适用于新高考新教材2024版高考英语二轮复习专题6NO.2题型微技法突破读后续写3技法课件

这是一份适用于新高考新教材2024版高考英语二轮复习专题6NO.2题型微技法突破读后续写3技法课件，共29页。PPT课件主要包含了技法1，技法2，技法3，妙招3　巧用高级句式，妙招4　巧用倒装结构，instantly，quickly，farm house，技巧1　增加外部冲突，技巧2　放大内心冲突等内容，欢迎下载使用。
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技法1　高分开头5妙招
如何写好读后续写,在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球,获得梦寐以求的高分?如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出?这是很多老师和学生一直不懈努力的课题。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个香味十足的诱饵,诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。 而一个拙劣的故事开头,一定会让读者大倒胃口,恹恹欲睡。“Well begun is half dne!”可见写好一个故事的开头是多么重要。下面教你五招高分开头的方式。
①Disappinted and frustrated,David hung his head,trying t avid eye cntact with me.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)大卫又失望又沮丧,低下头,尽量避免和我有眼神接触。②Happily and excitedly,they went t the supermarket fr what they needed.他们高兴且兴奋地去超市买他们需要的东西。
妙招1　巧用形容词/副词短语
①Seeing his face filled with anxiety,I felt sad,deciding t talk smething with him.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)看到他满脸焦虑,我感到很难过,决定和他谈谈。②A few weeks later,the by arrived hme frm university.Hurrying hme,he culdn’t wait t see his ld friend Pppy.(2020浙江1月卷)几个星期后,男孩从大学回到家里。匆忙回家,他迫不及待地想见到他的老朋友波比。
妙招2　巧用分词(短语)
①I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.My brther came up with an idea that he culd cut the pumpkin with a knife.(同位语从句)(2021浙江1月卷)我被困了五六分钟,虽然感觉要长得多。我的弟弟想出了一个主意,他可以用小刀把南瓜切开。②At the very mment,the helicpter arrived.It hvered ver the camp,causing strng wind that blew the bear unsteady n his feet.(非谓语动词+定语从句)(2020浙江7月卷)就在这时,直升机到了。它在营地上空盘旋,刮起大风,把熊吹得双脚不稳。
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.Hardly had the little dg cme ut when Pppy came ver t lick it as if it were a lng-lst friend.(2020浙江1月卷)爸爸打开盒子,一只可爱的小狗出现了。小狗刚出来,波比就过来舔它,好像它是一个失散多年的朋友。
That vide was psted the day befre Hallween.It was my brther wh did that fr amusement.(2021浙江1月卷)那段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的。那是我弟弟为了消遣才那样做的。
妙招5　巧用强调句结构
完成下列句子1.回答不出老师的问题,所有学生都保持沉默。(形容词短语作状语)　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,all the students kept silent. 2.但当他向旁边看时,他立刻发现那根本不是一只狗,而是一只狼,它很快就要追上他。(时间状语从句和副词)But 　　　　　　　　　　　　,he saw 　　　　　　that it wasn’t a dg at all,but a wlf,　　　　　　 catching up with him. 
Unable t answer the teacher’s questin
when he lked t the side
3.一团鲜红的云笼罩着这只动物,让马克松了一口气的是,它向后一退,摇着头。(分词作状语)A bright red clud envelped the animal,and t Mac’s relief,it fell back,　　　　　　　　　　　. 4.爸爸建议我们沿着这条河走,它可能会把我们带到农舍,似乎没有什么比这更好的了。(宾语从句和定语从句)Dad prpsed _______________________________________________________________and nthing seemed better than that. 
shaking its head
that we shuld walk alng the river which may lead us t the
5.Pppy如此兴奋,她想靠得更近,结果不小心撞倒了盒子。(倒装结构)　　　　　　　　　　　 that she accidentally kncked ver the bx in an attempt t get clser. 6.果然,仅仅过了一会儿,这个毛球就从盒子里抬起头来,偷看它的新家和新朋友。(强调句)Sure enugh,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the bx t peek at its new hme and its new friend. 
