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写作技巧:
审题认真审题是写好作文的前提,一般地,审题包含两个要素:审要求、审主体信息和要点。
审要求:明确写作要求以确定写作对象、体裁、主题,选定要使用的人称、时态、语态,此外,要注意词数要求;
2. 审主体信息和要点:总览题目要求,划分信息和要点,特别是图表信息。
(二) 谋篇布局:列提纲、分段落在全面审题、充分理解题目的基础上,可以着手准备进行写作,写作以说明性写作为主,主要让考生介绍某些东西、对某些现象进行描述或对某些问题进行答复。与故事类不同,说明性写作意味着段与段之间的内在联系相对松散,可以根据需要将整篇作文分为若干个段落,不同段落各有侧重,最后形成一篇完整的文章。
(三) 检查优化正如中考评分标准所述,要拿高分作文,文章须得语句通顺,意思连贯、流畅,所以检查优化很重要。
1. 优化句子在有把握的前提下,要灵活变换一些词汇和句式。
2. 巧用过渡句优化过渡句能起到承上启下,达到上下文连贯的作用,
如本文中可用Here I’ve gt gd news fr yu.或Here is a piece f gd news.作为过渡句。
此外,在写作过程中,我们也经常用Let me tell yu smething abut it./ Nw I’ll shw yu…/ Let me share the gd news with yu.等来作为过渡句。
结尾句应简明扼要,再现主题。
如I hpe yu will cme and experience Chinese Wushu culture. / I hpe yu can als enjy Chinese Wushu culture./ Wuld yu like t cme and jin us?等。
得体运用连接词常见的连词有and(并列),hwever(转折),while(对比),because(因果),if(条件),s….that / such…that(结果),s that(目的),even if(让步)等。此外,作文中常用的起始连词有at first,first f all, in the beginning;归纳有generally speaking;递进有besides,what’s mre / wrst;表归纳总结的连词,有in a wrd, all in all等。
(四)再次复核,规范书写文章初稿拟好之后,要检查格式、人称、时态、语态、名词的单复数、大小写、较长单词的拼写、习惯用语、标点符号等是否正确,关联词使用是否恰当,词数是否符合要求,是否存在中国式英语等。要规范地写好每个字母、单词、标点符号以及大小写,保证卷面整洁。
七下话题必备
1.购物是我们日常生活中一项重要的活动,人们几乎每天都要买东西,但怎么合理购物,理性消费,做一个聪明的购物者呢?假如你们的校刊英语专栏正在以“Hw t D Shpping Wisely?”为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际谈谈你是如何聪明地购物的。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:first第一;secnd第二;last but nt least最后同样重要的是
Hw t D Shpping Wisely?
Shpping is an imprtant activity in ur life. But hw t shp wisely and be a smart shpper? Here are my ways.
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【答案】例文:
Hw t D Shpping Wisely?
Shpping is an imprtant activity in ur life. But hw t shp wisely and be a smart shpper? Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shpping list befre ging shpping. I write dwn what I need and nly buy things n the list. It can help me save time and mney. I always make a plan, t. I knw hw much mney t pay. Secnd, I am careful. I check different shps t lk fr the best price. And I think again befre I make payments. Last but nt least, if we can share smething with ur brthers r sisters, there is n need t buy it.
Let’s be a smart shpper and d shpping wisely!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示信息写作,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题(已给出);
第二步,根据提示信息详细介绍如何明智购物;
第三步,呼吁明智购物。
[亮点词汇]
①save time and mney省时省钱
②lk fr寻找
③share sth with sb和某人分享某物
④a smart shpper聪明的购物者
[高分句型]
Last but nt least, if we can share smething with ur brthers r sisters, there is n need t buy it. (if引导条件状语从句)
2.如今,很多人喜欢在互联网上点餐。老师要求你们在下周一的英语课上就互联网点餐这一现象,谈谈它的利与弊。请你根据写作要求,谈谈你的看法。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Ordering Fd Online, Gd r Bad?
