Day 11 未来世界(解析版)-2022年高考英语二轮复习之写作高级句式表达能力提升微练学案

这是一份Day 11 未来世界(解析版)-2022年高考英语二轮复习之写作高级句式表达能力提升微练学案，共8页。学案主要包含了句式提能，基础表达，句法拓展，句式提质，语篇提能，参考范文，写作解析等内容，欢迎下载使用。

【句式提能】
【基础表达】
1.每个人都应对未来充满希望。
Everyne shuld be hpeful abut the future.
2.现在我已长大且变得更加独立。
Nw I have grwn up and becme mre independent.
3.这的确是一个让更多的人看到它们的好机会。
This is surely a gd chance fr mre peple t see them.
【句法拓展】
1.我们为自己感到骄傲，并且我们可以为一个更加美好的世界做更多的事情。
We are prud f urselves and we can d mre fr a better wrld.
2.这样的措施一定能提高空气质量，因此让我们从现在开始(实施这些措施)。
Such measures can surely imprve air quality，s let’s start frm nw n.
3.努力学习你就会取得进步。
Study hard，and yu’ll make prgress.
4.我相信我完全能达到您的期望。
I am sure that I can perfectly live up t yur expectatins.
5.我已下定决心，将来主修计算机科学。
I have made up my mind that I will majr in cmputer science in the future.
6.不管有多难，我都将追求我的梦想。
N matter hw hard it is，I will pursue my dream.
【句式提质】
1.非谓语动词美化
①我花费了几个小时制订了一个计划，列举了我的目标和实际的步骤。
I spent hurs wrking ut a schedule，utlining my gals and practical steps.
②在了解了我的处境之后，我的老师鼓励我勇敢并自信地实现我的梦想。
After learning what situatin I was in，my teacher encuraged me t achieve my dream bravely and cnfidently.
③他立志做一名画家，用画笔来描绘祖国的大好河山。
He is determined t be a painter，describing the beautiful scenery f his mtherland with the brush.
2.虚拟句点缀
①我们为未来做好规划是很有必要的。
It is very necessary that we shuld make a plan fr the future.
②是我们采取行动保护环境的时候了。
It’s high time that we tk/shuld take actin t prtect the envirnment.
③如果我是你，我就做一名传播中国文化的使者，让世界了解中国。
If I were yu，I wuld be a messenger t spread Chinese culture and let the wrld knw abut China.
3.特殊句式添彩
①我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
On n accunt can we ignre the value f knwledge.
②如果有可能，必须采取一些措施有效地保护传统文化。
If pssible，sme measures shuld be taken t prtect traditinal culture effectively.
③让我们为创造一个绿色和谐的环境共同努力。
Let’s make ur jint effrts t create a green and harmnius envirnment.
【语篇提能】
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假如你是李华(Li Hua)，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来微信，想了解一下你的家乡自“十九大(the 19th Natinal Cngress f the Cmmunist Party f China)”以来所发生的变化，请你用英文给他回复。
内容如下：
1. 精准扶贫(targeted pverty reductin)，效果良好；
2. 环境保护得到了明显改善。
注意：1.词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。






