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专题02 技巧千面手 写作可无忧



一、作文优化技巧及过渡方法：
改进文章内容：
Mother does all that she can for us.
1. She takes good care of my daily life.
（1）She cooks meals for me.
（2）She takes me to hospital.
2. Besides, she supports me in my study.
（1）She invites me to libraries.
（2）She helps me with my Maths.
3. What’s more, she always encourages me.
（1）She tells me not to give up.
（2）She suggests I have another try.

第一次 改进句子结构
1. She takes good care of my daily life.
（1）She cooks delicious meals for me with love .
（2）She takes me to hospital when I get sick.
2. Besides, she supports me in my study.
（1）She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together.
（2）No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Maths.
3. What’s more, she always encourages me.
（1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties.
（2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.

第二次 改进句子结构
1. My mother is a responsible nanny/ mother.
（1） She cooks delicious meals for me with love.
（2） When I get sick, she takes me to hospital as soon as possible.
2. Besides, my mother is a close friend.
（1） She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together.
（2） No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Math.
3. What is more, my mother is a wise teacher.
（1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties.
（2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.

【总结提炼】作文优化技巧：善用定语，副词和连词，进行适当地扩词和扩句。

过渡方法：

1. 那就是(说)…；亦即…
　That is to say, … = That is, … = Namely, …
　例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。
　We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities.
2. (A) 基于这个理由 For this reason …
　(B) 为了这个目的 For this purpose, …
　例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。
　For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.
3. 我们有理由相信…
　We have reasons to believe (that)...
　例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。
We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.
4. 事实上
　As a matter of fact, … = In fact, …
　例：事实上健康才是最重要。 As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.
5. (A) 例如 For example, …
　(B) 拿…做例子 Take … for example.
　例：例如我们盲目地提高生活水准，却降低生活品质。
　For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life.
6. 此外我们不应忽视…
　Besides (In addition), we should not neglect …
　例：此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。
　In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
7. 相反地…
　on the contrary, … = by contrast, …
　例：相反地少数学生似乎还在鬼混。
　On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.
8. 另一方面…
　On the other hand, …
　例：政府应严格执法，另一方面大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。
　The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.
9. 然而很可惜的是…
　However, it is a pity that...
　例：然而很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。
However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.
10.换言之…
　in other words, … = to put it differently
　例：换言之我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。
　In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal.
11.别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为…
　It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that...
　例：别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为如果你有很大的决心和毅力，成功最后一定属于你。
　It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.
12.从此之后我已发现…
　Ever since then, I have found that...
　例：从此之后我已发现，在日常生活中，微笑是避免冲突最好的方式。
　Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.
13.这样说来，假如…当然毫无疑问地…
　In this light, if…, there can surely be no doubt (that) ...
　例：这样说来，假如我们能善用时间，当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。
　In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.
14.更严重的是…
　What is more serious is (that)...
　例：更严重的是我们不珍惜野生动物。What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.
15.鉴于社会的实际需要…
　In view of the practical need of society, ….
　例：鉴于社会的实际需要，愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。
　In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
16.如果能实践这三点…
　If one can really put the three points into action (practice), …
　例：如果能实践这三点…。
　If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.
17.做这些简单之事，我们一定可以…
　By doing these simple things, we surely can ….
　例：做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。
　By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day.
18.如此我相信…
　In this way, I believe (that)...
　例：如此，我相信大家能够像我一样享受乘坐公车的乐趣。
　In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.
19.实践这些…
　By putting them (the above) into practice, ….
　例：实践这些，在智育方面我一直能不断进步。
　By putting them(the above) into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education.
20. (A) 唯有符合此三项要求，我们才能… Only by living up to the three requirements, can we ….
　 (B) 唯有通力合作，我们才能… Only with combined efforts, can we ….
　 例：唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。
　 Only with combined efforts, can we expectTaiwanto take a new face in due course.
21.最后，但并非最不重要…
　 Last but not least, ….
　 例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。
　 Last but not least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.
22.这证据显示…的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。
　 This evidence shows that the importance of ….cannot be overemphasized.
　 例：这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。
　 This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.
23. 由于这些理由，我…
　　For these reasons, I ….
　　例：由于这些理由，我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。
　　For these reasons, I think that receiving college education inTaiwanis wise.
24. 总而言之…
　　In conclusion, …
　　= To sum up, …
　　例：总而言之¸好国民应该遵守交通规则。
　　In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations.
25. 因此我们可以下个结论，那就是…
　　We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)...
　　例：因此¸我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。
　　We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.
26. 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地…
　　If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that)...
　　例：如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，我们就能精通英语。
　　If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English.
27. 因此，这就是…的原因
　　Thus, this is the reason why ….
　　例：因此，这就是我重感冒的原因。
　　Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.
28. 所以，我们应该了解…
　　Therefore, we should realize (that)...
　　例：所以，我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。
　　Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.
29. 因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了…
　　We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that)...
　　例：因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。
　　We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.
　　30. (A). 从～观点来看…
　　From the ～ point of view, …

