Day 04 锻炼活动(解析版)-2022年高考英语二轮复习之写作高级句式表达能力提升微练学案

这是一份Day 04 锻炼活动(解析版)-2022年高考英语二轮复习之写作高级句式表达能力提升微练学案，共8页。学案主要包含了句式提能，基础表达，句法拓展，句式提质，语篇提能，参考范文，写作解析等内容，欢迎下载使用。

【句式提能】
【基础表达】
1.这次活动促进了我们更好地理解友谊。
The activity cntributed t ur better understanding f friendship.
2.这次活动给我们提供了一个相互交流的机会。
This activity ffered us a chance t cmmunicate with each ther.
3.我们球队正忙于为这次比赛做准备，从生活到日常训练。(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
Our team is busy preparing fr the game，frm living t daily training.
【句法拓展】
1.下周我们学校将有个活动，我需要你的帮助。
We’ll have an activity in ur schl next week and I need yur help.
2.请告知我你的计划安排，我将为这次比赛作好准备。
Please infrm me f yur schedule and I’ll be ready fr the match.
3.我们学校有一个大操场，并且明年将新建一个体育场。
Our schl is equipped with a big playgrund and a new stadium will be built next year.
4.课外活动可以给我们娱乐，帮助我们放松自己，其中打篮球是我最喜欢的。
After－class activities can give us amusement and help us t relax urselves，amng which playing basketball is my favurite.
5.有些人似乎认为体育运动不是什么重要的事情，只是人们在不工作的时候偶尔才去做的。
Sme peple seem t think that sprts are unimprtant things that peple d at times when they are nt wrking.
6.毫无疑问，像爬山这样的活动为人们提供了一个锻炼的好机会。
There is n dubt that such activities like climbing a muntain prvide a gd chance fr peple t d exercise.
【句式提质】
1.非谓语动词美化
①为了响应学校发起的阳光体育活动，我们早上组织了长跑活动。
In respnse t the Sunshine Sprts Activities launched by ur schl，we have rganized a lng－distance running in the mrning.
②第二，到户外和你的朋友们一起玩团队游戏，因为体育锻炼是一种有效的排解怒气的方式。
Secnd，ging utdrs and playing team games with yur friends as physical exercise is an effective way t get rid f anger.
③意识到进行体育活动的重要性，我们当中的大多数人开始采取一系列有效的措施，由此带来了一些积极的变化。
Having realized the imprtance f ding sprts，mst f us begin t take a series f effective steps，thus bringing sme psitive changes.
2.虚拟句点缀
①我建议你应该保持学习和锻炼之间的平衡。
I suggest yu (shuld) keep the balance between yur study and exercise.
②是时候采取行动远离电视和电脑去参加体育活动了。
It is time that we shuld take actin t stay away frm the TV and cmputer and take part in sprts activities.
③要不是他今天头痛，他早就去爬山了。
He wuld have climbed the hill if it were nt fr his headache.
3.特殊句式添彩
①体育运动不仅能强身健体而且有助于我们增强意志力和决心。
Nt nly can sprts build up ur bdy but als it can develp willpwer and determinatin.
②郎平说：是最艰难的时光会导致最伟大的时刻。
“It is yur hardest time that leads t the greatest mment，” Lang Ping said.
③永不放弃，你一定会成功。
Never give up and yu’ll be sure t succeed.
【语篇提能】
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假定你是李华，请根据以下提示给你的英国朋友Tm写一封邮件，介绍一下你校运动俱乐部(Sprts Club)的活动情况，内容包括：
1. 活动的时间和地点；
2. 活动的内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。