Nwadays, many peple like rdering fd nline. Is it gd r bad?
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【答案】例文:
Ordering Fd Online, Gd r Bad?
Nwadays, many peple like rdering fd nline. Is it gd r bad?
Sme peple think it’s gd t rder fd nline because it is cnvenient and fast. It can help save time. Als, the fd is cheap and delicius. Besides, we have many kinds f fd t chse frm.
Hwever, ther peple have different ideas. They say eating takeaway t ften is bad fr health, because takeaway may nt be fresh fd. And the plastic bags f the fd are bad fr the envirnment.
I think we can rder fd nline smetimes, but nt t ften.
【详解】①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:对网上点餐的利与弊进行介绍,并阐述自己的看法;适当增加细节,注意条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分别介绍网上点餐的优点;
第二步,分别介绍网上点餐的缺点;
第三步,表达自己的意见。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds f fd许多种食物
②be bad fr对……不好
③help save time帮助节省时间
[高分句型]
Sme peple think it’s gd t rder fd nline because it is cnvenient and fast. (it的固定句型、because引导原因状语从句)
3.如何做一个聪明谨慎的购物者是我们需要掌握的一项重要的生活技能。请你结合下面的图示信息,以“Hw t Be a Smart and Careful Shpper”为题,向校刊的英语专栏投稿分享一下如何成为一个聪明谨慎的购物者。
写作要求:
(1)文中须包含以下图表中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数65词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hw t Be a Smart and Careful Shpper
It’s great fun knwing hw t be a smart and careful shpper. Let me tell yu smething abut it.
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Let’s be a smart and careful shpper!
【答案】例文:
Hw t Be a Smart and Careful Shpper
It’s great fun knwing hw t be a smart and careful shpper. Let me tell yu smething abut it.
We can make a shpping list and nly buy the things n the list. When we buy things, we can lk fr things n sale. We can als check different shps t lk fr the best price. Befre making payments, we need t check the price again. If we can share smething with ur brthers r sisters, there is n need t buy it.
Let’s be a smart and careful shpper!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示信息写作,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息详细介绍如何做一个聪明的购物者;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a shpping list列购物清单
②lk fr寻找
③n sale促销
④share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①When we buy things, we can lk fr things n sale. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we can share smething with ur brthers r sisters, there is n need t buy it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4.水是我们生活中最常见的东西,也是我们生活中非常重要的东西之一,所以我们要节约用水,保护水资源。假如你们校刊的英语专栏以“家庭节约用水”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际谈谈你的认识和做法。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: first f all 首先; then 然后; in the end 最后; used water用过的水
Hw t Save Water at Hme
Water is very valuable and useful.
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Let’s try ur best t save water.
【答案】例文
Hw t Save Water at Hme
Water is very valuable and useful. We use it t d lts f things in ur life. It is imprtant fr us t save water. Hw t save water at hme?
First f all, we shuld take a quick shwer because it uses less water. Then turn ff the tap when we brush ur teeth. In the end, remember t water plants with used water. It can make full use f water. In these ways, we can save a lt f water.
Let’s try ur best t save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可以适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接使用已给出的首句,说明水的珍贵性和用途;
第二步,具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法;
第三步,最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn ff关闭
②make full use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①It is imprtant fr us t save water. (it is+adj+t d sth句型)
②Let’s try ur best t save water.(祈使句)
5.水在我们的生活中非常重要,水资源非常珍贵,所以我们应该节约用水。假如英语口语课上,老师要求你以“Act Nw t Save Water”为题,谈谈生活中浪费水的现象和节约用水的方法。请你根据写作要求写一篇英语短文,为你的口语课做准备。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Act Nw t Save Water
Water is very valuable, but many peple ften waste water in their daily life.
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Water is really imprtant t us. Let’s save water frm nw n.