二、高级句型：

1. ~~~the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
　 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。　Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
　 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
2. Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
　　Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
　　例句：没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to receive education.
　　Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.
3. ~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.
　　(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句：我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
　　我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过。We cannot emphasize the importance of education.
4. There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的……)
　　例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
　　不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
　　There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.
　　不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。
5. It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道……)
　　例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
　　全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
6. There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的……)
　　例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
　　毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
7. An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(……的优点是……)
　　例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.
　　使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
　　An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.
　　锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。
8. The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(……的原因是……)
　　例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
　　我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
9. So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此……以致于……)
　　例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。
　　So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her. 西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。
10. Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然……)
　　例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
　　{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
　　虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
11. The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
　　The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈……愈……)
　　例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈进步。
12. By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着……，……能够……)
　　例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
13. ~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (……使……能够……)
　　例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
　　Travelling enable our life to be enriched, 旅行能丰富人们的生活。
14. On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能……)
　　例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
　　On no account can we ignore the importance of education. 我们绝对不能忽略教育的重要性。
15. It is time + S + 过去式 (该是……的时候了)
　　例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
　　该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
16. Those who ~~~ (……的人……)
　　例句：Those who break the law should be punished. 违法的人应该受处罚。
17. There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不……)
　　例句：There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。
　　There is no one but longs to be a millionaire. 没有人不渴望成为百万富翁。
18. be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不……)
　　例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
　　由于考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
19. It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
　　It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
　　It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
　　例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
　　可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
20. That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是……的原因)
　　例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it. 夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
　　Winter is cold. That is the reason why I don't like it. 冬天很冷。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
21. For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去……年来，……一直……)
　　例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
　　过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
22. Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
　　例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
23. It pays to + V ~~~ (……是值得的。)
　　例句：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。
24. be based on (以……为基础)
　　例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
25. Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
　　We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
26. bring home to + 人 + 事 (让……明白……事)
　　例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
27. be closely related to ~~ (与……息息相关)
　　例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。
28. Get into the habit of + Ving
　　= make it a rule to + V (养成……的习惯)
　　We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing. 我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。
29. Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~ (因为……)
　　例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. 因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
　　Thanks to Miss Qin's help, I passed the examination. 多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。
30. What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + N + V!(多么……!)
例句：遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
What an important thing it is to keep our promise! = How important a thing is to keep our promise!
诚实是多么重要的事!
　　What an important thing it is to be honest! = How important a thing is to be honest!
31. Have a great influence on ~~ (对……有很大的影响)
　　例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
32. do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对……有害)
　　例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
　　Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
33. Pose a great threat to ~~ (对……造成一大威胁)
　　例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
　　Noise poses a great threat to our living. 噪音对我们的生活造成一大威胁。
34. do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (尽全力去……)
　 例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life. 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
　　We should do our utmost to help others. 我们应尽全力帮助别人。
35. Among various kinds of …，…
　　= Of all the …， … 在各种…之中?…
　　例句：Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
36. In my opinion，…
　 = To my mind，…
　 = As far as I am concerned …
　 = I am of the opinion that+子句 就我的看法…;我认为…
　 例句：In my opinion, playing copmuter games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.
　 就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。
37. Of all the people I know，perhaps non deserves my respect more than …在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。
　 例句：在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师王老师更值得我尊敬。
Of all the people I know，perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Wang, my English teacher.
38. 据说… It is said (that)子句
　 一般认为… It is thought (that)+子句
　 大家都知道… It is known (that)+子句
　 据报道… It is reported (that)+子句
　 一般预料… It is expected (that)+子句
　 据估计… It is estimated (that)+子句
　 一般相信… It is believed (that)+子句
据说… It is said (that)+子句
　 例句：It's known that Hangzhou is a beautiful city. 众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。
39. With the increase/growth of the population, … （随着人口的增长，……）
　 With the advance of science and technology, … （随着科技的进步，……）
　 With the rapid development of China's economy, … （随着中国经济的迅速发展, ……）
　 With the improvement of people's living condition,… （随着人们生活水平的提高,……）
　 With the improvement of people's living condition, more and more families have their own cars.
　 随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的家庭拥有了私家车。
40. If you don't..., you'll… （如果你不……，你就会……）
It you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

