湖北高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

邀请信

1．假定你是李华，你的美国好友Tom将于今年九月到你校进行交流活动，届时恰逢湖北省第二届园林博览会（the 2nd Hubei Province Garden Expo）在荆州举办。请根据以下要点写一封邮件，邀请他一同参观园博会：

1.时间：九月二十八号开幕；

2.活动：欣赏众多地方园展；

3.意义：弘扬荆楚文化（Jing-Chu culture），建设美丽湖北。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

How is everything going recently?

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Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你校将举办“东坡文化艺术节”，你将邀请你的外教老师Mike参加，请你写一封邮件向他介绍有关情况，内容包括：

1.时间和地点：7月8日（星期一）上午9点，学校报告厅；

2.活动的目的：让更多的人了解中国优秀的传统文化；

3.活动的内容：讲座、诗词诵读、学生才艺表演等。

注意：1.词数l00左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：报告厅the lecture hall 才艺表演 talent show

Dear Mike，

I'm writing to invite you to attend Dongpo Culture and Art Festival.

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Yours，

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris目前在北京学习汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。

1.农业大学李教授讲解中国茶文化的历史和传播；

2.讲座后有交流和品茶活动

3.你将陪同Chris并帮其翻译。

注意:1.词数100个左右；

2.信中不能出现与本人有关的信息；

3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris，

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华，为弘扬中国传统文化，你校将在暑期开展“重走丝绸之路”活动。请你根据以下要点提示，给你校的交换生Emma发一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 活动的宗旨；

2. 活动的时间；

3. 报名方式和截止日期。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：重走丝绸之路Retrace the Silk Road

Dear Emma,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假设你是李华，你们学校的民乐团将于近期进行演出，你的美国外交Terry对中国民乐很感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他观看演出。内容包括：

1. 演出的时间、地点；

2. 演出的曲目数量级时长；

3. 乐团的简要介绍；

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：folk orchestra 民乐团  symphony 曲目

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6．假如你是李华。现在中央电视台电视节目《经典咏流传》(Everlasting Classic)风靡你校，深受师生们欢迎。你们学校也打算于近期举行《经典咏流传》活动。请给你的外教Edward写一封邮件，邀请他一起参加该活动。内容包括:

1.时间和地点；

2.内容:演唱诗歌；

3.活动意义。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Edward,

How time flies!!

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I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Tom是太极(Taiji)爱好者。得知今年暑假你所在的城市将举办一次太极比赛，请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加。要点包括:

1.比赛的时间和地点；

2.比赛的目的；

3.参加比赛的益处。

注意:1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tommy,

How is everything going ?

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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你叫李华，你北京的法国朋友Jack邀请你，和他一起去云南旅行，但你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封Email：

1. 表达想参加的意愿;

2. 忙于准备考试;

3. 由于感冒,身体不适;

4. 表示歉意并另约时间。

注意：1.词数120左右;

2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to Yunnan with you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）。假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看。

内容包括：

1. 汇演时间和地点；

2. 汇演内容和意义。

注意：

1. 词数：100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是李华，与你的英国朋友Lisa正在学习中国绘画。市艺术馆将招聘暑期志愿者。请你写封邮件邀请他一起报名。内容包括：

1.教小学生绘画；

2.维持游客秩序；

3.每周工作三天。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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1．Dear Tom,

How is everything going recently? Hearing that you are coming to our school for the exchange program in September, I'm more than delighted to share with you a piece of exciting news that it is on September 28th that the 2nd Hubei Province Garden Expo will be opened in Jingzhou.Would you like to attend it with me?

The Garden Expo, as planned, consists of 17 gardens and each represents its unique characteristic of different areas around Hubei.Although the delicate exhibits displayed there vary from garden to garden, the deep meaning they convey is the same: to carry forward Jingchu culture and make Hubei more beautiful.Besides, the buildings of the Garden Expo are specially-designed as well.So don't hesitate to go to the Expo with me, and I can guarantee you a rewarding and unforgettable experience in Jingzhou.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的美国好友Tom将于今年九月到你校进行交流活动，届时恰逢湖北省第二届园林博览会（the 2nd Hubei Province Garden Expo）在荆州举办。请根据以下要点写一封邮件，邀请他一同参观园博会：1.时间：九月二十八号开幕；2.活动：欣赏众多地方园展；3.意义：弘扬荆楚文化（Jing-Chu culture），建设美丽湖北。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：exchange program（交换项目）；more than delighted（非常高兴）, share with（分享）；the 2nd Hubei Province Garden Expo（湖北省第二届园林博览会）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Hearing that you are coming to our school for the exchange program in September, I'm more than delighted to share with you a piece of exciting news that it is on September 28th that the 2nd Hubei Province Garden Expo will be opened in Jingzhou.运用了强调句；Although the delicate exhibits displayed there vary from garden to garden, the deep meaning they convey is the same: to carry forward Jingchu culture and make Hubei more beautiful.运用了让步状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Mike，