【答案】例文
Act Nw t Save Water
Water is very valuable, but many peple ften waste water in their daily life. Fr example, sme peple take a bath fr a lng time. Sme peple ften dn’t turn ff the ta p well, s the water drips frm the tap. Smetimes peple use t much water t wash clthes. Then what shuld we d t save water? First, we shuld take a quick shwer. Secnd, we shuld turn ff the tap well after we use it. If there is a trip, fix it. Third, when we d sme washing, we shuld use as little water as pssible.
Water is really imprtant t us. Let’s save water frm nw n.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作内容提示已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏所给出的信息,可以适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出水很珍贵但人们常浪费水的问题,列举生活中常见的浪费水现象。
第二步,针对浪费水的问题,提出具体的节约用水的建议,如快速洗澡、及时关水龙头、洗衣服少用水等。
第三步,结尾呼吁大家从现在开始节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①valuable宝贵的,有价值的
②waste water浪费水
③turn ff关闭
[高分句型]
①Water is very valuable, but many peple ften waste water in their daily lives.(并列句)
②Let’s save water frm nw n.(祈使句)
6.每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英语社拟开展以“Let’s Prtect Our Earth Tgether”为主题的英语演讲活动,向全校师生发出共同保护地球的倡议。请你根据下列要点提示,写一篇70词左右的英语演讲稿。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
As we all knw, the earth is ur hme.
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Thank yu fr yur listening.
【答案】例文:
As we all knw, the earth is ur hme. We shuld prtect it. At hme, we can save water and turn ff the lights when leaving rms. At schl, making a pster t call n mre peple t prtect the earth is a gd idea. Als, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way t lwer energy cnsumptin during paper-making prcesses. In the cmmunity, we shuld srt the rubbish t make ur envirnment clean. Let’s take actin t prtect ur earth frm nw n in rder t create a sustainable and beautiful living envirnment fr future generatins.
Thank yu fr yur listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,围绕 “Let’s Prtect Our Earth Tgether”主题,给出在家、在学校、在社区的环保建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点明地球是我们的家园,引出保护地球的话题;
第二步,分别从在家(如节约用水、随手关灯等)、在学校(制作海报、纸张重复利用等)、在社区(垃圾分类等)三个方面阐述具体的环保行动;
第三步,结尾总结呼吁大家一起行动保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
① call n 号召
② take actin 采取行动
③ in rder t 为了
[高分句型]
① Als, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way t lwer energy cnsumptin during paper-making prcesses.(because引导原因状语从句)
② Let’s take actin t prtect ur earth frm nw n in rder t create a sustainable and beautiful living envirnment fr future generatins.(in rder t作目的状语)
7.假如你是康康,你和家人上周去了山上露营,请你根据写作要求用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的旅行经历。
写作要求:
(1)短文需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3) 词数70个左右。
A Trip t the Muntain
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【答案】例文
A Trip t the Muntain
Last weekend, I camped in the muntain with my family by car. The weather was sunny and windy.
First, when we gt there, I helped my father set up the tent. Then, we fund a big river. The water was clean, s we gt sme water. Next, we helped my mther ck and had lunch tgether. The fd was delicius. Later, I went fishing with my father and gt a lt f fish. Finally, we returned t ur hme.
The trip was wnderful and we were happy that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述露营经历;
②时态:全文采用一般过去时;
③提示:严格按表格要点展开,包含时间、地点、人物、交通方式、天气、活动及感受,语句简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题(时间/地点/人物/交通方式);
第二步:按活动顺序描写(搭帐篷→取水→做饭→钓鱼);
第三步:总结感受(wnderful/happy)
[亮点词汇]
①set up the tent搭帐篷
②gt water取水
③went fishing钓鱼
[高分句型]
①The water was clean, s we gt sme water.(s连接结果状语从句)
②Later, I went fishing with my father and gt a lt f fish.(and连接并列动作)
8.假如你是小明,请你根据以下内容提示写一篇题为“A Trip t the West Hill Park”的英语短文。
内容提示:
(1)时间:上周末;
(2)参加者:你和你的同班同学;
(3) 地点: 西山公园 (the West Hill Park);
(4)活动:骑自行车 (我途中摔倒了……)、爬山、做游戏;
(5) 感受。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含以上提示信息,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3) 词数70个左右。
参考词汇: get hurt 受伤; tired 疲劳的
A Trip t the West Hill Park
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【答案】例文
A Trip t the West Hill Park
Last weekend, I went t the West Hill Park with my classmates. The weather was windy and cl.