三、常见名言警句：
01. Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧.
02. Time is money.
时间就是金钱
03. Easier said than done.
说来容易做来难
04. Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成.
05. Look before you leap.
三思而后行.
06. Knowledge is power.
知识就是力量
07. God helps those who help themselves.
自助者天助.
08. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
心之所愿，无事不成
09. It’s never too old to learn.
活到老，学到老
10. No pains, no gains.
不劳无获
11. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难朋友才是真朋友。
12. To make the impossible possible.
将不可能变为可能
13. Failure is the mother of success.
失败乃成功之母
14. All roads lead to Rome.
条条大道通罗马
15. First things first.
先做重要之事
16. Great minds think alike.
英雄所见略同
17. Rome was not built in a day.
成功并非一朝一夕的事
18. All that glitters is not gold.
闪光的未必都是金子
19. East or west, home is the best.
金窝银窝不如自家草窝
20. Time and tide wait for no man. 
时间不等人
21. Don’t judge a man by his looks.
不可以貌取人
22. Where there is life, there is hope.
有生命必有希望
23. All things are difficult before they are easy.
万事开头难
24. Better late than never.
迟做总比不做好
25. Every little helps.
点滴都有用；积少成多
26. The shortest answer is doing.
最简短的回答就是行动
27. No news is good news.
没消息，就是好消息
28. Well begun, half done.
好的开始是成功的一半
29. All for one, one for all.
人人为我，我为人人
30. One false step will make a great difference.
失之毫厘，谬以千里
31. Facts speak louder than words.
事实胜于雄辩
32. As the tree, so the fruit.
种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆
33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live.
活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着
34. Like and like make good friends.
趣味相投
35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.


