高考英语二轮讲义-应用文写作（教师版）

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应用文写作常见的几种类型是邮件(书信)、演讲稿、通知和欢迎词等。根据不同的写作目的,可将邮件(书信)细分为邀请类、致歉类、感谢类、求助类、建议类、推荐类、介绍类、申请类、投诉类等。北京高考英语近几年的应用文写作以邮件(书信)为主,其中,建议类考查次数最多、邀请类次之。通知、演讲稿和欢迎词在以往的北京卷书面表达中从未出现,但也有可能被考查到。
一．备考策略
北京高考英语应用文写作不但在语言层面上对学生进行考查,而且对英语学科核心素养中的文化意识、思维品质和学习能力都有考查。因此,在备考时,不能拘泥于翻译,需要输出有思想的语言,表达自己的情感态度。
1. 以读促写;增加语言输入,促进语言输出
平时多阅读英语报刊,扩大课外阅读量。在阅读的过程中积累写作词汇、地道的表达和国内外文化知识。平时可以记英语日记或撰写读书笔记。
2. 养成良好的写作习惯,通过拓展思维挑战高分写作
(1)全面审题。清楚题目要求是成功写作的起点。
(2)分析写作内容,搭建文章的内容框架。列好提纲,写作时可避免跑题,同时,可以预先设计好需要详写和略写的内容,使文章层次清晰。
(3)要运用分析、判断、推理思维,表达出与文章切题的情感态度。除了全面和清楚地表达要点,还要思考内容背后所蕴含的思想和精神。
3. 培养模仿意识,实现从文章仿写到独立输出的飞跃
(1)研读和背诵真题中应用文写作的范文,模仿范文中的经典搭配、地道表达、句子间的衔接方式及文章的结构。
(2)把自己写的文章与范文进行对比,总结自己常用的错误搭配和不地道表达并改正,学会运用范文中的巧妙表达。
(3)做好独立写作计划,保证常考的应用文类型都练到,对不同类型的应用文的相关的词汇、地道表达及文章结构熟稔于心。
4. 了解高考英语应用文写作的评分原则及标准
评分原则及标准为学生提供了明确的英语写作方向,学生写作时可以根据评分级别设置自己的写作目标,找到写作中的不足,有的放矢地提升写作技巧和水平。根据评分原则及标准,从内容、语言和结构这些方面升级写作,例如,运用不同类型的应用文的高频、高级写作词汇,写作时逻辑清晰、连贯等。
5. 运用老师评价、自我评价和与同学互评的方式,提高写作能力。
学生可以在老师修改的基础上,根据评分原则及标准进行自评和同学互评。这样可以从不同的角度发现写作中的提升空间,从而提高写作能力。
二．方法技巧
1.邮件(书信)
(1)建议类
建议类邮件(书信)通常给出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。提出的理由要合理,语气要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
常用功能句
给建议:
1. Knwing/Learning that..., I'd like t give yu sme suggestins.
2. I am writing t give yu sme suggestins/ffer yu sme advice n...
3. I am delighted t ffer yu sme tips.
结尾功能句:
4. Hpe the suggestins abve will help yu a little bit!
5. I hpe yu will find these prpsals/suggestins helpful.
6. I will be mre than happy t see yur imprvements in this regard.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t...
Here are a few suggestins. First, it is imprtant t... Then, it is als helpful t... Besides, it wuld be a gd idea t..., I suggest... I'm sure...
I hpe...
Yurs,
Li Hua
例1假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近过度使用手机,日常生活受到影响,他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 你的建议及理由。
审题
1. 要点:(1)对Jim的苦恼表示理解(略写);
(2)你提出的建议及理由(详写:两点建议+两点理由)
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
列提纲
点评 范文内容完整,涵盖了题目所要求的要点,且详略得当。文中给出的建议和理由与话题紧密相关。内容建议给6—7分。文章所用语言准确,无语法错误。写作语气(I am srry t knw...、I hpe...和Let me knw if...)和内容安排均较好地体现了写作的交际性和得体性。语言建议给6—7分。文章结构合理,句间与段间衔接自然。全文行文连贯,可读性强。结构给4分。总分建议给16—18分。
(2)邀请类
邀请类邮件(书信)要将活动的时间、地点、内容写清楚,用词要准确、简洁。开头可以表明写信的背景和目的;结尾表达期待对方接受邀请和回复。
常用功能句
提出邀请:
1. (On behalf f ...,) I'd like t invite yu t...
2. If it is cnvenient fr yu, please...
3. I wnder if yu culd...
4. It is a great privilege/hnr t invite yu t participate be held
结尾功能句:
5. I wuld feel much hnred if yu culd cme.
6. If yu are interested in it, please let me knw and I will send yu mre infrmatin.
7. Please infrm us at yur earliest cnvenience.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
Hw is everything with yu? I'm Li Hua and I... I am writing t tell yu be held... We wuld be hnred/delighted if yu culd cme.
The activity will start at 9:00... This will be fllwed by... At arund 10:00...,...
Culd yu please cntact us in advance yu culd cme? I really hpe yu can make it. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例2假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参
加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);
2. 说明你打算参加的原因;
3. 询问对方的意向。
审题
1. 要点:(1)介绍清楚训练营的相关内容(时间、地点、参加者等);
(2)你打算参加的原因(详写:叙述两点理由);
(3)询问对方的意向(略写)
2. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
3. 时态:以一般将来时和一般现在时为主
列提纲
点评 该范文涵盖了所有内容要点且详略得当,开放内容安排合理。该文有很好的交际性,符合现实生活中交际的特点。该文在语言上措辞准确,表达精练,有明显的语言丰富性意识。全文根据要点和交际需要分四段,结构合理,内在逻辑严密,建议给18分(内容7分,语言7分,结构4分)。
(3)致歉类
致歉类邮件(书信)通常包括以下内容:表达歉意;致歉的原因或出现差错的原因;提出弥补措施,请求原谅。
常用功能句
表达歉意:
1. I am writing t express my heartfelt aplgy t yu fr...
2. I am terribly/awfully srry I culdn't...
3. I feel it a great pity t...
4. Please accept my sincere aplgy fr...
5. Once again, I am srry fr the caused incnvenience.
请求原谅:
6. I sincerely hpe yu will understand my chice and accept my aplgy.
7. Please frgive me.
8. I must beg yur frgiveness fr...
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
I am terribly srry fr... Nw I am writing yu this letter t shw my deep regret. I d hpe yu can understand me and frgive me.