When we gt t the park, we gt sme bikes. Then we rde bikes arund the park. We sang sngs and tld stries alng the way. Suddenly, I fell dwn frm my bike. But I didn’t get hurt. Then, we climbed the muntain and played games. Finally, we returned hme.
I was very tired but happy. I hpe t g there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述了一次去西山公园的旅行经历;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”,因为是描述上周末发生的事情;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括时间、参加者、地点、活动和感受,考生需确保这些要点都被涵盖,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图和背景。简要介绍上周末和同班同学去了西山公园;
第二步,具体阐述旅行内容。按照时间顺序,描述骑自行车(包括途中摔倒的情况)、爬山和做游戏等活动;
第三步,书写结语。表达对这次旅行的感受,如虽然累但很开心等。
[亮点词汇]
①fell dwn frm 从……摔倒
②get hurt 受伤
③return hme 回家
[高分句型]
①When we gt t the park, we gt sme bikes.(时间状语从句)
②Then, we climbed the muntain and played games.(and连接并列成分)
9.假如你校英文校报正和社区合作举办“我为社区添光彩”的英语征文活动,鼓励大家为社区的发展出谋划策,你想写一篇英语作文参与活动。请根据下面的提示信息完成这篇作文。
▲What d yu like abut yur cmmunity?
▲What d yu think peple can d t make yur cmmunity better?
▲What d yu hpe yur cmmunity will be like?
注意:
1. 根据提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数80个字左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Making ur cmmunity better
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【答案】例文
Making Our Cmmunity Better
I lve my cmmunity. It’s a place full f warmth and harmny. But there’s always rm fr imprvement.
We can start by rganizing regular vlunteer clean-up days t keep ur streets and parks sptless. Planting mre trees and flwers will beautify the envirnment and prvide fresh air. Als, setting up cmmunity clubs fr different interests can bring neighbrs clser.
I’m cnfident that with these effrts, ur cmmunity will becme an even better place t live, where everyne feels at hme.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕如何让社区变得更好展开论述;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:阐述让社区变得更好的方法和对社区未来的期望。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表达对社区的喜爱,并指出社区仍有改进空间;
第二步,中间具体提出让社区变好的措施,如组织清洁日、种植花木、成立社区俱乐部等;
第三步,结尾表达对社区未来的信心,相信通过努力社区会更宜居。
[亮点词汇]
①warmth温暖
②harmny和谐
③sptless一尘不染的
④beautify美化
⑤cnfident有信心的
[高分句型]
①Planting mre trees and flwers will beautify the envirnment and prvide fresh air.(动名词作主语)
②I’m cnfident that with these effrts, ur cmmunity will becme an even better place t live, where everyne feels at hme.(that引导宾语从句+where引导非限制性定语从句)
10.假设你是李明,上周末你班同学参加了一次敬老院的公益活动。请你根据下列活动要点写一篇英语报道,在英语课上做一个daily reprt。
要求:词数80-100,开头已给出。
参考词汇:gather集合 tidy up整理 chat聊天 meaningful有意义的
We paid a visit t the ld peple’s hme last weekend.
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【答案】例文:
We paid a visit t the ld peple’s hme last weekend. At 8:30 n Sunday mrning, all my classmates gathered at the schl gate. Then we went t the ld peple’s hme by bus. When we arrived, we gave the ld peple ur carefully-prepared gifts first. After that, we started t help them clean the rms and tidy up their things. T make them happy, sme f us sang sngs, sme danced, and thers tld interesting stries r chatted with them. The ld peple smiled brightly, and they seemed very excited. I think this activity is really meaningful.
