人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲11-情感问题 Unit11 Sad movies make me cry.

主题：情感问题

导读

本单元的主题是用英语探讨情感问题,谈论日常生活中身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化和影响.写此类文章时,可以通过描述一件发生过的具体事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐,尤其包括描述生活或学习中的烦恼.写作过程中,可以先介绍具体事情,再写出它对人的影响以及人的感受.同学们在把握教材主题基础上,要认真体会这类主题作文的写作思路和方法,以及有关句式和用词.

可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如An unforgettable experience, An unforgettable day等.

题目回放

网络的出现改变着人们传统的生活方式,也不同程度地影响着同学们的学习和生活.坐在家中即可浏览众多网上图书馆丰富的图书；几秒钟内,便可收到相隔万里的来信,或者在最短时间内获得各地详细的信息,等等.但网络也非常复杂,其中包括不健康内容.由于同学们辨别能力有限,有时难以辨别网络内容的好坏.请以 How the Internet affects our school life 为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对网络的看法.

写作要求：

1.要表明自己的观点；

2.语句通顺,流畅；

3.90词左右；4.可根据提示内容适当发挥,但不能出现你的真实姓名和校名.

审题指引

1 审体裁：该写作要求讨论网络怎样影响学生的学校生活,并表明自己的观点,属于议论文.

2 审内容：可从利弊两方面论述,并表明自己的观点.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：开篇概括说明网络对学生的学校生活的影响.

中间：主体段落详细分析网络给学生的学校生活带来的影响,可以分为好的影响和不好的影响.

结尾：最后用总结性语言表明自己的观点.

段落素描

1.First paragraph: The development of the Internet has changed people's life. As far as we students are concerned, it brings us ...(At present, the Internet has a significant impact on the life of people, especially the life of junior high school students.)

2. The body: Honestly speaking, the Internet makes it convenient for us students to seek information online. For example...However, the Internet has a negative effect on us if we ... (Indeed, it is convenient for us to ...However, the Internet is likely to have a bad effect on us if we ...)

3.Last paragraph: In my mind, we should learn to use the Internet rationally. Specifically, we can... (Therefore, we are supposed to make rational use of the Internet,and...)

范本淬炼

A

How the Internet affects our school life

The development of the Internet has changed people's life. ① As far as we students are concerned, it brings us both convenience and trouble.

Honestly speaking, the Internet makes it ② convenient for us students to seek information online. For example, we can easily find reading materials, and ③ explore the answers to the questions in our studies. However, the Internet has a negative effect on us if we cannot ④ make rational use of it. For instance, some students spend too much time playing online games, ⑤ chatting with their friends, seeing films, or even visiting unhealthy websites. All this has a bad effect on their studies.

In my mind, we should learn to use the Internet rationally. ⑥ Specifically, we can mainly use it in our search for information about our studies instead of information about our ⑦ recreations.

亮点点评

1.本文围绕网络对学校生活的影响这一主题展开论述,段落设计合理,条理清晰.

2.文中用 honestly speaking 和in my mind 自然地衔接不同段落；第二段在举例时还用了 for example 和 for instance 这类衔接语.这些都令文章衔接自然,过渡顺畅.

3.文中使用了 as far as, concerned, convenience, seek information online, reading materials, a negative effect, make rational use of, unhealthy, specifically等出彩的短语,提升了文章档次.

B

How the Internet affects our school life

At present, the Internet has ① a significant impact on the life of people, especially the life of junior high school students.

Indeed,② it is convenient for us to search the Internet for the information that we need in our studies,③ including plenty of learning resources and the answers to the questions in our studies. However, the Internet ④ is likely to have a bad effect on us if we cannot make proper use of it. For example, if we ⑤ spend too much time playing online games, chatting with our friends, or watching ⑥ unhealthy videos, our studies will be affected badly.

Therefore, we ⑦ are supposed to make rational use of the Internet, and we cannot spend too much time on online recreations.

亮点点评

1.本文紧扣网络对学校生活的影响这一主题,分三段展开论述,要点齐全,内容完整.

2.文中用 indeed, however, for example, therefore等衔接语,使句子和段落前后衔接紧密.

3.比起上面一篇二类文,本文句式更加多样化,准确使用了定语从句、状语从句等,展示了作者的语言运用功底.

4.本文用词较为丰富,如使用 at present, especially, indeed, including, learning resources, likely, make proper use of, videos, affect等,使文章生动形象.

佳作赏析

A

Reading has benefited me a lot

As is known to all, reading is an important way to ① enrich our minds and develop our life skills. In my mind, I have benefited a lot from reading.

First of all, reading has helped me gain much knowledge ② in various fields, and has broadened my horizons. Second, reading has helped me develop a good study habit, and has ③ improved my test performance. Finally, reading has taught me life skills, such as how to get along well with others, how to ④ live independently, and how to be a useful person in society.

In a word, I have ⑤ benefited greatly from reading. I will keep the habit of reading.

亮点点评

1.本文紧扣阅读的益处这一主题展开叙述,条理清晰,层次分明.

