【浙江英语 九年级下册】期中提分精炼：书面表达学案

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1． 假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jhn,
……
Li Ping
2．为大力推进生态文明建设，我们所在的城市正开展以"绿色生活，美丽家园"为主题的宣传月活动。作为一名学生，请你根据以下提示以"共建美丽家园"为主题，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁大家爱护环境、保护生态，建设美丽家园。
提示∶
要求：
1）文章必须包含所给的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2）文中不得出现真实校名和姓名；
3）词数：90-110。
Hell, everyne!
Tday I'd like t share my pinins n "Build green and beautiful hmetwn tgether".
3． 假如你是李平，英国交换生Rbin即将来你的学校学习，他对你校的拓展课程（extended curses）很感兴趣，请从以下或其它课程中推荐一种，结合自身学习经历，说明推荐理由，并向他介绍该课程的相关信息。
要求：1. 文中需包含所给问题的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名；3. 词数100词左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Rbin,
I'm glad t hear that yu are cming t ur schl and interested in ur extended curses.
Yurs,
Li Ping
4．成长是生命的主旋律。在你的生命中一定出现过一个对你帮助很大、影响很深的人。这个人可能是你的父母、你的老师或你的朋友……请用英语写出你和他（她）的故事以及你的感悟。（题目自拟）
内容包括：1. Wh helped /influenced yu a lt?2. What did he /she d?3. Hw have yu changed?4. …
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；2. 词数100左右。
5． 假定你是李平，请阅读你的国外笔友Jhn的邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注意：
（1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80～100.
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一、书面表达 （共5题）
得分
Hi, Li Ping,
Guess what happened n my way hme frm schl? I fell and hurt my ankle(脚踝)! —This is the first time anything like this has happened t me. Have yu ever hurt yurself? I really want t make sure my ankle gets better as sn as pssible! What d yu think I shuld d? I knw we made plans t g bike riding this weekend, but nw I can't d any sprt. D yu want t d smething else instead?
Let me knw sn!
Jhn
Subject
Build Green And Beautiful Hmetwn Tgether
Ways
save energy: walk r ride t... ; use... less
divide the rubbish int...
plant trees
...
Hpe
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Hi , Li Ping!
Hw is everything ging? I've recently spent a wnderful hliday with my family and traveled a lt. What abut yu？Hw did yu spend yur winter hliday? Did yu d anything meaningful? By the way, I knw yu're busy preparing fr the entrance exam（中考）? D yu have a general plan fr that？Culd yu share smething with me？
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
Jhn
Dear Jhn，
Li Ping
【答案区】
1．【答案】Dear Jhn,
I'm srry t hear abut yur ankle. It sunds painful. Yes, I have hurt myself befre, and I knw hw imprtant it is t take care f the injury t get well sn. Yu shuld rest yur ankle. If it gets wrse, see a dctr right nw. As fr ur plans t g bike riding, we can still d smething that desn't require much physical activity. Hw abut ging t the mvies r just ding sme reading? Let me knw yur thughts.
Take care f yurself and hpe t see yu sn.
Best regards,
Li Ping
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用作文，注意电子邮件格式。时态是现在完成时、一般现在时，首先介绍对Jhn弄伤脚踝的看法；然后介绍自己的建议；最后介绍总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：hear abut；take care f；get wrse；see a dctr；right nw；as fr；g bike riding；hw abut ding；d sme reading；hpe t d等。现在完成时I have hurt myself befre.；宾语从句and I knw hw imprtant it is t take care f the injury t get well sn.；状语从句和祈使句If it gets wrse, see a dctr right nw.；定语从句As fr ur plans t g bike riding, we can still d smething that desn't require much physical activity..；祈使句Take care f yurself and hpe t see yu sn.的运用为文章增色不少等。连词if、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2．【答案】Hell, everyne!
Tday I'd like t share my pinins n "Build green and beautiful hmetwn tgether".
