高考英语二轮讲义-应用文写作 (教师版)

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历年考情
应用文写作考查对词汇知识的掌握情况及其句式的运用。写作最基础的部分就是词汇。针对英语基础较薄弱、考试经验较欠缺的同学，不管是听说还是读写，单词的储备都是很必要的，毕竟没有输入就很难有输出。英语写作想要得到提高，要求考生要分三步走：积累词汇、积累素材、构建逻辑。
命题规律
对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查；
体现个人成长与时代发展相融合；
体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文；
4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意
考向预测
预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。
【2024新课标Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing t share with yu an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing t share with yu an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked t draw r paint smething that impressed us mst. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided t create a waterclr painting f the small bridge ver the park’s pnd, surrunded by blming flwers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrunded by nature nt nly sparked my creativity but als ffered a much-needed break frm the usual hustle and bustle f schl life. I felt a deep sense f peace as I painted.
In a wrd, It was nt just an art class; it was a mment f cnnectin with nature that I truly cherished.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【2025届山东省日照市高三下学期一模】假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的校园文化主题标语(slgan)设计大赛，并获得一等奖。请你给英国笔友Chris写信分享此次经历，内容包括：
(1)介绍你设计的标语；
(2)你的感受。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am mre than thrilled t tell yu that I wn the first prize in the Campus Culture Slgan Design Cntest rganized by my schl last week. I can't wait t share with yu my design.
The slgan I designed is “Reading makes me wise and wise bks make a wise man”. It is well-received fr its using Chinese fur-character idim t shwcase the clse relatinship between reading and wisdm. The judges sang high praise fr it because it is simple in wrds but rich in meaning.
I felt greatly hnred t win the cntest. I lve reading, s I hpe what I did will inspire mre students t read mre. Let’s enjy reading.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris写信分享参加了学校组织的校园文化主题标语(slgan)设计大赛，并获得一等奖的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
展示：shwcase→demnstrate
高度赞扬：sing high praise fr→praise highly
简单的：simple→brief
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：I am mre than thrilled t tell yu that I wn the first prize in the Campus Culture Slgan Design Cntest rganized by my schl last week.
拓展句：I am mre than thrilled t tell yu that I wn the first prize in the Campus Culture Slgan Design Cntest which was rganized by my schl last week.

Writing（1）
【广东省深圳市高级中学2024-2025学年高三上学期第三次诊断考试】假定你是高三学生李华，在一本英语文化类杂志上读到一则“我家的传统”的征稿通知。你对此很有兴趣，请根据征稿要求写一篇关于你最珍视的家庭传统的短文。
1. 介绍该传统；
2. 该传统的重要性。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Traditin in My Family
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【答案】A Traditin in My Family
One f the mst cherished traditins in my family is having a big family dinner every Sunday. All family members gather arund the table, sharing delicius fd and stries. During the dinner, we ften recall the happy memries we’ve had tgether, which adds a warm and sweet atmsphere t the ccasin.
This traditin is f great imprtance. It strengthens ur family bnd, allwing us t cmmunicate and understand each ther better. Als, it prvides a sense f belnging and stability, making us feel lved and supprted.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，介绍自己最珍视的家庭传统并阐述该传统的重要性。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
珍视：cherish → value/treasure
加强：strengthen → enhance
重要：imprtance → significance
提供：prvide → ffer/supply
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This traditin is f great imprtance.
拓展句：This traditin, which has been passed dwn frm generatin t generatin in my family, is f great imprtance.
Writing（2）
【湖南省长沙四大名校2024-2025学年高三下学期2月月考】假如你是校英语社团 (the English Club) 负责人李华，打算在全校发起讲英语故事大赛。请你写一则通知。内容包括：
1.活动目的与安排；
2.呼吁报名参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ntice____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Ntice
T enhance students’ interest in English, ur schl is ging t initiate an English stry-telling cntest. Here are sme details abut this activity.
The cntest will be held in the schl auditrium, frm 4:00 pm t 6:00 pm, next Friday afternn. Five freign teachers wrking at ur schl will serve as judges. Thse wh are interested are welcme t participate. Please sign up at the English Club by this Friday afternn.
We are cnvinced that this activity will be a great success. Let’s seize the pprtunity t make prgress tgether!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英语社团负责人身份写一则举办讲英语故事大赛的通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
增强：enhance → strengthen
发起：initiate → launch
比赛：cntest → cmpetitin
抓住：seize → get hld f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T enhance students’ interest in English, ur schl is ging t initiate an English stry-telling cntest.
拓展句：Our schl is ging t initiate an English stry-telling cntest in rder that students enhance their interest in English.