I will be very grateful if yu are kind t listen t my explanatin. The reasn that...
I aplgize again fr... I will make a great effrt t... I wnder if yu wuld accept my aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例3你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括:
1. 你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
审题
1. 要点:(1)原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
(2)由于脚部受伤,无法按原计划前往;
(3)表达歉意;
(4)建议将旅行推迟到8月底
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
点评 本文开门见山、语气中肯地表达歉意,是道歉信的典型写法。第一句用了从句,体现了良好的语言运用能力。对要点(2)的开放内容设计得合理,符合英语文化。文章多次表达歉意,把自己的姿态放低,符合道歉信的写作语气。略写要点(1)和要点(3),详写要点(2)和要点(4),结构安排合理。该文是典型的高分作文,言简意赅,没有冗余内容。建议评分为19分,即内容7分,语言8分,结构4分。
(4)感谢类
感谢类邮件(书信)一般包括三个部分:
①简述写信的目的,诚挚地表达谢意;
②表明感谢的原因,回顾对方所做的具体事情;
③再次向对方表示感谢并表示期待对方的回信。
常用功能句
1. I'm writing t extend my sincere gratitude t yu (fr yur assistance and guidance).
2. I'd like t express my thanks fr...
3. With yur encuragement, I became mre cnfident and...
4. Withut yur help/supprt, I culdn't have dne...
5. It was because f yur help that...
6. My true gratitude is beynd descriptin./Wrds fail t express my gratitude deep in my heart.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
Hw are yu ding? I am writing this letter t express my heartfelt gratitude/thanks t yu fr...
When..., I just can't help thinking f what yu have dne fr me. It was s kind f yu , yu..., which really surprised me. What's mre, I shall always remember...
Nthing will be able t erase my wnderful memries, and I will cherish them frever.
Thanks again fr what yu have dne fr me. I wuld be very hnred and pleased if...
Yurs,
Li Hua
例4 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教Jim为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人,请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 讲述新外教给予的帮助。
审题
1. 要点:(1)对Jim推荐外教表示感谢(略写);
(2)讲述外教给予的帮助(详写:叙述两方面的帮助)
2. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
点评 该文要点全面,且对要点(2)有丰富的内容设计,具体地呈现了新外教给予我们的帮助及其带来的影响,内容翔实、合理。该文内容建议给7分。语言丰富、地道,言简意赅,在语言上可以得7—8分。结合结构最终建议给18分。该文提供了较多写感谢信时要用到的语言素材,是学生复习备考的优质范文。
(5)推荐类
高考推荐类邮件(书信)所给要点中,对推荐的理由表述得比较简单和笼统,或者未提及。因此,学生要围绕题干所给的要求增加具体内容,以使行文连贯,并符合题目的词数要求。
常用功能句
推荐:
1. I am glad t hear that... I'd like t tell yu smething abut...
2. Learning/Knwing that..., I suggest...
3. It is with great pleasure that I take this pprtunity t recmmendatin.
4. Cnsidering yur keen interest in..., I wuld like t recmmend...
结尾功能句:
5. I hpe that yu wuld take my recmmendatin int cnsideratin/accunt.
6. If yu have further questins, please feel free t let me knw.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
Having knwn/heard that yu are keen n/interested want 'm delighted/I'm writing t recmmend... The reasns are as fllws.
Firstly,... What's mre,... Last but nt least,...
I hpe what I have said can be useful, and dn't hesitate t cntact me if yu need mre related infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例5假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐他上哪所大学;
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
审题
1. 要点:(1)欢迎Jim明年来北京上大学(略写);
(2)给Jim推荐北京的大学(详写:提出推荐的大学,并陈述推荐的理由);
(3)给Jim提一个关于准备工作的建议(详写:除了给出建议,再加一个给出建议的理由)
2. 人称:第一人称、第二人称和第三人称
3. 时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
点评 本文要点全面。难能可贵的是要点(2)中添加的细节(推荐北京大学的理由)紧扣写作背景(他对中国文化感兴趣)。建议他做的准备也紧扣来北京上大学,因此内容分可以给8分。该文语言丰富,写作句式多样,有较强的可读性。从该范文可见作者较好的语言表达能力,因此语言给7分。本文结构清晰,给4分。该文得19分。
(6)介绍类
在撰写介绍类邮件(书信)时,在介绍时通常给予正面的评价与介绍,语气要坚定。
常用功能句
介绍:
1. I am glad t give yu sme infrmatin abut...
2. I am the right persn fr yu t turn t when it cmes t...
3. There is sme infrmatin that yu really need t knw.
结尾功能句:
4. If yu need t knw mre/further infrmatin, please feel free t cntact me at any time.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
Nthing can delight me mre than hearing that... I wuld like t tell yu sme infrmatin abut... The detailed infrmatin is as fllws.
When it cmes t..., yu really need t knw that... Besides,... What's mre, yu can't miss...