I'm writing to invite you to attend Dongpo Culture and Art Festival. The festival，which is aimed at helping people know more about the excellent traditional Chinese culture，is to be held at 9 o'clock in the morning on Monday of July 8th. The festival will take place in the school lecture hall. There will be lots of fantastic activities such as lectures about Dongpo Culture，poems reading activities and students' talent shows，which I think is a good chance to learn more about Chinese culture and help make our school life more colorful and more wonderful. All of us will take part in it. I sincerely hope that you can join us.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华, 你校将举办“东坡文化艺术节”, 你将邀请你的外教老师Mike参加, 请你写一封邮件向他介绍有关情况, 内容包括：1.时间和地点：7月8日（星期一）上午9点, 学校报告厅；2.活动的目的：让更多的人了解中国优秀的传统文化；3.活动的内容：讲座、诗词诵读、学生才艺表演等。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：be aimed at（旨在；为了）；take place（举行）, school lecture hall（报告厅）；talent show（才艺表演）；take part in（参加）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The festival, which is aimed at helping people know more about the excellent traditional Chinese culture, is to be held at 9 o'clock in the morning on Monday of July 8th.运用了定语从句；I sincerely hope that you can join us.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

3．Dear Chris,

I know you take deep interest in Chinese traditional culture. It happens that a lecture about tea culture is to be given by Professor Li from University of Agriculture in our school this Friday afternoon. So I’m writing to invite you to attend it.

A variety of activities will be held. To begin with, Professor Li will introduce the history and spread of Chinese tea, which will help you have a better understanding of the culture of tea. Then, a warm tea party will give you a different experience, where you can taste different kinds of tea while chatting with teachers and students of our school. By the way, there is no need to worry about the language. I will keep you company and explain what you can’t understand if necessary.

I believe you’ll have a brand-new experience of the Chinese traditional culture. I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.农业大学李教授讲解中国茶文化的历史和传播；2.讲座后有交流和品茶活动；3.你将陪同Chris并帮其翻译。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，发出邀请并告知时间地点以及演讲人。第二段，1.农业大学李教授讲解中国茶文化的历史和传播；2.讲座后有交流和品茶活动；3.你将陪同Chris并帮其翻译。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  explain, taste ，take deep interest in Chinese traditional culture，in our school this Friday afternoon，invite you ，A variety of activities， introduce the history and spread of Chinese tea，have a better understanding of culture of tea, there is no need to do sth, worry about the language, keep you company。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句To begin with, Professor Li will introduce the history and spread of Chinese tea, which will help you have a better understanding of the culture of tea .what 引导的宾语从句I will keep you company and explain what you can’t understand if necessary.省略that的宾语从句I believe you’ll have a brand-new experience of the Chinese traditional culture。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:To begin with，Then，By the way。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:which引导的定语从句To begin with, Professor Li will introduce the history and spread of Chinese tea, which will help you have a better understanding of the culture of tea .what 引导的宾语从句I will keep you company and explain what you can’t understand if necessary.省略that的宾语从句I believe you’ll have a brand-new experience of the Chinese traditional culture。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

4．Dear Emma,

Here is some good news for you. Our school is to launch an activity called Retrace the Silk Road during the summer vacation. I’m writing to invite you to attend it.

In order to protect our traditional culture, our school is to organize some students to travel along the Silk Road from July 6 to July 16 under the guidance of an experienced local guide. Anyone who is interested is welcome to join. You can sign up in our school office or on the Internet by May 28. I know that you love Chinese culture, so I think it is a good opportunity for you. You should not miss it. I believe you will have fun and benefit a lot from it.