Writing（3）
【江西省吉安市六校协作体2025学年高三上学期1月联考】你在一家英语网站看到一个关于“Hw t Frm Gd Study Habits”的论坛，请你写一篇帖子发布在该论坛上，内容包括：
1. 学习习惯的重要性；
2. 介绍你的学习习惯；
3. 如何养成好的学习习惯。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Gd study habits are very imprtant t ur academic success and persnal grwth.
As t my study habits, I ften make a detailed study plan at the beginning f each week. This helps me rganize my tasks and time apprpriately. I als make it a pint t review and summarize what I’ve learned every day. Additinally, I dn’t hesitate t ask questins r discuss with classmates and teachers.
T frm gd study habits, we shuld set clear gals and establish a regular study schedule and stick t it. Mrever, cnsistency and self- discipline are the keys t nurturing and maintaining these habits.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就在网站看到的关于“Hw t Frm Gd Study Habits”的论坛写一篇帖子，发布在该论坛上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适当地：apprpriately→prperly
此外：additinally→in additin
毫不犹豫做某事：nt hesitate t d sth→d sth withut hesitatin
养成（习惯）：frm→develp
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T frm gd study habits, we shuld set clear gals and establish a regular study schedule and stick t it.
拓展句：We shuld set clear gals and establish a regular study schedule and stick t it s that we can frm gd study habits.
Writing（4）
【江苏省苏州中学、海门中学、姜堰中学、淮阴中学等四校2024-2025学年高三下学期2月联考】校英文报现向全体高三同学征稿，话题为“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”。请撰写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 你的观点；2. 你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My View n Off-campus Tutring fr Senir Three Students
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【答案】Pssible versin 1
My View n Off-campus Tutring fr Senir Three Students
As far as I’m cncerned, it is ttally unnecessary fr senir three students t sign up fr ff-campus tutring. My reasns are as fllws.
Firstly, the schl lessns cmprehensively include all the crucial pints and teachers are readily available fr cnsultatin whenever questins arise, s it’s a waste f time and mney t attend ff-campus tutring. Secndly, senir three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendus pressure, leaving n extra energy fr ff-campus tutring. Last but nt least, self-study hlds great imprtance as it cultivates independent thinking and prblem-slving skills.
In cnclusin, there is abslutely n need fr senir three students t receive ff-campus tutring.(108w)
Pssible versin 2
My View n Off-campus Tutring fr Senir Three Students
With cllege entrance exam appraching, I think ff-campus tutring is f benefit t senir three students.
Fr ne thing, ff-campus tutring can prvide targeted assistance. Schl teachers have t cater t the verall level f the class, thus neglecting individual prblems. By cntrast, tutrial teachers can ffer tailred instructins based n the unique needs f everyne. Fr anther, in tutrial classes, students have mre chances t interact with the tutr and receive timely feedback, which helps fulfil their ptential and makes the learning prcess mre jyful.
In summary, ff-campus tutring can enhance learning efficiency, s it is advantageus f r senir three students. (102w)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“高三学生是否需要参加校外辅导”的话题撰写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】（范文1）1. 词汇积累
多余的：unnecessary → redundant
压力：pressure → stress
培养：cultivate → develp
总之：in cnclusin → in shrt
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secndly, senir three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendus pressure, leaving n extra energy fr ff-campus tutring.
拓展句：Secndly, senir three students are burdened with a tight schedule and tremendus pressure, which leaves n extra energy fr ff-campus tutring.
Writing（5）
．【辽宁省丹东市五校协作体2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Jerry来信表示对中国文化很感兴趣，恰逢你校开设了英文线上课程——“中国戏曲鉴赏（Appreciatin f Chinese Opera）”，请你回信向他推荐此课程。内容包括：
1.开设时间；
2.课程内容；
3.推荐理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jerry,
Knwing that yu are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like t recmmend t yu ur schl’s nline curse Appreciatin f Chinese Traditinal Opera.
The curse, which aims t bring authentic Chinese traditinal pera fr students bth at hme and abrad, is scheduled t be available in September n ur schl website, which will get updated every Mnday mrning. In this curse, yu will get t knw the histry and varius types f Chinese pera, which are all f unique characteristics. Kunqu Opera, fr example, is well-knwn fr its pctic language and delicate mvements. Mrever, it will intrduce the music in pera, which is usually accmpanied by traditinal Chinese instruments like erhu. The mst attractive part, in my pinin, is the fancy cstumes and makeup. In a wrd, the curse is a gd chance fr yu t deepen yur understanding f Chinese traditinal culture.
