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Unit 4 Protecting our heritage sites单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）环境保护cool, refreshing breeze凉爽清新的风the towering mountain peaks高耸的山峰a winding track 蜿蜒的小道towering trees 参天大树clouds sailing across the sky飘过天空的云彩unfavorable weather conditions 恶劣的天气条件a wealth of wildlife 多种多样的野生动植物raise awareness of shark protection提高保护鲨鱼的意识be host to many species 是许多物种的栖息地claim hundreds of lives 夺走数百条生命encourage the conservation of water鼓励节约用水upset the balance of nature 破坏自然界的平衡turn trash into treasure 变废为宝live a low-carbon life 低碳生活raise /increase environmental awareness 提高环保意识do one's part for the environment为环境尽一份力The light wind gently brushed my cheeks. 微风轻拂着我的面频。The storm clouds were gathering.暴风雨乌云正在聚集。An icy wind swept through the streets.一阵寒风扫过街道Welcome to the jungle, a huge sea of green alive with thousands of animals.欢迎来到丛林，这是一片绿色的海洋处处可以听到各种动物的叫声。It was an extremely cold winter's evening and freezing foo hung in the air. 那是个极其寒冷的冬夜，空气中弥漫着冰冷的雾。Then the sky was clear, the wind calmer, and the moon was shining.后来，天晴了，风住了，月光在闪烁。Like a flash of lightning, the shooting star shot across the night sky, which is a beautiful and unforgettable sight. 流星像一道闪电划过夜空，(是一番)美丽而令人难忘(的景象)。Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches o fold trees that lined our street. 雪裹住了每一个屋顶，压低了街道两边的老树枝。The sunflowers stretched tall and proud to the sun. 向日该在阳光中亭亭玉立。The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up. 随时间的脚步加快，新的春草拔地而起The windows were shining in the reflected rays of the setting sun.窗户上闪耀着落日的余晖。The moon was riding high in the sky.月亮高高地挂在天上。Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发了。Words are not enough to relate such wonders! 如此奇观无法用语言描述!As the night advanced, the clouds closed in and densely overspread the.whole sky. 夜色渐深，乌云密布，笼罩了整个天空。句式1　画龙点睛的"非谓语动词"1.He listened with close attention， biting his lips and staring at the floor.他聚精会神地听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。2.He sat with his head in his hands， not believing what I told him.他双手抱头坐着，不相信我告诉他的话。    3.I opened the letter carefully， hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the wallet.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。4.Gasping with pain， he forced himself to his feet and with slow， shaky steps， began to walk.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。5.The man stood there silently， torn by sorrow and compassion.男人安静地站在那里，被悲伤和同情折磨着。6.Encouraged by his teacher， he decided to gather his courage and participate in the writing contest.在老师的鼓励下，他决定鼓起勇气参加写作比赛。7.Filled with fright， I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我心中充满恐惧，拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前走。8.Having told the truth， he felt a lot easier and returned home with a lighter heart.说出真相后，他感觉轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。句式2　光彩夺目的"with复合结构"和"独立主格结构"9.With my eyes full of tears， I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.我满眼泪水地冲出公寓，沿着街道跑。10.He embraced me with his arms wide open and his eyes shining like a diamond.他张开双臂拥抱我，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。11.All of us were hard at it at the kitchen table， with my dad filming the annual event.我们都围着厨房的桌子忙碌，而爸爸在拍摄这个一年一度的活动。12.With her plan ruined by the accident， she let out a cry with anger.由于她的计划被事故破坏了，她愤怒地叫了一声。13.My mother stopped and raised her head with surprise in her eyes.我的母亲停下，满眼诧异地抬起头。14.He hung up the phone and ran to hospital， worry written on his face.他挂断电话，跑去医院，脸上写满担忧。15.The night falling， they put up a tent and wolfed down a simple dinner.夜幕降临，他们搭起帐篷，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿简单的晚餐。16.He walked aimlessly along the street， head down and shoulders bowed.他低着头，垂着肩，漫无目的地在街上走着。17.Hundreds of eyes fixed upon him， he felt so nervous that his teeth started to chatter.上百双眼睛盯着他，他感到十分紧张，牙齿咯咯打颤。18.He lay on the grass， his hands crossed under his head.他躺在草地上，双手交叉放在头下。句式3　丰富多彩的"复合句"19.With a branch in my hand， I intended to frighten the dogs away， which in turn annoyed them.我手里拿着一根树枝，打算把狗吓跑，这反过来又惹恼了它们。20.His body trembled， his mouth half opened， and he let out a scream of pain that felt like a knife cutting through his chest.