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后根据该档次的评分标准来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。4.词数应为80左右,少于60和多于100的,从总分中减去2分。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差影响交际的,将分数降低一个档次。
[典题印证](2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Carline,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
[示例1]三档作文Dear Carline,Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
名师点评本范文要点基本齐全,结构完整,但是书写潦草,整体给阅卷老师的感觉是该考生基本功差,没有吸引老师的亮点词汇和高级句式,还犯了一些低级的错误。
1.句式方面:句式单一,单句较多;不会使用非谓语、定语从句和名词性从句等复杂句式;2.词汇方面:不定冠词误用(a English),漏词(Talk Talk),拼写错误(writting)等,这类错误虽然不会对句意的表达产生很大的影响,但会给阅卷老师留下该考生语言基础薄弱的印象,从而使作文落入低档;3.语法方面:时态和主谓一致错误(如:schl life becming mre and mre clrful)、介词误用(如:in Sunday),这些错误也是考生的作文在低档徘徊的直接原因;4.格式方面:标点符号缺失(And the prgram will be held in Sunday and the tpic is abut “English classic”)。
[示例2]五档作文Dear Carline,Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
高分原因本范文要点齐全、结构完整、用词准确、语言流畅,灵活地运用了亮点词汇和高级句式,具备了满分作文的六大基本特征:1.层次不乱(本文分为三段,层次清晰);2.句式多变(非谓语动词作定语held by “Talk and Talk”;定语从句which is an English prgramme...,As yu knw;主语从句It is certain that all students will benefit frm yur speech.);3.亮点若干(高级词汇:imprve,benefit frm,appreciate, accunt,lk frward t);4.巧妙串联(如:besides);5.小错不犯;6.卷面整洁,语意丰满。
维度2　用好“4策略”,写出高分作文
策略1　遵循“两美”原则,打造内外兼美好作文
策略2　词汇高级,“语”众不同
高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠,为作文增添光彩,从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点:
技法1 摒弃笼统表达,细化描写笼统词具有较强的概括性,考生相对熟悉,但具体词能形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感情色彩变化,使表达更出彩。It was set up t raise awareness f prtecting the cean,which plays an imprtant part in glbal ecsystem.(2022全国甲卷)→It was set up t raise awareness f prtecting the cean,which plays a significant/crucial part in glbal ecsystem.When feeling sad,I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f gd stries.(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)→When feeling depressed,I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.
技法2 多用高级表达,短语优先恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达对提高书面表达的得分档次至关重要。所以考生不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达,充分展现自己的语言功底。1.I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my invitatin.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)→I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my invitatin int cnclusin,we shuld knw its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.(2021全国乙卷)→In cnclusin,we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
3.In rder t get mre clicks,yu’d better tell me which Chinese culture attracts westerners mst.(2021全国甲卷)→In rder t get mre clicks,yu’d better tell me which Chinese culture hlds the mst attractin fr majrity f peple wh were surveyed supprted this idea.→The majrity f peple wh were surveyed were in favur f this idea.
[高分语料]类型1　校园生活
用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑词语1.Surrunded by green trees,the farm is at the ft f the hill near ur schl.→Surrunded by green trees,the farm 　　　　　　　　　　　　the ft f the hill near ur schl. 2.Therefre,I sincerely call n all f the students t learn calligraphy and explre the legacy f traditinal Chinese culture.→Therefre,I 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　all f the students t learn calligraphy and explre the legacy f traditinal Chinese culture. 
is lcated at
make a sincere appeal t
3.Since I have planned my career,I wuld try my best t study all the related curses well.I’m sure I will succeed!→Since I have planned my career,I wuld 　　　　　　　　　　　t study all the related curses well.I’m sure I will 　　　　　　　　　　　!4.Whatever frm yu take,d remember that yur wrk shuld fcus n the beauty f nature.→Whatever frm yu take,d 　　　　　　　　　that yur wrk shuld fcus n the beauty f nature. 
spare n effrt
keep in mind
5.All kinds f activities have been held,the purpse f which was t raise ur awareness f campus safety.→　　　　　　　　　　 activities have been held,　　　　　　　　 was t raise ur awareness f campus safety. 6.If yu wrk hard,yu will realize yur cllege dream.I believe a bright future is waiting fr yu.→　　　　　　　　　 yu wrk hard,yu will realize yur cllege dream.I 　　　　　　　　　　　　a bright future is waiting fr yu. 