2.文中用 as is known to all, in my mind, first of all, second, finally, in a word 等衔接词,使文章段落和句子衔接流畅.

3.文中句式运用灵活,使用了as引导的定语从句和how+动词不定式等句式,增强了文章的可读性.

4.文章用词考究,使用了enrich, gain, various, improve, test performance, life skills, live independently 等丰富词汇和短语.

B

Basketball has made a difference to my life

No doubt, playing basketball has ① made a difference to my life.

I ② used to be short and thin, and I was afraid of communicating with others. However, things have changed since I watched a film about basketball. I ③ fell in love with basketball, which ④ built up my body, and helped me develop friendship with others. What is more, basketball now ⑤ inspires me to face difficulties bravely and reduce the pressure on my studies.

Thanks to basketball, it has ⑥ had a great effect on my life. I will never give up playing basketball.

亮点点评

1.文章段落分明,逻辑合理.围绕篮球对作者生活的影响这一主题,开头点题,中间主体段落展开叙述,结尾总结.

2.文中恰当运用衔接语,如 no doubt, however, what is more, thanks to等,使文章表达通顺流畅.

3.句式富于变化,使用了动名词充当主语,since引导的时间状语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句等,显示了作者的语言运用能力.

4.文章用词贴切,如使用了used to, fall in love with, develop friendship, inspire sb. to do sth. , reduce the pressure on, have a great effect on等,增强了文章的语言表现力.

C

What the Internet brings us

At present, the Internet ① is closely related to almost all people, and makes their life and work more convenient than ever.

Undoubtedly, the Internet ② makes it easy for people to buy things they need without leaving home. Besides, it provides people with more ways to ③ keep in touch with others. Moreover, it offers people more ④ opportunities to learn about the world and get information easily and widely.

However, every coin has two sides.⑤ Obviously, spending too much time on the Internet does great harm to people's health, especially teenagers' eyesight and test performance. Therefore, we should make rational use of the Internet.

亮点点评

1.开篇直接点题,接下来用两个自然段从正反两方面展开叙述.文章结构合理,逻辑性强.

2.用 at present, undoubtedly, besides, moreover, however, therefore brings us等衔接上下文，使文章行文连贯，过渡自然。

3.用词准确，尤其是几个副词，如 closely, almost, easily and widely, obviously, especially等，使文章富有感染力。

素材宝库

1.好词妙语

neither ... nor... 既不。。。···也不···.··

rather than 而不是

continue to do sth. 继续做某事

make joint efforts 齐心协力

to sb.'s relief 令某人欣慰的是

undoubtedly 无疑

drive sb. crazy 使某人发狂

take sb's position 取代某人的位置

make our friendship stronger 使我们的友谊更加牢固

remain happy forever 永远保持快乐

the worst day of sb.'s life 某人一生中最糟糕的一天

be hard on sb. 对某人苛刻

learn a lesson from your mistake 从你的错误中吸取教训

do sth. with courage 勇敢地做某事

2.提分佳句

The Internet has a significant impact on my life.

互联网对我的生活有重要影响。

It makes me feel...

它使我感觉到·.....

I find it very important to do that.

我发现做那件事很重要.

A smile makes you ten years younger.

笑一笑十年少.

To save time is to lengthen life.

节约时间就是延长生命.

Time lost is never found again.

时光一去不复返.

A good beginning is half done.

良好的开端是成功的一半.

Facts speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩.

Listening to light music makes me happy.

听轻音乐使我开心.

True friendship is more valuable than money.

真正的友谊比金钱更宝贵.

A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.

一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林.

Though it was a small thing, it meant a lot to her.

尽管这是一件小事情,但对她来说意义很大.

The Internet makes our life easier and more convenient.

互联网使我们的生活更便捷.

I think my mother has done a lot for me, so I should do something for her in return.

我认为妈妈已经为我做了很多,所以我应当为她做些事情来报答她.

实战练笔

人非圣贤,孰能无过?作为一名学生,你在学习或生活中是否曾犯过错误?你认识到自己所犯错误后,又是如何改正的呢?请根据写作要点提示,以The mistake helped me grow up为题,用英语写一篇短文.

写作要点：

1.简述你犯过的一次错误；

2.谈谈你是如何在他人帮助下或在自己努力下改正的；

3.谈谈你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长经验.

注意事项：

1.词数90左右；

2.使用所有写作要点,可适当增加情节,使行文连贯；

3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

4.已给标题不计人总词数.

范文：

The mistake helped me grow up

As the saying goes, “To err is human.” We each make mistakes in our lifetime.

I remember that one day when I was sitting in the classroom alone, I saw my English teacher's beautiful water bottle on the teachers' desk. Curiously, I went over and picked it up to have a look. Suddenly, I broke it by accident. I was so afraid that I left the classroom in a hurry. When I got home, I told my mother what had happened. She asked me to be honest and tell the truth to my English teacher. The next day, I admitted my mistake in front of my English teacher, who, to my surprise, forgave me.

The mistake helped me grow up, and I was aware that one could win others' trust and respect only by practicing honesty.