Such is my intrductin and cntact me if yu need mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例6假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
审题
1. 要点:(1)你喜欢的一位中国历史人物是谁(略写:人物的名字+简要介绍);
(2)该历史人物的主要贡献(详写:叙述2—3点该人物的主要贡献);
(3)该历史人物对你的影响(详写:叙述2—3点影响)
2. 人称:以第三人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
点评 该文要点全面。题干提到Jim对中国历史感兴趣,因此选择诗人李白符合题目背景要求。作者巧妙地把李白和英国诗人Wrdswrth进行对比,体现李白的伟大。作者用数据说明李白在诗歌方面贡献卓著。要点(3)紧扣主题,内容安排合理。因此内容给8分。该文言简意赅,作者的语言驾驭能力很好,运用了省略句、简单句、复合句等多种句型,语言给7分。文章结构合理,逻辑清晰,结构给4分。总分建议给19分。
(7)申请类
申请类邮件(书信)种类较多,如求职申请、加入某个组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等,其目的是让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,因此个人情况的介绍是核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得机会。
常用功能句
提出申请:
1. Having learned that..., I wuld like t apply d...
2. I'm writing t yu in the hpe that I may btain an pprtunity t jin...
3. After seeing the advertisement, I culdn't wait t write this applicatin.
表达个人优势:
4. I have a gd cmmand have a gift fr...
5. I'm cnfident that I'm qualified and I can...
6. The reasns why I apply as fllws. Fr ne thing,... Fr anther,... In additin,...
结尾功能句:
7. If given the chance, I will...
8. I wuld be grateful if yu culd give me a chance.
9. I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd give me the chance t...
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
I am Li Hua, a senir high schl student studying in... I have learnt that yu are lking fr a..., which is exactly what I want t be. Therefre, I am here writing t apply fr... I persnally think I am the right persn yu are lking fr, because f the fllwing reasns:
Having learnt English in the UK fr abut tw years, I have cnfidence t cmmunicate with peple in English fluently.
Apart frm that, I have adequate experience in...
Finally, as , I can...
I wuld be really grateful if yu culd give me the pprtunity. I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例7假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进 校园”活动,届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加,现正在招募志愿服务人员,请你用英文给
负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 申请理由;
2. 个人优势;
3. 希望批准。
审题
1. 要点:(1)申请理由(略写);
(2)个人优势(详写:提出3点优势);
(3)希望批准(略写)
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
点评 该文较好地完成了题目规定的要点,且详略得当,对开放内容的处理很合理。要点(2)——个人优势的处理尤其出色,沟通能力优势、语言优势和经验优势很有说服力。内容给7分。本文语言丰富且精练,句间衔接词和表达法让文章条理清晰,语言给7分。文章分段合理,但段间衔接显得松散,结构给3分。该文总分建议给17分。
(8)求助类
在撰写求助类邮件(书信)时,语言要简明扼要,语气要委婉和真诚。除了详细说明自己所遇到的问题或困难并请求帮助,还可以向对方表达感谢。
常用功能句
表达求助:
1. I'm writing the letter t yu t ask yu t d me a favr.
2. Wuld yu be s kind as t...
3. I have sme difficulties bther me a lt. I wnder if yu culd help me.
4. S difficult is the situatin that I dn't knw hw t face it. Wuld yu please give me sme advice?
结尾功能句:
5. I believe I will benefit a lt frm yur valuable and timely advice.
6. I will appreciate it if yu can give me a helping hand.
推荐写作框架
Dear...,
I I am writing t ask/appeal fr yur help/assistance.
Nw/At present, I am faced with many prblems./There're many prblems I'm faced with nw. First f all,... In additin,... What's wrse,...
Therefre, I sincerely hpe yu can ffer me sme advice n...
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd help me.
I'm lking frward t yur respnse at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs,
Li Hua
例8假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校英国外教Jim做了关于阅读方法的在线讲座。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2. 说明你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。
审题
1. 要点:(1)向Jim表达感谢(略写);
(2)在阅读方法的在线讲座中的收获(简述);
(3)说明阅读中的困惑(详写两点);
(4)寻求帮助(略写)
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
点评 本题形式上是两个要点,但可以按四个要点处理。本文分别表达了感谢、简述了收获、说明了困惑并寻求帮助。内容浑然一体,要点间的内在逻辑合理,是很好的范文。内容建议给8分。文章语言丰富、地道,多次用到过渡词,建议给7分。在结构方面,分段合理,详略得当,每段内在逻辑严密,句间衔接紧凑,建议结构给4分。最终建议给19分。
2.演讲稿
演讲稿的内容要有吸引力,句子要短小精悍、有理有据。赞成什么、反对什么要旗帜鲜明。演讲稿一般由称呼、正文和结束语组成。撰稿者常在开头部分提出主题,接着介绍背景,再表达观点,并通过实例加以说明,最后总结全文。
常用功能句
1. I'd be happy t share my pinins n...
2. It is my great hnr t be here t say smething abut...
3. I'm glad t stand here and give a shrt speech n...
4. Tday, please allw me t deliver a brief speech n...
5. I am sure that with yur great effrts, we will...
6. I will spare n effrt t...
推荐写作框架
Ladies and gentlemen:
I'm... I'm very glad t have the chance t give the talk thank yu fr cming.
As we all knw,... Therefre, it's high time we did smething abut it. Firstly, an effective way, I think, is t... Secndly, new methds need t be... Thirdly, we must... Last but nt least, it's everyne's respnsibility t...
That's all. Thank yu fr listening.
例9假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为“如何提高英语听说能力”的演讲比赛。请你撰写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 听说学习的重要性;
2. 学习中遇到的问题;
3. 你的建议。
审题
1. 要点:(1)听说学习的重要性(略写);
(2)学习中遇到的问题(详写:从两方面分三点来叙述);
(3)你的建议(详写:两点建议)
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
点评 本文完成了三个写作要点,说明了听说学习的重要性,也提到了自己遇到的困难,并在最后提出了建议。但有些内容不够具体,因此可读性弱一些,内容建议给6分。本文语言准确,言简意赅,用了丰富的词汇和句型,语言给7分。作为演讲稿,该文结构合理,分段明确,每段一环扣一环,逻辑严密,因此结构给4分。最终建议给17分。
（建议用时：40分钟）
一．高考真题
一
【2024北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry. Here are a few suggestins fr yur article.