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whse purpse
hld the firm belief that
策略3　句式丰富,彰显能力
若书面表达中的句子都采用简单句,肯定不能得高分,合理使用精彩句式会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句,让句子“高人一筹”,亮点纷呈,彰显考生的写作能力。
技法1 活用非谓语结构,精简表达1.运用非谓语动词(短语)整合简单句,提升表达It’s widely acknwledged that China basts abundant and unique cultures.They range frm calligraphy t flk dances and lcal peras.→It’s widely acknwledged that China basts abundant and unique cultures,ranging frm calligraphy t flk dances and lcal peras.
2.运用非谓语动词(短语)简化复合句,精炼语言在表达复杂含义的时候,常常用到复合句,句子有时会较长,考生可以利用非谓语动词(短语)对复合句进行简化,使语言更精练。When I saw a car running twards her,I reached my hand ut and pulled her back.→Seeing a car running twards her,I reached my hand ut and pulled her back.
技法2 巧用三大从句,写出文采1.运用定语从句,让表述更丰满Chengdu successfully held the 31st FISU Summer Wrld University Games,which is certain t strengthen the culture bridge between East and West again.(定语从句)成都成功举办了第31届世界大学生夏季运动会,这肯定会再次加固东西方文化交流的桥梁。(2022全国乙卷)As is shwn by the figures f the chart,thanks t mdern technlgy,a wide range f ways are available fr students t plish their English.(定语从句)正如图表中的数据所示,得益于现代技术,学生有很多方法来提高他们的英语水平。
2.运用名词性从句,让表述更加具体(2022浙江1月卷)What impressed me mst was the Culture Night,where peple frm bth cuntries presented their well-prepared art perfrmances.(主语从句)让我印象最深刻的是“文化之夜”,两国人民展示了他们精心准备的艺术表演。I d hpe that yu will have a bright future and that ur friendship will last frever!(宾语从句)我十分希望你有一个光明的未来,我们的友谊地久天长!Deeply tuched by what we did,peple there expressed sincere gratitude fr ur cmmitment.(宾语从句)当地人民深受感动,对我们的努力表示由衷的感谢。
3.运用状语从句,让逻辑更清晰(2022全国乙卷)As lng as we devte urselves t English learning,we wuld make great imprvement.(条件状语从句)只要我们致力于英语学习,我们就会取得很大的进步。
技法3 活用特殊句式,升级表达1.运用强调句,突出重点 (2022全国乙卷)Frm my perspective,whatever methd we chse,it is ur inner interest and enthusiasm that allw us t make brilliant prgress in English.从我的角度来看,无论我们选择什么方法,是我们内在的兴趣和热情让我们在英语上取得辉煌的进步。 (2022全国乙卷)As far as I’m cncerned,it is nt hw we learn English but ur determinatin t learn English that actually matters.在我看来,真正重要的不是我们如何学习英语,而是我们学习英语的决心。(2022全国甲卷)I d believe that nly with jint effrts can we have a better tmrrw.我相信,只有大家共同努力,我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
2.运用倒装句,以示强调(2022全国甲卷)It is my firm belief that nly with jint effrts can we have a better tmrrw.我坚信,只有大家共同努力,我们才能拥有更美好的明天。(2021全国乙卷)Cnvenient as nline learning is,staring at the screen fr a lng time is harmful t ur eyes.虽然网络学习很方便,但长时间看屏幕对我们的眼睛有害。(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)S patiently did their father instruct them that the twins made the breakfast fast and well.父亲耐心地指导他们,因此双胞胎把早餐做得又快又好。
3.运用虚拟语气,表达看法Had it nt been fr yur selfless assistance,I culdn’t have made such great prgress in English.如果没有你无私的帮助,我不可能在英语上取得如此大的进步。4.运用省略句式,避免累赘When preparing fr the cmpetitin,yu need t have much knwledge abut Chinese stries.在准备比赛时,你需要了解很多有关中国故事的知识。5.适时感叹,传递情感(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Hw delicius the breakfast was!多么美味的早餐啊!(2020全国Ⅱ卷)What a wnderful time we had picking apples n the farm!我们在农场摘苹果的时光多么美好啊!
