湖北高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份湖北高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，陈述理由；，表达感谢，环保节约是我们每个地球人的责任等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信1．假定你是李华。近日收到美国朋友Nancy的邮件，说她下周六晚上7点在市图书馆报告厅作题为“美国风俗与文化”的讲座，邀请你来观摩。请给她写封回信，要点如下：1．婉拒邀请；2．陈述理由；3．表达感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Nancy，I'm so glad to receive your invitation__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua2．请写一封信邀请你的英语外教Smith一同前往参观国际非物质文化遗产博览园the International Intangible Cultural Park。内容如下：1、时间安排：12月10日8点校门口集合乘大巴前往，下午3点返回。2、活动内容：随导游参观；中午野餐（自备）要求：1、100字左右；2、可适当增加内容。参考词汇：遗产：heritageDear Smith,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Linda参加，要点包括：1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点；2. 地点：学生俱乐部；3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等；4. 要求：备小礼物。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；Hi, Linda,We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua4．假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。主要内容包括：1.大赛目的和意义；2.主办方：校学生会。时间：2016年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)；3.范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。NoticeDo you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Brown,I’m really glad to receive your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua6．假如你叫李华， 你所在学校的英语俱乐部（English Club）将举行一个英语晚会， 你准备邀请你的外国朋友John一同参加。请根据以下内容要点给John写一封邀请信。晚会时间：6：30地点：学校大厅(the school hall)。活动内容:英语歌舞表演；英语游戏可以结交新朋友注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Dear John,How is everything going?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假定你是李华，上周参加了英国某中学组织的“中国文化周”活动，并认识了热爱中国传统文化的校长Mr. Smith.请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1. 感谢热情接待及对中国文化的推广；2. 附赠具有中国文化特色的小礼物；3. 邀请他来中国。注意： 1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Lucy在当地一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习，你刚获悉她在学校举办的中文书法比赛中获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并邀请她暑假来参加“游北京，登长城”活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Hua9．假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom邀请你下周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并向外国朋友介绍中国的传统绘画。但你忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝邀请。请根据下面的要点用英语写一封信：1. 谢绝邀请；2. 说明理由；3. 推荐朋友Mary参加，并说明原因。注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）Dear Tom,Thank you very much for your invitation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua10．环保节约是我们每个地球人的责任。假设你是李华，最近正在和你的美国朋友Jack讨论如何进行“低碳生活”。请你就“低碳生活之我见”给Jack写一封回信，内容包括：1. “低碳生活”的重要性； 2. 如何做到“低碳生活”；3. 邀请对方参加“全球低碳行动”。注意：1、词数100左右； 2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：低碳生活：low-carbon lifeDear Jack,How is everything going?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua            1．Dear Nancy，I'm so glad to receive your invitation to your lecture in the city library.I'd much like to learn something about American customs and culture，but a friend of mine is coming to pay me a visit，and since this is the first time he has come here，I will have to meet him at the railway station at 7 p.m.next Saturday.It's really a pity that I can't make it to communicate with you face to face，and I'm sorry for that.Anyway，I'm fairly grateful to you for the kind invitation.If there is another chance in future，I will try every possible means to learn from you.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本文为应用文。本人对于不能应邀观摩朋友的讲座，给她写封回信。注意要符合信的格式。要注意语言亲切自然，信中要注意各层次之间使用恰当的连词，使过渡自然，结构合理。词数要适当；因为字数的要求，要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【详解】根据提示，回信可分为三部分。第一部分说明写作的目的是什么。根据本文的要求可知，此部分要写你无法应邀来观摩朋友的讲座。第二部分是正文。本段中要写出不能应邀观摩讲座的理由。首先要把不能观摩的理由细化，扩展为更细的英文提纲，但理由要充足，令人信服。然后用简洁明了、礼貌而正确得体的语言表达出细化了的提纲内容。在本段可增加细节。如有其他的事耽搁，朋友来访，无法抽身等。最后一段再次感谢对方的邀请及不能应邀的歉意，也可表达自己可能的弥补措施等。在写作时注意句式要灵活，多用一些较高级的词汇，恰当运用一些连词，以使文章流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，层次清晰，结构合理，发挥合理，符合逻辑关系。文中运用了一些短语如pay a visit，make it，communicate with sb. ,face to face，sorry for ,be grateful to等使文章更有文采。文中句式较为简单,灵活地运用了一些固定句式如this is the first time he has come here和It's really a pity that I can't make it to communicate with you face to face；条件状语从句如If there is another chance in future，I will try every possible means to learn from you等从而增加文章的可读性。2．Dear Smith,To have a better understanding of what we learnt about cultural heritage in English class, we have arranged a visit to the International Intangible Cultural Park. Therefore, I wonder if you are interested to go with us, during which we can have a feast of amazing Chinese culture.As has been planned, we will gather and set off/out at the school gate at 8:00, December 10 and return at 15:00. Upon our arrival, a guide will introduce us those remarkable pasts in different aspects of people’s life when showing us around the park. At lunchtime, we’ll be enjoying our picnic prepared in advance on the grass, chatting and having fun.We would feel greatly honored and pleased if you could accept the invitation. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封邀请信：请写一封信邀请你的英语外教Smith一同前往参观国际非物质文化遗产博览园the International Intangible Cultural Park。内容如下：1、时间安排：12月10日8点校门口集合乘大巴前往，下午3点返回。2、活动内容：随导游参观；中午野餐（自备）。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：To have a better understanding of（对---有一个更好的理解）；the International Intangible Cultural Park（国际非物质文化遗产博览园）；have a feast of amazing Chinese culture（有一个令人惊叹的中国文化盛宴）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一封邀请信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。