I d hpe my recmmendatin can be f help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Jerry写一封回信，向他推荐学校开设的英文线上课程——中国戏曲鉴赏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim t d→be intended t d
各种各样的：varius→varied
例如：fr example→fr instance
著名的：well-knwn→nted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In a wrd, the curse is a gd chance fr yu t deepen yur understanding f Chinese traditinal culture.
拓展句：In a wrd, the curse is a gd chance fr yu which will help yu deepen yur understanding f Chinese traditinal culture.
Writing（6）
【浙江省诸暨市牌头中学等多校2024-2025学年高三下学期2月适应性考试】假定你是育才中学的李华，你校下周五要举办校园音乐节，请你给你校来自英国的交换生Tm写一封邮件介绍本届音乐节，并邀请他在音乐节上表演一个节目。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tm,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tm,
I hpe this message finds yu well. I’m excited t infrm yu abut ur upcming Campus Music Festival, scheduled fr next Friday afternn in the schl auditrium. This event is a vibrant celebratin f music and culture, where students frm all grades cme tgether t shwcase their musical talents. There will be perfrmances ranging frm traditinal Chinese instruments t mdern pp sngs, alng with dance rutines and even a fashin shw that reflects diverse musical influences. It’s nt nly an ccasin fr entertainment but als fr fstering cultural exchange and appreciatin amng us.
We wuld be abslutely delighted if yu culd grace the festival with a perfrmance. Yur participatin wuld bring a special internatinal tuch t ur music festival. Please let me knw if yu’re interested r need any assistance preparing fr it.
Lking frward t yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校来自英国的交换生Tm写一封邮件介绍本届音乐节，并邀请他在音乐节上表演一个节目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：fster→develp
高兴的：delighted→glad
激动的：excited→thrilled
感兴趣的：be interested→take interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m excited t infrm yu abut ur upcming Campus Music Festival, scheduled fr next Friday afternn in the schl auditrium.
拓展句：I’m excited t infrm yu abut ur upcming Campus Music Festival, which is scheduled fr next Friday afternn in the schl auditrium.
Writing（7）
【山东省青岛市崂山区青岛第二中学2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末】．假定你是李华，你校志愿者团打算寒假开展社区服务活动。请你写信给你校交换生Ryan,邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.邀请参加。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
Hw’s yur day ging? I’m writing t invite yu t ur schl vlunteer grup’s cmmunity service during the winter vacatin.
First, we’ll g t the cmmunity library, helping rganize bks and reading t the kids. Next, we’ll visit the nursing hme, where we’ll d husewrk fr the elderly, such as cleaning rms and washing clthes. We’ll als chat with them t bring sme jy.
Given yur passin fr cultural experiences and cmmunity activities, I’m sure yu’ll enjy this. Hpe yu can jin us!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信给学校交换生Ryan，邀请他参加学校寒假开展社区服务活动。其内容包括：活动介绍和邀请参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first → t begin with
帮助：help → assist
快乐：jy → happiness/delight
热情：passin → enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t invite yu t ur schl vlunteer grup’s cmmunity service during the winter vacatin.
拓展句：I’m writing t invite yu t ur schl vlunteer grup’s cmmunity service which is held during the winter vacatin.
Writing（8）
【河北省沧衡名校联盟2024-2025学年高三下学期开学考试】最近你们班进行了“高中生要不要读英文原著”的讨论。请你给校英语报写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1．反映讨论情况；
2．表达自己的观点。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Debate n Reading English Originals in High Schl
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【答案】
The Debate n Reading English Originals in High Schl
Recently, ur class engaged in a lively debate n whether high schl students shuld read English riginals. Opinins were divided. Sme argue that reading English riginals can significantly imprve ur language skills and understanding f different cultures. On the ther hand, thers feel that the cmplexity f the language in riginals can be difficult fr high schl students, ptentially leading t a lss f interest in reading.
Persnally, I believe that reading English riginals is challenging but rewarding. I believe simplified versins might be mre apprpriate fr ur level. With the right supprt and selectin f bks, we can enjy the jurney int the wrld f English literature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就最近班级进行的“高中生要不要读英文原著”的讨论给校英语报写一篇英语短文，反映讨论情况，并表达自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently → lately
观点：pinin → view
提高：imprve → prmte
合适的：apprpriate→ suitable
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：On the ther hand, thers feel that the cmplexity f the language in riginals can be difficult fr high schl students, ptentially leading t a lss f interest in reading.
拓展句：On the ther hand, thers feel that the cmplexity f the language in riginals can be difficult fr high schl students, which can ptentially lead t a lss f interest in reading.
Writing（1）
【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry. Here are a few suggestins fr yur article.
T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld. In additin, yu can als mentin China’s rle in helping slving glbal issues such as the glbal warming, ffering a mre cmprehensive view.