On ne hand, it makes the ld peple feel less lnely and brings warmth t them. On the ther hand, it teaches us t care abut thers and understand the imprtance f respecting the elderly. I hpe we can have mre such activities in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇活动报道,以记叙文的形式详细记录了班级同学前往敬老院开展公益活动的过程。
②时态:全文以一般过去时为主,用于描述上周末已发生的活动过程;在表达个人看法时使用一般现在时。
③提示:严格遵循题目要求,涵盖所有要点,合理运用参考词汇,语言流畅,层次分明,无语法和拼写错误,字数符合规定。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首句直接引出报道主题,简洁明了,接着说明集合时间、地点和交通方式,为后续活动描述做好铺垫。
第二步,详细叙述活动过程,按照活动先后顺序,依次描述到达敬老院后赠送礼物、打扫卫生整理房间,以及通过唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天等方式给老人带去快乐的过程。
第三步,从两个方面阐述个人对活动的看法,分别强调活动对老人和参与者的积极意义,最后做总结,表达对未来此类活动的期待,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①gathered集合
②carefully-prepared精心准备的
③brightly灿烂地
[高分句型]
①T make them happy, sme f us sang sngs, sme danced, and thers tld interesting stries r chatted with them.(使用并列结构)
②On ne hand, it makes the ld peple feel less lnely and brings warmth t them. On the ther hand, it teaches us t care abut thers and understand the imprtance f respecting the elderly.(采用“On ne the ther hand...”的对比结构)
11.在你的学习生活中,你一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事情,如帮助别人、读书、做志愿服务等。请以“______ makes me happy”为题,根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示词:d gd 做好事 help thers 帮助他人 d sprts 做运动 wrk hard 努力学习
要点:1.什么让你快乐;
2.在生活中你是如何做的。
要求:1.参考要点内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数不少于 70。
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【答案】 Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Helping thers makes me happy because it gives me a sense f purpse and fulfillment. Whenever I assist smene, whether it’s helping a classmate with hmewrk r vlunteering in my cmmunity, I feel a deep sense f jy. I believe that small acts f kindness can make a big difference in smene’s life.
In my daily life, I try t be attentive t thse arund me and ffer help whenever I can. This nt nly makes thers happy but als brings me great satisfactin and happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据提示内容介绍让自己感到快乐的事情,并描述在生活中是如何做的,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍让自己感到快乐的事情;
第三步,描述在生活中是如何做的。
[亮点词汇]
①a sense f purpse and fulfillment一种使命感和满足感
②a deep sense f jy深深的喜悦
③make a big difference起作用,有影响
[高分句型]
①Helping thers makes me happy because it gives me a sense f purpse. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②This nt nly makes thers happy but als brings me great satisfactin and happiness. (nt nly…but als结构)
12.假如你是李华,你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆,现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
内容需包含:
1.性格特点:乐于助人,做事细心;
2.爱好:热爱读书……
3.你对志愿工作的看法:……
注意:
1.词数80左右。可适当发挥。
2.邮件已给出的部分,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing t recmmend myself as a vlunteer f the library in ur cmmunity.
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I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua.
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing t recmmend myself as a vlunteer f the library in ur cmmunity.
I’m always willing t help thers. When my classmates have truble with their studies, I ften ffer my help patiently. Als, I am a careful persn. I always pay attentin t details, s I can rganize activities well.
I lve reading very much. I ften lse myself in different kinds f bks, like exciting nvels and interesting science bks. I can share my favrite bks with cmmunity members.
I believe being a vlunteer is a great chance t help thers and imprve myself. It can bring jy t thers and make me grw at the same time. Therefre, I am willing t spend my free time ding meaningful things fr ur cmmunity.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:主要使用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:需包含性格特点、爱好、对志愿工作的看法三个要点,注意语言简洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步:自我介绍并表明写信目的;
第二步:分点说明自己的性格特点、爱好及对志愿工作的看法;
第三步:表达感谢和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① be willing t help thers 乐于助人
② pay attentin t details 注重细节
③ different kinds f 不同种类的
[高分句型]
①When my classmates have truble with their studies, I ften ffer my help patiently. (时间状语从句)
②I believe being a vlunteer is a great chance t help thers and imprve myself. (宾语从句)
13.五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临,一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都,并住在你家。假设你是李华,请根据图片信息写一封信,简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式,及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你,从而更快适应这里的生活。
要求:1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息,适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Jack,
May Day is cming! I am very happy t hear that yu’ll cme t Chengdu.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】[范文]
Dear Jack,
May Day is cming! I am very happy t hear that yu’ll cme t Chengdu. Let me tell yu smething abut myself and my family.