To have a better understanding of what we learnt about cultural heritage in English class, we have arranged a visit to the International Intangible Cultural Park.动词不定式做目的状语且包含一个what引导的宾语从句；I wonder if you are interested to go with us, during which we can have a feast of amazing Chinese culture.句中if引导宾语从句同时句中含有一个非限制性定语从句；we’ll be enjoying our picnic prepared in advance on the grass, chatting and having fun.现在分词作伴随状语。3．Hi, Linda,We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示可知，本篇为书信，要求写一封邀请信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①决定为小明举办生日聚会，邀请参加；②时间：周五晚8点至9点；③地点：学生俱乐部；④内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等；⑤要求：备小礼物。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：the Students' Club（学生俱乐部），sing songs and play games（唱歌和玩游戏），give him a surprise（给他一个惊喜）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。时间状语从句的使用，When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him.It作形式主语，It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.。4．NoticeDo you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. I'd like to share with you some details.As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec 30th ,2016. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems , and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall. Don't miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.Don't hesitate to take part! I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则通知。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一则通知：假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。主要内容包括：1.大赛目的和意义；2.主办方：校学生会。时间：201 6年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)；3.范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Tang Poetry Recitation Contest（唐诗吟诵大赛）；assembly hall（校报告庭）；Three Hundred Tang Poems（唐诗三百首）；appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture（欣赏古代中国文化的美）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一则通知，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec 30th ,2016.使用动词不定式一般式的被动式；Above all, it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems , and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture.主语从句和虚拟语气的结合；Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.句中Whoever引导主语从句；If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall.句中if引导条件状语从句。5．Dear Mr. Brown,I’m really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In China, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isn’t it?By the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。【详解】话题是向你的外教Mr.Brown介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他在高考后来你家过端午节。写作要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文；同时可以选择高级的词汇和语法项目，让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。【点睛】文中使用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. 运用了that引导的宾语从句this means that happiness is arriving.以及反意疑问句Quite interesting, isn’t it?还运用了由it作形式主语的句子It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.较高级词汇the same as，by the way，in memory of，look forward to也为文章增色不少。6．Dear John,How is everything going? I am writing to invite you to attend an English evening party held by our school’s English Club. The party will start at 6:30 p.m. this Friday evening in our School Hall.At the party there will be a variety of wonderful activities that you can’t miss. Not only will you be able to appreciate brilliant singing and dancing performances, but also you may participate in some interesting English games in person. In addition, this is also a good chance for you to know some new Chinese friends and talked about Chinese culture with them. I bet you will have great fun here!Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：你所在学校的英语俱乐部（English Club）将举行一个英语晚会， 你准备邀请你的外国朋友John一同参加。请根据以下内容要点给John写一封邀请信。晚会时间：6：30地点：学校大厅(the school hall)。活动内容:英语歌舞表演；英语游戏可以结交新朋友。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：English Club（英语俱乐部）；the school hall（学校大厅）；a variety of wonderful activities（各种各样精彩的活动）；Chinese culture（中国文化）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一封书信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to invite you to attend an English evening party held by our school’s English Club.过去分词做后置定语；At the party there will be a variety of wonderful activities that you can’t miss.句中that引导定语从句；Not only will you be able to appreciate brilliant singing and dancing performances, but also you may participate in some interesting English games in person.部分倒装用在句中；I bet you will have great fun here!文中使用省略that的宾语从句。7．Dear Mr. Smith,I’ve been back home safely from England. I’m writing to show my appreciation not only for your warm reception during the Chinese Culture Week but also for your efforts in spreading and developing Chinese traditional culture among foreign students. To express my gratitude, I have enclosed a traditional gift with the letter – a Chinese Knot which stands for friendship, love and good luck in China. Hope you’ll find it entertaining and meaningful.By the way, I want to invite you to visit China when you are available and I’m willing to be your guide. I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】李华上周参加了英国某中学组织的“中国文化周”活动，并认识了热爱中国传统文化的校长Mr. Smith.要求给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1. 感谢热情接待及对中国文化的推广；2. 附赠具有中国文化特色的小礼物；3. 邀请他来中国。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封感谢信。