T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld. In additin, yu can als mentin China’s rle in helping slving glbal issues such as the glbal warming, ffering a mre cmprehensive view.
Lking frward t reading yur article!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wnderful
成就：achievement→ accmplishment
建议：suggestin →advice
此外：In additin → what’s mre
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
拓展句：It’s great t hear what yu’re planning t write abut is China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
二
【2023北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
三
【2022年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything?
I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?
The talk will last abut an hur, and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience. Please let me knw which platfrm yu’ll use. It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
高考模拟试题
一
(2024北京海淀一模)
（建议类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(Wrld Bld Dnr Day),你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血,并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的答复及理由;
2. 提醒注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
Yur letter came as a nice surprise. I'll be glad t make my first bld dnatin with yu.(答复)
I've dreamed f becming a vluntary bld dnr since my grandfather's experience. He ften says he wes his life t peple wh dnated their bld. As a fit yung man t be 18 next mnth, I'm ready t give back t sciety by ding what I can d. It'll be the best cming f age gift fr myself.(理由)
T get better prepared, we shuld fllw a balanced diet rich in irn, get enugh sleep and d mderate exercise t stay healthy. Keeping a gd md is als imprtant, fr it bsts bld regeneratin.(提醒注意事项)
Please let me knw if yu think f ther things t nte.
Yurs,
Li Hua
二
(2024北京东城一模)
（介绍类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”,你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件,询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的任务。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hw have yu been recently?(简短问候语)
As yu knw, the theme f Earth Day 2024 is “Planet vs. Plastics”. Our schl is rganizing an event t raise students' awareness f plastic pllutin and inspire us t make a difference.
The event will feature sme activities like presentatins by envirnmental experts and discussins abut the impact f plastic pllutin n ur planet. The highlight f the event will be a hands-n wrkshp.(活动内容)T help with it, I will g t the nearby neighbrhd with my classmates t cllect plastic waste, which will be creatively made int artwrks in the wrkshp. After that, we will give them back t the neighbrs.(任务)
I am eager fr the event. Wait fr my pictures!
Yurs,
Li Hua
三
(2024北京西城一模)
（介绍类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Cmpetitin),请给Jim发邮件,内容包括:
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hw is it ging?(简短问候语) I've just had a light bulb mment fr ur entry in the upcming Campus Cultural and Creative Design Cmpetitin, and I can't wait t share it with yu t get yur thughts.
Hw abut creating a series f bkmarks? On ne side, we'll have ur schl mtt, and n the flip side, we'll have breathtaking illustratins shwing ur campus thrughut the fur seasns. Each bkmark will capture a special mment r scene that perfectly reflects the essence f that particular seasn. I really think this idea is in line with the cmpetitin theme. Furthermre, it ffers a practical yet visually stunning prduct that truly represents the spirit f ur schl.(创意)
What d yu think? I'd lve t hear yur thughts and any suggestins yu might have!(询问Jim的建议)
Yurs,
Li Hua
四
(2024北京朝阳一模)
（介绍类）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际,你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生Jim对此很感兴趣,发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动安排。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:全国防灾减灾日 Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hw is everything ging?(简短问候语) Knwing that yu are interested in the “Safety Educatin int Campus” event, I am glad t share it with yu.
In respnse t the 16th Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day, ur schl rganized activities t raise ur awareness f self-prtectin in the face f emergencies.(活动目的)First, an expert frm a prfessinal rescue team delivered a lecture n hw t react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics f evacuatin. Besides, we made brchures cncerning the practical tips n dealing with disasters and handed them ut n campus t further spread the safety knwledge amng students.(活动安排)
I have prepared an English brchure fr yu. Hpe it will help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
五
(2024北京石景山一模)
（祝贺类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名,他发来邮件感谢你提供的帮助。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 回顾他的困难;
3. 赞扬他的努力。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hw have yu been?(简短问候语) Cngratulatins n winning first place in the Chinese Speech Cntest! (表示祝贺)I'm s happy t hear abut yur success.
I remember hw challenging it was fr yu in the beginning, struggling with prnunciatin, especially the fur tnes.(回顾他的困难) But yu put yur heart and sul int practising. Yu never gave up until yur hard wrk paid ff. Yu've made s much prgress. Yu really set a gd example fr me. As yur friend, I am well aware that it is yur diligence, perseverance and effective learning methds that cntribute t yur success.(赞扬他的努力)
Keep up the fantastic wrk. Lk frward t learning mre abut yur future success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
六
(2024北京延庆一模)
（邀请类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动安排。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:科技嘉年华 Science and Technlgy Carnival
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
I'm writing t invite yu t the Science and Technlgy Carnival t be held next week in ur schl.(写邮件的目的)
The aim f this activity is t enrich ur schl life and aruse ur interest in science and technlgy.(活动目的)During the carnival, there will be a variety f activities, including exhibitins f the latest scientific and technlgical achievements, lectures by famus scientists, and hands-n experiments. In additin, there will be a science cmpetitin, where yu can shw yur creativity and knwledge.(活动安排)
I believe this event will be a great pprtunity fr yu t learn mre abut science and technlgy and interact with ther students. I lk frward t seeing yu at the carnival.
Yurs,
Li Hua
七
(2024北京门头沟一模)
（邀请类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(Internatinal Rse Festival)将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣,想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍国际月季节的基本信息;
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Learning yu're interested in flwers, I'm writing t invite yu t attend the Internatinal Rse Festival. It will be held in the Rse Valley next Friday.(国际月季节的基本信息)
This event is a celebratin f beauty and culture, aiming t attract peple frm all ver the wrld t appreciate beautiful rses. It starts with a grand parade which will be fllwed by activities including rse exhibitins, cultural perfrmances and rse cultivatin wrkshps.(亮点)
As a lcal student, I'm excited abut the Internatinal Rse Festival. It nt nly ffers chances t enjy the pleasure f gardening, but als enlarges yur knwledge abut varius kinds f rses.
