人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲9-兴趣爱好 Unit9 I like music that I can dance to.

主题：兴趣爱好

导读

本单元的主题是用英语谈论兴趣爱好,如日常生活中同学们喜爱的音乐、电影、书籍等等.同学们可以运用所学定语从句等句式深层次地表达自己内心的真实感受,培养积极的、有意义的兴趣爱好,树立正确的人生观和价值观.

可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如My hobby (hobbies),... changes me a lot, I like...best等等.

题目回放

每个人在生活中都有自己的爱好.请以My hobby为题,谈谈自己的爱好.

写作要求：

1.你的爱好是什么?

2.你为什么喜欢它?

3.90词左右,文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.

审题指引

1 审体裁：记叙文,可夹叙夹议.

2 审内容：描述自己的爱好,说明喜欢的原因,并简单谈谈自己的感受.

3 审时态：主体时态为一般现在时或一般过去时.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：点出主题,说明自己的爱好是什么.

中间：具体论述自己的爱好,以及喜欢的原因.

结尾：呼应主题,谈谈自己的感受.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: Different people have different hobbies. I like ...(No doubt, people's hobbies vary from person to person. As for me, I love...)

2. The body: I love ... in my spare time. When I ...,I always ...on weekends. Now I find that ... makes me relaxed when I feel stressed out. Also,...helps me ...Most importantly,...

3. Last paragraph: I have benefited a lot from ..., and I will keep the habit of ... (In my mind, ... brings a colorful life to me. I will not give up this habit in my spare time.)

范本淬炼

A

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies. ① As for me, I like reading best.

I love reading in my spare time. After I finish my homework on weekdays, I always ② do some reading. On weekends, I usually read books instead of watching TV or ③ visiting the Internet. Now I find that reading makes me relaxed when I feel stressed out. Also, reading helps me make good friends because readers show the same interest and can help each other. Most importantly, reading ④ broadens my horizons, and helps me ⑤ improve my reading ability and even my writing skills.

I have ⑥ benefited a lot from reading, and I will keep the habit of reading.

亮点点评

1.本文紧扣主题,开头用简洁的语言点出自己的爱好即阅读,中间段落从多个方面论述了阅读的好处,结尾用一句话概括主题,结构合理,逻辑清晰.

2.用 as for me, also, most importantly 等衔接语,使行文通顺流畅.

3.运用状语从句和宾语从句等从句丰富了文章句式.

4.文中运用了一些好词妙语,如 in sb.'s spare time, instead of, feel stressed out, broaden sb.'s horizons, improve sb.'s reading ability, benefit a lot from 等.

B

My favorite hobby

I have a number of hobbies,① among which reading is my favorite.

In my spare time, I lose my heart to reading. In my mind, reading is ② an effective way to broaden my horizons and improve my studies. Moreover, whenever I feel tired in my studies, I will read some storybooks or picture books,③ which make me relaxed. Most importantly, I can make friends with those who love reading.

In all, reading ④ makes a big difference to me in my life. I have benefited a lot from reading, and I believe that reading can make my life colorful and meaningful.

亮点点评

1.本文开头直接点明主题,主体段落从多个层面阐述了阅读这一爱好带来的好处,结尾总结感受.首尾呼应,层次分明,结构严谨.

2. 使用 in my spare time, in my mind, moreover, most importantly, in all等衔接语,使文章衔接更加流畅.

3.文中使用定语从句、时间状语从句、宾语从句等复杂句式,使语言结构更丰富饱满.

4.比起上面二类文,文中词汇运用更为丰富,如使用了lose sb.'s heart to, effective, make a big difference to, colorful, meaningful等.

佳作赏析

A

I like playing the guitar

No doubt,① people's hobbies vary from person to person. As for me, I love playing the guitar.

Whenever I have time, I would like to play the guitar. It helps ② develop my intelligence, focus attention on what I am doing, and ③ promote my appreciation of art. Besides, it helps me relax after the ④ five-day-long busy weekdays.

In my mind, ⑤ playing the guitar brings a colorful life to me. I will not give up this habit in my spare time.

亮点点评

1.本文整体脉络清晰,结构合理,首尾呼应.

2.使用 no doubt, as for me, besides ,in my mind 等衔接语,使文章过渡自然.

3.简单句、复合句(如含状语从句、宾语从句的复合句)交替使用,丰富了文章句式.