1．初中时光灿烂多彩，但也肯定有过困难和挫折。请根据以下提示问题和提示词，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你曾经遇到的困难，克服困难的过程以及你的收获。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：be afraid of，communicate，more confident
提示问题：
●What difficulty did you use to have in your school life?
●How did you deal with it?
●What have you learned from that?
School life is colorful, but not always easy._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考例文：
School life is colorful, but not always easy. I used to have some trouble making friends with others. I was so quiet and found communicating with others really difficult. As a result, I often felt lonely.
But things have changed since my headteacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to be open and willing to help others. I tried and it really worked. Now I have made a few friends and become more confident.
I don’t find it difficult to make friends now. I will not be a closed book any more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”等各种时态交错使用；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，点明过去遇到的困难；
第二步，介绍如何克服困难，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，描写现在的变化，并抒发此变化带来的感悟以及书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I was so quiet and found communicating with others really difficult.（动名词作宾语）
②But things have changed since my headteacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me.（since引导时间状语从句）
③I don’t find it difficult to make friends now.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
2．2021年9月，钟南山院士被授予“共和国勋章”。人们不会忘记84岁高龄的钟南山院士奋战在抗疫一线的场面，我们只有身心健康才能为国家、社会做贡献。请以 “How to Keep Healthy” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1.早睡早起，每天有充足的睡眠。
2.少吃垃圾食品，多吃蔬菜水果。
3.多做运动，每周至少锻炼三次。
4.我们更应外向，交更多的朋友，成为班上最受欢迎的学生之一。
5.我想要成为一名医生，帮助更多的人。
要求：
1.紧扣主题及提示，适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2.词数80个单词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
How to Keep Healthy
Health is important to everyone. But how can we keep healthy?
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【答案】例文
                                                                            How to Keep Healthy
      Health is important to everyone. But how can we keep healthy?
      In order to keep healthy, we should sleep and get up early. Enough sleep is necessary. We should sleep at least eight hours. For breakfast, we should eat eggs and drink milk every day. We should eat less junk food and more fruit and vegetables. We like watching sports programs because they are educational. So we should exercise at least three times a week. What’s more, we need to be more outgoing and make more friends. We can be one of the most popular students in our class.
      I want to be a doctor when I grow up. I plan to study medicine and try my best to help more people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文结合提示内容完成作文，包括睡眠习惯、运动、饮食等，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明主题，健康的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍如何保持健康的生活方式；
第三步，介绍自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②at least至少
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①We like watching sports programs because they are educational.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I want to be a doctor when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．在生活中，规则无处不在，从个人、家庭、班级、校园到公共场所……规则时时约束着我们的言行举止。近日，你校英文论坛正在开展以“Is It Necessary to Follow Rules?”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇短文，结合你的经历和感受，谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：1.你认为遵守规则有必要吗？为什么？
2.请介绍一至两条你的经历和感受。
写作要求：
1.文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；
2.书写规范，语言流畅、通顺，可适当发挥；
3.词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Is It Necessary to Follow Rules?
There are many rules in our life, such as family rules, traffic rules, school rules and so on. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Is It Necessary to Follow Rules?
There are many rules in our life, such as family rules, traffic rules, school rules and so on. But is it necessary to follow rules? I think the answer is yes.
Take myself for example. When I was fifteen years old, I thought I was old enough to neglect the traffic rules. So I often rode a bike on the road wearing headphones. One day, when I was enjoying the music on my bike, a truck suddenly appeared and seemed to lose control. Unfortunately, I was badly hit and got into a coma. However, I was lucky enough to recover in a year.
So that was the result I got. I have learned an important lesson from that accident: follow all the rules.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你认为遵守规则是否有必要以及原因；
第二步，介绍一至两条你的经历和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①enough to do 足够……做某事
②ride a bike 骑自行车
③lose control 失控
④get into a coma 陷入昏迷
[高分句型]
When I was fifteen years old, I thought I was old enough to neglect the traffic rules.（When引导时间状语从句）
4．假如你是李华，这个周日，你的爸爸妈妈要去照顾生病的爷爷，你将独自在家生活一天。妈妈担心你不能照顾好自己，于是你制定了一个生活计划。根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，告诉妈妈你要如何度过这个周日。
早上
七点半起床。早饭后收拾自己的房间。
上午
写作业。
中午
做简单的午饭。午饭后休息半小时。
下午
和同学打篮球。三点去上钢琴课。
回家的路上买汉堡作为晚饭。
晚上
自拟两项要做的事情：
1.……
2.……
你认为……
Dear Mum, please don’t worry about me. I’ve got a plan for this Sunday.
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mum, please don’t worry about me. I’ve got a plan for this Sunday.
I will get up at half past seven and then I will tidy up my room after breakfast. In the morning, I will do my homework. I plan to make a simple lunch and have a rest for half an hour. I will play basketball with my classmates and go to the piano lesson at 3 o’clock. I will buy a hamburger for my dinner on my way home. In the evening, I will watch the news for 30 minutes and go to bed at 10 o’clock.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据表格提示内容，介绍自己的周日计划，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“如何度过这个周日”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。以时间顺序来介绍各时间段要做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②tidy up收拾，整理
③have a rest休息
④on my way home在回家的路上
[高分句型]
I will get up at half past seven and then I will tidy up my room after breakfast.（and连接并列句）
5．双减政策下，自主支配的时间多了，很多同学对合理安排课余时间存在困惑。因此校报开展了“自主管理我能行”的征文活动。请你根据下面提示写一篇短文，介绍你是如何有效安排课余时间，并给其他同学提些建议。