I'm sure yu will enjy the festival. Wuld yu like t cme with me?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
八
(2024北京东城二模)
（邀请类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的好友Jim是北京一所国际学校的篮球队队长。你校计划组织一场校际篮球比赛,请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 发出比赛邀请;
2. 提议比赛安排。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hpe this email finds yu well! On behalf f my schl, I am writing t invite yur team fr a basketball match, which will be a gd chance fr us t enjy the thrill f the game and learn frm each ther.(发出比赛邀请)
If yu're interested, we can schedule it n a Saturday mrning next mnth at ur schl's stadium. The newly built stadium can hld an audience f 600 peple. Students and teachers frm bth schls are welcme t cheer us n.(提议比赛安排)
Shall we set up a meeting at yur cnvenience t discuss the final arrangements?
I believe we'll have a lt f fun tgether. Lking frward t yur psitive respnse.
Yurs,
Li Hua
九
(2024北京西城二模)
（建议类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,临近毕业,你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件,邮件内容包括:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellw students,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear fellw students,
Cngratulatins n becming a part f ur wnderful schl cmmunity. At the request f ur English teacher, I'm reaching ut t ffer yu sme advice n navigating yur time here.
First, treasure every mment spent with yur teachers and classmates. Yur time here will pass quickly, s seize the pprtunity t frge meaningful and lasting cnnectins. Secndly, let g f yur past achievements r failures. Instead, fcus n the tasks at hand. It is the dedicatin and effrt yu invest nw that will shape yur future. Finally, explre what truly sparks yur passin. Take English learning fr instance. Whether it's watching mvies r reading nvels, try t find what genuinely mtivates yu.(建议)
Wishing yu all a fulfilling and rewarding jurney ahead filled with jy, grwth, and success.(祝愿)
Yurs,
Li Hua
十
(2024北京朝阳二模)
（邀请类）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校即将举办以“成长”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封信,邀请他一起参加。内容包括:
1. 介绍你打算参加的活动;
2. 询问对方意向。
注意:1. 词数100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding?Our schl will hld a series f activities with the theme f grwth,s I am writing t invite yu t jin me.
Of all the activities,I prefer t participate in the tree planting t experience the surness and sweetness f grwth.Thse wh sign up fr it will wrk tgether t plant a tree,digging a hle, building sil berms and watering the sapling. The grwth f a tree requires patience and persistence, s d we. When the tree flurishes,we'll becme respnsible adults, making cntributins t the sciety.(介绍打算参加的活动)
Are yu interested in it?(询问对方意向) I believe it'll be an unfrgettable experience. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
十一
(2024北京丰台二模)
（建议类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Chris正在策划一次以“科技创新(Technlgy Innvatin)”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动形式;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Chris,
Thrilled t hear abut yur plans fr the“Technlgy Innvatin” club activity! I am mre than happy t ffer sme suggestins.
Hw abut rganizing a Tech Innvatin Fair? It wuld serve as a cmpelling platfrm t blend different tech elements and activities, catering t everyne's taste and interest.(活动形式)
As fr the cntent, yu can set up diverse bths, where students shwcase their prjects and inventins with interactive displays and dems. Additinally, yu can hst an innvatin challenge fr the club members t slve real-wrld prblems using technlgy. This can add a cmpetitive yet cllabrative tuch t the event, sptlighting creativity and ingenuity while encuraging teamwrk.(活动内容)
What d yu think f my suggestins? I wish a great success t yur activity!
Yurs,
Li Hua
十二
(2024北京海淀期末)
（通知类）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你校将在春节期间举行中外学生联欢会。请你用英文写一封邮件通知交换生,内容包括:
1. 目的与安排;
2. 报名方式。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua, President f the Student Unin. I am s glad t infrm yu f the upcming Students' Party, where lcal and internatinal students will have a wnderful time.
This cultural event aims t create a warm Spring Festival experience and fster cultural exchanges.(目的)Scheduled t be held in ur schl auditrium frm 19:00 t 21:00 n February 4th, it features traditinal Chinese dances and flk instrument perfrmances. In additin, yu can enjy making and tasting jiazi, a unique delicacy representing the festival's essence.(安排)
Yu're welcme t jin us and feel the festive atmsphere! T sign up, please cntact us via email at party2024@ by February 2nd.(报名方式)
Sincerely,
Li Hua
十三
(2023北京海淀一模)
（建议类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文,他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由;
2. 你的建议及计划。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:项目学习prject-based learning
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Thanks fr yur suggestin n using AI t finish the first draft f ur paper. But after further cnsideratin, I'm afraid it's nt a wise idea.(委婉拒绝)
Firstly, it ges against the purpse f ur prject-based learning, which is t cultivate critical thinking and teamwrk. Mrever, AI is unlikely t accurately present ur ideas, because it hasn't gt invlved in ur prject.(拒绝理由)
S, I suggest we write the paper urselves. We can start by brainstrming tgether t create an utline after generating sme riginal and creative ideas. Then we can wrk independently n different parts, and finally wrk tgether t finalize ur paper. I believe we can d a better jb than AI.(建议及计划)
Hpe yu can understand. I'm expecting ur distinctive draft.
Yurs,
Li Hua
十四
(2023北京东城二模)
（推荐类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim来信提及他参加了学校举办的“从地标建筑读懂一座城市”的世界城市展示活动。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件,谈谈你的想法。内容包括:
1. 你推荐的城市及其地标建筑;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:地标landmark
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Gd t hear frm yu, and what an interesting activity! We can really tell a lt abut a city frm its buildings.
