新目标九年级 英语 Unit 9 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材

写作指导

介绍最喜欢的歌

写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)

某英文报正在举办以“My Favorite Song”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加此次征文活动，向大家推荐你最喜欢的一首歌。

【审清题目】

内容：介绍你最喜欢的一首歌并推荐给大家

文体：说明文              人称：以第三人称为主              时态：一般现在时

【头脑风暴】

【提供素材】

语块

▲音乐和歌曲

❋pop music; rock and roll / rock music; hip hop (嘻哈音乐); R&B (节奏布鲁斯); jazz (爵士乐); electronic music; country music; folk music; light music

❋a pop / folk / love ... song

❋an English song / a Chinese / French / ... song

❋soft; smooth; peaceful; beautiful; wonderful; relaxing; exciting; moving; educational; inspiring (鼓舞人心的); noisy; loud; sing along with it; dance to it; cry along with it; have great lyrics; have a great musical rhythm (节奏); be full of energy / motivation (动力)

▲音乐家和歌手

can play many musical instruments; be good at playing the piano / guitar / violin ...; amazing musical ability / skills; have a great talent for / be crazy about music; be famous / known for / as ...; have a good / sweet / special voice; give many concerts at home and abroad (国内外); one of the most popular / famous musicians / singers in China / Asia / the world; win a lot of prizes / awards

▲感受

make sb. happy / relaxed / excited; help sb. relax; cheer sb. up; inspire sb. to move on; give sb. hope; tell sb. never to give up; encourage sb. to face difficulties / any trouble bravely; remind sb. of happy times in the past / the best things in life; make sb. sleepy / feel sad / cry; touch one’s heart; be deeply moved by ...; be moved to tears

句型

1. Sb.’s favorite song / kind of music is ...           

2. Sb. likes / prefers music that / which ...

3. It is / was written / sung by ...                           

4. Sb. likes the song / music because ...

5. It can make sb. feel ... when ...                         

6. When sb. listens to it, sb. can feel ...

7. Sb. should listen to it too because it can ...

【谋篇布局】

【点评范文】

1. 内容：文章内容全面、结构明了，作者开篇先亮明了自己最喜欢的一首歌，紧接着说明了喜欢的原因(两条)，最后向大家推荐这首歌。

2. 语言：作者在说明喜欢这首歌的原因时，使用了表示列举的词first和second，使得文章很有条理；固定表达(one of the most popular singers in Asia, has a great talent for music, is famous for )的使用，使得文章提升了一个档次；若将第二段中的First, it is sung by Jay Chou和He is my favorite singer and one of the most popular singers in Asia这两句合并为含有定语从句的复合句，即First, it is sung by Jay Chou, who is my favorite singer and one of the most popular singers in Asia，会使文章更加出彩。