注意：
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数80—100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy
Now students have more free school time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Now students have more free school time. How to make time more meaningful? Here are some useful suggestions. First, it’s good to help our parents do housework to show our love. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What’s more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助父母表达爱心、阅读书籍了解世界、亲近自然放松自己等的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，讲述作文是为了对于同学对合理安排课余时间的建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，合理安排课余时间的具体建议；
第三步，作文结语，表达“希望让我们充分利用业余时间，提升素养。”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to nature亲近自然
②relax ourselves放松我们自己
③make full use of充分利用
④what’s more另外
[高分句型]
①Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.（it固定句式，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier.（动词不定式作目的状语）
6．“劳动教育（labor education）”已纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
内容包括：

注意：
1. 包含以上思维导图内容，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数 80 左右（信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Labor Education
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.
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【答案】例文：
Labor Education
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
I usually do labor at home, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中所给出的要点，结合自身劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对劳动教育的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的劳动经历及感受；
第三步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②do the dishes 洗餐具
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
④as for 至于
[高分句型]
①I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句）
②As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas.（疑问词+动词不定式）
7．在我们成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真思考。
假如你叫李华。你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制订了些规定，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规定不是很赞同。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。
要点提示：
1.青少年应该和同龄人多交流；
2.周末适当出去玩，放松一下；
3.朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步；
4.我认为这个规定应该适当改变。
要求：
1.适当运用被动语态结构；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.80词左右。
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【答案】例文：
ln order to let me study better, my parents make some rules for me. I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time.
However, I think teenagers should be allowed to go out with their friends because teenagers should communicate more with their peers. Moreover, going out to play at the weekend for a proper time can make me feel relaxed. I can also learn the advantages of my friends, and this is helpful to my studies. In addition, friends can encourage each other to study hard and make progress together.
As far as I am concerned, this rule should be changed properly. If I’m allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends, I can do even better in my studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的内容，写短文表达对周末不能出去和朋友玩这条规定的观点及想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示不赞同周末不能出去和朋友玩这条规定；
第二步，介绍出去和朋友玩的好处；
第三步，表示这条规定应该适当改变。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to do sth. 为了做某事
②agree with 同意
③in addition 另外；此外
④encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time.（which引导非限制性定语从句；because引导原因状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）
②I can also learn the advantages of my friends, and this is helpful to my studies.（and连接表短暂先后关系的并列句）
8．未来充满无限可能，科技正在改变一切。假如你是李华，你认为未来还会出现什么更智能的高科技产品呢？你梦想中的最新发明是什么呢？请结合以下提示以“My Dream Invention”为题写一篇英语文章介绍你梦寐以求的发明——Flying bicycle。
1. 飞行自行车由金和橡胶制成，和普通自行车的材料类似；
2. 可以用于上下班，也可帮助锻炼身体；
3. 飞行自行车环保节能，安全实惠，但是不足的是空中飞行时间短，速度慢；
4. 各种创新发明改变了我们的生活，我们也要为建设更美好的未来努力学习；
5. 补充一两点你的看法。
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60~80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：mental n. 金 advantage n. 优点 save energy节能
My Dream Invention
In the future, there will be many great inventions that can change our life. The flying bicycle will be my dream invention. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
【答案】例文
                                                                            My Dream Invention
     In the future, there will be many great inventions that can change our life. The flying bicycle will be my dream invention.
     Flying bicycles are made of gold and rubber, and are similar to ordinary bicycles. It can be used for commuting and can also help exercise. Flying bicycles are environmentally friendly, energy-saving, safe and affordable, but what is insufficient is that the flight time in the air is short and the speed is slow. All kinds of innovations and inventions have changed our lives, and we should also work hard to build a better future. I’m sure the flying bicycle will go into every home in the near future.
     China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，介绍你梦寐以求的发明——飞行自行车。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍飞行自行车的材料以及用途；
第二步，介绍飞行自行车的优点和缺点以及这些发明对我们生活的改变；
第三步，最后表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②all kinds of各种各样的
③work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①But what is insufficient is that the flight time in the air is short and the speed is slow.（that引导的表语从句）
②We should also work hard to build a better future.（动词不定式作目的状语）