I knw yu are a fan f Chinese architecture, s if yu haven't decided which city t pick, yu may cnsider Beijing, with the Frbidden City as a distinctive landmark.(推荐城市及其地标建筑)
Lcated in the centre f Beijing, the Frbidden City, the imperial palace f the Ming and Qing dynasties, has a histry f ver 600 years. It has witnessed the changes f the city. Thus, it is surely a wrthy landmark f Beijing and a gd chice fr yur prject.(推荐理由)
I hpe my advice will be helpful. Wish yu every success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
十五
(2023北京朝阳二模)
（感谢类）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你最近读完了外教Jim推荐的一本英文书,请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢并分享读书收获;
2. 交流后续英文书阅读计划。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
Thank yu fr yur recmmendatin f the English nvel The Old Man and the Sea.(表达感谢)
Having finished reading, I harvested a lt. The tugh man wh fights against the big fish and sharks alne in the sea inspires me t face frustratins bravely in my life. And I have learned that we shuld stick t ur dreams n matter what hardships we may encunter.(分享读书收获)
The bk unflds a new wrld t me. Thus, I have made a plan fr further reading.English nvels enlightening me will be included in my reading list. I intend t read ne bk a mnth. While reading, I will take dwn my understanding in time t gain mre beynd the lines.(交流阅读计划)
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me mre recmmendatins.
Yurs,
Li Hua
十六
(2022北京海淀一模)
（邀请类）假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。你班即将开展五一劳动节活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 活动目的及安排;
2. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
One pssible versin:
Dear Jim,
I'm writing t invite yu t take part in a class activity n the May Day hliday.(写信目的)
With the aim f raising the awareness f participating in labr, we plan t g t a farm in the suburb f Beijing n May 1st. We are ging t experience sme basic farm wrk like remving weeds and transplanting vegetable seedlings. Schl buses will take us there s we'll meet at the schl gate by 8 am. At arund 2 pm, we will cme back.(活动目的及安排)
I have t remind yu t wear cmfrtable shes, and bring a pair f glves, s that yu may better enjy the farming activities.(注意事项)
I am lking frward t the activity and yur participating.
Yurs,
Li Hua
年份
类型
命题形式
写作内容
2024
建议信
提纲式
介绍中国的发展成就的建议
2023
建议信
提纲式
“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议
2022
邀请信
提纲式
英语写作的线上经验交流
2021
道歉信
提纲式
因故不能赴约
2020
求助信
提纲式
请求推荐一名外籍指导教师
短文投稿
图画式
“自律”为主题的调研活动
Para. 1
事由+要点(1)
陈述事由:I am srry t knw yu are trubled by cellphne veruse.
提出要点(1)——情感上表示理解:I understand...
Para. 2
要点(2)
建议1:t set “cellphne time”
理由1:t reduce the screen time
建议2:
t participate in grup activities
理由2:
t meet peple face t face t avid relying n the phne
Para. 3
愿望+互动
愿望:I hpe my suggestins can help.
互动(表示愿意继续提供帮助):Let me knw if I can help.
Dear Jim,
I am srry t knw yu are trubled by cellphne veruse. As a heavy cellphne user myself, I understand the stress and frustratin.
Frtunately, we can d a few things abut it.① Fr instance, we can set certain hurs f the day as “cellphne time” and nly pick up the phne during thse hurs. By ding s, we can reduce ur screen time. We may als participate in grup activities where we meet peple face t face and thus dn't need t rely n the phne all the time.
I hpe my suggestins can help and I'm sure② yu will get thrugh this. Let me knw if I can help in any way.
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子分析
①第二段的主题句
②I'm sure...我确信……
用词分析
1. fr instance 例如
2. by ding s 通过这样做
3. thus adv. 因此
4. rely n 依赖
5. get thrugh 熬过(一段时期)
Para. 1
写作目的+要点(1)
开门见山,表明写邮件的目的:
I'm writing this letter t tell yu that I will attend the Dragn Bat Training Camp.
提出要点(1)——介绍时间、地点和参加者:The camp will be held in Beijing this
summer, and sme senir high schl students will attend the camp.
Para. 2
要点(2)
理由1——对赛龙舟感兴趣:be interested in dragn bat racing
理由2——想了解更多关于端午节的知识:want t knw mre abut the Dragn Bat Festival
Para. 3 要点(3)
询问意向:Wuld yu attend the camp with me?
Para. 4愿望+互动
表示期待对方的回复:I'm lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Dear Jim,
I'm writing this letter t tell yu that I will attend the Dragn Bat Training Camp. The camp will be held in Beijing this summer, and sme senir high schl students will attend the camp.
I'm excited t attend the camp because I'm interested in dragn bat racing myself. This camp will give me a chance t learn hw t d it! Als①, I have heard many intriguing stries abut the Dragn Bat Festival, and I want t knw even mre. The camp will be a great pprtunity and I wn't miss the chance.
I believe② the Dragn Bat Training Camp can help yu get a better understanding f China. Wuld yu attend the camp with me?
I'm lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子分析
①Als,...此外,……(Als承接理由1,引出理 由2)
②I believe...我相信……
用词分析
1. chance/ppr-
tunity n. 机会
2. intriguing adj. 引人入胜的
Para. 1
写邮件的目的+要
点(1)+要点(2)+要点(3)
开门见山,提出写邮件的目的及要点(3)——表达歉意:I am terribly srry t tell yu that...
提出要点(1)——原计划7月份一同去云南旅游:I cannt make it t Yunnan with yu in July as
planned.
提出要点(2)——由于脚部受伤,无法按计划前往:I hurt my feet accidentally, and my dctr tld
me that I had t stay in bed fr at least ne mnth, s I cannt g with yu t Yunnan.