S excited was Pppy
it was nly mments later that
技法2　创造续写故事高潮2技巧
故事中的高潮(climax)是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机点”。有时候,它只是达到了关键时刻或者转折点,发生了一些事情,或者主角必须做出决定,从而导致一个结果或其他。 我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。
增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。(1)角色之间的冲突[典例]On the furth r fifth night,we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy.After driving in vain fr sme time,Mm suddenly gt a great idea:Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up a tent there?David and I became nervus.分析 开车找旅馆——徒劳无功——母亲建议在他人后院搭帐篷——David和“我”倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不统一)
(2)角色与环境之间的冲突[典例]Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all,but a wlf,quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart fired the spray at the wlf.A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac’s relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute pen his tent bag.He fired at the wlf a secnd time,and again,it fell back...分析 Mac骑车独行——路遇恶狼——与之搏斗——险象环生。[人(角色)——狼(环境)大战]
(3)角色与时间的冲突[典例]The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.“Get int the car.” Paul shuted at Mac.Mac jumped ff the bike and slid int the car withut delay as the wlf was just tw steps away and was abut t tear Mac int pieces.What a narrw escape!分析 汽车突然停在面前——急喊上车——Mac上车避险——恶狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)
放大内心冲突(文中角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。现在我们再来看高考读后续写中的内心冲突是如何体现的。
[典例]But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.Jane was s tired,hungry,and extremely frightened.She thught t herself,“If nly I had nt quarrelled with Tm.Where is Tm?He must have made the emergency call. What I need is enugh curage.If I cntinue my spirits tmrrw,I will be likely t guide the helicpter.” Lying beside the stream,she fell asleep very sn.Suddenly,she heard the shuts f tigers,which made her scared t death. After she held her breath fr a few minutes,everything was quiet again.In the terrible darkness,she slept again.分析 夫妇争吵——妻子独自行走——荒野走散,夜色渐黑——独处森林——阴森恐怖——后悔莫及(内心冲突的刻画)——内心独白(往昔对比+虚拟语气的使用+旁白描写是常见技巧之一)
请根据所给微语境以及下面的汉语提示,按要求续写。1.Having gt ff at the wrng stp,I fund myself left alne at the ft f the muntain at a nn f July.(增加外部冲突:角色与环境之间的冲突)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________炎炎烈日当空,好像要烤焦我。那把金属椅子感觉像个热锅。站在它旁边,我能感觉到它正在散发热量。我可以清楚地理解一条没有水的鱼会经历什么。更糟糕的是,下一班巴士直到下午3点才来。我想喝水!
The summer sun was glaring ver my head as if t scrch me.The metal chair felt like a ht pan.Standing clse t it,I culd sense the heat it was giving ff.I culd clearly understand what a fish wuld experience withut water.Wrse still,the next bus wuldn’t cme until 3 pm.I was thirsty fr water!
2.Lking arund,I saw nthing but a small hut.(放大内心冲突)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“也许我能在小屋里乘乘凉,”我心想。然后,另一个声音不停地告诉我:“别去那儿,姑娘。如果那里住着一个坏人怎么办?”然而,我开始向它走去。向前走了两步,向后退了一步。
“Maybe I can take a shade in the hut,” I thught t myself.Then anther vice kept telling me,“Dn’t g there,girl.What if there lives a bad man?” Hwever,I began t walk twards it.Tw steps frward,ne step back.
技法3　漂亮结尾2方法
精彩的结尾能给读者留下深刻的印象,所以有一个精彩的结尾对于读后续写得分至关重要。文章常见的结尾方式有自然式、点题式、议论式、主题升华式、留白式等。选择合适的结尾方式能凸显文章主题,起到画龙点睛的作用。就考场作文而言,最容易抓住阅卷老师眼球的是点题式和主题升华式。结尾1　点题式点题式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,通过一两句话点明文章主旨,突出文章的立意。一般可以通过总结阅读材料写出点题式结尾。
[典例]Lking at the big “F” n my paper,I started t reflect n what I had dne these days.My life seemed in a mess these days,arising frm my lse attitude and chatic schedule.My energies were wasted n sme unimprtant matters which had nthing t d with my prject.Out f guilt,I explained t my teacher and prmised this wuld never happen again.After this experience, I eventually understd the imprtance f time management,and began t adjust my schedule with cautin.With cnfidence,I was firmly cnvinced that I culd get a satisfying scre in the next assignment.
分析 故事讲述的是作者过于自信,总是把事情拖到最后一刻才去完成。但一件件意料之外的事情让作者把精力浪费在不重要的事情上,导致作者的论文不合格。篇尾“I eventually understd the imprtance f time management”点出主题,说明了时间管理的重要性。“began t adjust my schedule with cautin”说明了作者的进步。这样的结尾点明了主旨,起到画龙点睛的作用。
结尾2　主题升华式主题升华式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,通过一句高度凝练的话来对主题进行升华,使文章主题上升到一定的高度,给读者以启示。这种话往往是一些名言或谚语。
[典例]I didn’t knw when I crssed the line.I still kept n running when thunderus applause burst.The kids f my camp gathered arund me.“We have wn the race!We are the champin!”they shuted and cheered.Shwered with hugs and applause and whistles,I felt a surge f jy.T me,the race meant mre than a champin;it well prved that I was nt a lser and that I culd further explre my ptential.Just as Hemingway put it,“True nbility is being superir t yur frmer self.”分析 故事讲述的是作者平时很不自信,但在老师的鼓励下,参加了接力赛,并且最终获得冠军。故事结尾用海明威的话升华了主题——真正的高贵在于超越过去的自我。这种结尾方式跳出了原本的故事结构,将文章主题升华到一定的高度,给人以启示。
完成下列句子1.有时候小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。Smetimes,a small act f kindness may be pwerful enugh 　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 2.她在寒冷的日子里感受到了温暖,相信每个角落都有善意。She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,and believed there was kindness in every crner. 3.活到老,学到老。It is 　　　　　　　　　　　　. 
t make a huge difference
felt warmth in the cld day
never t late t learn