My favrite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute. I usually play basketball with my friends. I play it three times a week. It is relaxing.
As fr eating habits, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. Because they are gd fr my health. I hardly have junk fd. I als g t bed and get up early.
In my family, we must treat thers with respect. Everyne needs t d husewrk, like cleaning the rm.
I hpe yu can have fun with us in Chengdu. I’m lking frward t seeing yu.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借由五一旅行的话题来引出自我介绍和家庭规则介绍。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人信息和家庭规则等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“祝我们在成都玩的愉快”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd fr对……有益
②lk frward t ding期待着做
[高分句型]
①I hpe yu can have fun with us in Chengdu. (宾语从句)
14.根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容,不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名:
国有国法,家有家规。没有规矩不成方圆。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter在邮件中询问你家的家规,并让你谈谈对这些家规的看法或感受。请根据Peter所提出的问题,给他写封回信。
提示词语:can’t, have t, necessary, strict, imprtant, unfair
提示问题:
1. What rules d yu have at hme?
2. What d yu think f the rules? Why?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t hear frm yu.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. Here are sme rules in my family.
First, I can’t stay up late because my parents think sleep is imprtant fr health. Besides, I have t finish hmewrk befre using my phne. Althugh this feels strict smetimes, I knw it’s necessary t fcus n studies.
Hwever, I think the rule “can’t eat snacks after 8 PM” is a bit unfair – I’m always hungry while studying!
What abut yur family rules? Lking frward t yur reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍家里的规矩;
第三步,谈谈你对这些规则的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②lk frward t期盼
[高分句型]
①First, I can’t stay up late because my parents think sleep is imprtant fr health.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Althugh this feels strict smetimes, I knw it’s necessary t fcus n studies.(Althugh引导让步状语从句)
15.“不以规矩,不成方圆。”为帮助同学们更好地理解遵守校园规则的重要性,学校公众号打算推出一期以“校规”为主题的推送。请你以“N Rules, N Order”为题投稿,谈谈你对校规的理解,并号召大家遵守校规。
提示词语:be late fr, unifrm, respect, safe, spirit
提示问题:What schl rules d yu have?
Why are these rules imprtant?
N Rules, N Order
There are many rules in ur schl.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
N Rules, N Order
There are many rules in ur schl. We can’t be late fr class. We have t wear schl unifrms. We must respect ur teachers and classmates. We are nt allwed t run in the hallways.
These rules are very imprtant. If we are late fr class, we will miss imprtant knwledge. Wearing unifrms can make us lk mre united and shw ur schl spirit. Respecting thers shws ur gd manners. Running in the hallways is nt safe, because it may cause accidents and hurt smene.
In cnclusin, schl rules are necessary. Withut them, ur schl life will be in a mess. Let’s fllw the schl rules and make ur schl a better place.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学校里有哪些校规,例如不能迟到、必须穿校服、尊重他人等等;
第二步,介绍这些校规的重要性;
第三步,书写结束语,强调规则的意义,呼吁大家遵守校规。
[亮点词汇]
①be nt allwed t d sth. 不被允许做某事
②knwledge 知识
③united 统一的,团结的
④manners 礼仪
⑤in cnclusin 总而言之
⑥in a mess 凌乱无序
⑦fllw 遵守
[高分句型]
①If we are late fr class, we will miss imprtant knwledge. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Let’s fllw the schl rules and make ur schl a better place. (祈使句)
16.请根据要求完成短文写作,并将短文写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
假如你是李平,英国交换生 Eric即将来你的学校学习并寄宿在你家中,为了更好地融入,他想了解一下你们学校的规则,以及你家里的一些规则,请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一封信向他介绍你的学校和家中的一些规则,并谈谈你对这些规则的看法。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3) 语句连贯,词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Eric,
I’m happy t hear that yu will cme t ur schl. Let me tell yu sme f the rules here.