单句写作1.I felt s lucky t have been selected as a vlunteer fr the Beijing Winter Olympic Games,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 我很幸运能被选为北京冬奥会的志愿者,为来自世界各地的运动员服务。2.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The radi prgram was funded in 2016,_________________________________________________________________________________________________t share their schl life. 这个电台节目成立于2016年,旨在为同学们提供一个分享校园生活的良好平台。
serving the athletes frm all ver the glbe
the purpse f which is t prvide a gd platfrm fr the students/aiming t prvide a gd platfrm fr the students
3.It was my twelfth birthday,and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.那天是我十二岁的生日,我最想要的是一辆新自行车。4.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,but it als made me prud f myself fr playing a part in the Games. 志愿者工作不仅开阔了我的视野,也让我为自己能在奥运会上发挥作用而感到自豪。5.　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 s hard-wrking are yu that 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 我相信,你那么努力工作,你会很容易成功的。6.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 we went back t schl under the guidance f ur teachers. 直到中午我们才在老师的指引下回到学校。
what I really wanted mst was a new bicycle
Nt nly did the vlunteer wrk braden my hrizns
I d believe that
it will be easy fr yu t make it
It was nt until nn that
策略4　过渡巧妙,完美文章
过渡词语和短语就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来,又像润滑剂一样使文章衔接流畅。衔接过渡词可以分为“启、承、转、合”四类。1.用于“启”的过渡词语有as yu knw,as is shwn in the...,first f all,fr ne thing,abve all,n the ne hand,in a sense,t start with等。(2021浙江卷)As far as I knw,this exhibitin will last fr half a mnth in the schl art gallery.据我所知,这个展览将在学校美术馆持续半个月。(2022全国甲卷)First f all,what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins.首先,我们能做的就是重视我们的日常行为。
2.用于“承”的过渡词语有secndly,als,in additin,fr anther thing,fr this purpse,furthermre,what is mre,fr example,in ther wrds,in fact,at the same time,as a result,therefre等。(2021全国甲卷)What’s mre,if I want t decrate my website with sme Chinese elements,what shuld I d?更重要的是,如果我想用一些中国元素来装饰我的网站,我应该怎么做?(2020江苏卷)Fr anther,China enjys a lng histry and rich culture.另一方面,中国有着悠久的历史和丰富的文化。(2019天津卷)Meanwhile,I’m als interested t learn sme flk dances frm yu in yur lecture,which will help me imprve my dancing.同时,我也有兴趣在您的课上学习一些民间舞,这将有助于我提高我的舞蹈水平。
3.用于“转”的过渡词语有after all,but,hwever,n the cntrary,in cntrast, therwise,while,thugh,despite,in spite f,all the same,as a matter f fact等。(2022全国乙卷)Hwever,thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.然而,选择阅读英语书籍和访问英语学习网站的只占18%和12%。(2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷)On the way,althugh sme students fell behind,they kept running until the finishing line.在路上,虽然有些学生落后了,但他们一直跑到了终点线。
4.用于“合”的过渡词语有in a wrd,generally speaking,at last,in shrt,in the end,in cnclusin,n the whle,in summary,t sum up等。(2022全国甲卷)All in all,it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting the cean.T prtect the cean is t prtect urselves.总而言之,现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。保护海洋就是保护我们自己。(2019全国Ⅱ卷)T sum up,I wish yu culd live up t the expectatins f ur schl.总之,我希望你能不辜负我们学校的期望。
用适当的过渡词汇填空Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what t wear when receiving the British students next mnth.Li recmmends the traditinal Chinese dress 1.　　　　　　　　　 Su prefers the schl unifrms.