Para. 2
要点(4)
提出要点(4)——建议将旅行推迟到8月底:
I am wndering if it will be OK fr yu if we put ff the plan until late August.
Para. 3
请求+互动
请求对方接受自己的歉意:Please accept my sincere aplgy.
互动:I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Dear Chris,
I am terribly srry t tell yu that① I am afraid I cannt make it t Yunnan with yu in July as planned. Recently, I hurt my feet accidentally, and my dctr tld me that I had t stay in bed fr at least ne mnth, s I cannt g with yu t Yunnan. I am really srry fr② any incnvenience I may bring t yu.
Hwever, I think I will be fine after ne mnth, and I am wndering if③ it will be OK fr yu if we put ff the plan until late August.
Please accept my sincere aplgy, and I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Je
句子分析
①I am terribly srry t tell yu that...我非常抱歉地
告诉你……
②I am really srry fr...由于……我真的歉疚
③I am wndering if...我想知道是否……
用词分析
1. hwever adv. 然而
2. put ff 推迟
3. aplgy n. 道歉
Para. 1
要点(1)
开门见山,提出写信的目的——因Jim推荐外教Ms. Smith而表示感谢:
I'm writing t thank yu fr recmmending Ms. Smith.
Para. 2
要点(2):
帮助1
讲述在Ms. Smith的帮助下,我们参加各种活动,英语俱乐部成为学校最受欢迎的俱乐部:With her help, we have engaged in activities f all kinds and we are nw ur schl's mst ppular club.
Para. 3
要点(2):
帮助2
讲述Ms. Smith提出一个为农村地区的学生捐赠英语书的想法,让我们感受到帮助他人的快乐:Als, Ms. Smith came up with the idea t dnate English bks t students in a rural area. We feel the jy f helping thers.
Para. 4
再次表达
谢意+互动
再次表达谢意:We believe yu are part f why all these have happened, s please allw me t say “Thank yu” again.
互动——询问近况并期望回信:What's new in yur life? D keep us updated.
Dear Jim,
I hpe everything ges well with yu.① I'm writing t thank yu fr recmmending Ms. Smith.
She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. With her help, we have engaged in activities f all kinds and we are nw ur schl's mst ppular club.
Als, Ms. Smith came up with the idea t dnate English bks t students in a rural area. These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Mst imprtantly, we feel the jy f helping thers.
We believe yu are part f why all these have happened, s please allw me t say “Thank yu” again. What's new in yur life?D keep us updated.②
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子翻译
①我希望你一切顺利。
②一定与我们保持联络(有新进展务必告诉我们)。
用词分析
1. recmmend v. 推荐
2. impress v. 给……留下深刻印象
3. cme up with 想出
4. mst imprtantly 最重要的是
Para. 1
要点(1)
开门见山,提出要点(1)——欢迎Jim明年来北京上大学:I'm very glad t hear abut yur plan
t study in Beijing next year. I'd like t express my warmest welcme.
Para. 2
要点(2)
提出要点(2)——给Jim推荐北京大学:I suggest that yu apply t Peking University.
附加内容——推荐的理由:
Peking University is renwned fr its Department f Chinese Language and Literature.
Yu are interested in Chinese culture.
Para. 3
要点(3)
提出要点(3)——给Jim提一个关于准备工作的建议:Learn sme basic spken Chinese.
附加内容——建议的理由:help yu better adapt t the language envirnment
Para. 4
希望+互动
希望:I sincerely hpe that yur dream will cme true.
互动:Please feel free t let me knw if yu have any further questins.
Dear Jim,
I'm very glad t hear abut yur plan t study in Beijing next year. I'd like t express my warmest welcme.
Renwned fr its Department f Chinese Language and Literature, Peking University will be a perfect place where yu can achieve a richer and deeper understanding f Chinese histry and culture. Cnsidering yur interest in Chinese culture, I suggest that yu apply① t Peking University.
As fr preparatry wrk, yu may learn sme basic spken Chinese while still in Britain. This will help yu better adapt t the language envirnment nce yu arrive.
I sincerely hpe that yur dream will cme true. Please feel free t let me knw if② yu have any further questins.
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子分析及翻译
①I suggest that yu d...我建议你做……
②如果……请尽管告诉我
用词分析
1. renwned fr...因……而有名的
2. cnsidering prep.考虑到
3. as fr 至于;就……而论
4. adapt t 适应
5. nce cnj. 一旦
Para. 1
要点(1)
开门见山,提出要点(1)——喜欢的一位历史人物是李白:
My favrite Chinese histrical celebrity is Li Bai.
附加信息——简要介绍李白:He was brn in theTang Dynasty.
Para. 2
要点(2)
提出要点(2)——李白的主要贡献(①创作了1,000多首诗;②使中国诗歌蓬勃发展):
①He cmpsed mre than 1,000 pems in his life.②He prspered Chinese petry.
Para. 3
要点(3)
提出要点(3)——李白对自己的影响(①点燃了我对文学的热爱;②增强了我对诗歌的兴趣):①His vivid way f writing lit my passin fr literature.②imprved my interest in pems
Para. 4
希望+互动
希望:I hpe that yu have knwn smething abut the great pet.
互动(愿意提供更多的信息):
If yu wuld like t knw mre abut Chinese pets, dn't hesitate t write.
Dear Jim,
S glad t hear frm yu!① My favrite Chinese histrical celebrity is Li Bai, wh was brn in the Tang Dynasty.②
He was the best Chinese rmantic pet.③ Thugh brn abut a thusand years earlier than Wrdswrth, he was just as great. As far as I knw, He cmpsed mre than 1,000 pems in his life. He prspered Chinese petry.
Li Bai has influenced me in many ways.④ His vivid way f writing lit my passin fr literature and imprved my interest in pems.
I hpe that yu have knwn smething abut the great pet, and if yu wuld like t knw mre abut Chinese pets, dn't hesitate t⑤ write.