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I’m writing to show my appreciation……warm reception, Chinese Culture Week, spreading and developing Chinese traditional culture, express my gratitude, entertaining and meaningful. available, accept my invitation.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如不定式to show my appreciation和To express my gratitude 表目的；定语从句which stands for friendship, love and good luck in China.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．Dear Lucy,I’m pleased to learn that you’ve just won the first prize in the Chinese hand-writing competition held in your institute. I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.The prize comes as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially the Chinese language. I’ m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off.This summer vacation our school will hold an interesting activity called Touring Beijing, Climbing to the top of the Great Wall. Would you like to come to China and join us? I’ m looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：① Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院（Confucius Institute）学习，得知她在中文书法比赛中荣获一等奖；②对她的成功表示祝贺；③邀请她暑假来参加“游北京，登长城”活动；④再次邀请，。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese handwriting competition（中文书法比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），Touring Beijing, Climbing to the top of the Great Wall（游北京，登长城）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】范文内容完整，表达简洁，体现了作者较好的语言驾驭能力。第一、非谓语动词形式作后置定语的使用，比如I’m pleased to learn that you’ve just won the first prize in the Chinese hand-writing competition held in your institute中的held in your institute。第二、高级短语的使用，比如I’ m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off.中pay off的正确使用。9．Dear Tom,Thank you very much for your invitation.I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I’m busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting, which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作。要求考生写一封信谢绝朋友的邀请，并推荐朋友参加。试题为考生提供了一个简单的写作提纲，主要的写作要点包括：1. 谢绝邀请；2. 说明理由；3. 推荐朋友Mary参加，并说明原因。这将考生的写作控制在一定范畴，要求要紧扣提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落，对考生思路和文章写作范围做出明确的限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥，这样文章就有了一定的灵活性，可以较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。写作时注意句子间的正确联系以及词语的丰富和句型的多样。【范文亮点点评】本文范文要点全面，短小精悍。作者首先委婉地描述了谢绝邀请的理由，然后用一半的篇幅推荐朋友Mary参加，最后再次因为自己的缺席表达了歉意。在写作时作者使用了许多高级句型：...but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t.使用了并列长句以及复杂句式inform sb. that...；The reason is that I’m busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.使用了表语从句；...who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week.使用了非限制性定语从句；...which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.使用了which引导的非限制定语从句和together with短语。多种句式结构的使用有效地提升了文章的档次。10．Dear Jack,How is everything going? The recent discussion with you on low-carbon life encourages me to think further about the topic. Here I am writing to share my ideas with you.Nowadays, with global warming getting worse, a new concept life－low carbon life is proposed to challenge the environmental pollution, which is not only environmental-friendly, but also a healthy and fashionable lifestyle. It is such a significant project that we can’t wait to embrace it. We can practice our low carbon life from our daily lives. First, everyone is expected to cultivate their awareness of saving energy. Activities of different forms may help a lot, such as “No Car Day”, “Trees-planting Day” and “Walking-on Week”. Meanwhile, going upstairs instead of taking a lift or going to school on foot instead of by car will bring us more fun of keeping fit and reduce more power consumption. Thirdly, stop “white pollution” to use recyclable bags rather than plastic bags. Moreover, encourage more people around to put saving idea in mind, bettering their behaviors from turning off lights, taps and using less paper.Maybe one’s act seems tiny, but all people’s efforts really make a difference. Lower carbon, less pollution and a greener planet! Hope you can join our global Low-carbon project to make our world a better place to live in. Look forward to your reply and participation.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】题目要求和朋友Jack讨论如何进行“低碳生活”。请你就“低碳生活之我见”给Jack写一封回信，内容包括：1. “低碳生活”的重要性； 2. 如何做到“低碳生活”；3. 邀请对方参加“全球低碳行动”。人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。要点有三个，可以分三段来书写。每个要点一段，这样比较清楚明白。阐述个人观点的文章的书信，一般用一般现在时态。第一段提出话题；第二段说明重要性并给出理由，这段是最重要的段落，在这一段可以使用高级词汇和短语，高级句型表达，同时注意使用表示顺序的first，second，third...或者firstly，secondly，thirdly来分点说明自己的理由，也可以使用what’s more等连接词或词组。第三段呼吁社会共同参与，表达愿望。切记写作时要涵盖提纲中提到的所有内容，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。要做到语意连贯，逻辑清晰，过渡词要自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。语言合乎英语的表达规范，使用了一些较高级的词汇和句型，增强了文章的连贯词。例如Nowadays, with global warming getting worse, a new concept life－low carbon life is proposed to challenge the environmental pollution, which is not only environmental-friendly, but also a healthy and fashionable lifestyle. 使用了with+宾语+宾语补足语复合结构以及非限制性定语从句和not only...but also...短语；It is such a significant project that we can’t wait to embrace it. 使用了such...that...引导的结果状语从句；Meanwhile, going upstairs instead of taking a lift or going to school on foot instead of by car will bring us more fun of keeping fit and reduce more power consumption.使用了动名词作主语；...bettering their behaviors from turning off lights, taps and using less paper.使用了非谓语动词作状语等等。高级句式的应用彰显了作者较高的驾驭英语的能力。