Looking forward to your participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，为弘扬中国传统文化，你校将在暑期开展“重走丝绸之路”活动。请你根据以下要点提示，给你校的交换生Emma发一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 活动的宗旨；2. 活动的时间；3. 报名方式和截止日期。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：an activity called Retrace the Silk Road（一项名为“追溯丝绸之路”的活动）；In order to protect our traditional culture（为了保护我们的传统文化）；under the guidance of an experienced local guide（在有经验的当地导游的指导下）；Looking forward to your participation（期盼你的参加）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。Our school is to launch an activity called Retrace the Silk Road during the summer vacation.过去分词做后置定语；In order to protect our traditional culture,动词不定式作目的状语；Anyone who is interested is welcome to join.此处who引导定语从句；I believe you will have fun and benefit a lot from it.省略that的宾语从句用在句中。

5．Dear Terry,

How is everything going? I have heard that you are interested in Chinese folk music and here comes a good chance for you to enjoy it.

The folk orchestra of our school will give a performance in the school lecture hall at 7 pm this Friday, The performance will last 2 hours, during which time we will hear 10 famous folk symphonies. The folk orchestra is made up of 30 students and they each can play a traditional instrument very well. Under the guidance of a music teacher, they practice very hard and have won great awards for their excellent performances.

I can assure you that you will have a great time with us. Looking forward to your coming!

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是提纲类写作，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李华，你们学校的民乐团将于近期进行演出，你的美国外交Terry对中国民乐很感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他观看演出。内容包括：1. 演出的时间、地点； 2. 演出的曲目数量级时长；3. 乐团的简要介绍。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be interested in（感兴趣），Chinese folk music（中国民间音乐），folk orchestra（民乐团）；symphony（曲目），traditional instrument（传统乐器）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I have heard that you are interested in Chinese folk music and here comes a good chance for you to enjoy it.运用了宾语从句；The performance will last 2 hours, during which time we will hear 10 famous folk symphonies.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

6．Dear Edward,

How time flies! I’m writing to invite you to participate in our school’s upcoming activity, Everlasting Classic.

Everlasting Classic, a program of CCTV, is one of the most popular programs in China at present. It is to sing classic Chinese poems to the rhythm of modern music, aiming to carry forward the classic culture with the times. With it becoming more and more popular among the teachers as well as the students, our school has decided to hold the same activity in the school hall next Friday evening to arouse the students’ awareness of Chinese classic culture and enrich students’ after-school life.

I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. It is such a fantastic opportunity for you to develop a further understanding of Chinese ancient culture that you can’t miss it.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文为应用文。现在中央电视台电视节目《经典咏流传》(Everlasting Classic)风靡你校，深受师生们欢迎。你们学校也打算于近期举行《经典咏流传》活动。请给你的外教Edward写一封邮件，邀请他一起参加该活动。内容主要包括时间和地点；内容是演唱诗歌及活动意义。

【详解】本文为提纲作文，是一封邮件。第一部分叙述写邮件的目的。即邀请外教来参加学校近期举行《经典咏流传》活动；第二部分叙述这项活动的时间和地点；内容等。最后一部分叙述活动的意义并期待对方的到来。文章的语言要有礼貌，简洁明了。词数控制在100左右。

【点睛】本文内容完整，要点突出，用词礼貌。文中运用了大量的较高级的词汇如invite sb. to do...; participate in...;at present; carry forward; as well as ..., arouse the students’ awareness of...; have a great interest in...; develop a understanding of...等，使文章丰富多彩，有吸引力。文中的句式灵活多变，简单句与复合句相互使用。如文中有感叹句How time flies! 复合句有宾语从句I know you have a great interest in Chinese traditional culture；由such...that...引导的状语从句 It is such a fantastic opportunity for you to develop a further understanding of Chinese ancient culture that you can’t miss it.。同时还有非谓语作状语，如...， aiming to carry forward the classic culture with the times. 非谓语作宾语补足语With it becoming more and more popular among the teachers as well as the students等，这些句式的运用使文章的语法更为严谨生动，体现了作者对英语很强的驾驶能力。

7．Dear Tommy,

How is everything going ? I’m writing to tell you that the 5th International Tai Ji Competition will be held in our city from July 20th to 24th at Hongshan Gymnasium.

As we know, Tai Ji is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad. This event aims to further expand the influence of Tai Ji worldwide. The organizers hope people will feel the charm of Tai Ji in this competition.