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子翻译及分析
①收到你的来信很高兴!②由wh引导的非限制性定语从句修饰先行词 Li Bai。句意是“我最喜欢的中国历史名人是李白,他出生在唐代”。 ③第二段的主题句④第三段的主题句⑤dn't hesitate t...尽管(做某事)
用词分析
1. celebrity n. 名人
2. thugh cnj. 虽然
3. prsper v. 使繁荣
4. influence v. 影响
Para. 1
写信的背景+目的
开门见山,说明写信的背景并提出写信的目的:
①背景:The activity called Traditinal Chinese Culture int Campus will be held in ur schl.
②目的:I'm writing t apply t be a vlunteer.
Para. 2
要点(1)
提出要点(1)——申请理由(把中国璀璨的文化传播到世界):
Chinese culture is s brilliant that I always want t spread it t the wrld.
Para. 3
要点(2)
提出要点(2)——个人优势(①擅长与人沟通;②精通英语;③有当志愿者的经验):
①Firstly, I'm gd at cmmunicating with thers.
②Besides, with a gd cmmand f English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with freigners.
③Last but nt least, I'm an experienced vlunteer.
Para. 4
要点(3)
提出要点(3)——希望申请获得批准:
I really value this chance, s please take me int cnsideratin.
Dear Mr. Smith,
Having learnt that the activity called Traditinal Chinese Culture int Campus will be held in ur schl, I'm writing t apply t be a vlunteer.
Chinese culture is s brilliant that① I always want t spread it t the wrld, and this is a gd chance.
Frankly speaking, I'm the right persn yu are lking fr.② Firstly③, I'm gd at cmmunicating with thers, which makes me ppular amng my classmates. Besides③, with a gd cmmand f English, I have n difficulty in cmmunicating with freigners. Last but nt least③, I'm an experienced vlunteer. Every summer, I wrk as a vlunteer t help prmte Chinese culture.
I really value this chance, s please take me int cnsideratin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
句子分析
①如此……以至于
②第三段的主题句
③Firstly,... Besides,... Last but nt least,... 首先,……其次,……最后,……
用词分析
1. apply v. 申请
2. frankly speaking 坦白地讲
3. prmte v.促进;推动
4. cnsideratin 把……考虑进去
Para. 1
要点(1)
开门见山,提出要点(1)——向Jim表达感谢:I am writing t shw my crdial appreciatin
fr the guidance yu ffered in yur lecture n reading methds.
Para. 2
要点(2)
提出要点(2)——简述在阅读方法在线讲座中的收获:
helped me understand cmplex articles
Para. 3
要点(3)+(4)
提出要点(3)——阅读中的困惑(①常被生词困扰,阅读提速有困难;②理解文章大意有困难):①I always get stuck n unfamiliar wrds, and find it hard t speed up.②I feel it hard t grasp the gist f the passages.
提出要点(4)——寻求帮助:Wuld yu please give me sme advice?
Para. 4
互动:表达谢意+祝福
再次表达谢意并祝福:Thank yu very much again and wish yu all the best.
Dear Jim,
I am writing t shw my crdial appreciatin fr the guidance yu ffered in yur lecture n reading methds.
Amng the helpful skills yu mentined, I was especially amazed when seeing yur tips n tackling lng paragraphs, which helped me understand cmplex articles.
Hwever, I am still far frm a successful reader.① Fr example, I always get stuck n unfamiliar wrds, and find it hard t speed up②. Mrever, I feel it hard t grasp the gist f the passages. Wuld yu please give me sme advice? I wuld appreciate it if③ yu culd ffer me a tip r tw.
Thank yu very much again and wish yu all the best.
Yurs,
Li Hua
句子分析及翻译
①表转折的过渡句,承接上段,引出下文。
②发现提速是困难的。“find it+adj.+t d sth.”
意为“发现做某事是……的”
③如果……我将很感激
用词分析
1. crdial adj. 热情友好的
2. tackle v. 处理;解决
3. get stuck n 被难住
4. advice/tip n. 建议
Para. 1
提出主题
提出演讲主题——如何提高英语听说能力:It's my great hnr t give a speech n hw t
imprve the skills n English listening and speaking.
Para. 2
要点(1)
提出要点(1)——听说学习的重要性:They are imprtant in ur future study and wrk.
Para. 3
要点(2)
提出要点(2)——学习中遇到的问题——说的困难①+②、听的困难:
说的困难①——不能流利地讲英语:I fund it difficult t speak fluently.
说的困难②——组织语言回答问题方面有挑战:Organizing language t answer the questins was quite challenging.
听的困难——不能完全理解说话者的话:I culdn't ttally understand what the speaker was saying.
Para. 4
要点(3)
提出要点(3)——建议①+②:
建议①——尽早开始练习:I suggest everybdy start t practise as early as pssible.
建议②——利用一些免费的应用程序:Yu can make use f sme free apps.
Dear friends,
It's my great hnr t① give a speech n hw t imprve the skills n English listening and speaking.
As we all knw, listening and speaking are imprtant in ur future study and wrk. Hwever, mst f us are weak in these tw aspects.
I fund it difficult t speak fluently. Als, rganizing language t answer the questins was quite challenging. Besides, I culdn't ttally understand what the speaker was saying. S I kept practicing. Nw, I have made great prgress.
I suggest everybdy start② t practise as early as pssible. Yu can als make use f sme free apps. I hpe everybdy can master the tw skills and freely cmmunicate with thers.
That's all. Thank yu fr listening.
句子翻译及分析
①我很荣幸……
②I suggest (that)...(shuld) d sth.我建议……
用词分析
1. give a speech n 做关于……的演讲
2. as we all knw 众所周知
3. aspect n. 方面
4. besides adv. 此外
5. make great prgress 取得很大进步