As middle schl students, it's ur duty t help build a green and beautiful hmetwn. First, we can ride bikes r walk t schl if it's nt far away frm ur hmes. The mre peple chse the public transprtatin, the fewer traffic jams there will be and the cleaner the air will be. Secnd, we mustn't thrw rubbish here and there. We must thrw them int the dustbin. If s, ur hmetwn will be clean and tidy. We will feel mre cmfrtable, t. Third, plant mre trees. Trees are imprtant t the envirnment. They can make the air much fresher.
We shuld d everything we can t prtect the envirnment.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，本文要求按照所给写一篇演讲稿，呼吁大家爱护环境，写作中要包含本次演讲的主题，保护环境的方法，以及呼吁大家一起努力，根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时与一般将来时结合，人称主要为第一人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示保护环境的方法进行了详细阐述，同时也呼吁大家共同保护环境，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，连贯，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语如far away frm远离，ride bikes骑自行车，here and there到处都是，等以及句型结构，如First, we can ride bikes r walk t schl if it's nt far away frm ur hmes. The mre peple chse the public transprtatin, the fewer traffic jams there will be and the cleaner the air will be.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加自然流畅。
3．【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Rbin,
I'm glad t hear that yu are cming t ur schl and interested in ur extended curses.
Our extended curses include Tea Art, Etiquette, Basketball, Arts and crafts and DIY. Each curse is taught by a prfessinal teacher. I tk part in Tea Art. I think it's a part f Chinese culture. The teacher wh taught tea art is a great tea culture lver. I tk lessns in ur schl hall every Friday afternn. Frm this curse, I learned the histry and develpment f tea and hw t make a perfect cup f tea. What impressed me mst was that we wre ancient cstumes t perfrm in the tea art cmpetitin. I hpe yu take part in Tea Art. It will shw yu the charm f Chinese tea culture. I'm sure yu'll be interested in it.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，为提纲作文；时态为"一般现在时"和" 一般将来时"。且写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目给出的提示，并适当增加细节。在写作时，第一步可以表明写作意图。借用"我校拓展课程的种类"来引出下文中对某一种课程的介绍。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"我选择的课程、授课教师、时间地点以及课程感观"四方面入手，重点介绍我校的拓展课程。第三步，书写结语。希望罗宾也一起参加。
【点评】考查写作。注意在写作时要注意语意连贯，语法正确。且在文中使用一些亮点词汇，例如take part in，be interested in sth等，为文章增色。
4．【答案】
My English teacher
The persn wh helped me a lt is my English teacher. She's very kind and hard-wrking. She's s helpful that she's ready t help almst every student in my class. Tw years ag, I used t be afraid t speak English. But she tried her best t help me t slve my prblem. Thanks t her help, I made great prgress in my English study. Nw I can speak in public and dn't feel nervus. She teaches me nt nly t learn but als t be a gd persn.
I'll remember her frever.
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文。这篇短文应使用第三人称、一般过去时为主叙述。写作内容已给出，根据问题叙述相关内容，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节，题目需自拟。在写作时，首先开门见山，表明对我帮助最大的是我的英语老师。然后具体叙述英语老师对自己的帮助以及自己的变化。最后表达自己会永远记得老师的情感。
【点评】考查写作。在写作时要注意英语句式结构的特点，写完整的句子。使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，简单句结构易于掌握，但为提高作文档次，也应穿插使用并列句以及其他复杂句式。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、流畅。其中一些词汇运用值得学习， helped me a lt ； kind and hard-wrking ； ready t ；She's s helpful that she's ready t help almst every student in my class. Thanks t her help, I made great prgress in my English study.
5．【答案】略
【解析】【分析】假定你是李平，请阅读你的国外笔友Jhn的邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。本文是一篇电子邮件；用一般现在时和一般过去时描述；要求根据邮件内容进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤：第一步，介绍自己的寒假活动；第二步，介绍自己的学习计划。
【点评】注意邮件书写格式，建议使用hear frm 收到某人的来信，a lt f 许多，plan t d sth 计划做某事，make sure 确保等短语，和高分句型：My winter hliday was a little busy since I spent mst f my time studying.（时间状语从句）；As fr the entrance exam, I plan t imprve my English listening skills by watching sme mvies and reciting mre wrds.（动名词作宾语）。