【参考范文】
Dear Peter，
I’m glad that yu are caring abut the develpment f my hmetwn.Nw I will tell yu smething abut it.
Great changes have taken place since the 19th Natinal Cngress f the Cmmunist Party f China.The targeted pverty reductin has reached its ideal aims.Many pr families have gt effective help frm lcal gvernment and have imprved their life greatly.Many ld huses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrunded with green trees and clurful flwers.The rivers that had been plluted seriusly befre are getting clearer and clearer.Besides，all kinds f fishes return t the rivers.The sky is filled with white and cleaner cluds.
Please cme t visit my hmetwn in the near future.
Yurs，
Li Hua
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Dream fr Future
Peple were busy in their wn labratries in the Mars.Turtex tld me,“Let us g t the Earth t have a cup f cffee.”
I laughed fr such a childish jke and I als jkingly asked him,“Is there n cffee shp in the Mars?”
He replied,“It has but they can’t prepare cffee as tasty as that n the Earth.”
Hwever,fr a while I thught it wuld be better t take a cup f tasty cffee frm Ramu’s Cffee Shp lcated at ur village,Kushmandi.
Turtex tld me t enter a rm near his labratry.We entered there and fund that the rm was internally cated with sme materials like spnge.Turtex clsed the dr f the rm with a clap.I saw sme clurful buttns inside the rm.After a few secnds I heard anther clap and nticed that the dr pened.
Turtex said,“Cme with me.”
I asked,“Where?”
He replied,“Nw we are at Kushmandi.”
I shuted,“What?”
We came ut f the rm and I astnishingly viewed the sky-scrapers arund me.Turtex said ludly,“What’s wrng with yu?Cme with me.”
Eventually we entered a cffee club designed like a Five Star Restaurant.Suddenly I nticed a display bard with an electrnic text n,“Welcme t Kushmandi.Nw yu are in famus Ramu’s Cffee Shp.Enjy the taste f the best cffee n the Earth.”
Suddenly many hazy and crazy questins came t my mind.
“What was the nearby rm f the lab?Hw was it pssible t travel an enrmus distance frm the Mars t the Earth?Is it like pening my favurite TV channel with a remte?Hw the pr cffee stall f ur village turned int a Five Star Cffee Club?In which century were we?”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Thinking such hazy things,I fllwed Turtex int the cffee club.
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The waiter brught us tw cups f cffee and left.
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【参考范文】
Thinking such hazy things,I fllwed Turtex int the cffee club.The delicius smell f cffee rushed int my nse.Oh,my lveable tasty cffee.Hw eager I was t have a cup f it at nce!“Cme here.” Turtex said.Still absrbed in thse hazy questins, I fllwed Turtex and sat beside a table, which was cated with strange materials, waiting t enjy the best cffee n the Earth.
The waiter brught us tw cups f cffee and left. Impatiently I tk it and tk a sip.“Oh.My gsh.” It was s ht that it seemed that my muth gt burnt. But then I heard a hair-cutting sund.I slwly pened my eyes and fund that a nurse was cutting my hair and putting them int a tray beside my bed and telling me, “Nthing serius. It needs just tw stitches n yur frehead and yu will be OK within a week.” I finally realised that it was ur village hspital at Kushmandi that I was in, nt at the cffee club.
【写作解析】本文以对未来的梦想为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友Turtex在火星上忽然想要喝到地球上家乡的咖啡，他们飞回地球，发现家乡的咖啡摊位已经变成了五星级咖啡俱乐部。作者和朋友进去喝咖啡，最后梦醒，却发现身在医院的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“想着这些模糊的事情，我跟着特克斯走进了咖啡俱乐部。”可知，第一段可描写作者在咖啡俱乐部等待享受咖啡。
②由第二段首句内容“服务员给我们端来两杯咖啡就走了。”可知，第二段可描写作者正要享受咖啡，却梦醒发现自己身在医院。
2.续写线索：等待——渴望——梦醒——发现——惊讶
3.词汇激活
行为类
①等待：waiting t enjy the best cffee/lk frward t the best cffee/expect t have the best cffee
②梦醒：wake up/cme t life
③发现：find/discver
情绪类
①渴望：hpeful/full f expectatins
②惊讶：surprised/astnished
句法运用
1.“n matter+疑问词”引导的让步状语从句；
2.“It is necessary +that...”从句中的虚拟语气；
3.“n n accunt”引起的倒装；
4.“祈使句+and+分句”的用法。
高频短语
1. be used fr 被用来
2. benefit frm从……获益
3. be available可以利用的
4. be in the lead领先
5. cme true实现
6. fllw the fashin追随时尚
7. imprve the quality f life fr humans提高人类的生活质量
8. in the field f science在科学领域
9. live a/an. . . life过……的生活
10. living standard生活水平
11. lead t/cntribute t/result in/bring abut导致
12. negative effect负面影响
13. shp n the Internet网购
14. stand ut脱颖而出
15. scientific breakthrugh科学突破
16. side effects副作用
17. ptential ability潜能
18. surf the Internet上网
19. with the develpment f. . . 随着……的发展
20. change ne’s life 改变某人的生活
典型句式
1. Micrblg can prvide a platfrm t shw ur talent and release ur pressure, thus making it mre and mre ppular with high schl students.
2. It ges withut saying that mdern technlgy brings us cnvenience and cmfrt in life.
3. It is bvius that iPad is f great help t ur study, especially t ur English listening.
4. N matter where yu g, what yu see and when yu lk, yu will easily find there are many ads arund yu, such as ty ads n TV, fd ads n cmputers, etc.
5. It is annunced in the lcal paper that the factry will take n mre experienced wrkers.
6. Since I’m interested in cmputer science very much, I wuld very much like t take curses related t cmputers.
7. In a wrd, if we had such a magic watch, ur life wuld becme mre cnvenient.
8. With the help f the cmputer, it will be pssible fr humans t wrk at hme.
9. Inventrs have been trying t make flying cars since the 1930s.
10. Inventins are created every day because peple wuld like t make life easier.
11. The develpment f science and technlgy makes ur life mre cmfrtable and cnvenient.
12. Mdern telecmmunicatin shrtens the distance between peple and makes cmmunicatin much easier.
13. The jurney t uter space and ther planets is nt a dream any mre.
14. Mdern medicine prlngs peple’s life and relieves patient f sufferings frm many diseases.
15. Hwever, the prcess f scientific develpment als aruses many severe prblems t ur human beings.
16. Science and technlgy have changed ur life thrughly thrughut the histry, especially in the last century.
17. There is n dubt that we benefit a lt frm the scientific advancements in many different ways.
18. Hw t deal with the prgress f science and technlgy prperly is wrth ur careful cnsideratin.