他的身体颤抖着，他的嘴半张着，发出一声痛苦的尖叫，感觉就像一把刀穿过他的胸膛。21.The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine.想到我们可能在这样的黑暗中迷了路，我背上一阵阵发冷。    22.An idea flashed into Jack’s mind that he could wake the family by throwing some stones into the house.杰克脑子里闪过一个念头，他可以扔一些石头到房子里，把这家人吵醒。23.What followed was an awkwardly long silence， which was eventually broken by David’s stomach growling.随后是一段长时间尴尬的沉默，最终被戴维肚子的咕咕叫声打破了。24.She could hardly conceal her excitement the moment she knew she was admitted.当她得知自己被录取的时候，她几乎无法掩饰自己的兴奋之情。句式4　彰显文采的"特殊句式"倒装句25.Standing on stage， so nervous was I that my mind went blank.站在舞台上，我紧张得头脑一片空白。26.Not until then did she pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.直到那时，她才说出了困扰她一整天的事。27.Only after we had prepared all the necessary ingredients did we begin to make the cake.我们直到把一切必需的原料都准备好后才开始做蛋糕。28.Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.黑暗中传来一个他从来没有听过的声音。29.Cold and tired though we were， the kids’ smiling faces cheered us up.虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。30.Hanging on the west wall are a group of pictures by Qi Baishi.挂在西墙上的是一组齐白石的画。31.No sooner had he realized his mistake than he apologized to her.他一意识到自己的错误就向她道歉。32.From then on， not only did I have a good command of writing， but I also knew the truth：with belief and determination， everything is possible.从那时起，我不仅很好地掌握了写作，而且还知道了：有了信念和决心，一切皆有可能。强调句33.It was at that moment that I felt something changed in our relationship.就在那一刻，我觉得我们的关系发生了变化。34.Thanks to my mom， we made it at last. It was she who/that always taught us to hold a positive attitude towards difficulties.多亏了妈妈，我们最终成功了。是她总教导我们对困难要持积极的态度。35.Helping a new friend made Joey feel good inside， for， although the baseball cap did matter much to him， he knew there were more important things in life.帮助一个新朋友让乔伊内心感觉很好，因为尽管棒球帽对他来说很重要，但他知道生活中还有更重要的事情。感叹句36.What unacceptable excuses he made to avoid his responsibility！他为了逃避责任编的理由太不能让人接受了！37.How wonderful a time we ever had together！ 我们曾一起度过了多么美好的时光啊！38.How moved and proud she was when learning her twins made the breakfast for her！当她得知她的双胞胎为她做早餐时，她是多么的感动和自豪！句式5　委婉动人的"虚拟语气"    39.If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom， I wouldn’t have been trapped in this awful place， confronted with the danger of death.我如果没有和汤姆吵架，就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面临死亡的危险。（表达后悔）40.I lost my job and it seemed as if the end of the world had come.我丢了工作，似乎世界末日已经来临。（表达沮丧）41.Without Eric’s encouragement， I would have been immersed in sorrow for the rest of the day.要是没有埃里克的鼓励，我可能后半天都沉浸在悲伤的情绪里。（表达感激） 42.Steven lowered his head with embarrassment， wishing he hadn’t said that.史蒂文尴尬地低下头，希望自己刚才没说那些话。（表达后悔）43."If only I had listened to my mother’s advice！" the little girl whispered to herself."要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好！"小女孩低声对自己说。（表达后悔）（2024·河南新乡·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Margot, a sweet 65-year-old receptionist at a vet clinic, had worked there for over four decades, spreading warmth with her smiles, jokes, compliments, and birthday baked goods. She was universally adored, with a network of acquaintances extending from loyal clients to the mailman’s granddaughter.However, Margot’s peaceful existence was ruined by a family who lived next door. These neighbors possessed a pit bull (斗牛犬), known for its aggressive behavior, and the dog regularly escaped, terrorizing the neighborhood and even attempting to invade Margot’s home.Despite Margot requested them to restrain (约束) their dog, mainly due to the threat it posed to her beloved cat, Smokestack. However, the neighbors dismissed her requests, claiming they knew what they were doing and complained Margot knew little the breed.Margot was well aware of previous reports filed against her neighbors, but little had been done to address the issue. In response, she took measures to safeguard Smokestack, keeping him indoors and fixing surveillance equipment (监控设备).Two weeks before Christmas, Margot was in the garage with Smokestack, working on some Christmas decorations. Unexpectedly, the neighbors’ pit bull managed to escape and broke