4.词汇和短语丰富多变,用 vary, develop sb.'s intelligence, focus sb.'s attention on, promote sb.'s appreciation of 等增加了文章的生动性.

B

Reading, my favorite hobby

I love reading, ① which has become my favorite hobby.

Whenever I have time, I ② am buried in reading. First of all, reading helps me broaden my horizons and gain knowledge about different areas. ③ While reading, I feel as if talking with a wise man or listening to a lecture. Moreover, I think the best way to relax is to read books ④ that I am interested in. Most importantly, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning, and ⑤ improve my test performance.

In a word, reading is my favorite hobby, and I have benefited a lot from it. I will always ⑥ maintain this hobby.

亮点点评

1.文章开篇直接点题,中间段落从不同角度叙述阅读带来的益处,结尾总结并回应主题.结构完整,要点全面,思路清晰.

2. 用 first of all, moreover, most importantly 等衔接语,使文章表达流畅,语句通顺,衔接自然.

3.句式灵活多变,使用非限制性定语从句、whenever引导的时间状语从句以及充当表语的动词不定式等,增强了文章的感染力和可读性.

C

Swimming, my favorite hobby

As the old saying runs,①“One man's meat is another man's poison.” My favorite hobby is swimming.

When time and weather ② permit, I would like to go swimming. It helps me reduce my learning pressure, and relax after a busy day of schoolwork. Moreover, swimming is an effective way to help me keep fit and strong. Another point worth mentioning is that swimming ③ gives great delight to me. While swimming, I feel as if I were a fish swimming freely in the ocean.

In my heart, swimming ④ plays an important role in my life. I will maintain this hobby.

亮点点评

1.文章框架设计完整,详略得当.首段用谚语作为起始句,较有新意.

2. 文中 moreover, another point worth mentioning, in my heart 等衔接语运用恰当,使句子和段落过渡自然.

3.句式富于变化,使用状语从句、表语从句等句式,增强了文章的可读性.

4.词汇、短语丰富,如使用了 saying, reduce one's learning pressure, keep fit and strong, mention, give great delight to, play an important role等词语,增强了文章的感染力.

素材宝库

1.好词妙语

it goes without saying that... 不用说(不言而喻).....

as for sb.对某人来说

and so on 等等

among...在····.·当中

gain/acquire much knowledge 获得很多知识

broaden sb.'s horizons 开阔某人的视野

an effective way to do sth. 做某事的有效方法

improve sb.'s test performance提高某人的考试成绩

what struck me most was that...最打动我的是·.....

after all 毕竟

make friends 交朋友

as a matter of fact 事实上

owing to...因为··..

2.提分佳句

Good medicine tastes bitter.

良药苦口.

Health is wealth.

健康就是财富.

There is no royal road to learning.

治学无坦途.

No way is impossible to courage.

勇者无惧.

Success comes to those who persevere.

坚持就是胜利.

Knowledge starts with practice.

实践出真知.

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

一天一苹果,医生远离我.

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻.

Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.

读书健脑,运动强身.

As the saying goes,“ Reading makes a full man.”

就像谚语所说的那样,“读书造就充实的人.”

As for me, I like reading most.

对于我来说,我最喜欢读书.

Reading is a good habit for me, and I have benefited a lot from it.

阅读对我来说是个好习惯,我从中受益颇多.

It goes without saying that different people have different hobbies.

不言而喻,不同的人有不同的爱好.

It not only improves our abilities to read and write but also broadens our horizons.

它不仅提升我们的阅读和写作能力,而且能开阔我们的视野.

It not only helps me face the difficulties in my life bravely but also have a better understanding of the world.

它不仅帮我勇敢地面对生活中的困难,而且更好地理解这个世界.

实战练笔

业余爱好让人受益终身.作为一名学生,你的业余爱好是什么?你是怎样喜欢上它的?它给你带来的变化是什么?请以...has changed me a lot 为题,写一篇英语短文.

写作要求：

1.思路清晰,语言流畅；

2.文章中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

3.词数90左右.

范文：

Painting has changed me a lot

Hobbies can not only make our life colorful but also make a great difference to us. I have a hobby, which has changed me a lot.

When I was a little child, I could not concentrate my attention on anything. My parents were worried about that. One day, they took me out to visit an art museum. Watching the beautiful paintings, I was so amazed that I fell in love with painting. Later, painting helped me focus my attention on what I was doing.

Thanks to painting, I have changed a lot. I will keep the hobby, and develop it.