I know you are a Tai Ji amateur. Are you interested in taking part in the event? You’ll be able to appreciate high-level Tai Ji performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world. You can also improve your techniques.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。写封邮件询问Tom是否有兴趣参加你所在城市举办的太极比赛。

【详解】第一步：整理题目要点

①    交代写信目的、背景；②交代比赛细节：时间、地点；③描述比赛的目的（此处邀请要强调文化传播和交流）；④参加比赛的好处；⑤重申诚挚邀请，希望对方前来的愿望。

第二步：准备关键词

根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：5th International Tai Ji Competition第五届国际太极比赛；

Chinese culture中国文化；become increasingly popular变得越来越受欢迎；aims to further expand进一步扩展；the charm of Tai Ji太极的魅力；a Tai Ji amateur一个太极业余爱好者；high-level Tai Ji performances高水平太极表演；improve your techniques提高技艺等。

第三步：确定文章使用的时态，描述将要发生的事情，应用一般将来时。

第四步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意语法和词法的使用。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度，使之自然通畅。

【点睛】范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接谨慎自然，符合书信的要求，不乏亮点的表达。

一般现在时和现在完成时的活用：Tai Ji is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad.

用一般疑问句带入本文主题：Are you interested in taking part in the event?

8．Dear Jack,

I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to Yunnan with you. It is very kind of you to invite me to go traveling with you and I really look forward to going to Yunnan and enjoying the beautiful scenery there. However, much to my regret, I can’t go with you owing to the fact that an important exam is just around the corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.

What’s worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I’d rather I stayed at home instead of going anywhere.

Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Would it be convenient for you if we make it after the exam?

I’m truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply.

Yours truly

Li Hua

【分析】这是一封道歉信。题干中列出了文章中需要包含的四点内容，同学们写作时要注意要点要全。并且由于是道歉信，语言要委婉。

【详解】第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。本文要求你写一封Email解释不能赴约的原因以及表达歉意。所以文章的人称应该使用第一人称，时态应该以现在进行时和一般将来时为主。

第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：enjoy the beautiful scenery（欣赏美景），owing to（由于），is just around the corner（即将来临），caught a bad cold（得了重感冒），get together（碰面）、accept my sincere apologies（接受我真诚的歉意等。

第3步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步： 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文格式正确，要点齐全，布局合理，运用了高级句型和词汇。高级句型有：that引导的宾语从句（I’m terribly sorry to tell you that）；the fact that引导的同位语从句；for which引导非限制性定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；would rather句式等。高级词汇有：much to my regret，instead of，chances to get together，make it after the exam，sincere apologies；enjoying the beautiful scenery等。

9．Dear Eric,

How is everything going? I'm writing to invite you to the  Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5.

With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements we have achieved over the past seven decades, the show will put on a variety of amazing performances such as singing, dancing and reciting classics. I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you.

From where I stand, the show is extremely meaningful. Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland, but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country.

If you are interested, please let me know. Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件。

【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件为庆祝新中国成立七十周年，你们学校即将举办一次大型文艺汇演（Grand Art and Cultural Show）。假如你是李华，请给你们学校留学生Eric写一封邮件，邀请他参加观看。内容包括：1. 汇演时间和地点；2. 汇演内容和意义。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the  Grand art and cultural show（文艺汇演）；With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements（以庆祝祖国成立70周年为目标，歌颂祖国取得的伟大成就）；over the past seven decades（在最近七十年里）；From where I stand（以我看来）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。the  Grand art and cultural show to be held in our school hall on the evening of Sept.5.动词一般式的被动式作后置定语；I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you.句中使用宾语从句；Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland, but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country.部分倒装堪称经典。

10．Dear Lisa,

I’ve got good news for us two. The Art Museum in our city is about to bring in volunteers for the summer vacation. Would you please have a try with me?

The job of the volunteers is rather challenging. Teaching primary students to learn to draw Chinese paintings, which is our major, will of course offer us a great chance to improve ourselves.

Then, helping the tourists keep order is another duty of ours. And this will make us more skilled in communicating. By the way, we only need to work three days a week.

I guess this is a pretty good opportunity for us to enrich our summer life, isn’t it? Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua.

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封邮件；假定你是李华，与你的英国朋友Lisa正在学习中国绘画。市艺术馆将招聘暑期志愿者。请你写封邮件邀请他一起报名。内容包括：1.教小学生绘画；2.维持游客秩序；3.每周工作三天。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：The Art Museum（艺术博物馆），beabout to（将要），have a try（试一试），rather challenging（相当有挑战性）；Chinese paintings（中国绘画）；keep order（维持秩序）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Teaching primary students to learn to draw Chinese paintings, which is our major, will of course offer us a great chance to improve ourselves.运用了非限定性定语从句；Then, helping the tourists keep order is another duty of ours.运用了动名词短语做主语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。