英语选择性必修 第四册Unit 6 Space and beyond多媒体教学课件ppt

日记

一、日记的格式

英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记属于应用文体，中、英文的日记格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy，Cloudy等。

1．日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如：

(1)September 1，2004或September 1st，2004也可省略写成Sept.1，2004或Sept.1st，2004；the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写)

(2)只有月、日：September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写)

(3)只有年、月：September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写)

以上的1或1st都应读作the first。

2．星期也可以放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如：

Saturday October 22nd，2004；October 22nd，2004 Saturday

3．天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如：

Saturday March 4，2004，Windy；January 1st，2004，Fine

二、日记的要求

日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况，用其它时态。如：记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。若有文字提示，则应重视提示，把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句，以防繁杂，造成语法、句型错误。

三、日记的类型和训练

日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行：

1．将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的方法；

2．阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．Today my friends and I went to...

今天，我和我的朋友们去了……

2．The weather was fine.We went to the Forest Park for an outing.天气晴朗，我们去了森林公园郊游。

★丰满主体

1．We had a good time playing and chatting with each other.我们一起玩耍，聊天，度过了一段愉快的时光。

2．We are proud to make contributions to our society.

能为社会做贡献，我们感到骄傲。

3．This class trip impressed me deeply.

这次班级旅行给我留下了深刻的印象。

4．After my teacher talked with me，I came to realize that I was wrong.

老师和我交谈后，我开始意识到我错了。

★余味结尾

1．It was an unforgettable day in my life.

这是我生命中难忘的一天。

2．Though tired，we were very happy.

尽管很累，但是我们很开心。

3．The accident taught me a lesson：If we always follow the teacher's instructions and are careful，we can avoid making mistakes.

这次事故教会我，如果我们总能遵循老师的指示而且仔细认真点，我们就可以避免犯错误。

我们应节约资源，保护环境，做“低碳生活”的中学生。请写一篇日记描述自己的“低碳生活”，内容包括：

1．地球的污染情况；

2．具体的低碳生活。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．日记格式，语句连贯。

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[学生习作]

May 8th MondayWindy

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Many trees are cut.Water and air are polluted.I am a student.I want to have a low­carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.At first，I often walk to school on foot.It can reduce air pollution.And then，I always turn off the lights and fans when I leave the classroom.At last，I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.

点评：

1．内容充实。

2．语言条理。

3．简单句较多，逻辑衔接词运用得不好。

May 8th Monday                                            Windy

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Many trees are cut down，and water and air are polluted.

As a student，I try to have a low­carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.Firstly，I often walk to school ，which is helpful to reduce air pollution.Secondly，I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom.Thirdly，I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

In addition，I hope more students to live a low­carbon life too and make our earth more and more beautiful.

假定你是May，应邀前往中国和好友一起欢度中国年。请写一篇日记记录这一段难得的异国经历，内容包括：

1．参加的活动；

2．自己的感受。

注意：1.日记的格式；

2．词数80字左右；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

February 8th Saturday                                        Sunny

I was so pleased that one of my friends in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.

The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together，so we visited some of her families and relatives.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities.

Greatly impressed by the unique Chinese culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China.In my point of view，it's indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.