through the bottom of her garage door.Before Margot could react, the pit bull lunged (猛冲) at the defenseless Smokestack. Margot’s desperate cries for help echoed through the neighborhood, and it wasn’t until her husband rushed out with a baseball bat that they were able to get Smokestack from the jaw of the violent dog.The narrator, who was at work that day, vividly recalled the heart-wrenching sight of Margot when she arrived at the vet clinic. Margot clutched Smokestack, who was in a serious state, and despite the veterinary team’s dedicated efforts, they couldn’t save one of Smokestack’s eyes, a cruel end to what should have been the peaceful day of the cat. Margot sat in the clinic with Smokestack for a while, gently kissing her beloved pet and her tears falling silently.注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Eventually, Margot stood up, leaving with a certain determination._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After the warrant (执行令) was granted to remove the dog, a knock echoed on Margot’s door._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：Eventually, Margot stood up, leaving with a certain determination. Following her release from the hospital, Margot wasted no time approaching the police for help. Her plea pulled the heartstrings of officers and led them to prioritize her case. The neighbor family attempted to argue that their dog was not aggressive. However, their defense fell apart as numerous graphic evidences were presented. Margot unveiled surveillance footage captured in daily life, which revealed how the dog slid into her home and cruelly attacked Smokestack. Finally, an emergency warrant was granted to remove the dangerous animal from Margot’s neighbors.After the warrant (执行令) was granted to remove the dog, a knock echoed on Margot’s door. She found her neighbors standing there, they apologized, their tears flowing uncontrollably. They pleaded with her to stop animal control from taking their beloved dog. They explained that the dog had been part of their family since puppyhood, how their children would be devastated, and how it would shatter their Christmas. But Margot, who had endured their coldness throughout, stared them down and said calmly, “You hurt my family, so now I’m just taking action to protect ourselves.” With that, she shut the door just as animal control arrived in the driveway.【导语】本文围绕着Margot与邻居之间的矛盾展开，尤其是邻居的斗牛犬对Margot及其宠物猫Smokestack构成的威胁。文章描述了Margot为保护自己的宠物所采取的措施，以及一次严重的事件导致她不得不寻求法律帮助的过程。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“最终，Margot站了起来，带着某种决心离开了。”可知，第一段可以描写Margot在经历了受伤后决定不再容忍邻居的行为，并采取行动解决问题。②由第二段首句内容“在执行令被批准移除狗之后，敲门声回荡在Margot的门前。”可知，第二段可以描写邻居得知即将失去他们的狗后的反应，以及Margot如何应对这一局面。2.续写线索：受伤——求助警察——提供证据——获得执行令——邻居道歉——Margot的回应——动物控制到场词汇激活3.行为类①求助：approach for help / seek assistance②提供证据：present evidence / provide proof③采取行动：take action / act on情绪类①感到决心：with a certain determination / with firm resolve②流泪：tears flowing uncontrollably / weeping heavily【点睛】[高分句型1]. Following her release from the hospital, Margot wasted no time approaching the police for help.（使用了现在分词短语做状语）[高分句型2]. But Margot, who had endured their coldness throughout, stared them down and said calmly.（使用了关系代词who引导的定语从句，先行词为Margot）1.（2024·湖南衡阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Andy rode slowly on his way to school, daydreaming about the fishing trip that his father had promised him. He was so busy dreaming about all the fish he would catch that he was unaware of everything else around him. He rode along until a strange sound drew him to the present. He came to a stop and looked curiously up to the heavens. What he saw shocked and terrified him. A huge swarm of bees filled the sky like a black cloud and the buzzing mass seemed to be heading angrily towards him. With no time to waste, Andy sped off in the opposite direction, riding furiously — but without knowing how to escape the swarm. With a rapidly beating heart and his legs pumping furiously, he sped down the rough road. As the bees came closer, his panic increased. Andy knew that he was sensitive to bee stings. The last sting had landed him in hospital — and that was only one bee sting! He had been forced to stay in bed for two whole days. Suddenly, his father’s words came to him, “When you are in a tight situation, don’t panic. Use your brain and think your way out of it.”On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving slowly skywards from the chimney of the Nelson family home. “Bees don’t like smoke,” he thought. “They couldn’t get into the house.” Andy raced towards the Nelson house, but the bees were gaining ground. Andy knew he could not reach the house in time. He estimated that the bees would catch up with him soon.