Lking frward t reading yur article!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wnderful
成就：achievement→ accmplishment
建议：suggestin →advice
此外：In additin → what’s mre
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
拓展句：It’s great t hear what yu’re planning t write abut is China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
Writing（2）
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：t begin with → first f all
提高：imprve → prgress
建议：suggestin → advice
选择：chse → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
Writing（3）
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
Writing（4）
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Develpment f Transprt in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Develpment f Transprt in China
Frm the vehicle f hrses t tday's cnvenient transprt, Chinese transprt has an enrmus develpment.
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【答案】Develpment f Transprt in China
Frm the vehicle f hrses t tday’s cnvenient transprt, Chinese transprt has seen enrmus develpment. Chinese transprt has undergne remarkable transfrmatins, giving the Chinese peple access t different ways f travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility, ffering an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips. Secndly, the intrductin f high- speed trains has dramatically shrtened travel times, making intercity travel faster and mre cmfrtable. Lastly, the prliferatin f new energy vehicles underscres China’s dedicatin t envirnmental sustainability, reducing reliance n fssil fuels. These develpments illustrate China’s jurney twards a mdern and efficient transprtatin netwrk that balances cnvenience with envirnmental respnsibility.
In shrt, China’s transprt system is embracing innvatin and ec-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Develpment f Transprt in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：ffer→prvide
极大地：dramatically→tremendusly
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in shrt→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility, ffering an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which ffer an affrdable and green alternative fr shrt trips have emerged as a symbl f urban mbility.
Writing（5）
【2021年全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart nline learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】ne pssible versin:
Be smart nline learners
Netwrk learning has increasingly becme an imprtant means fr peple t acquire knwledge and slve prblems.But being smart nline learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First f all, as smart nline learners, we can make full use f the mst extensive educatinal resurces t braden the hrizn. Besides, We can take the initiative in ur study by urselves withut time and space limit.
Of curse, these disadvantages are as fllws.Faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful t ur study and life. On the ther hand, nline learning itself has sme imperfectins, making it difficult fr us nt t be affected.
In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart nline learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use f→ make the mst f
扩宽,丰富：braden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds f→ varieties f
不完美：imperfectin→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
拓展句：In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
Writing（6）
【2021年浙江卷1月】假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf f ur schl, I wuld like t cnvey my sincere welcme fr yur visiting.
At first, it is f significance t fully understand the schl. As scheduled, all f yu will visit the museum, which cntains the splendid histry f ur schl. Furthermre, ur classes are wrthy f being attended, because yu can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methds. After that, it is at canteen that yu can have a special lunch with ur students.
As mentined abve, I extremely expect yur cming. May yu have an unfrgettable experience.
审题技能
1)明确体裁：确定是书信、邮件、演讲稿、征文、报道等哪种应用文类型，不同体裁有不同的格式和语言风格。如书信有特定的称呼、落款；演讲稿语言要有感染力，需有开场白和结束语。
2)把握主题：精准理解题目核心话题，如 2024 年新高考 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷是分享美术课经历的告知信，就要围绕美术课展开。
3)梳理要点：将题目给出的信息点逐一列出，确保写作时不遗漏，如 2023 年新课标 Ⅰ/Ⅱ 卷建议信中，要明确写出分组存在的问题和提出的建议。
构思技能
1)搭建框架：开头部分根据体裁和主题进行引入，如书信可直接表明写信目的；中间部分展开要点，可分点阐述；结尾部分根据不同情境进行收束，如书信可表达期待回复，演讲稿可呼吁行动等。
2)组织逻辑：使内容有清晰的逻辑关系，如因果、并列、递进等。比如在阐述建议的原因时可用 “首先”“其次”“最后” 等连接词。
3)拓展细节：在要点基础上适当拓展，增加内容丰富度。如分享美术课经历时，可描述具体的作画过程、周围环境等。
表达技能
1)词汇运用
a. 准确性：确保用词准确恰当，避免出现搭配错误等，如 “对…… 感兴趣” 要用 “be interested in” 而非 “be interested with”。
b.多样性：使用丰富的词汇，包括高级词汇、同义词、短语等。如用 “incredible” 替代 “very gd”，用 “be ccupied with” 表示 “be busy with”。
2)语法运用
a.正确性：保证语法结构正确，如主谓一致、时态语态、从句用法等。写通知时，若通知的是将来的活动，常用一般将来时。
b.多样性：运用多种语法结构，如定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等，提升文章档次。如 “Last week, we held a speech cntest, which was a great success.”。
c.语篇衔接：合理使用衔接词，如 “firstly”“secndly”“hwever”“therefre”“besides” 等，使文章上下文连贯，过渡自然。