【参考范文】
Dear Tm，
Hw are yu ging these days? I’m writing t share with yu smething abut ur schl’s Sprts Club，and the detailed infrmatin is as fllws.
The Sprts Club is lcated in ur schl’s gym，where a variety f activities are held every afternn after schl.At weekends，it is available all day fr all students wh are interested in sprts events.Badmintn，basketball and table tennis are especially ppular amng students.What excites me mst is that there are sme kinds f cmpetitins held every few weeks，which attract many students t watch and enrich ur schl life.In a wrd，it is an ideal place t relax urselves after class.
Best wishes!
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“N 7, Jbie Nymble, takes the lead,” cried the annuncer. “Just ne mre hurdle(跨栏) and...” Cheers brke ut.
“Jbie Nymble frm Riverside Middle Schl takes first place in the girls' 100-meter hurdles!” The crwd went wild.
“Cunty champinships(锦标赛), here we cme,” screamed Jbie, patting her green track spikes(钉鞋). They were her lucky shes and she lved them. “Next Saturday, we're taking hme the gld,” Jbie whispered t her spikes, excitedly retying them.
“Dn't frget, guys,” said Marisl, ne f her teammates. “My birthday party is next Friday at Hidden Park.”
Next weekend culdn't cme sn enugh. Jbie smiled with excitement all week lng. At track practice, she leaped ver thse hurdles faster than she'd ever leaped befre. And it wasn't lng befre everything in her path was a hurdle: flwerpts in her frnt yard, sidewalk cracks n the way t the bus stp and even her little sister, Teka!
The day f Marisl's party, Jbie put n her favrite utfit: her blue shrts, an ld track T-shirt frm her dad, and her lucky spikes. “Perfect.” She smiled at herself in the mirrr.
The party was under way when Jbie arrived at Hidden Park. She stpped by the track first, planning t d sme practice.
“Jbie!” Tw f Jbie's teammates rushed tward her, breathless and bareft. “Cme n,” they yelled. “Yu have t try the slide.”
Jbie lked tward the party area. Suddenly, she saw it. The biggest slide she had ever seen was n the far side f the park. Smiling kids zmed dwn the slide at unspeakable speeds. Withut thinking twice, Jbie tk ff her spikes and dashed(猛冲) tward the slide. Its ladder stretched t the sky, but she reached the tp in n time, clsed her eyes and let g.
Jbie culdn't get enugh. She tried again and again. When it was finally time t g hme, she unwillingly made her way back t the track where she'd left her shes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
As she eyed the area frm a distance, panic set in.
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Paragraph 2:
The next day, Jbie turned up in a new pair f spikes fr the champinships.
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【参考范文】
As she eyed the area frm a distance, panic set in. Jbie picked up the pace, her heart punding luder the clser she gt. When she reached the place she'd left them, her heart sank. “My lucky spikes are gne!” she screamed. Jbie's teammates helped her search the whle park, but there was n sign f her lucky spikes. “S lng, gld.” Jbie was hpeless, tears welling up in her eyes.
The next day, Jbie turned up in a new pair f spikes fr the champinships. Uneasily, Jbie shuffled her feet. Fr her, the lss f her lucky spikes meant the lss f the gld medal. “Next up is the girls' 100-meter hurdles,” said the annuncer. Jbie tk several deep breaths, and her teammates encuraged her as she walked dwn t the starting line. Feeling inspired, Jbie decided t try her best. In a flash, Jbie was ff and cleared hurdle after hurdle. She gt clser and clser, and cheers brke ut. Wearing a wide smile, Jbie whispered, “N lucky spikes. Lucky me.”
【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了丢失了钉鞋后，乔比·尼姆布尔穿着新钉鞋，克服不适，努力完成跨栏比赛的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当她从远处看着那片区域时，她开始恐慌了”可知，第一段可描写乔比·尼姆布发现钉鞋丢了以及她当时的心情。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，乔比穿着一双新的钉鞋出现在锦标赛上”可知，第二段可描写乔比穿着新钉鞋来参加比赛的不适以及自我的调整和努力，最终完成了比赛。
2.续写线索：钉鞋丢失——心情沮丧——穿着新钉鞋——努力——完成比赛
3.词汇激活
行为类
1.鼓励：inspire/encurage/mtivate
2.大喊：scream/shut
3.决定做某事：determine t d sth/decide t d sth
情绪类
1.绝望的：desperate /hpeless
2.沮丧，失落：heart sink /feel lw
句法运用
1.“介词+which”引导的定语从句；
2.There is/was n dubt that...的用法；
3.It is time that...句式中的虚拟语气；
4.“祈使句+and+分句”的用法。
高频短语
1. a clse game 一场势均力敌的比赛
2. be beneficial t对……有益
3. break the recrd打破纪录
4. becme the pride f the natin成为国家的骄傲
5. classic/ppular/flk music经典/流行/民间音乐
6. cntribute t有助于
7. cmpse a sng创作歌曲
8. cperate with与……合作
9. cmpete in在……方面竞争
10. g all ut全力以赴
11. in gd frm状态好
12. make a hit流行
13. physical exercise体育锻炼
14. physical develpment身体发育
15. participate in the bidding campaign参加申办活动
16. recrd hlder纪录保持者
17. strengthen friendship增进友谊
18. set a new wrld recrd创造新的世界纪录
19. stand fr代表
20. sign up报名; 与……签订合同
典型句式
1. Frankly speaking, I prefer ftball t basketball.
2. China wn a lt f gld medals, many f which were wn by wmen. 3. It’s said that there will be a cncert cnducted by a wrld-famus cnductr n Sunday evening.
3. As far as I’m cncerned, running nt nly is a gd way t build up ur strength but als helps us relax and relieve the pressure f learning.
4. In respnse t the Sunshine Sprts Activities launched by ur schl, we have rganized lng-distance running in the mrning.
5. Only thse athletes wh have reached the required standard are allwed t take part.
6. It was nt until the late 1800s that shting develped int a sprts item.
7. Generally speaking, there are tw kinds f recreatins: physical activities and intellectual activities.
8. There’s n dubt that we can bth relax urselves and knw the true meaning f life by watching mvies.
9. Last but nt least, such activities like climbing a muntain prvide a gd chance t d exercise.
10. It’s time t take actin t stay away frm the TV and cmputer and t take part in sprts activities.