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, out of the corner of his eyes, he spotted..._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________His mother laughed with relief._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】    Suddenly, out of the corner of his eyes, he spotted a small dam/pool used by Mr. Nelson to irrigate his vegetable garden. He was puffing and panting, trying to speed up but his strength had run out. He couldn’t think straight! Quickly, he jumped off his bike and dived into the cool water, disappearing below the surface and away from the aggressive insects. After holding his breath for as long as he could, he came up for fresh air and searched the sky. No sign of bees. Dragging himself out of the dam, he struggled up and made it to the Nelson’s house. Seeing Andy wet through from head to toe, Mrs. Nelson jumped a mile and her mouth was wide open in amazement. After learning the whole story, she called Andy’s mother.His mother laughed with relief. “Thank goodness you didn’t panic! You’ll really need that fishing break to help you recover.” Feeling a ton lighter, Andy burst out laughing, “You never know that my legs are still shaky from the narrow escape. The bees had me cornered and I had to figure a way out using my intelligence. My father may take pride in me too!”After hanging up the phone, he was the energetic Andy again and it seemed that all his fear and panic had been carried away by the wind! He can’t help thinking about his fishing trip with his father the next day!【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Andy在上学路上沉迷于对钓鱼旅行的幻想，却意外遭遇一群蜜蜂的追击。在恐慌中，他回忆起父亲的话，努力保持冷静并寻找逃脱方法。最终，他注意到附近山上Nelson家的烟囱冒出的烟，想到蜜蜂不喜欢烟，于是朝那个方向逃去，尽管是否能成功逃脱蜜蜂的追击还未知。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“突然，Andy用眼角的余光瞥见了Nelson先生用来灌溉菜园的一个小水池。”可知，第一段可描写Andy跳进Nelson先生家小水池摆脱蜜蜂的过程以及后来遇到Nelson夫人并告诉她事情经过。②由第二段首句内容“Andy的母亲如释重负地笑了。”可知，第二段可描写Andy与妈妈的对话以及Andy的感悟。2.续写线索：跳水自救——遇到Nelson夫人——描述事情经过——与妈妈通话——感到轻松——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①消失：disappear/fade away②突然大笑：burst out laughing/burst into laughter③帮助：help/assist情绪类①惊讶地：in amazement/in astonishment②以……为骄傲：take pride in/be proud of【点睛】[高分句型1]Dragging himself out of the dam, he struggled up and made it to the Nelson’s house.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]After hanging up the phone, he was the energetic Andy again and it seemed that all his fear and panic had been carried away by the wind!（运用了that引导表语从句）2.（2024·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Engaging in activities devoid of meticulous planning has never been a forte of mine. As a nascent adolescent of fourteen years, I would categorically decline invitations to perambulate the local environs with my comrades if my scholastic responsibilities were even marginally in arrears.Divergent from the majority of my youthful contemporaries, my domicile was not the sanctum of my bedroom, but rather an erstwhile kitchen situated in the upper echelons of our dwelling, where I would disperse my tomes and documents upon a vast, circular table. There, I would expend a significant measure of temporal currency, laboring incessantly for protracted intervals, much to the consternation of my maternal figure. She would endeavor to entice me with a cacophony of distractions — “Descend and witness the procession!” she would proclaim from the lower realms. “The entire neighborhood is assembled!” — Employing a plethora of ruses, from the allure of aquatic leisure to the temptation of frozen desserts, to the curiosity of errant felines and testudinates, in a