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I can’t wait t see yu!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】范文:
Dear Eric,
I’m happy t hear that yu will cme t ur schl. Let me tell yu sme f the rules here.
In ur schl, we must wear schl unifrms every day. In class, we shuld listen carefully and nt talk ludly. At hme, I have t help d sme husewrk like washing dishes. I shuld als respect my grandparents and talk t them plitely.
I think these rules are helpful. They make us mre plite and respnsible.
I can’t wait t see yu!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本题属于应用文写作,内容是书信形式介绍学校和家庭规则;
② 时态:使用一般现在时为主;
③ 提示:围绕图示中的“校规、家规、看法”三个方面进行扩展。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表达欢迎,引出主题;
第二步,介绍校规(如穿着、课堂纪律);
第三步,介绍家规(如做家务、尊重长辈);
第四步,表达自己对这些规则的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① at hme 在家里
② have t 不得不
③ d sme husewrk 做家务
④ talk t 和……谈话
[高分句型]
① Let me tell yu sme f the rules here.(祈使句)
② I think these rules are helpful.(宾语从句结构)
17.近日,I Shw Speed关于重庆的旅游直播吸引了国内外网友对于重庆这座“赛博朋克”城市非常感兴趣,而李华,他的美国笔友Peter想要了解李华在重庆的学习生活。假如你就是李华,请根据以下提示,给Peter写一封回信。
提示内容:
要求:
1.书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;
3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:carefully(仔细地,认真地)
Dear Peter,
I am glad t get a letter frm yu.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am glad t get a letter frm yu. I’m happy that yu’re interested in my life in Chngqing. Let me tell yu abut it.
I usually g t schl by bus. It takes abut half an hur. We have sme schl rules. Fr example, we can’t be late fr schl and we must listen carefully in class. After class, I can d what I like. I ften play basketball r ftball with my friends. I like my schl life. I have many friends here. We have a gd time tgether.
What abut yur life? Can yu tell me smething abut it?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己在重庆的生活,适当增加细节,使文章通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示内容介绍自己的学习生活;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fr example例如
②be late fr迟到
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
Fr example, we can’t be late fr schl and we must listen carefully in class. (and连接的并列句)
18.根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实 校名和姓名。
你校将组织一次去北京野生动物园的春游活动。假如你是李华,Peter是来自友好学校的交换生。请你用英语给Peter写一封邮件,邀请他参加春游活动,告诉他集合的时间和地点,具体活动内容,以及注意事项和要求。
提示词语:schl gate, feed, take phts, picnic, dangerus
提示问题:
● When and where are yu ging t meet?
● What can yu d during the trip?
● What rules must Peter fllw during the trip?
Dear Peter,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m writing t invite yu t jin us fr a spring uting t the Beijing Wildlife Z._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m writing t invite yu t jin us fr a spring uting t the Beijing Wildlife Z.
We’ll meet at the schl gate at 8 a.m. this Saturday.
During the trip, yu can feed animals and take phts. We’ll als have a picnic. Remember, it’s dangerus t get t clse t wild animals. Please fllw the guide’s instructins carefully. Dn’t frget t bring yur camera and sme snacks fr the picnic. We’ll have a great time explring the z tgether.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示:根据提示问题写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步:告知见面的时间和地点;
第三步:介绍春游活动及规则;
第四步:承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take phts拍照
②fllw the guide’s instructins遵循导游的指示
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
Dn’t frget t bring yur camera and sme snacks fr the picnic. (祈使句)
19.七年级的生活已过大半,在这期间你的学校生活是什么样的呢?假如你是李华,你报名参加了学校的英语演讲比赛,演讲主题为“My wnderful Schl Life”请根据以下写作要点,准备一篇演讲稿。
写作要点:1. D yu have rules at schl? What are they?