futile attempt to disengage me from my academic pursuits, yet all her machinations proved ineffectual.Progressing to my sojourn in tertiary education, this pattern persisted unaltered. The hallowed halls of the academic repository and my collegiate abode had supplanted the erstwhile kitchen of my childhood home. As the vernal equinox arrived, my associates would make their presence known at my dormitory or cast their gaze into my scholarly sanctuary, imploring me to engage in the frivolity of discus tossing upon the verdant expanse of the lawn. “Negatory,” I would respond with near-uniform consistency. “My agenda is replete with imperative tasks.”My collegiate eruditio had drawn to a close, yet my compulsion and ardor for the structure of schedules remained unquenched. My companions and siblings endeavored to divert me from the rigid confines of my plans, yet their efforts were seldom met with success.This encirclingestival period, however, whilst fulfilling the role of domicile custodian for my progenitors, I found myself coerced into a radical alteration of my prearranged plans in the most unforeseen of manners. The visage of the ripening tomatoes burgeoning within my maternal garden exerted a siren call that lured me from the confines of my rigidly scheduled cosmos. They ensnared me with an allure akin to the rapturous gaze of an ardent admirer. Hundreds upon hundreds of these scarlet spheres ripened and reddened with each fleeting moment, adorning the garden with the festive abandon of a Yule tide arboreal adornment.“Should time permit, I shall concoct a sauce from these tomatoes,” I mused to myself. Yet my solitary week within the confines of the house was already a tightly woven tapestry of obligations: the scribing of narratives and the culmination of a project that had been transported from my professional environs.Then, as I observed the captivating cascade of tomatoes plummeting earthward in ever-increasing multitudes, I once again engaged in a silent dialectic concerning the multitude of tasks I had delineated and the exigencies that demanded my attention.注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Finally, I gave in._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A month later, my parents came back._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Finally, I gave in. The tomatoes’ allure was too strong to resist. I set aside my pen and paper, leaving the unfinished stories and project on the desk. I stepped into the garden, feeling the warm sun on my skin and the cool breeze in my hair. I spent the afternoon picking tomatoes, their juicy flesh slipping easily from their skins. As I filled basket after basket, I couldn’t help but smile. The feeling of accomplishment and the joy of being in the garden overwhelmed me. I decided to make a sauce, preserving the taste of summer in a jar.A month later, my parents came back. They were delighted to see the garden thriving and the jars of tomato sauce lined up on the shelves. My mother hugged me tightly, her eyes shining with pride. “You’ve done a wonderful job,” she said. My father examined the sauce, tasting it with a satisfied nod. “This is the best tomato sauce I’ve ever had,” he declared. The experience had shown me that sometimes, it’s okay to take a break from my rigid schedule and enjoy the simple pleasures of life. It had also brought my family closer together, and for that, I was truly grateful.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者自少年时期就对学业有着高度的责任感，拒绝参与社交活动以确保学业不被耽误。即使在大学期间，这种习惯也未曾改变，总是优先处理学术任务。然而，在一次回家照顾父母的期间，面对母亲园中成熟的番茄，作者罕见地被打动，考虑放下紧凑的日程安排，用这些番茄制作酱料，体验了一次与自然亲密接触的难得经历。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段句首内容“最后，我让步了。”可知，第一段可以描写作者用番茄制作酱料的过程。②由第二段句首内容“一个月后，我父母回来了。”可知，第二段可以描写父母对于作者制作酱料的反应和作者的感悟。2.续写线索：让步—制作—父母回来—父母反应—感悟3.词汇激活行为类①抵抗：resist/oppose②走进：step into/go into③决定：decide/determine情绪类①感激的：grateful/appreciative②高兴的：delighted/happy/joyful【点睛】【高分句型1】I stepped into the garden, feeling the warm sun on my skin and the cool breeze in my hair. (运用了现在分词feeling作状语)【高分句型2】As I filled basket after basket, I couldn’t help but smile. 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