2.What are yur eating habits?
3. What are yur activities at schl?
要求:
1.词数80左右,短文开头已经写好,不计入总词数:
2.文章必须包含以上内容提示,可适当发挥,语句连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名信息。
My Wnderful Schl Life
Hell, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad t tell yu my wnderful schl life.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Wnderful Schl Life Hell, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad t tell yu my wnderful schl life.
First, ur schl has sme rules t help us grw better. Fr example, we must arrive n time, wear unifrms, and keep classrms clean. These rules make ur schl life rganized. Secnd, I have healthy eating habits. I always have breakfast at hme and eat lunch in the schl dining hall. I try t eat mre vegetables and drink milk every day. Third, schl activities are clrful. We have sprts meetings, art festivals, and English clubs. I jined the sccer team and made many friends. I lve my schl life because it is bth meaningful and happy!
Thank yu fr listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你我精彩的学校生活。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——学校校规、你的饮食习惯和学校活动等均要一一阐述;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①n time按时
②healthy eating habits健康的饮食习惯
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I lve my schl life because it is bth meaningful and happy! (because引导的原因状语从句)
20.上周六,你参加了学校举行的一场在云际山举办的户外活动。请你根据以下信息写一篇英语短文,介绍一下本次活动。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
A Trip t Munt Yunji
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【答案】例文
A Trip t Munt Yunji
Last Saturday, we went n a trip t Munt Yunji.
We met at the schl gate early in the mrning. We tk the schl bus t the ft f the Munt Yunji. Then, we started t climb the muntain. It tk us three hurs t get t the tp f the muntain.We set up the tent and cked fd. We tk lts f phts alng the way. Althugh we were tired, we were happy.
We had a great trip. It was wnderful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。根据材料,引出活动;
第二步,介绍具体活动内容;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①g n a trip去旅行
②start t开始
③the tp f……的顶点
[高分句型]
①It tk us three hurs t get t the tp f the muntain.(it作形式主语)
②Althugh we were tired, we were happy. (Althugh引导的让步状语从句)
Hw t D Shpping Wisely?
Befre shpping
Make a shpping list
Make shpping plans
During shpping
Be careful
Think again
Others
…
Ordering Fd Online, Gd r Bad?
Advantages (优点)
方便 (cnvenient) 快捷,品种多样,节省时间……
Disadvantages (缺点)
塑料包装袋 (plastic bags) 对环境 (envirnment) 不利,经常吃外卖食品 (takeaway) 对健康不好……
Yur idea
……
Hw t Save Water at Hme
The imprtance f water
valuable(珍贵的), useful, we use it t ...
Hw t save water at hme
take a quick shwer, use less water, turn ff the tap ...
Prblems f wasting water
take a bath drip (滴; 漏) frm the tap
…
Ways t save water
take a quick shwer fix (修理)
When did yu g there
Last weekend
Where did yu g camping
In the muntain
Wh did yu g with
My family
Hw did yu g there
By car
What was the weather like
It was sunny and windy
What did yu d
Set up the tent, gt water, cked lunch and went fishing
Hw was yur trip
Wnderful
时间
星期天早上8:30
地点
校门口集合,前往敬老院 (the ld peple’s hme)
交通方式
公共汽车
活动
1. 赠送老人们礼物 2. 打扫卫生,整理房间
3. 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐。
个人看法
至少两条
上学交通
他通常乘坐公共汽车上学,大约花半个小时。
学校规则
上学不能迟到,上课要认真听讲
课外活动
可以做自己喜欢的事情,比如打篮球踢足球
学习感受
喜欢学校生活,在学校有很多朋友
A Trip t Munt Yunji
Time
Last Saturday
Place t meet
the schl gate(大门)
Activities
take the schl bus, climb the muntain
set up the tent, ck fd, take phts
...
Feelings
happy, excited; a great trip
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